His passion made him bold; His boldness made him open-minded; His open-minded, created his "rain or shine, Ren Pingsheng" life. He is Su Dongpo, one of the eight masters in Tang and Song Dynasties. Su Shi's life is full of ups and downs. However, wherever he went, his name echoed in the sky and the hearts of the people there. His Hard Years in Ren Pingsheng tells the eternal truth, which makes people know how to face people, things and things around them with a cheerful, tolerant and broad-minded heart. Let people know to challenge our lives with gratitude and an open mind.
The Yangtze River rolled eastward, and many heroes were wiped out by the waves. Our Su Shi stood in front of the Red Cliff, once a romantic figure in the Three Kingdoms, like a Kansai, holding an iron plate and shouting loudly, "The great river east has gone to the waves to wash away all the waves, so the romantic figure of the ages has set up a foundation in the west", "The blue waves roll up thousands of piles of snow", "The mountains and rivers are picturesque, how many heroes there are at one time" and "Life is like a dream, and there is still one month left". This is his calm after the storm, this is his true confession. He knows how to face a picturesque and dreamy life with wine in his lifetime.
The ancients said, "There is heaven above and Suzhou and Hangzhou below." The beautiful West Lake bears the dreams of many China literati. Although Su Shi has been demoted to this point, he has no sorrow, no crying, no resentment, and no storms in Ren Pingsheng. He understood the simple truth of "serving as an official and benefiting one party". Then, a Su Causeway crosses the West Lake. He wants to let the heart stored in the West Lake drown all his pains and sorrows.
"300 lychees a day, I don't hesitate to be a Lingnan person." This is a poem written by Hainan. He was exiled to the ends of the earth. He washed away the dirt of officialdom with the sweetness of litchi. He would rather be an ordinary Lingnan person all his life and taste the sweetness of litchi every day. You see, what an open-minded attitude this is. The wind and rain of officialdom and life can't stop his thoughts from moving forward. He wants to make his life sweet and open-minded.
The word "When is the Bright Moon" tells the poet's heartfelt thoughts about missing his loved ones abroad. "I don't know what year it is ..." However, he didn't feel sad and sigh, and lost courage and confidence in life. He let the bright moon in the sky convey his thoughts of his old friends and family thousands of miles away. The phrase "I wish you a long life and a good journey" not only sublimated his stormy life, but also soothed the homesickness of many people in China. At this time, he gave his open-minded heart to a man full of thoughts. He wants to tell them that the storm of life can't destroy us, we are together. A stormy life; An enlightened life; A good life; A passionate life. Su Shi is immortal.
Comments by famous teachers
This is a brilliant masterpiece in the examination room. The author's thinking is clear and his literary talent is flying, and he tells us the story of Su Dongpo, a great unrestrained poet, as an official with agile writing. When he was demoted, he was open-minded and still worked hard for the people. When he was excluded, he remained calm and generous, and wrote many excellent poems ... making good use of rhetoric is a major feature of this article. At first, he used a series of "top truth" sentences, which were "created" with extraordinary momentum. Contrast, antithesis, parallelism, metaphor, personification and so on can be seen everywhere. Make the article full of images and enhance its momentum and appeal.
Diao qu fu yuan
I still remember that two thousand years ago, Jia Gong arrived in Changsha. He indulged in the misfortune of fate, thought gloomily, and made a fortune. There is a sigh with similar fate, lamenting that talents are useless and advice is not accepted, which makes what beggars and gentlemen do wrong. Dragon Boat Festival, ordered to do another fu, died in the spirit of Mr. Diao. Although you have the same surname as the King of Chu, you are blood relatives. It can be said that you are close and your loyalty to the king of Chu is obvious, but the world is not easy. However, you were pardoned by the king and finally sank into the world. Although I have the virtue of being a star, I have the talent of Hui Qi in the sun and the moon. Once sparse, it is no longer used. Although it is the heart of Chu and the heart of the world, it must be trip worthwhile. It is easy to be mistaken for a guest character.
I sigh that his feelings are useless, and he reigns in the world, so he should put reason first. Why should he believe slanderers and alienate loyal subjects? Wang Huai doesn't need your blow. He will eventually get into trouble, die and destroy the country, and laugh for the world. I only regret that he didn't use reason to push things forward. In fact, he acted carelessly with emotion. Therefore, those who achieve great things in the world must be rational and self-controlled, and human feelings are not conducive to themselves. Those who speak frankly are also evil. Therefore, although Zhuang Zong owns the world, he is always in the hands of actors, and he is addicted to his affairs. When a husband is in power, he lures him with beauty, delights him, confuses his property, and makes him far from right and near evil. Although he is as weak as the sun, he doesn't know it. As for the disaster, he regretted it. Is it too late?
Human feelings are close and far away, truth is not far and near, and the right path is unbiased and not evil. Nine days later, you can recall the past. Zilan and his followers urged Qinhuai to make peace, and finally left Wang Huai's soul in another country. Zilan is not a confidant of the king of Chu, but he has no foresight. He has a forward-looking minister and no flesh and blood. Compared with reason, he is rational and competitive.
It has been more than two years since you left here, and it has been more than two thousand years since you left. There are countless people bent down to listen to their feelings. Today, Guanghua shines all over the earth, but I wrote this article when the matter is still not cut off. You know you can show your virtue and talent to warn the world and make it reasonable. Therefore, officials are not greedy, so people are not traitors, and so on.
If you are pregnant with the king in the dark, you will regret it. You think that love is the end of reason and reason is the beginning of love. If reason is based on love and the family is not established, then the country will die and the world will be difficult to be flat. If you are reasonable, then the people who walk can be close relatives of the same flesh and blood, and the people you meet help to achieve great things. Isn't it?
(Note: Chinese punctuation marks are still the same, and the words in brackets are added by the recorder. )
Comments on Qu Yuan Fu: The analysis of the relationship between politics and feelings is incisive; The whole article is written in classical Chinese, with fluent writing and accurate punctuation, showing a strong basic knowledge of ancient Chinese; Familiar with the history of China, combining ancient figures with modern figures to enhance the theme; China's traditional festival Dragon Boat Festival is naturally integrated into the article, which is vivid and touching. It is a good article over the years.
shoulder
Liaoning candidates in 2006 college entrance examination
I often think, how can an iron shoulder bear the psychological gap brought about by a dynasty upheaval? Can you bear the sigh of all beings in the cracks? Shoulder the heavy responsibility of China's poetry in the social upheaval?
Therefore, I can't imagine how Du Fu carried everything with his weak body. Driving a boat and shuttling through the surging river, Du Fu's difficulty in going upstream can be imagined. Walking on the downhill slope of the Tang Dynasty, he was destined to bow his waist, lower his head, count the sufferings of ordinary people bit by bit, and then dip in the sorrow thicker than pen and ink, and tearfully write "The wine in Zhumen stinks, and the road has frozen bones". His mission determines that he can't live an easy life. "If you are poor, you will be immune." How many people use this sentence to comfort themselves, shake their heads, succumb to the dark social reality, and then only rush about for the prospects of individuals and families. However, Du Fu's heart is connected with thousands of working people in Qian Qian, so no matter how difficult it is, he will hold up a world with his shoulders to accommodate their sighs. So there was a cry from the shabby hut: A thousand buildings are peaceful, and all the poor people in the world are happy. There is also a poem that is both hateful and sad: don't dry your eyes, put away your tears. If you can see bones when your eyes are dry, the world will be heartless. The cry of "going straight into the sky" of Xianyang Bridge has also been deeply remembered by future generations. He is the real "spokesman" of the people, and shoulders a "history of poetry" belonging to the people with his own shoulders.
Turning to Du Fu's life, people can't help but think of this sentence: "A poet should beware of prosperity". He couldn't enter the official career, and it took him ten years to get a small position. In the Anshi Rebellion, he was exiled and captured. Until the end, he died of poverty and disease. When he was a child, he climbed up and down his jujube tree and spilled laughter all over the yard. Of course, he didn't expect that fate had arranged such a bumpy and unusual life path for him. He must have never thought that he would use this pair of shoulders to shoulder the misfortune of his life and the sorrow of the whole era.
And Du Fu actually held on. Although life has been "knocking on the rich door, dusk will follow the fat horse dust." Broken cups are cold and sorrowful everywhere, "but he never limited his eyes to personal gains and losses, sadness and joy. Just when he was about to die and held a farewell ceremony for himself, he was still worried about" the blood of the war is still there, and the sound of the military has been moved to this day. " He always focuses on the public, goes deep into the hearts of the people, and observes the sufferings of the people at the bottom. Then focus, brew, refine and sway. Du Fu is a great Confucian, but he is obviously superior to traditional Confucianism. Confucianism said: "Poverty is the only way to protect yourself, and success is the best way to help the world.". "However, Du Fu, regardless of poverty, wants to be good in the world. Confucianism advocates "not being in office, not seeking politics", and Du Fu demands politics whether he is in office or not. Narrative poems that shout for the times and sing for the people rarely express anger and crying directly. He always looks on coldly from an outsider's objective and calm perspective, and moves forward with heavier and richer resentment from a calm narrative. I don't know how many people in the later generations are angry to tears. A poem by Nishikawa is perhaps the best portrayal of Du Fu: in a gloomy era, you are the only soul.
It is said that "men carry morality with iron shoulders", then Du Fu is the real great man through the ages. A pair of shoulders, seemingly weak, have propped up a literary and moral peak in the history of China, which makes people look on and admire from a distance.
Themes used
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Teacher's guidance
In this paper, the typical characters reappearance method, one-poem quotation method and multiple-poem comment method are used. Use these three material techniques to shoulder Du Fu's thin shoulders and make a vivid and profound interpretation.
i want to hold your hand
In my dream, I don't know how many times, those old and wrinkled hands seem to tell the life of the weather-beaten master. But those hands are still strong, and the turquoise blood vessels are faintly visible, which makes people feel the tension of life. Countless times, how I wanted to hold these hands, but it was all in my dream.
It is another drizzly late autumn, and the wet phoenix tree at the foot makes a sound and has a low voice. The drizzle blurred my vision a little, but I vaguely saw those vigorous and tall characters "Du Fu Caotang." I was ecstatic and quickened my pace. The dream hand clearly emerges in my mind, and the owner of those hands is like a magnet, which attracts me deeply and strongly.
How I want to hold your hand! Let me feel this magic hand. How many ancient texts have been written in this handwriting! How many poems were born in this hand! The bottom of the pen is turbulent and the people are suffering; The world is scarred, and the poet is a saint. Isn't this your portrayal? I remembered that sentence. "Between Andrew's mansion and 10 million rooms, poor people all over the world have a happy face. Alas, suddenly seeing this house in front of me, it is enough for me to freeze to death alone! " Countless people were moved, moved. What a broad mind this is. What kind of heart is this? Let me hold your hand and touch the turquoise blood vessels.
Yes, I am eager to hold your hand, let me smooth wrinkles and bring a little temperature to those cold hands. People say, "Poverty is the only way to protect yourself, and prosperity is the best way to help the world." Is that so? You are a counterexample. Life is bumpy, my career is full of disasters, and I am down and out, but I always have ordinary people in my heart. When it's cold, you want to cover the whole world with iron pillows; When you are hungry, you want to feed the Lebanese people with rice. When your son died of hunger and cold, I saw your feelings tremble. When I witnessed the suffering of the people, I saw your heart tremble. Let me hold your hand. Are those cold hands still cold? Are those hardworking hands wrinkled?
Do you know that?/You know what? Do you know that?/You know what? I live in 2 1 century, which is a highly developed society. I'm almost eighteen, and I'm over thirty, but I'm a little confused. In today's multicultural era, I am a little hesitant on the road to adulthood. I know your hands can give me strength and show me the way. Therefore, I am more eager to get close to you and touch it.
With excitement, excitement and tension, I crossed the threshold and saw those big hands and bright eyes. But in a blink of an eye, everything disappeared like a bubble, leaving only the big words on the plaque, "The article is left, and the thatched cottage is left to future generations."
When I opened my eyes again, there was a dense net on the window, and my cheeks were covered with tears.
Shaoling asks heaven (Sichuan opera? Hu Qin)
Candidates from Sichuan in 2006
On the banks of Huanhua River, the rainstorm stopped at the beginning, and the hut was broken by the autumn wind.
(Du Fu: Living next door: Old Ugly)
(In the sound of drums, Du Fu slowly walks up with a bamboo stick in his hand. )
Du Fu: (Nianbai) Rainy night, mountains and rivers fall in autumn; What's the pity of a broken house? I only hope that the rivers and the sea are clear. Miss Du Fu, a young poet, has the heart and ambition to help the world. However, Chang' an is hard to tolerate, and now it is rich and prosperous. Sky, you are so unfair!
Huang Er directed (sang) Du Fu's anger to ask heaven.
Take the children (sing) and ask God how unfair it is. (Singing) Huang Er lamented Du Fu's long-cherished wish to serve the country, the environment, the country and the people. So I study hard at the cold window, learn from Confucius and Mencius, learn from Sun Wu, and study hard. Waiting for Dabeifu to open the year of selecting subjects, Du Fu went to Beijing as an examiner. I expected three articles to have a long face, but I didn't get any official title. The Anshi Rebellion, Chang 'an Rebellion, Tangshi Rebellion, Du Fu Wandering. (turn to sing) is bigger than the board (turn to). Look at Zhu's portal. Look at the deep valley full of bones; See Luo Qiyan, the flowers are red, green and dark; Look at that girl. It's so sad. (Singing) Huang Er Sanban God, have you ever seen the world with half an eye open?
(Neighbor Weng comes on stage with the drums)
Neighbor Weng: (singing) Class 3 in the backyard is fading away, and someone is calling God. I came to have a closer look before the trial, and it turned out to be Mr. Du. (Nianbai) I thought it was Mr. Du. He must have just blown the thatch off the house. Stop yelling, I'll just cover it for you.
Du Fu: (reading aloud) Thank you very much! (Singing) My old neighbor doesn't know my ambition. (Singing) How does Xipi build a house word by word? He was full of anger and asked heaven. (Singing) Xipi second-rate asked heaven, when will you give me three swords to cut off the land width of Land Rover? Ask heaven, when will you lend me a million mansions to make the poor people in the world laugh? As Sha Fei stone falls, the wind and rain turn over the sky. I will be as safe as a mountain if I don't move. God, have you ever opened your eyes and looked at those who are crying for the land, looking for husbands for their bald heads, complaining deeply for their boudoir, and thinking about their daughters, so as to help them get what they want as soon as possible. (Singing) Xipi Sanban is worthy, and the people wear it and recite the sky.
Neighbor Weng: (Bai) Mr. Du, the house has been repaired.
Du Fu: (Bai) Thank you very much. (Singing) Xipi Sanban let the wind turn my hut over a thousand times. My ambition in CoCo Lee is strong.
(End)
Themes used
ask
Teacher's guidance
Familiar celebrities, expressed through special literary styles, can not only get innovative points, but also show the author's literary details. Du Fu once lived in a thatched cottage in Chengdu, expressing the idea that young people are old with the style of Sichuan Opera. It must be said that the cleverness of the little author can undoubtedly gain a sense of closeness. The composition is based on Du Fu's song "The Hut is Blown by Autumn Wind", which is exquisite. The theme of the script extends to the original theme of the poem, which sets off the deep suffering brought to the people by the An Shi Rebellion and makes Du Fu's profound and broad humanitarian feelings be carried forward again in the script.
Cao Piwu's son:
Alas, the day of my father's death is not far away! I really can't bear to give up when the war at sea is still raging and the country is in full swing. At that time, I was ambitious to save all the people from fire and water, unify China and build a great cause. Such a long-cherished wish will come to nothing today. God? People? It's over now! Father died unsatisfied!
People say: "The bird will die, and its song will also mourn;" When people are dying, their words are very good. "My father has something urgent to tell you, so please remember!
In the year of Jiazi, the Yellow Scarf Uprising. I stepped forward, brainstormed, joined hands with many people with lofty ideals, and Qi Xin worked together to behead the thief with more than 10,000 yuan. Finally, I broke it and was able to enter the DPRK as an official. Later, I defeated Yuan Shu, punished Lu Bu, ascended the position of prime minister, and held the son of heaven as a vassal to rule the world.
Yuan Shao was afraid that our army was strong and led more than 400,000 troops to attack. Guandu decided. At that time, our army was outnumbered and poor in food and grass, and the world was bound to perish. But I am fearless, happy with the counselor's kind words, far-sighted, and cleverly deal with Shao. Xu You "succumbed to Yuan Shao, did not listen to his words, and did not follow his plan". I'm glad that Qi Fang came to vote, so I might as well put on my shoes and come out to see him. With clever tricks and clever tricks, our army cleverly robbed the old nest, burned the grain and grass, stopped the retreat, and let Shao have no time to take care of each other from beginning to end, and finally won. Since ancient times and today, the weak have defeated the strong. However, the speed of my miracle is not fast!
After that, he took Jizhou, captured Jingxiang, destroyed Liu Biao, supported millions of soldiers and thousands of generals, and swept the Central Plains. High-spirited, full of ambition, fighting in the south and fighting in the north, joining hands with Sun Liu in Chibi.
At this time, the northland was decided, and the princes died or surrendered. The only people in the world who compete with me are Sun Quan and Liu Bei. However, the total number of its teams is only 50,000. I think Sun Liu will be defeated and the reunification of the country is just around the corner, so I am arrogant and blindly confident. And credulous mediocre Jiang Gan's words, mistakenly in Pang Tong serial trickery, refused to accept the advice of other counselors, was Zhou Yu children, Zhuge Village burned warships, more than 800 thousand troops instantly smoke flame Zhang Tian, not sad! I abandoned my helmet and armor and fled in panic, almost being cornered. After losing Huarong Road, he almost died, leaving a laughing stock.
This is a great shame, I have no teeth to forget it! After returning to Korea, I thought it over and over again, only to know that it is a great disaster to be willful, credulous, partial and unwilling to remonstrate.
My son Cao Pi has been a father on earth for more than 30 years, and the heroes have gradually disappeared. Only Sun Quan and Liu Bei have not been wiped out, and the rest are nothing to worry about. I'm sorry about that now. I hope you can inherit the unfinished business. You should learn from your father's lessons. You should not be conceited, self-righteous, faithless and treacherous, and you should not believe in your father's mistakes. Remember your last words. Encourage it! Encourage it!
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