First, the three principles of rewriting
(1) The original meaning of a poem cannot be changed. Know the content of the original poem very clearly, including the author, writing background and poem.
(2) Develop a reasonable imagination according to the theme of the poem. (3) The story should be complete and tortuous in order to attract readers.
Secondly, the classification shows that ancient landscape poems should mainly describe the scenery and grasp its characteristics. When writing a scene, there should be true feelings between the lines and express true feelings. It is an important means to create artistic conception to contain feelings in the scene, melt feelings in the scene and melt the scene in the environment. Good practice should avoid scenes without emotions, so that emotions are scenes and scenes are emotional notes. Only by combining the two skillfully can the article be subtle and meaningful.
The rewriting of narrative ancient poetry should tell the story completely, with story plot, time, place and characters, that is, according to the six elements of narrative. As far as the content is concerned, it should be concrete and vivid, complete in narrative and respect the original intention of poetry. The plot should be vivid, imaginative and innovative.
Poetry is a treasure in China's literary palace, and its beauty lies in conciseness, refinement and conciseness. Everyone can recite many classic poems. You must have your favorite poems. Please adapt an ancient poem you like into a modern text according to your own understanding, and reproduce the poetry in your own language.
2. Thinking (1) What is your favorite poem? (2) Can you fully describe the main idea of the original poem?
(3) What is your favorite place in this poem? Which sentence or which sentence? Can you reproduce the situation and artistic conception of the original poem according to your own understanding and reasonable imagination and association?
Rewrite To Wang Lun
In the evening, Li Bai, who lives in Wang Lun's house, suddenly received a letter from his mother, which wrote: "Bai Er: Your father is seriously ill and I hope to see you soon. Come back as soon as you see the letter! "
When Li Bai read his mother's letter, he was very anxious and thought, I didn't expect such a thing to happen at home. I have to hurry back to my hometown. But it's getting late, so I'm leaving tomorrow. So, he immediately packed his bags and thought to himself: As a good friend, I should talk to Wang Lun about going home, but Wang Lun will definitely be reluctant to let me go when he finds out. He will be worried about my father. What shall we do? Why don't you leave without saying goodbye? Yes, that's it!
The next morning, Li Bai wrote a farewell letter, put it on the table and quietly left Wang Lun's home. Li Bai came to the edge of the Peach Blossom Pond and saw the willows and willows. The peach blossoms in early spring had poked their heads out, pink as chardonnay and red as fire, adding a bit of spring scenery to the earth. On the surface of the pool, there is a boat floating, and the boatman has stood at the bow and is ready to go. Looking at the calm surface of the pool, Li Bai thought of boating and swimming here with Wang Lun, and the feeling of parting came to him, and he couldn't help crying. Thinking that Wang Lun might wake up soon, it was inevitable that his friends would be sad to see him off, so Li Bai turned and set foot on the boat. Just then, Li Bai suddenly heard a melodious and familiar song coming from a distance. Who came to the shore early in the morning? Is it Wang Lun? Li Bai was curious and hurried off the boat to see it.
As the sound approached, it was indeed Wang Lun who beat the beat with his feet and sang while walking. The lyrics are all sentences to retain Li Bai. Li Bai was greatly moved and hurried to meet him. Wang Lun said, "Brother Li, why did you leave without saying a word? Is it my brother's poor hospitality, or ... "Before Wang Lun finished, Li Bai quickly explained," Brother, you misunderstood. Thank you for your hospitality these days. I have to go, because I received a letter from my mother and learned that my father was seriously ill. I can't go without it! I didn't want to worry you, so I left without saying goodbye. I didn't expect you to come so soon. " Hearing this, Wang Lun sighed and said, "I saw your face was wrong yesterday. What am I worried about?". I got up early this morning. I saw you walking this way and followed you. Alas, I didn't expect you and I to part today. " "Brother wang, I'm going. Take care. See you later. " Li Bai's eyes were blurred by tears. Wang Lun said with tears in his eyes, "Brother Li, in that case, you should start quickly!" ! I hope you can come to my house again. "At this time, Li Bai felt it and recited the poem" To Wang Lun "freely. So, the two said goodbye with tears.
Rewrite "Send Yuan Er Shi Anxi"
Another day. Open the window and face the fragrance of the earth.
It is raining. Out of the house, the dust on the hotel's blue bricks and green tiles disappeared and was replaced by a shower of rain. In the rain and fog, willow branches on both sides of the road are dancing in the wind and rain, and willow leaves are turning green.
I can't help feeling sad in my heart. What's the use of beautiful scenery?
Sad, he got on his horse and flew to the designated place. He saw a man wearing a robe and a sword around his waist, leading a bordeaux horse that was grazing, looking for something everywhere. My heart jumped-it was Brother Yuan! I am so familiar with his figure that I can recognize him at a glance. He turned around and saw me standing still, so he let go of the reins and walked towards me.
"Dear brother, when can we meet again after this farewell?" I smiled. Brother calcium dobesilate capsules must know what kind of sadness is hidden under my smile.
"The elder brother of the yuan, it's getting late. Let's have another sip of the farewell bar. If you and I are close, then we will meet again tomorrow! "
The wine at the entrance is extremely spicy, which just masks the inner sadness. Throw away the bottle, and Brother Yuan rolled over and got on the horse. Finally, he left me a sad look and a tired smile, and then turned and rode away.
I immediately looked at the back of Brother Yuan's departure and drifted away, and my heart was filled with that indescribable emotion. Brother Yuan's back is faint, with a silent and lonely mood. In the gradually bright light, it exudes ethereal sadness. Footprints on the grass reveal a heavy heart, and mottled grass marks have engraved eternal memories in my heart.
Today's farewell, when shall we meet again?
Today's farewell, when shall we meet again?
Today's farewell, when shall we meet again?
Today's parting will never be seen again in my life. If you want to meet again, put a cup in your dream. ...
What is the highlight of this article? 1? (2) Where did the author write the original poem? What impressed you the most?
Rewrite The Shepherd Boy
One summer morning, the sun rose and the dew dissipated. After breakfast, the kitten picked up his beloved flute, grabbed the whip, opened the cowshed and went to eat grass.
The kitten jumped on an old cow with a wide back, and the bright sunshine shone on the cow, which was warm. Cattle stop and go, and from time to time they bow their heads to eat grass on the roadside. The little boy sat on the back of the cow and played the flute leisurely. From time to time, he pulled out his whip and patted the cow on the ass. Soon, the cattle came to the wide grassland. The grass was so tender and smooth, and the cattle bowed their heads and ate sweet grass. Naughty calves don't eat grass, and always run under their mothers to eat milk. Looking at the lovely cow, Xiao Maotou played the flute again. How happy he is at this moment!
With the melodious flute, the cows are full of grass and slowly come to the clear stream to drink. The setting sun shines on the winding stream, and the water is rippling with red light. Even cows are golden red. The red sun is about to set in the forest, and the cows are full of grass and water. At this time, the children are very hungry. He raised his whip and shouted, "Go home-"Taurus walked to the village in the afterglow of the sunset accompanied by the wonderful flute of the kitten.
When I got home, my mother had just cooked the meal. The kitten wolfed down a big meal and came to the yard. The bright moonlight filled the whole village. The kitten took out her flute and played it for a while. He felt a little tired and lay on the soft grass. He looked at the cows in the cowshed and at the school not far from the village. He thought: fatten the cows and sell them this year, and the tuition for going to school next year will be available. Thinking about it, the kitten unconsciously entered a sweet dream.