Renzi Sanshan was called, and Chen Duanren gave something to drink on the table.
Long hate after long hate, cut into short lines. Who will dance for me and listen to my Chu Guang voice? Nine acres of orchids, a hundred acres of trees, autumn chrysanthemum is more fragrant. The surging water outside the door can help me carry tassels.
A glass of wine. What's your name? Everything in the world is always heavy and light. Don't be sad to leave, be happy to meet new people and love children from ancient times to modern times. Wealth is not my business, but belongs to the Bai Ou League.
"I am both an orchid and a hundred-acre tree, and autumn chrysanthemums are more fragrant." Qu Yuan's poem Li Sao is used in every rhyme and three sentences. The first two sentences follow Qu Yuan's original sentence, but the word "Zhi" is missing after the word "Lan" and the word "Wan" is missing. The sentence "Dining English" is summed up from the original sentence "Drinking Mulan Dew in the morning, eating autumn chrysanthemum and falling into English in the evening".
1. Experience (7)
(Tang) Zhang Jiuling
Here, south of the Yangtze River, there is a red orange tree. Its leaves are green all winter.
Not because the soil is getting warmer, but because it is accustomed to the cold by nature.
Jia (3) can be recommended. You can leave it here, far below the mountains and rivers. ..
It's luck, and cause and effect is an infinite cycle.
You plant your peach trees and plums, and you forget the shade of another tree.
[Note] ① This poem borrows Qu Yuan's Ode to an Orange, which means to be virtuous.
Xia Wanchun (Ming)
Three years as an anti-Qing soldier, defeated and imprisoned.
Infinite mountains and rivers shed tears, who said that heaven and earth are wide?
I already know the way to another spring, and I am really worried when I think of saying goodbye to my hometown.
On the day when the ghost man and soul are waiting to return, the spirit wants to see their homeland.
2. What poem in the later generations quoted the words in Qu Yuan's article: "Long hatred and long hatred", "Xin Qiji" as the son of three mountains "and" Chen Duanren "as something to drink.
Long hate after long hate, cut into short lines. Who will dance for me and listen to my Chu Guang voice? Nine acres of orchids, a hundred acres of trees, autumn chrysanthemum is more fragrant.
The surging water outside the door can help me carry tassels. A glass of wine. What's your name? Everything in the world is always heavy and light.
Don't be sad to leave, be happy to meet new people and love children from ancient times to modern times. Wealth is not my business, but belongs to the Bai Ou League.
"I am both an orchid and a hundred-acre tree, and autumn chrysanthemums are more fragrant." Qu Yuan's poem Li Sao is used in every rhyme and three sentences.
The first two sentences follow Qu Yuan's original sentence, but the word "Zhi" is missing after the word "Lan" and the word "Wan" is missing. The sentence "Dining English" is summed up from the original sentence "Drinking Mulan Dew in the morning, eating autumn chrysanthemum and falling into English in the evening".
1. Experience (7) (Tang) Here, south of the Yangtze River, there is a red orange tree. Zhang Jiuling, its leaves are green all winter. Not because the soil is getting warmer, but because it is accustomed to the cold by nature.
You can recommend Jia ③. You leave it here, far below the mountains and rivers .. It's luck, and cause and effect is an infinite cycle.
You plant your peach trees and plums, and you forget the shade of another tree. [Note] ① This poem borrows Qu Yuan's Ode to an Orange, which means to be virtuous.
Xia Wanchun (Ming Dynasty) held tourists for three years, and today it is the Southern Crown. Infinite mountains and rivers shed tears, who said that heaven and earth are wide?
I already know the way to another spring, and I am really worried when I think of saying goodbye to my hometown. On the day when the ghost man and soul are waiting to return, the spirit wants to see their homeland.
There is a 600-word composition about Qu Yuan's poem on the road. What you see is the end point and the flowers on both sides of the road. Sometimes, the ending is not important. Do you appreciate the beauty of this process?
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Yue Fei, a famous gold fighter in the Southern Song Dynasty, devoted his life to serving the country. He led Yue Jiajun and beat back the invading Jin Jun, making it impossible for Jin Bing to cross the line. 8 jin j's "iron floating figure" and "kidnapper horse" were broken, and Jin Wu's martial arts was defeated. A proverb circulated by the Jin army: "It is easy to shake the mountain, but difficult to shake the Yue family army!" Vividly tells the well-trained Yue Jiajun. Yue Fei contributed a lot, but he failed, was framed by Qin Gui and other treacherous court officials, and finally died of blood. Although the Anti-Japanese War failed, Yue Fei's achievements were indelible and he was a well-deserved national hero. His ending was not perfect, but his efforts inspired future generations to rise up against foreign enemies. Beauty is on the way, write 600 words.
Qu Yuan, the State of Chu, watched the motherland die step by step, but there was nothing he could do. He was even framed by traitors. Until one day, desperate and heartbroken, he wandered by the Miluo River. He gently recited the poem in Lisao, embraced the big stone, jumped and slept at the bottom of the Miluo River forever. Qu Yuan left us the immortal Li Sao. That song "Li Sao" is an eternal swan song in Qu Yuan's heart. Beauty is on the road, and beauty lies in his love for the motherland.
Not to mention those distant historical figures. In Funing, where I live, there is a similar ordinary hero named Dai Jun, and Dai Jun is the owner of a decoration company. He comes from a poor village. Through continuous efforts, he set up his own company with a group of fellow villagers and lived in a spacious building, but he never forgot the help of the villagers. He raised money to build the first cement road for a small village, set up a primary school, led the people in his hometown to get rich, and helped poor children, often donating money to them ... But in the end, at the age of 30, he was stabbed several times by gangsters to help an unknown woman get her wallet back, and eventually he bled to death. Although Dai died young, his brave spirit deeply influenced the people of Funing. Beauty is on the road, and beauty lies in Dai Jun's selfless dedication to others.
4. How do students quote poems in their compositions? In the famous articles selected from junior middle school Chinese textbooks published by People's Education Press, many of them are quoted from poems.
In "Spring", Zhu Ziqing quoted "Blowing the face without cold wind" in the poem "Jueju" by a monk from Zhinan to describe the softness of the spring breeze. In order to express the scientific workers' spirit of exploration, Hao Mingjian quoted "The road is long, Xiu Yuan and Xiu Yuan are Xi, and I will go up and down to seek" in Li Sao, a poet of Chu State. In "Litchi Honey", Yang Shuo wrote the beauty of litchi with only "300 lychees a day, but he didn't hesitate to grow up to be a Lingnan person" (from Su Shi's "A Unique Skill in Huizhou").
Some excellent compositions are also brilliant by quoting poems. Example 1. Today's basketball game ... our class lost the last basketball game, and this is the last chance.
I don't know how to feel the tragic feeling that "the wind is rustling and the water is cold, and the strong man is gone forever." Teacher Chen's whistle sounded, and my heart tightened: "It's time to play!" "I really appreciate Mencius' efforts from' Heaven will descend to Sri Lanka, and he must first suffer his mind, his bones and muscles, his body and skin, and his body'. From "Spring silkworms will keep spinning until they die, and candles will cry dry every night", I understand the depth of responsibility.
From "but how much love there is for every inch of grass, I have three spring scenery", I understand the children's contribution to their parents. From a small photo of Lu Xun, I understand the broad mind of "I recommend Xuanyuan with blood"
From The Call of Responsibility 3. Looking for the ancients in Japan and China is Tao Qian's leisure to "pick chrysanthemums under the east fence and see Nanshan leisurely"; It is the magnificence of Di Wei's "bleak autumn wind and surging waves"; It is the joy of Yi 'an's "returning to the boat at night and straying into the depths of the lotus"; Releasing Weng's "Julian Waghann Beiding Central Plains Day, Family Sacrifice Never Forgets" is a free and easy way; Looking for the past in Japan and China is the firmness of "clothes are getting wider and wider, never regret, and languish for Iraq"; "The Arctic court does not change, and the western hills steal from each other" is Du Gongbu's confidence; It is a surprise of "looking for her with thousands of Baidu, suddenly looking back". -from "Classic Plot" 4. I found a kind of pride in "the great river does not return, the waves are exhausted, and the eternal romantic figures"; "When is the moon in spring? How much do you know about the past? " I found a way to look back; "I made an appointment not to come in the middle of the night, knocked on a chess piece and fell to my death." I found a silence; "I smile at the sky from the horizontal knife, leaving two Kunlun mountains in my liver and gallbladder." I found a kind of heroism; "Clear water produces hibiscus, and carving is natural." I found a simple.
-"Pursuing Your Dreams" These paragraphs are all selected from the perfect composition of the senior high school entrance examination. It is precisely because the author makes good use of poetic sentences that the language of the article is bright and poetic, such as the refreshing and exciting smell of tea.
It also makes the author's thoughts penetrate into some classic plots and become more and more heavy. It better reflects the candidates' literary accumulation and accomplishment, giving people a refreshing feeling.
This is also the main reason why these articles can stand out from many compositions. There are many ways to add icing on the cake at the end of a poem, or to summarize the whole text to reveal the main idea; Or show the future to boost morale; Or express your feelings to enhance the appeal of the article; Or the language is implicit, making readers cover their books and daydream.
1, quoting the end of a poem, has a strong appeal and often gives readers a strong sense of regret. For example, according to the sea and heaven, at the end: "Didn't you see how the water of the Yellow River came out of the sky into the sea and never came back?" .
Have you seen the lovely hair in the bright mirror in the high room, although it is still silky black in the morning, it turns into snow at night? "Time is like running water, time is like electricity. Perhaps, only history can make the "monument without words full". Perhaps, only history can best interpret Zeng Guofan's words of his life when the sky is broken and the yellow robe is about to be added: leaning on the sky and shining on the sea, countless flowers are spent, and the heart is self-aware.
Candidates quote Li Bai's poems and Zeng Guofan's own poems as the conclusion, which further deepens the author's point of view and leaves readers with endless reflection. 2. Use the philosophical characteristics of famous poems to summarize the full text and deepen the theme.
Good poems and your good articles are icing on the cake, and people will agree with you after reading your articles. This has played a "finishing touch" role.
At the end of the junior high school Chinese textbook "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", I wrote: "I look at these energetic Hani girls and the white pears, and I can't help but think of a poem:' Pears in the Post Road are everywhere'." This ending not only describes the natural pear flower, but also describes the futile spirit of Lei Feng, which takes care of the theme in structure, deepens the theme in content and has rich implications.
Quoting poems skillfully closes the full text, which is memorable and thought-provoking. This is the charm of quoting poetry.
If the beginning and end of the article can flexibly quote poems and echo them back and forth, the effect will be better. For example, in 2003, the perfect composition "Youth Sorrow" was written like this.
Beginning: Xin Qiji once sang such a sentence: "Teenagers don't know the taste of sorrow and fall in love with the floor;" Fall in love with the floor, say worry gives new words. "Our cross-century teenagers have long tasted sadness.
This is not "arguing irrationally", but "telling the truth", which is a heavy burden for us young students every day. ..... Conclusion: But in any case, I still want to say to all the students who "don't know what to worry about" and have tasted the taste of worry: "Teenagers should understand the taste of worry, look forward to it, never forget it and never be afraid of it."
-Xin Qiji was quoted at the beginning; The ending is flexible and plays a sublimation role; Of course, when quoting poetry, it must be natural and harmonious, and never quote for the sake of quoting. In a word, clever quotations and flexible use of ancient poems can make your composition language vivid, and also show the author's profound literary accomplishment and unusual writing skills.
I hope that teachers can guide students to accumulate more famous sentences flexibly, which can not only make students' compositions shine, but also carry forward our classical culture and make ancient poetry shine today.
5. A couplet describing Qu Yuan's poems
1, sadness pinned on Li Sao, who was born with a peerless poem; Lonely loyalty to Chu, the aftermath spread to Han and Hunan people.
2, where the soul is evocative, vanilla also gives birth to three households; At that time, Xiang Liu should know Nine Songs.
Second, poetry.
The immortality of Miluo-in memory of Qu Yuan.
A kind of life
Infiltrated into a Yangtze river
Affectionate shepherd flute
Miluo's Beach Songs
An orange carol.
Ripple in the long river of life for a long time
Poetic soul
Tuojiang River System and Biduan
Initiate China's poetry.
Singing is endless.
I can't tell you about these years.
A feeling
The heart is very long.
How can you calm the resentment in your chest?
Love sent to heaven, asking every sadness.
How do I know you're worried about the sky and the sky?
And where to send it?
A wish
Throw a palm and row a dragon boat.
Cry with a song.
It is the yearning of Chinese children.
Burning dogwood with calamus.
Seek peace.
It is the wish of thousands of people.
The lost soul of poetry
Stretching through the ages.
Youyou suiyue
Witnessed the immortal soul of poetry
Your noble quality that is turbid all over the world and I am alone.
Shocked the architecture of the Chu dynasty.
Qianhe plays the harp for you.
Miluo, the source of your life
Miluo, you are immortal.
Three "by Shi Lan Xi Du Heng, Fang Xin Xi's thoughts. ''
four
Guluojiang
At first I forgot my new job,
Every word glitters when it hits the ground.
Singing the language of heaven by the gurgling river,
Thoughts flow like pens.
With a sigh and a thunder,
God is not angry but arrogant.
Suddenly I heard that the hero had been wronged by a thief.
There is no hero in the world more than sorrow.
reference data
White's 300 poems
6. About composition: When quoting ancient poems or allusions, how should you relate the ancient poems quoted in the context to the meaning you want to express? In fact, there is no way, just follow the course.
When quoting poetry, it must be natural and harmonious, and never quote for the sake of quoting. Put an ancient poem at the beginning, and use its distinctive structure to guide the full text, thus playing the role of "the head of the dragons": Example: (1) "My aunt" "Ten years of life and death are ambiguous, I don't think about it, I will never forget it, and there is nowhere to say."
This year is February 5, 2004. It should be ten years. Ten years ago today, my aunt passed away.
(3) "My Happiness" People have joys and sorrows, and the moon has ups and downs, but I still have my happiness. Second, put ancient poems in the text and use their unique ideas to rhetoric sentences. This will not only make your point of view find a strong backing, but also play a role of "adding wings to the tiger", making your article more vivid and beautiful.
In "Spring", Zhu Ziqing quoted "Blowing the face without cold wind" in the poem "Jueju" by a monk from Zhinan to describe the softness of the spring breeze. In order to express the scientific workers' spirit of exploration, Hao Mingjian quoted "The road is long, Xiu Yuan and Xiu Yuan are Xi, and I will go up and down to seek" in Li Sao, a poet of Chu State. In "Litchi Honey", Yang Shuo wrote the beauty of litchi with only "300 lychees a day, but he didn't hesitate to grow up to be a Lingnan person" (from Su Shi's "A Unique Skill in Huizhou").
"Today's basketball game" ... our class lost the last basketball game, and this is the last chance. I don't know how to feel the tragic feeling that "the wind is rustling and the water is cold, and the strong man is gone forever."
Teacher Chen's whistle sounded, and my heart tightened: "It's time to play!" " ""The river does not return, the waves are exhausted, and the eternal romantic figures "I found a kind of pride. When is the moon in spring? How much do you know about the past? "I found a way to turn back;" I made an appointment not to come at midnight, knocked on a chess piece and fell to my death. "I found a kind of peace;" I look at the sky with a smile from the horizontal knife, leaving two Kunlun mountains in my liver and gallbladder. "I found a kind of heroism;" Clear water produces hibiscus, carving nature. "I found a simple. -"Pursuing Your Dreams" Looking for the past in Japan is Tao Qian's leisurely "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely"; It is the magnificence of Di Wei's "bleak autumn wind and surging waves"; It is the joy of Yi 'an's "returning to the boat at night and straying into the depths of the lotus"; Releasing Weng's "Julian Waghann Beiding Central Plains Day, Family Sacrifice Never Forgets" is a free and easy way; Looking for the past in Japan and China is the firmness of "clothes are getting wider and wider, never regret, and languish for Iraq"; "The Arctic court does not change, and the western hills steal from each other" is Du Gongbu's confidence; It is a surprise of "looking for her with thousands of Baidu, suddenly looking back".
-selected from the endings of three poems in the classical plot, the icing on the cake is the ending of the quoted poem, which has a strong appeal and often gives readers a strong sense of regret. For example, according to the sea and heaven, at the end: "Didn't you see how the water of the Yellow River came out of the sky into the sea and never came back?" .
Have you seen the lovely hair in the bright mirror in the high room, although it is still silky black in the morning, it turns into snow at night? "Time is like running water, time is like electricity. Perhaps, only history can make the "monument without words full". Perhaps, only history can best interpret Zeng Guofan's words of his life when the sky is broken and the yellow robe is about to be added: leaning on the sky and shining on the sea, countless flowers are spent, and the heart is self-aware.
Candidates quote Li Bai's poems and Zeng Guofan's own poems as the conclusion, which further deepens the author's point of view and leaves readers with endless reflection. Use the philosophical characteristics of famous poems to summarize the full text and deepen the theme.
Good poems and your good articles are icing on the cake, and people will agree with you after reading your articles. This has played a "finishing touch" role.
At the end of the junior high school Chinese textbook "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", I wrote: "I look at these energetic Hani girls and the white pears, and I can't help but think of a poem:' Pears in the Post Road are everywhere'." This ending not only describes the natural pear flower, but also describes the futile spirit of Lei Feng, which takes care of the theme in structure, deepens the theme in content and has rich implications.
Quoting poems skillfully closes the full text, which is memorable and thought-provoking. This is the charm of quoting poetry.
If the beginning and end of the article can flexibly quote poems and echo them back and forth, the effect will be better. For example, in 2003, the perfect composition "Youth Sorrow" was written like this.
Beginning: Xin Qiji once sang such a sentence: "Teenagers don't know the taste of sorrow and fall in love with the floor;" Fall in love with the floor, say worry gives new words. "Our cross-century teenagers have long tasted sadness.
This is not "arguing irrationally", but "telling the truth", which is a heavy burden for us young students every day. ..... Conclusion: But in any case, I still want to say to all the students who "don't know what to worry about" and have tasted the taste of worry: "Teenagers should understand the taste of worry, look forward to it, never forget it and never be afraid of it."
-quoting Xin Qiji at the beginning; The ending is flexible and plays a sublimation role; .
7. Write Qu Yuan's composition. In 2005, the title of the composition in Volume 2 of the National College Entrance Examination was "Position and Value".
Love the national conditions, two lines of bitter tears. On a moonlit night, my thoughts quietly got up and began a historical roaming. Through the glitz of the world, through desolation and helplessness, across the vicissitudes of life, came to the endless Miluo River.
"If you take a long breath to hide your tears, you will mourn the hardships of people's lives!" I looked back curiously and saw a tall but weak-looking old man with a glass of wine in his hand. The wine in the cup reflects lonely expressions and tears.
Yesterday can't stay, and the background of a dynasty passed away in your hazy drunkenness. A comma slowly shrinks to a full stop, but we have a name that has been passed down through the ages-Qu Yuan! I couldn't help wondering. I went straight to him and looked at his face: "You have been exiled to Hanbei by the fatuous Chu Huaiwang. Do you expect to serve your country again?" You'd better live in seclusion! "He smiled, three points happy and seven points bitter:" Do you think that I am not a leftist now, and I can't realize my value if my status is not high? "Can't serve the motherland? You are wrong, no matter where I am, whether I am a leftist or a common people, my heart will never change! " I quickly ran to the extremely rampant crowd after gaining power, and saw the figure of Shangguan doctor Jin Shang, and surrounded Chu Huaiwang like a ghost.
He is like a bulldog, shaking his head and tail in front of the king of Chu ... look, how high the status of Shanxi merchants is! The "value" of nature is immeasurable! Unlike Qu Yuan, you can only wait silently in your heart, waiting for the gorgeous peach blossoms to bloom again ... "You said I didn't realize the value? It depends on the' position'. " I don't know when Qu Yuan stood by my side.
I excitedly said the following sentence: you misunderstood, and I admire you infinitely. You have been demoted, but your poem Li Sao is immortal, inspiring generation after generation; You blinked, but your heart has been worried about the country, the people and the survival of the country.
You didn't realize your value politically, but in literature, you left a peak, a literary peak saturated with personality charm. Your poems are the Mount Everest in literature, and your spirit is the long river of Wan Li in the history of literature.
Time flies, but I can't take away the "Li Sao" you left behind. It is timeless and unbeaten after hundreds of generations, nourishing generations of future generations. You, in the political position, have not realized the value; In the position of literature, you are very valuable and will remain immortal.
I woke up from my dream and my pillow was wet. In the second composition of the national college entrance examination in 2005, the author used the technique of virtual dream to unify what he saw and said in his dream with the topic of "status and value".
The idea was changed to "different positions and different values". From a political standpoint, Qu Yuan failed to realize his own value and finally threw himself into the river. But as a poet, Qu Yuan has created great value and is immortal in the history of literature.
Cut into the material according to the requirements of the topic, and use the perspective of the topic to see through the corners of the material, so that the corners and sides of the material meet the requirements of the topic. "Depending on the position" in the middle of the article is a brilliant pen, which is based on "political position and its value" and transits to "artistic position and its value".
In 2005, the national college entrance examination composition topic was "Forgetting and Memory". You are so stupid. Qu Yuan, a candidate from Guizhou, is on the bank of the Miluo River, and the cold wind is bleak. A man with a long sword and an Emei belt came slowly.
He looks haggard and haggard, but his heart is stirring like endless waves in front of him. You have noble blood, outstanding talent, unyielding pride, more ambition to save the whole world, and noble sentiment of being the master of the people without fear of * * * ... You always remember your responsibility, you live aboveboard and feel at ease ... but you are so stupid, Qu Yuan! How difficult it is for Chu Huaiwang to reuse you and let you draft a constitutional order! If we really reform, how many powerful people will be offended and how many enemies will be made! How many shadows will your future cast! But you don't care about all this. You forget it.
You only remember your own ideals and the prosperity of your country. You said fearlessly, "Take a horse to gallop, and come to my way first!" " "The injustice of being demoted twice can't put out your ideal fire, and the slanderers of villains and the fatuity of kings can't hide your ideal fire. Chu Huaiwang thought of you at the critical moment and sent you back ... but you are so stupid, Qu Yuan! You know that officialdom is still dark, you know that Chu Huaiwang will listen to slanderers again, and you know that Doctor Shangguan and others will not let go. Why do you forget these things but stubbornly remember your mission? You really came back, and what happened? The fatuous Wang Huai once again listened to the words of a group of Shangguan doctors and even let Yi Cheung go! What can you do? Can only leave a sigh! Forget it, why be so persistent? You have done your best for your country and Wang Huai. Since we can't turn the tide, why should we bear endless pain? Isn't it nice to carry a hoe, put on hemp fiber, go home to farm, visit friends and drink at leisure, and write poems in the bright moon and cool breeze? However, you are so stupid, Qu Yuan! You are full of ambition to save Chu from fire and water. To show your loyalty, you use death to prove it. Why? Why? You always remember your responsibilities. It is precisely because of this memory, this seemingly stupid memory, that you will shine forever in endless history and let the original ordinary Miluo River exude the fragrance of personality.
The author of the review gathered his infinite admiration for Qu Yuan in "forgetting his future and safety, remembering his responsibilities and aspirations". Qu Yuan can be written from many angles, such as patriotism and love for the people, determination to reform, noble conduct, literary achievements and so on.
The author chooses "high integrity" from many angles to launch the topic of "forgetting and memory" in three compositions of the national college entrance examination in 2005. The word "responsibility" in the third paragraph is firmly rooted in the whole text. It is both the object of "remembering" and the reason why it can "forget" its own security.
The word "stupid" in the title and text and the word "stupid" in the last paragraph should be enclosed in double quotes.