"Spring Water" is a companion piece of "Stars", which consists of 182 short poems. It was also published in the morning paper first, but the spring water came out three months later than the stars.
In Spring Water, although Bing Xin is still praising maternal love, affection, childlike innocence and nature, she has used more space to implicitly express the troubles and anguish of herself and her generation of young intellectuals. She tells her feelings in a gentle and sad tone, while exploring the meaning of life and expressing her desire to know the true face of the world.
The Stars in Spring (1)
Excerpt:
Residual flowers are attached to the branches;
The bird flew away,
Scattered all over the floor-
Is life also a glimpse?
Comments: Lao Bingxin compares life to a scene where birds fly in a hurry and fall red all over the ground. She doubts that life will come and go as quickly as she sees it in this world. Old Bing Xin may be sighing for someone that her (his) life is so embarrassing. Have pity on her (him)!
The Stars in Spring (2)
Excerpt:
The flower of success,
People only marvel at her present glory!
However, at the beginning, her bud,
Soaked with tears of struggle,
The blood rain of sacrifice is scattered everywhere.
Comments: As the saying goes, "You can't judge a book by its cover". Although the flowers displayed in front of everyone are so exquisite and beautiful, who knows that there are endless efforts behind the beauty, and some people will shrink back in the face of difficulties and then go back to poetry to see the brilliant flowers. Should we learn from their fighting spirit and bumpy past?
The stars in the spring (3)
Excerpt:
Green shoots,
The young man said:
"Development: yourself!"
Pale white flowers,
The young man said:
"Contribute yourself!"
Deep red fruit,
The young man said:
"Sacrifice yourself!"
Comments: From the "confessions" of Yael, Wahl and Guoer to the youth, we can not only see Yael, Wahl and Guoer's expectation and longing for the youth; From the words of Ya Er, Hua Er and Guo Er, we can also see from the side what their usual life is like. Usually it is silent dedication.
The stars of spring (4)
Excerpt:
Sunlight enters the cracks in the stone,
Small thorn fruit said:
"lend me your head,
Liberated your imprisoned self! "
The box came out,
A hard rock,
It split in two.
Comments: In the second sentence, the author (Mr. Bing Xin) takes the tiny thorn fruit as the protagonist, and later the thorn fruit liberates his prisoner with the help of the power of sunshine and his self-confidence; Because with the help of the power of sunshine and the confidence of firm victory, the thorn fruit finally came out, and the solid rock (rock) split in two. In this poem, I wrote down my firm belief that I should speak well and overcome evil.
(1) From the stars (1)
The stars are shining-have you heard their conversation in the deep blue sky?
In silence, in the twilight, they deeply praised each other.
[Appreciation]: A few short sentences outline a beautiful, bright and harmonious picture. Moreover, the author's imagination is so magical and wonderful that the stars without feelings in the ice Leng Ye sky can still praise each other, and the author expresses his pursuit of "human love" very implicitly.
② Excerpted from Stars [159]
Mom! The wind and rain came, and the birds hid in the nest;
The storm in my heart is coming, so I can only hide in your arms.
[Appreciation]: A few words praised the noblest and most selfless maternal love. She expressed her heartfelt gratitude to her mother. Contact with nature and read euphemistically and softly.
③ Excerpted from Spring Water (104)
The fish came up,
A bug is floating on the water-
In this do or die, my fragile heart,
Suddenly I trembled.
[Appreciation]: This poem fully shows Bing Xin's love. The best place to write it is: "This little success or death, my fragile heart, suddenly trembled." This sentence describes in detail the eleventh small fight to the death. Only in this way can we fully appreciate Bing Xin's treasure of life and sympathy for the weak!
(4) from the spring [33]
Flowers in the corner!
When you are narcissistic
The world is getting smaller.
Appreciation: the philosophy of poetry is properly expressed through appropriate images. "Flowers in the corner" is the image expressed in this poem. Poets use "flowers in the corner" to describe narcissists, which is accurate and vivid, with both form and spirit. Flowers growing in the corner are yellow and thin because they are not fully bathed by sunlight and moistened by rain, and lack vigorous vitality. "Heaven and earth will become smaller" is intended to warn people to be modest and not to be proud. Flower of life always blooms with humility. Once you fall into narcissism, you will wither and die. It means "flowers in the corner" are like frogs at the bottom of a well, trapped in a narrow field of vision and unable to see the vast world;
(5) from the spring 174:
Young man!
Take care of the description,
Time is turning pages,
Please write!
[Appreciation]
This is a very philosophical exhortation poem. At the beginning of the poem, young people are encouraged to study hard and "treasure and describe" their life poems by calling and using inverted sentences. Don't slack off and waste time. Then, use a personification and metaphor rhetoric to point out the reasons and urge people to make progress; Because "time is turning pages, please write"! Poetry is similar to Yue Fei's "Don't wait for leisure, white the head of a teenager, empty and sad". After reading this, the shocking aphorism of the ancient philosophers will ring in our ears: "The deceased is like a husband, never giving up day and night", thus lashing Ma Su and urging him to show his brilliant life diligently.
Try your hand: please read the following poem carefully, then spread your imagination wings and mobilize your own poems to appreciate.
1, people break branches, [appreciation]:
In a bottle—
When it comes to results,
But sigh at the empty branches. [-"Star" Ninth Five-Year Plan]
2. "When will you come to enjoy the snow?" [Appreciation]:
"Come tomorrow"
Tomorrow has passed.
"When will you visit this lake?"
"Come next year"
The coming year has passed.
"When will you come to work!
The afterlife? "
I smiled and was shocked! [-"Spring Water" 96]
The bigger the flowers of speech bloom, [appreciation and imitation]:
The smaller the fruit of behavior-stars [45]