The sages once referred to reading as a "heroic tour of the soul". When you hold a book in your hand, the sun, the moon, the mountains, the ups and downs, the joys and sorrows will come to you like the scenery along the way, creating a gesture of human beings looking up, thus reaching a spiritual height. In the scenery everywhere, people can even hold books to drink wine, suppress songs and scream, and applaud and sigh for beautiful words and wonderful sentences and feelings of the past. However, if one day, the books in the world suddenly disappear, where will our life go? Where will our hearts live?
Please write a composition on the topic "If there were no books in the world". You can imagine boldly, tell stories, express your feelings, make comments and so on.
requirements: ① style selection.
② Articles should be no less than 6 words and poems should be no less than 16 lines.
Don't dust off your heart/youth world/there is no melancholy
Don't learn to be indifferent/forget to give others/give yourself/have a laugh
Don't curl up in a pile of books/it's the flowers and birds outside/the sunshine belongs to you
Youth is so precious/needs you/appreciates, creates and shows yourself
Life is so beautiful/thanks. Sincere friendship/haunting you
The world is so vast/waiting for you/hiking, searching and exploring mysteries
Open your heart
To harvest-
A surprise/a touch/a beauty of life
Please write an article on the topic of "Open your heart". You can tell stories and experiences, talk about experiences and feelings, make comments, expand your imagination and express your feelings ... < P > At the age of 16, you have got out of your childhood naivety. Sixteen-year-old season is a dreamy season; Your sixteen-year-old sky may be sunny, starry, or ... Please write an article on the topic of "Sixteen-year-old Sky".
Requirements: ① There should be no real place names, school names and names in the text;
② The number of words should be no less than 6, and if you write a poem, it should be no less than 16 lines.
Zhang Yimou, a famous director, was fascinated by photography at the age of 18, but it was difficult to eat at that time. How could he afford to buy a camera to learn photography? So, without telling his family, he secretly went to the city to sell blood. After five months in a row, he finally saved enough money to buy a camera.
With the artistic accumulation brought by that camera, he was admitted to the photography department of Beijing Film Academy ...
It can be said that it was that camera or that experience of selling blood that gave him special life experience, encouraged him to constantly challenge adversity, embarked on the road to success and realized the value of life.
But when people look enviously at the fame and fortune of successful people, they often ignore the secret of their success.
please write a composition with the topic of "the secret of success", with at least 6 words.
Example:
Full marks of college entrance examination Author: Wei Qi
At the end of the city, there are no bustling markets and shining neon lights; At the end of the city, there are only dilapidated shanty towns with weather-beaten lives; At the end of the city, there are a group of people like them.
what should I call them? Children of migrant workers? Farmers' children? Or second generation migrant workers? No, I don't want to call them by these cold names. I want to call them by their earthy baby names, holding their hands and approaching their lives ... < P > They grew up in the green mountains and green waters of their hometown, and their pure souls are heading and jointing in the fields. In the wind of Shan Ye, they are running and dreaming. The wind blew from the fields and into the city. For their livelihood and the future, they followed their parents to the city and took root at the end of the city.
So I got used to the sight of green mountains and green waters and touched high-rise buildings and traffic for the first time. They don't know how to cross the six-lane road, and their little fingers can't count the floors of the office building. The prosperous modern civilization has never brought them any happiness, but this time, it has left a deep mark on their hearts.
They took up their schoolbags and carefully integrated into the city life. However, in the strange eyes of "city people", I understood the difference between hukou and temporary residence permit for the first time. They are all treasures in their parents' hearts! But prematurely assumed the burden that does not belong to this age.
when they come home from school, they make a simple dinner, and their parents are still working at the construction site or the food market; Wake up at midnight, the starry sky in the city is not as bright as my hometown in tears; Quietly make a wish that their primary school for migrant children will not be closed down because they can't pay the electricity bill tomorrow ...
However, I have seen their growth in their growing bodies. I remember when a reporter asked a child in a migrant children's school whether he would return to his hometown after graduation, the little girl said without hesitation: of course, he must go back! At that moment, I almost shed tears for their growth.
I remember their childish declaration on the Spring Festival Evening that year: "Our school is small, but our grades are not bad" and "We don't compare with the children in the city. Beijing's 28 is also our 28! " They gradually matured, bid farewell to yesterday's shyness and began to welcome a new day.
Although, they are still worried about the small tuition fees; Although, the school still can't pay the utilities; Although, there are still many systems that are not perfect ... Although there are many "though", only one "but" is enough. Many eyes have turned to them, and they are growing sturdily.
The sun rises from the horizon, illuminating the end of the city and their lives.
they will eventually become us.
Source: People's Daily Online
A teacher who participated in this marking told reporters that the most important reason why this composition got full marks was that the candidates wrote their true feelings, which triggered the inner voice of the marking staff. Specifically, first of all, the composition describes the living conditions of migrant workers' children very truly, from the unnatural and unsuitable experience from rural to urban to the gradual maturity of their mentality, which makes people feel a real group; Secondly, the writing of the composition is very smooth, which shows that the candidates have accumulated a certain amount of reading, but they have not shown off, and they have properly expressed their emotions and horizons, and the words and themes match well; Third, on the whole, the composition expresses the author's sympathy, concern and expectation for his peers, and it is also the embodiment of the title requirements of the composition. Fourth, the description of this article is very delicate. "Little fingers can't count the number of floors in an office building"; Finally, the key point of the article is to write about the changes of migrant workers' children. At the end of the article, it is very well written: "They will eventually become us". The candidates did not complain blindly, but wrote about changes and hopes.
On the day of welcoming the senior high school entrance examination,
It was written on the blackboard: There are still 1 days before the senior high school entrance examination. Students in Grade Three live in a tense atmosphere all day. "Licorice", "Chrysanthemum" and "Sun God" are popular on campus in June, which is accompanied by our graduation day.
Graduation means that we are about to face the senior high school entrance examination, and everyone has no time to feel sad, because life needs us to struggle! However, I was disheartened and planted in the shadow of the failure of the examination. After receiving the thin report card from the teacher, my enthusiasm suddenly dropped to zero. A month of hard work, only for such a result, too unexpected. I smiled numbly and remembered the past: for such a "key point" as me, my mother cooked for me from morning till night and designed recipes; Father insists on sitting at the table every night to "accompany"; Relatives and friends who are far away from home call regularly and write letters to take care of my study and health; The teacher often spends his rest time to help me analyze and explain a problem I don't understand; My classmates kindly switched seats with me, fearing that I would drop my homework because of myopia ... They have paid so much, but I am ashamed to repay them with such achievements. However, it's not that I don't work hard! How many cold nights, I studied hard under that lonely lamp. Thinking of this, my tears can't help rolling down with grievances. "XXX, what's the matter?" The teacher looked at me kindly. "It's hard to do poorly in the exam, isn't it?" I nodded gently. "The teacher knows that you have tried your best. Just now, I analyzed your test paper. You should remember: success or failure belongs to the past, and the key is to grasp tomorrow ... "The teacher slowly enlightened me, and my enthusiasm was filling my heart again little by little. When I entered the classroom and reopened the book, a note slipped quietly: "Don't lose heart, show confidence and courage, and everything will be fine." There was a long list of classmates' signatures at the signature. I dried the tears left in the corner of my eyes and smiled and reviewed them. I am a strong person, and I can't let people who care about me down!
On the day of welcoming the senior high school entrance examination, I was accompanied by "licorice", "chrysanthemum" and "sun god", and I was still studying hard under the lonely lamp. Behind me, there are teachers, classmates, parents and relatives who fully support me. I will live up to expectations and stubbornly sprint to the "finish line".
Beauty lies in attending classes, reviewing and taking exams after class
; Class, review, examination, this life seems too monotonous, too boring. No! In addition to intense study, I also have my own blue sky and fertile soil.
a week of intense study and life has passed. It goes without saying that the moon is bright and the stars are sparse on Saturday night, and the wind is crisp. Early the next morning, my father and I will definitely take a fishing rod and embark on a journey to go fishing in Qingpu.
when we come to the bank of the pond, it is often before dawn. The deep night is like a blue curtain with pearl-like bright stars embedded in it. The grass on the ground is slightly wet, and it is as soft and soft as a carpet. The singing insects in the grass make a clear cry, which is particularly bright in the silence. Occasionally, a golden carp jumped out of the water and made ripples on the river covered with silver by moonlight. Everything was so beautiful and pleasing to the eye.
I put down my fishing tackle and waited quietly. Time passed by, but before the fish was hooked, my hand was faintly sore. "Hey? How can such a light fishing rod be sore after being held for a while? " I can't stop thinking. Oh! That's right Holding a fishing rod in your hand is like a lever, and your hand is a fulcrum. Then the "dynamic moment" of this lever must be very short. Look, the end of the pole is so close to the hand. It turned out to be a standard "laborious lever". No wonder it is so difficult to hold it! So if the "dynamic moment" is lengthened, the force should be much smaller, right? I can't help but move my hand forward for a while. Sure enough, the fishing rod seems to be much lighter. I can't help feeling complacent about this "small innovation". Suddenly my eyes flashed, wow! Not good! The float has already sunk into the water. Pull! Pull! What can be pulled up is an empty hook.
I reloaded the bait and threw it hard. The fishing line drew a beautiful arc in the air and plunged into the water with a splash. After a while, the float still did not move. I can't stop looking around. "Wow", my father suddenly raised the fishing rod, followed by the sound of "poop-poop", and then look at my father's fishing rod, the tip of which has been pulled into a half ellipse. "ah! Dad caught a big fish! " I threw down the fishing rod and rushed over in three steps. As expected, it is a big herring. I picked up the "sea bucket" and took a pocket in the water. "Wow" this fish weighs five pounds. Look at dad's fish basket. It's half full. I can't help asking, "Dad, how did you catch so much?" Dad smiled and said, "In fishing, the position of floats is very important. The best thing is that when the fishing line enters the water, four floats float on the water and three sink into the water, and the distance between each float is 4-5 cm. In this way, the buoyancy of the floats in the water is just against the weight of the lead bullet, and a certain distance is kept between the floats, so that the process of fish eating bait can be seen at a glance. ......
I followed my father's example and moved the float. At the moment, a breeze blew, making ripples on the river. The four snow-white ones are swaying in the green river, as if dancing a brisk ballet. Suddenly, the float sank, my heart suddenly closed, and then the float sank. When I gently lifted the pole, a silver fish jumped out of the water and landed on the grass beside the pond with a splash. I stepped forward and saw a big, lively crucian carp weighing half a catty. I was sincerely happy and shouted, "Dad, I caught it, too!" " At the moment, the weeping willows by the river are blowing gently with the wind, as if to congratulate me.
sometimes, "the weather is unpredictable", the sun is completely covered by clouds, and the wind becomes less gentle. Whenever this time, my father will take a "arbor" and observe the sky carefully. "Let's go! It's going to rain heavily! " If my father said so, I would immediately put away the fishing rod, pick up the fish I caught and leave the pond with my father behind me. Soon, the rain will fall like beans. If dad still picks up the fishing rod leisurely after observing the sky, he will be fine. I will also relax and throw the fishing line smartly ...
Every time the afterglow of the sunset turns the grass on the opposite side into a touch of gold, I will take the fishing rod as a "pole" with my father, hang the full fish basket in the middle, and set foot on my way home along the field path. In the sunset, nearby, green crops are nodding to me; In the distance, the smoke rising above the farmhouse waved goodbye to me. At this moment, a childhood song gently swayed in my heart: "Our field, beautiful field ..."
[Brief comment] This article has eight natural paragraphs, each of which has a relatively concentrated and independent meaning. For a while, I always wrote that I have my own after-school life, and it is very fun. In the second paragraph, it is pointed out that fishing is my extracurricular life. Three paragraphs, write about the beauty of the shore scenery. Four paragraphs, write the satisfaction of improving the rod holding technology. Five paragraphs, write to ask dad for fishing experience. Six paragraphs, write about my joy in catching fish. Seven paragraphs, write what we do when the weather changes. Eight paragraphs, write about the mood of fishing late and harvesting. Three to eight paragraphs, specifically about the fun of fishing. The author divides the article appropriately and puts a relatively complete meaning in one paragraph to make it clear. Eight natural paragraphs, each with an independent meaning, connect these meanings and form an organic whole. In this way, the article is clear and easy for readers to better understand the content.