How about commenting on this modern poem for me?

I agree with the above statement. Actually, I don't like this writing. This way of writing is the most difficult. It is straightforward and soulless. It is best not to write such subjects. See how people write their index finger. People are deeply aware of the truth. The writing of this poem is illusory and untenable, as if it were a castle in the air. And even if modern poetry can be rhymed, in fact, I suggest you read more ancient poems when writing modern poetry. The elements of poetry are very rich. American poets and Impressionist Pound and Wallace both like the images in China's Tang poems. The image in this poem is hidden there. The straightforward language is not bad, but you can only write sincere feelings. I think it's still Japanese haiku, and French poetry is still more inclined to images. Secondly, poets at home and abroad have a good sense of rhythm, and English poet Tennyson has a good sense of rhythm, so poems without rhythm have lost a lot of flavor. You should know that poetry is originally separated from singing, and its essence lies in the perfect structure like music, so that poetry can touch people's hearts.