I wrote some dark poems. What should I do? Can I contribute?

First, in terms of conception, the style is not high and it can't give people a sense of beauty. You don't have to be tall, you have to match the main theme, but poetry should give people excitement, depression, grandeur or grace, even trivial details, give people beauty, give people a thrill and a * * * sound. This poem of yours, to put it bluntly, means loving someone, but not getting him (her), and then being happy with her in the dark, hoping that even if she is destroyed, she can be together. This kind of emotion gives people goose bumps, unhealthy or psychotic, manic feelings, no aesthetic feeling, but gives people a feeling of being next door to a murderer or paranoia.

Therefore, it is impossible for this poem to be published in a regular publication.

Secondly, from the structural point of view, procrastination is long and not concise, not the repeated chanting of images, but deliberate stacking, which gives people a long-winded feeling and weakens the expressive power of poetry. Originally, I wanted to express my deep love for a person, but the repeated expression in the first half turned into the venting of extreme emotions.

Third, in terms of skills, poetry is very poor. Not contagious. Improper use of words and lack of exercise. I won't go into details.

It may take a long time to practice and improve the realm of poetry writing to reach the level of publication.

Hey, hey, I'm talking nonsense, I'm listening to nonsense, and I'm not listening. For reference only.

However, it is worthy of recognition that the landlord still has a certain literary accomplishment and a certain understanding of poetry.

I hope I can read more excellent works by Haizi, Zheng Xiaoqiong, Xi Murong, Wang Xiaoni, Ai Qing, Guo Moruo, Pasternak and Whitman, and gain something.