Until the river bank widens at low tide, and no wind blows my lonely sail. ... night gives way to the ocean of the sun, and the old year melts in freshness.
I can finally send my messenger, the wild goose, back to Luoyang. This poem describes the poet's homesickness caused by rowing eastward and stopping at the foot of Gubei Mountain, seeing the tide flat and the shore wide, and returning to the geese at night, which combines scenery, lyric and reasoning in one furnace.
The whole poem is harmonious and beautiful, full of fun. It is a masterpiece of the ages.
The first couplet depicts mountains and rivers and tells the poet's whereabouts. Although the word "guest road" is true, it already contains homesickness.
Echoing the "Hometown Book" and "Returning to the Wild Goose" of Wei Lian, the poet's skill in choosing words and making sentences can be seen. The scenery written by Zhuan Xu is meaningful and thought-provoking: "Tide is flat" because of "the width of the two sides" and "the wind is positive".
The word "Fengzheng" is very particular. Using "stability" is not enough to ensure that "a sail hangs"-if it is stable, the sail will bulge into an arc; With "wind and"? Aside from confrontation, if it is against the wind, even if it is "harmony", it is impossible to hang the sail. Necklace couplets have always been popular. "The passage of time, Jiang Chun's old age" is not only the alternation of time series, but also full of philosophy.
"Sun" and "Spring" are symbols of new and beautiful things. The poet endowed them with human will and feelings through personification, and showed the truth of life in an ordinary sense, which was encouraging. Compared with Zhang's theory of "endless life, handed down from generation to generation, Jiang Yue is only similar year after year", if we consider it from the aspects of optimism, positive and upward appeal, it seems to be slightly better.
No wonder Qi Huangong, a contemporary of the poet, said this couplet was a "masterpiece of government affairs", and Hu Yinglin in the Ming Dynasty praised it as "the wonderful description of scenery"! Tail couplet is still related to the scenery, and the legend of "wild goose feet pass books" is thought to come from Yanbei. The scene is real, it feels real, and the first sentence echoes from a distance. The faint homesickness is beyond words. Looking at the whole poem, there is another beauty: except for the ending couplet, the other triplets are antithetical sentences, which are rare in five-character poems.
"Qiantang Spring Tour" Baijuyi Gushan Temple is located in the northwest of Jiating, with a low water level at first. Several early orioles raced to the sunny tree, and their new swallows were carrying mud in their nests.
Colorful spring flowers will gradually fascinate people's eyes, and shallow spring grass can barely cover the horseshoe. I love the beauty on the east bank of the West Lake, and I can't get enough of it, especially the white sand embankment under the green poplar.
The first four sentences of the poem describe the spring scenery on the lake in a wide range, which comes from the sentence "lonely mountain"; The last four sentences are dedicated to the scenery of "Hudong" and boil down to "White Sands". Point out the environment first, and then write the scenery; Write the scenery first, then the environment.
The poem begins with "Gushan Temple" and ends with "Baishadi", from point to surface, from surface to point, with no trace of change in the middle. The structure is wonderful, as Xue Xue pointed out: Lotte's poems are "orderly in structure" ("A Ladle of Poems").
This "change" in "composition" is often reflected in the muddy brushwork; Without careful observation, it is difficult to see its "order". Although the couplets of "disorderly flowers" and "shallow grass" describe the general spring scenery, they are closely related to "Baisha dike": the West Lake in spring is green and carpet-like tender grass; However, this flat and slender white sand dike is the place with the most tourists.
By the Tang Dynasty, the custom of riding horses on the West Lake was extremely prosperous, and even geisha and girls loved riding horses. In the poem, "no horseshoe" is used to describe this green grassland, which is a ready-made landscape.
The use of words such as "Chuping", "Several Places", "Whose Family", "Gradually Desire" and "Talent and Emotion" runs through the landscape sentences of the whole poem, and the scenic spot of the West Lake in early spring is dyed into a Su Xiaoxiao lightly connected with Qiantang. However, this vigorous spring is developing rapidly.
Another news is revealed from the link "Flowers are more and more charming": colorful flowers will soon bloom here, and stones will soon appear on the mirror platform on the lake. Fang said that this poem "is intended to be like, and someone is there, which is better than a dead sentence."
This is a poem about scenery. Its beauty lies not in the picturesque description, but in the emotion in the scene, which shows the harmonious and gloomy spring and the concentrated and full feeling given to the poet by the beauty of nature. The so-called "interesting image, someone is there"; The so-called "shape moves with things and is everywhere" (Su's Heather Talk) should be understood in this sense.
You can divide culture according to content. I hope I can help you.
2. Rewrite "A Anchorage under the Mountain of Beibao" into a short article of more than 300 words. The first sentence: The boatman's paddle woke me up, and I looked at the distant scene in a daze. A mist on the river makes the distant green hills waver.
The mountain seems so far away that I can't even see the blue and black. The end of my journey may still be on the other side of the mountain. The reflection of the mountain is so long, and the boat is quietly driving on the mirror-like lake of jade, as if afraid of waking up something.
The sunset glow reflected the lake, and everything became fiery red. All this seems to be changing too fast, and the fish in the water are also curious to show their heads.
The second sentence: At this time, the tide is rising and the river is wider. At this moment, I am the only one on the Yangtze River. I stood at the bow, and the river kept beating against the hull.
Looking at the wide river and the fiery red sky, there is a feeling of vast expanse of sky and flowers. The breeze blew and the sails were full.
The ship struggled along. Birds and insects are singing in the ear, sometimes high and sometimes low, sometimes slow and sometimes urgent.
Lie down and enjoy what nature has brought me. The third sentence: When I woke up again, it was already dawn, but the moon was still hanging in the sky.
Everything that happened last night came to my mind. Looking at the newborn sun again, I can't help but feel that the darkness is followed by dawn, and a sense of hope arises spontaneously.
Suddenly I think of the coming New Year, my mother, my wife and children, and the scalper at home ... The fourth sentence: I feel a little sad that I can't reunite with my relatives, but I think that I am busy with my country, and that kind of sadness will gradually fade away. Whenever this happens, I will start writing letters from home.
At this point, I have written several letters from home, but I don't know how to send them back to my hometown. No sooner had the geese returned to the north than the letter brought me back.
Just ask the goose to deliver the letter. "My son travels, and I hope my mother will not be afraid of her son coming back.
The geese fly to the south and live in the north, but I will come back soon after a long trip. "。
3. Change a berth at the foot of Beibao Mountain into a prose that needs 200 words to describe the scenery. The best is 20 points. In early spring, a winding path winds its way to Castle Peak. My boat floats on the clear water in front of the mountain, leisurely and carefree.
The high tide makes the river bank look wider, and the water surface is wrinkled by the wind, gently swaying a solitary sail. Sunlight diffuses from the sea, just like a thorn of light, breaking last night, brushing away the darkness and revealing the glow. In the spring in the south of the Yangtze River, you came so early. Last winter seemed to be driven away by you instantly, and you didn't feel a trace.
I have a letter full of affection, written in my heart, in the water waves and in the image of spring, but how can it warm my hometown? The returning geese flying from the north to Luoyang have to be sent in a hurry, so that my hometown thousands of miles away can also feel my faint joy at the moment. This composition has 240 words * * * Hope to adopt O(∩_∩)O Thank you (* _ *) Hee hee. ...
4. Is there a winding path at a berth under the adaptation of "Three Hundred Words" by Beibao Mountain, which leads to the green hills in early spring? My boat floats on the clear water in front of the mountain, leisurely and carefree. The high tide makes the river bank look wider, and the water surface is wrinkled by the wind, gently swaying a solitary sail. Sunlight diffuses from the sea, just like a thorn of light, breaking last night, brushing away the darkness and revealing the glow. In the spring in the south of the Yangtze River, you came so early. Last winter seemed to be driven away by you instantly, and you didn't feel a trace. I have a letter full of affection, written in my heart, in the water waves and in the image of spring, but how can it warm my hometown? The returning geese flying from the north to Luoyang have to be sent in a hurry, so that my hometown thousands of miles away can also feel my faint joy at the moment.
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5. Rewrite a berth at the foot of Beibao Mountain into a short translation of more than 300 words.
Tourists pass the bleak Gubei Mountain, and the boat goes along with a green river.
The spring tide is rising, and the rivers on both sides are wider, so sail before the wind just hangs the sail high.
The red sun broke through the night and rose from the sea, and the spring breeze at the end of early spring swept across the river.
I don't know when the letter from home will arrive. I hope the geese returning from the north will take a letter home to Luoyang.
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The first sentence: The boatman's paddle woke me up and looked at the distant scenery dimly. A mist on the river makes the distant green hills waver. The mountain seems so far away that I can't even see the blue and black. The end of my journey may still be on the other side of the mountain. The reflection of the mountain is so long, and the boat is quietly driving on the mirror-like lake of jade, as if afraid of waking up something. The sunset glow reflected the lake, and everything became fiery red. All this seems to be changing too fast, and the fish in the water are also curious to show their heads.
The second sentence: At this time, the tide is rising and the river is wider. At this moment, I am the only one on the Yangtze River. I stood at the bow, and the river kept beating against the hull. Looking at the wide river and the fiery red sky, there is a feeling of vast expanse of sky and flowers. The breeze blew and the sails were full. The ship struggled along. Birds and insects are singing in the ear, sometimes high and sometimes low, sometimes slow and sometimes urgent. Lie down and enjoy what nature has brought me.
The third sentence: When I woke up again, it was already dawn, but the moon was still hanging in the sky. Everything that happened last night came to my mind. Looking at the newborn sun again, I can't help but feel that the darkness is followed by dawn, and a sense of hope arises spontaneously. Suddenly I thought of the coming New Year, my mother, my wife and children, and my scalper. ...
The fourth sentence: I am very sad that I can't reunite with my relatives, but the feeling of sadness gradually fades when I think that I am busy for my country. Whenever this happens, I will start writing letters from home. At this point, I have written several letters from home, but I don't know how to send them back to my hometown. No sooner had the geese returned to the north than the letter brought me back. Just ask the goose to deliver the letter. "My son travels, and I hope my mother will not be afraid of her son coming back. The geese flew south and north, and I came back from a long trip soon. "
You can look through the dictionary of Tang poetry appreciation, I hope it will help you.
6. Start a 300-word boat tour of Beibao Mountain at a berth under the river, and watch the river view, only to see a calm, just at the time of high tide, between the two sides, the water surface is extremely wide, but you can take in everything in a glance, which is really like a panoramic view of 10,000 mu. This is really a pleasure.
If the wind is surging, walking against the wind, a solitary sail stands proudly on the river, if it hangs in the sky, it is called "hanging" only because of its danger. There are no two boats left and right, and one person walks alone on the river. I suddenly remembered the love of my parents and the friendship of my companions when I was a child. How can I not evoke some sadness! Looking up at the sky again, I see that last night has not passed, a new day has arrived, the old year has not come back, and Jiang Chun has arrived. I have to be shocked by time, just like running water, rolling east and never coming back.
Today is New Year's Eve, but it is a reunion night, but I am alone, wandering in the middle of the river. How can I not be sad? I was sad to see a flock of geese flying south, thinking that they must pass through their hometown of Luoyang. Suddenly I remembered the story of "Goose Feet Pass Books". I looked at the geese from a distance, and the geese returned to Los Angeles with letters.