1. Good Quotes + Appreciation
"Morning Blossoms Picked Up at Dusk·Impermanence" Good Quotes Appreciation: We are walking on a narrow and dangerous path, and to the left is a vast and endless quagmire. , there is also a vast expanse of floating sand on the right, and in front is the distant destination hidden in the mist.
Appreciation: This is what Mr. Lu Xun wrote about that is impossible for country people to do. I like this sentence very much. He vividly describes the life philosophy of the country people at that time in profound and beautiful language.
Lu Xun believed that country people would not be able to write such "heat-like witticisms", and also wrote about the low quality of country people at that time, which paved the way for the subsequent description of the impermanence of life. However, everyone has the intention to joke with Wu Chang, because he is straightforward, loves to talk, and is humane. If you want to find a true friend, he is the best one.
Appreciation: This sentence reveals Mr. Lu Xun's admiration for Huo Wu Chang, which can be seen from the honorific title "Mr. Huo Wu Chang" given to him. Since even a ghost can be so humane, then why can't we as humans? Therefore, Mr. Lu Xun also wants to enlighten us through the "emphasis on human feelings" of impermanence.
As a person, legal principles are important, but you must also have strong compassion like Mr. Wu Chang. Zhu Ziqing's "Spring" (1) "Looking forward, looking forward, the east wind is coming, the footsteps of spring are near."
(Section 1 of the text) "Hope" is used together, and the longing for spring is ready to come out. . When spring comes, I will first write about the spring breeze and footsteps. Before I see the person, I will first hear its voice, which is breathtaking.
"Footsteps" is personified, as if spring comes to the world with brisk footsteps, and the image is vivid. (2) "Rain is the most common. It lasts for three or two days at a time.
Don't be upset. Look, it's like cow hair, like flower needles, like filaments, densely woven diagonally."
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(Section 6 of the text) "Don't be upset", as if the author is having a heart-to-heart talk with us and exchanging his understanding of Chunyu. I felt very cordial, and all of a sudden I changed my view on Chunyu.
The annoying Chunyu also became very cute at this time. Dream of Red Mansions: The apricot curtain is in sight. The apricot curtain invites guests to drink, and there is a villa in sight.
Water chestnuts and goose water, mulberry elm and swallow beams. Spring leeks are hot in one border, and rice flowers are fragrant in ten miles.
When there is no hunger or discouragement in the prosperous age, there is no need to be busy with farming and weaving. 1. Two sentences of "Xinglian" - curtain, the flag used as a symbol of the hotel.
"Apricot curtain" comes from the Tang Dynasty poem "Red apricot tips hang with wine flags", see the previous Baoyu title and forehead note. Zhao, said the curtain flutters like a beckoning hand.
The title of this couplet is two sentences, which are integrated into one. The following six sentences are written from what the "guest" sees and feels. 2. Two sentences of "Lingyang" - The lake with water chestnuts is a place for geese to play in the water, and the branches and leaves of mulberry and elm trees are the roof beams for swallows to build their nests.
Nymphoides, Nymphoides, are aquatic and their young leaves are edible. There are no verbs or adjectives that are usually required to form predicates in grammar, and all noun combinations are used, which is the syntax of "goose sounds Maodian Yue".
Playing in groups, walking through trees with mud in their mouths, etc., there is no need to elaborate, they are already in the imagination. 3. Two sentences of "一禦" - the planting land divided into pieces in the countryside.
The book says that after reading the poem, Yuanchun "changed 'Huange Villa' to 'Daoxiang Village'". However, the name "Daoxiang Village" was originally proposed by Baoyu, but Jia Zheng "stopped it" at that time. "I dismissed it as nonsense, but now that the imperial concubine has agreed, "Jia Zheng and others praised it after seeing it." 4. Two sentences of "prosperous times" - Although there are farms dotting the scenery in the Grand View Garden, there is no farming or weaving at all. Therefore, the poem follows the trend and says that it is not surprising that there are farms but no one is farming and weaving. Isn't it a peaceful and prosperous time? Since there are no hungry people, why bother farming and weaving? Old Stories in the South of the City - Appreciation and Excerpts of Good Sentences from "Let's Go to the Sea" 1: I stood in front of the camels and watched them eating grass and chewing: such ugly faces, such long teeth, such quiet attitude, when they chewed , The upper and lower teeth were grinding back and forth alternately, steam was coming out of the big nostrils, and white foam was stained on the beard.
I was stunned and my teeth started to move. Appreciation: This short paragraph describes the camel's expression and movements of chewing fodder in a very specific and detailed way.
I seemed to really see a camel hunched over, eating grass, grinding its teeth and making a "squeaking" sound. After grinding, some white bubbles will come out and hang on the camel's mouth, which is a lot of fun.
I realized from "I was stunned and my teeth started to move" that Lin Haiyin was very interested in camels and loved them very much. He was deeply attracted by them; I saw Xiao Lin Haiyin with two braids looking at the camel, his eyes straight and his teeth grinding rhythmically. Let’s look at the sentence “Steam is coming out of the big nostrils”, which fully illustrates the author’s love for camels. If she didn’t like camels, would she observe them so carefully? This is the brilliance of Lin Haiyin - he did not use a word "love" in the whole paragraph, but showed his love through his own movements and the movements of the camel.
Excerpt 2: I have seen the madman in Hui'an Pavilion several times. Every time she stood at the door, Song Ma or Ma would quickly squeeze my hand and say softly: "Madman!" We I just walked past the wall. If I looked back, they would pull my arm hard to stop me. In fact, that madman is just a big girl with a big braid of pitch pine, just like the big girl from the Zhang family and the Li family! She always stood leaning against the door wall, watching the people passing by.
Appreciation: This paragraph made me realize the author's kindness. Her mother and old nanny Song Ma were very afraid of and disgusted with the lunatic in Hui'an Pavilion, and they looked down upon the lunatic.
And what about the author? From the short sentence "Actually, the madman is just a big girl with big braids of pitch pine hair", I read that the author did not regard her as a madman, but thought that the madman was a big sister with big braids and very thoughtful thoughts. of innocence. The second half of the sentence "like the eldest girl of the Zhang family and the Li family" shows the beauty of the author's childhood thoughts. She does not pity the madman, but treats the madman as a normal person... I wonder if the author still has such a situation. Where is the innocent heart? Excerpt 3: So I sang Li Song for five years, and now it is the turn of my classmates to sing us farewell: "Outside the long pavilion, beside the ancient road, the grass is green and green.
... I asked you when you will come here, Don’t wander around when you come! At the end of the world, in the corner of the earth, there are only a few close friends. Life is rarely about reunions, but there are many separations..." I cried, and all of us graduates cried. How much we like to grow taller and become adults, but how afraid we are! When we go back to elementary school, no matter how tall or big we grow, teacher! You will always treat us as children! Appreciation: This paragraph describes Lin Haiyin's teacher-student relationship with his teacher. 2. Good verses and appreciation
Appreciation of famous verses in ancient Chinese (1) Song Poetry Ode to Plum Blossoms
"The sparse shadows are slanting across the clear and shallow water, and the faint fragrance is floating in the moonlight at dusk" is a chant written by Lin Bu, a scholar in the Song Dynasty. One of Mei's masterpieces. This sentence always reminds me
of the cold winter days in Wuhan when I was a child, when the charming topaz-like wintersweet bloomed quietly on the branches amid the white snow
, its lingering fragrance makes people unable to resist the elegance of walking in the snow to look for plum blossoms. Lin deserves to be called "Plum Wife Crane
Son". If he didn't love it so much, how could he come up with such a beautiful sentence at his fingertips?
Appreciation of Famous Sentences from Ancient Chinese Prose (2) Reasoning from Song Poetry
"As soon as the half-acre square pond is opened, the skylight and cloud shadows linger endlessly. Asking how can the canal be so clear? Only the source Come the living water."
This is a poem by the Neo-Confucian Zhu Xi. I remember it is the first poem in an anthology of Song Dynasty poems. The choice of the first article may be due to randomness, but it is more likely
the editor's choice, *_*. If we only consider literary talent, there are many romantic figures in this dynasty, and the waves behind the Yangtze River push the waves ahead
There are many poets who are better than this poet. However, Zhu is worthy of being a great master of his generation (although he sneers at his old man's disapproval of men and women, but he would rather believe that perhaps it was just the descendants who took the words out of context to judge the gentleman's heart with a villain's heart, and he was mistreated in vain. Celebrities only
), it is embodied in the artistic conception of the poem. Seeing the extraordinary in the ordinary is really something extraordinary people can do. Perhaps, that
editor understood that the way to learn lies in broadening one's mind, traveling thousands of miles and reading thousands of books, so it is beneficial to put him in the first place to read
, It’s really well-intentioned. < /p>
Everyone who has watched Auntie Qiong Yao’s My Fair Princess, must have been deeply impressed by Ziwei’s love vows, right? Do you know if the original text comes from an ancient classic? If you compare it, you will find that she just changed the ancient Chinese into the vernacular, speaking from the delicate, timid, gentle
lovely and charming Ziwei, which further highlights the steadfastness of her love. . That's all, I'll tolerate her plagiarism for the time being.
"It is getting dusk, the clear horns are blowing, and the cold is blowing, all in the empty city"
Jin Ge, iron horses, glaciers. It was so confusing that people thought it was a dream. If you have a big dream but cannot awaken, how many people can realize it? Ancient
In the border town, in the vast dusk, a lonely horn blew in the military camp, making it chilly and desolate. During the war, even though it was getting late and tired
birds were returning home, the city was still almost empty. There was only the lonely and desolate sound of the horn, shrouded in a deserted and deserted city.
A brief comment on famous ancient Chinese sentences (six) Tao
"The Tao can be Tao, but it is not Tao; it can be named, but it is not named." This sentence is quite similar to Zen Buddhism's "Do not establish words, but refer directly to The true meaning of "human heart".
Whenever words are used to convey sutras and enlightenments, it is inevitable that others will take them out of context and distort them. There is a saying: a slight difference is a thousand miles away.
"Thieves also have their ways." Human nature is good, and we should sympathize with those who are unfortunate enough to be thieves, because often "society" has a lot to do with their depravity.
Of course, ordinary people still have to protect themselves and seek happiness for themselves.
Jokes from ancient prose (7) Song Dynasty poem Lu You
"Red hands, yellow vine wine, the garden is full of spring scenery and willows on the palace walls."
Gorgeous depiction It further highlights the misfortune of beating a mandarin duck with a stick. Lu You and his cousin Tang Wan were a young couple, a talented man and a beautiful woman, and they were like each other
But they were separated by his mother, and they were not allowed to fly together and grow old together. It can only be like a peacock, flying ten miles southeast and lingering.
One day when Lu You was visiting a garden, he met Tang Wan, who had already remarried to another woman. He regretted it too late and could only sigh, "Momomo, wrong, wrong, wrong."
I think back then, Lu You joined the army with his pen and iron horse, and he had a heroic demeanor of "a great chivalrous person brings fame to the country". How can a hero
have a weakness, but he is still fatal? Is it really because he died before his ambition was fulfilled that the hero shed tears?
Jokes from Ancient Prose (8) Tang Zhuzhi Ci
"The sun rises in the east and rains in the west. The road is ruthless but affectionate."
I still remember the dream when I was young. And hazy admiration? Do the smiles and frowns of the person in your dream make you feel dizzy and make you feel uncomfortable sleeping and eating?
Even if they are separated, they follow each other step by step, but they will always occupy the softest place in the heart, which is hard to change even if it is worth a lot of money?
There are two poems:
Let’s all work together
In order to build socialism
You will definitely call it bullshit when you see it , yes, this is classic shit. The author of these two poems is the famous Guo Moruo.
I don’t know where the decline of Chinese intellectuals began; however, at least Mr. Guo was not the initiator, but he did not contribute much. When you see it, you must feel that the above sentence is missing a word. Yes, the word "righteousness" is missing! With Mr. Guo's position, even if he cannot turn the tide from its collapse, he cannot add fuel to the flames~~ 3. Thoughts after reading the short essay "Hungry" by Liu Bannong
My understanding of Liu Bannong began with his poems. I thought his prose was equally good. "Hungry" is one of his more outstanding proses, and it can also be said to be a poem written in prose form.
Hunger is the primary threat to human existence. Liu Bannong's "Hungry" uses small things to see the big things. From a special perspective, it shows the vision and psychological changes of a hungry child who is looking forward to his father returning to buy rice. This is a serious and widespread social problem. The poverty of the family made a child who was still sucking his fingers as a nipple starved to death. "He was so hungry that all the muscles in his body..." The money earned by the two parents in a day's hard work was not enough for the whole family to go without rice. . Therefore, the child was often scolded by his father when eating. The father's big eyes left a terrifying shadow on the child's heart. Therefore, he matured prematurely. He would sit in front of the door and watch other children playing when he had no food in his stomach and couldn't muster the energy to play. When eating, he would watch his parents getting angry or crying because of not having enough food, so he would quietly leave by himself. open. He was hungry every day, and watched the shadow of the pagoda outside the door every day, the children of other families playing, the pickers selling tofu cakes, the carpenters who made a living, the police patrolling at night, and the women who occasionally walked by carrying salted fish. He also looks forward to having a full meal every day and no longer being hungry. However, it was night again that day, and his father had not come home yet, let alone his aunt who had sent a salted fish to his family three years ago and left a lasting memory for him. Liu Bannong wrote it in letter, without any beautiful words or sentences, nor did he put much effort into his technique, but the image of a poor child with no food to eat came to life vividly on the page.
Whether writing poetry or prose, sometimes it is very taboo to be straightforward. But in this article, Liu Bannong did not follow the convention and wrote "hungry" instead of avoiding the word "hungry". He wrote "he was hungry" at the beginning, getting straight to the point and directly hitting the meaning of the article. However, the full meaning of "hungry" was directly written in the article. There are seven places. I believe you, like me, are not bored by this, but feel it is more real and moving, and feel deeply angry and sympathetic that an innocent child has been deprived of his minimum right to live.
Being subtle and charming is good; showing the true feelings directly can also achieve the desired effect. In the article "Hungry", the author writes about "Hungry" in three levels, each level is in-depth and each level is sublimated. The first layer describes the child's physical hunger, which makes the whole body tremble with hunger; then it writes about the psychological changes caused by the child's "hungry", which is explored from the outside to the inside, from the surface to the deep; and it further writes about a family. People who work hard for "hungry" even flash past the people in the world outside the small family - carpenters, tofu sellers, patrolmen and other figures who work for a living. It can be said that the entire society is struggling to get rid of the oppression of "hungry". This is an expansion from point to point, and the theme can be seen from this.
Written straightforwardly, thoroughly, deeply, and in a style of its own, these are the characteristics of this prose.
Shen Congwen commented well on this: "In the form of prose, immersed in the breath of poetry, ordinary viewing, ordinary narrative, express an ordinary state..." 4. Appreciation of good sentences
Good words for spring: spring, early spring, early spring, spring festival, spring couplets, spring thunder, spring mood, spring silkworms, spring colors, spring clothes, new spring light, spring rain, spring light, spring tide, spring outing, spring sowing, spring bamboo shoots, spring flowers, spring trees, late spring, spring scenery, early spring season, early spring season, early spring season, mid-spring season, mid-spring season, yangchun season, just at the beginning of spring, it is the end of spring. The end of winter has passed, the end of spring is approaching, spring has come, winter has come, spring has come, the end of spring has come, when late spring, early spring, March, late spring, March, Yangchun, March, fireworks, three springs, when March is the cold spring season, the spring cold season, spring is approaching, spring is coming, spring is coming, spring has come, spring has come. Spring returns to the earth. Spring returns to the earth. Spring fills the world. The earth adds spring. Spring returns. The wind is gentle, the sun is warm, the wind is warm, the sun is beautiful, the wind is clear, the sun is warm, the spring is cold, the spring is warm, the spring is cold, the spring is cold, the spring is warm, the late spring is warm, the spring is warm, the spring light is melting, the spring is melting, the spring is melting, the spring is melting, the spring is full of spring water, the spring water is turbulent, the spring water is gurgling. The spring rain is continuous, the spring grass is silky, the spring grass is lush, the spring grass sprouts, the spring buds break through the ground, the spring flowers bloom, the spring flowers bloom, the spring flowers bloom, the spring trees bloom, the spring trees sprout, the spring trees are lush, the spring trees are lush, the spring sun is gentle, the spring light is rippling, the spring light is bright, the spring light is infinite, the spring light is thousands of miles, the spring light is blooming. The spring scenery is beautiful, the spring breeze brings the warm spring breeze, the spring breeze is proud, the spring breeze is gentle, the spring breeze is auspicious, the spring mountains are like laughing, the spring mountains are like daisy, the spring atmosphere is strong, the spring scenery is very strong, the spring scenery is pleasant, the spring scenery is charming, the spring scenery is strong, the spring river is like practicing, the spring mountains are like makeup, the spring scenery is beautiful, the spring swallows return to their nests, and spring fills the world. Spring dew, autumn frost, spring planting, autumn harvest, spring warmth, flowers blooming in the garden, spring scenery, hundreds of grasses budding, hundreds of flowers vying for spring, hundreds of flowers blooming, hundreds of flowers blooming, hundreds of flowers blooming, hundreds of birds chirping, everything shines, everything revives, everything wakes up, everything sprouts, everything sprouts, everything flourishes, thousands of trees compete with each other, and everything is purple and red. Spring vegetation revives, new green grass, spring peach blossoms, long orioles, flying flowers, red willows, green red peaches, green willows, willows, green flowers, red plums, white peach, red willows, green flowers, fragrant red, green, fat, red, slim, flowing water, peach blossoms, flowing water, flying flowers, spraying green branches and leaves, lush green grass, spring glow, lush greenery, birds chirping and fragrance of flowers everywhere Orioles dance, butterflies fly, dead trees fly, mountains turn green in spring, winter makes spring, all things spring, wild geese return to the north, wake up, hibernating insects, Su Xin is thriving, full of vigor and vitality, people are diligent in spring, early plums and snow compete in spring, orioles sing, swallows sing brightly, spring is everywhere, spring is everywhere, spring light, late spring scenery, spring. Good sentence: Grandpa Dongse sent away the severe cold of the earth, and Miss Chun came to the world with light footsteps.
The scenery in spring is very beautiful, like a lifelike painting. The spring sunshine is particularly bright, and Miss Chun opens her smiling face. The red beam of the sun shines over, touching you gently, like the hand of a young mother.
With the brisk pace of Miss Chun, the green grass breaks through the soil, sneaking out of the soil, tender and green. In the park, you can see these tenacious grasses everywhere.
In this warm season, in the woods, many trees are full of bright flowers; everyone refuses to give in, red, yellow, white, purple, all kinds of flowers. All kinds of flowers are really like a beautiful big flower bed. Many butterflies and bees smelled the fragrance of the flowers, and they all flew to collect nectar, flying around in mid-air.
In the woods, many birds are flying freely and happily. When they are happy, they sing crisp and sweet tunes. The warm spring light blows on the small river, and the river water is suddenly blown by a pleasant and melodious flute. Moved by the sound, looking around, I saw a group of naughty children making willow flutes out of weeping willow stems! They blew out the happiness and joy in their hearts. The spring rain is gentle, and the spring rain is beating on the bamboo branches and leaves.
The rain sometimes slides down in a straight line, and sometimes drifts with the wind, leaving behind beautiful shadows like smoke, fog, yarn, and silk. The splashing raindrops are like the beating notes on the piano, playing a beautiful melody. Why is the sky so colorful and dazzling? Ah, it turns out that the children are guarding against kites.
Under the blue sky and white clouds, all kinds of kites are flying and flying freely. What a refreshing sight! Ah, everything in spring looks so vibrant. Ah, spring is so beautiful! Let us feel the beauty of nature with our hearts.
Spring is a season full of vitality, as well as a beautiful, magical and hopeful season. Spring is here, and all kinds of gorgeous flowers are in bloom, all so gorgeous and eye-catching.
The oilseed crops planted by the farmer uncle in the field - rapeseed flowers are also blooming. The golden rapeseed flowers have become a paradise for butterflies. Beautiful butterflies dance softly and gracefully on the golden stage.
For a while they were flying in the air, and for a while they stayed quietly on the rapeseed flowers. It is this that adds a lot of fun to spring.
The beauty of rapeseed flowers also attracts many "working people" - bees. Bees always work tirelessly to pollinate the rapeseed flowers day and night. Occasionally, a breeze blows, and the golden rapeseed flowers immediately surge into undulating "golden waves".
Looking from a distance, it is really beautiful! Spring is the season that people yearn for, and people always make their own plans in this season. As the saying goes: "A year's plan begins in spring, and a day's plan begins in the morning."
It is telling us: a year's wishes should be planned in spring, and the most important time of the day is morning. In spring, people start to plow the fields, transplant rice seedlings, plant trees and other agricultural work. Migratory birds also moved from the south to the north to cheer for the farmers working in the fields.
Some birds stand on tall trees, some simply on the field ridge, and some stand on the "staff". It is this that makes the farmers in the fields feel more happy and everything becomes lively.
In spring, animals also wake up from their slumber. The grass began to sprout, and there were flourishing scenes everywhere on the earth.
At a glance, there is a green scene everywhere, just like a watercolor painting. In the bleak and monotonous winter, I am always looking forward to spring.
I hope that her grass will grow with orioles flying, and the silk ribbons will blow on the embankments. I hope that her thousands of trees and flowers will ripple on the blue waves (yi). I hope that her orchids and cypresses will moisten everything as if they are crispy; I hope that her The garden is full of spring colors, and the flowers are falling like red rain. Now, spring has arrived.
Spring is the most beautiful season of the year. Throughout the ages, people have used almost all beautiful words and poems to describe and praise spring. Spring brings vitality and hope to people.
Spring warms the heart and spleen, "My clothes are wet with the rain of apricot blossoms, and the wind from the willows blows my face without chilling." Spring is fleeting, ". 5. Excerpts and appreciation of beautiful sentences
1 There is nothing more indifferent than a clock: the moment you were born, the moment you picked the flowers of your youthful dreams, it was ticking every second.
p>——Golky's "The Clock"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphors, symbolism, and other techniques to express the ruthlessness of the clock and remind us to cherish time.
2. As people walk among the autumn colors, what they step on, what they wear on their hair, and what seems to be floating on their shoulders intentionally or unintentionally are bright golden colors.
——Yu Guangzhong's "Palmprint of the Left Hand"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphorical rhetoric to compare fallen leaves to gold, which is vivid and vivid.
3 The snow is so white that it is illusory, so cold that it is sober, and its whiteness is endless. The overwhelming momentum makes it difficult to breathe, and the heart is cold and the eyes are sore.
——Yu Guangzhong's "Listen to the Cold Rain"
Appreciation: This sentence uses repeated words. , showing the phonological beauty of the text and the cold beauty and sadness of the snow.
4 The petals are still bright and eye-catching when they fall to the ground, like the shed feathers of a big bird offered on the altar, humming. The heroic elegiac departure
——Zhang Kangkang's "Peony's Rejection"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphorical rhetoric to compare falling flowers to feathers, showing the outstanding power of peony. Charming.
5 The orange-red houses are like old monks in bright cassocks, with their heads lowered and eyes closed, being baptized by the rain.
—— Zhang Ailing's "Autumn Rain"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphorical rhetoric to compare the house to an old monk, describing the calmness and desolation of the house in the rain.
6 Time is like a sharp knife, if. If used improperly, it will carve deep lines on the beautiful face and wear away the vigorous youth month after month and year after year.
—— Zhang Ailing's "Wish"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphors and symbolic rhetorical techniques to express your own views on time. Time is like a knife. The quality of life depends on how well you grasp it.
7 images. A slap, bright red, bright red; like a fan, spread out flat; like a blooming flower, never withered!
- "Autumn Leaves"
Appreciation: This sentence The words use metaphors and parallelism to describe the colors, shapes and postures of autumn leaves, expressing the beauty of autumn leaves and autumn colors.
8 friends, use the moonlight to draw bamboo shadows, you. One stroke, I painted it, and it was uneven, light and dark, and it was a bit like Chinese painting.
——Feng Zikai's "Bamboo Shadow"
Appreciation: Only a few strokes. , describes the painting scene of several friends, humorous, concise and unique, full of the unique charm of Feng Zikai's works.
9 The beautiful sun is in the sky, the mountains stretch, and the clusters of white flowers resemble a flowing river.
Appreciation: Using metaphorical rhetorical techniques, comparing flowers to rivers, the language is exquisite, beautiful and contagious. The words are full of love for tung flowers, making readers feel as if they are seeing the tung flowers all over the mountains and fields. The scenery of blooming flowers.
10 He sadly raised his eyes to look at the sky. The stars were like jade-colored lilies floating on the clear lake.
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphors to describe the stars very vividly. It compares the stars to lilies, highlighting its cleanliness and purity, and compares the night sky to the lake surface, describing its calmness and beauty. However, under such beautiful scenery, I am about to die, which reflects my regret.
11 At this time, a bird is a leaf, a leaf is a singing note, and in the lonely winter, the old locust tree is a song.
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphorical rhetoric to compare the bird sitting on the branch to a leaf, the bird song to a note, and the old locust tree to a song, vividly expressing The lively and vibrant scene of old locust trees in winter. 6. Title + Good Sentences + Appreciation
——Zheng Zhenduo's "Haiyan"
1. Are these two pairs of little swallows from our hometown? Are they the pair we saw in our hometown this spring? Two pairs?
Appreciation: The use of a questioning tone is thought-provoking, and the author’s infinite nostalgia is revealed between the lines. One pair, two pairs have a recurring effect, just like the author's deepening nostalgia, which is contagious.
2 Seeing them, can the wanderers not feel homesickness, at least like a light smoke?
Appreciation: Using the rhetorical technique of rhetorical questions, the wanderers will arouse homesickness when they see swallows, emphasizing the nostalgia evoked by swallows.
3 The little swallows were slanting and floating on the sea. Are they really the little swallows from our hometown?
Appreciation: Use exaggerated expressions to express your deep nostalgia and homesickness for your hometown. The faint outline of the swallow's appearance further highlights the endless nostalgia.
4. Ah, homesickness, homesickness like light smoke!
Appreciation: Use straightforward expressions to express your lingering nostalgia; use metaphorical rhetorical techniques to compare nostalgia to light smoke to show the ubiquity of nostalgia; use repetition to emphasize your own Nostalgia.
5 The little swallow, with its double scissors-like tail, flies diagonally above the bright sky in the breeze and drizzle, or when the sun is shining all over the ground. With a "Qing" sound, it has already left here. On the rice field, it flew under the tall willows over there.
Appreciation: This sentence first uses metaphorical rhetoric, comparing the tail to scissors, and vividly outlines the shape of the swallow's tail. The language is beautiful and the use of symmetry is very poetic. It is catchy and contagious to read.
6——There are a few pairs over there who are tired of flying, resting leisurely on the slender wires.——In the tender blue spring, there are a few wooden poles, and a few thin lines are connected to the poles. Between the pole and the pole, there are a few thick and regular black dots parked on the line. Those are swallows. What an interesting picture it is!
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphorical rhetorical techniques, comparing swallows to black spots and wires to thin lines, outlining a beautiful picture of swallows inhabiting; it also uses personification of rhetorical techniques, "Idle" writes the swallow as a human being, vividly showing the cuteness of the swallow. It expresses the author's love and admiration for swallows.
7——The sky is also extremely bright blue, with only a few light gauze-like clouds lying flat in the sky, just like a girl wearing a beautiful blue summer dress, and her neck But it was surrounded by a thin and light white gauze scarf.
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphorical rhetoric to vividly express the beauty of the summer night. Compare the light clouds to tulle to show its elegance; compare the sky to a girl to show its charm.
Feng Jicai's "Calendar"
8 People cannot just be remembered passively, we must also use behavior to create memories.
Appreciation: Feng Jicai's language is always indifferent and mixed with philosophical thoughts, which makes people stop and think. We cannot just passively accept memories, but we must actively work hard to create a better life and then create better memories. In this way, life will be more fulfilling and rich.
9 Just as the best way to preserve grapes is to turn grapes into wine; the best way to preserve years is to strive to turn years into eternal poems or paintings.
Appreciation: On the surface, the author writes that he likes to save calendars, but in fact, he writes that he loves to preserve and cherish the years. Here the author uses the rhetorical technique of analogy to write together the method of preserving wine and the method of preserving time, highlighting his love for calendars and cherishing life.
Wang Dingjun "The Tree"
10 It was indeed a strong tree, with raised tendons and vertical cracks on the moldy black and moist skin, like it was made of pig iron. appearance.
Appreciation: The metaphor is a personification technique. The tree is written as if it were a human being, with skin, tendons and lines. It depicts a vivid image and is compared to pig iron, which highlights the strength of the steel bars of the big tree.
Gorky's "Childhood"
11 The sun sets in the west, and the red river vents fire in the sky. Oranges and oranges dye the green lawn of velvet satin. Gradually, everything becomes dark. Coming down, everything seemed to swell and expand.
Appreciation:
This passage uses metaphors and exaggerated rhetoric to vividly depict the wonderful scene of the sunset. The author makes full use of various colors to describe the sunset, making it more concrete and impressive, and compares the lawn to goose down to highlight its softness.
Then write about the gradually darkening feelings, vivid and delicate, full of appeal.
12 In the warm dimness, the leaves that had absorbed the sunlight drooped, the grass also lowered its head, and the sweet smell filled the air.
Appreciation: This sentence uses personification of rhetoric to personify dusk, leaves, and grass, vividly describing the lazy scene at dusk. Warm, sweet, full of the sweet scent of sleep.
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