The triumph of poetry

"Door, Always Open" Composition Guide and Examples

First, the original sound playback

Write an article on the topic "The door is always open".

Requirements: 1, customized; 2. Besides poetry, the style is optional; 3, not less than 800 words; 4. No plagiarism or interplanting.

Second, the composition analysis

Test analysis

The topic should be analyzed in detail from its profound meaning. First of all, we should concretize the "door", which can be understood as the door of success and ideal, and also as the door of communication and political dialogue between people and society, nature, others, art and so on. Through this "door", we can achieve our ideal goals and achieve harmony and honor. Secondly, "always open" has four points to consider:

The door is always open, it is your goal, your ideal and your hope. As long as you never give up and keep working hard, you will definitely get in. If you are bound by doubts and worries, pessimism and disappointment, you will never reach the other side of success.

The door is always open, but on the surface it seems to be closed. One reason why many people don't enter the door is that they lack the action or courage to push the door in person, even if they are knocking at the door. Many times, we are often covered by superficial phenomena, so many people take many detours and lose the chance of success. If you want to succeed and achieve the predetermined goal, you must have the courage to open the "door" in life or reality. Success and hope will be waiting for you behind the door.

The door is always open, and people inside expect people outside to boldly come in and realize intercommunication and communication.

The door has been open, and the scenery and breath outside can't stop it. All beautiful "landscapes" such as justice, truth and humanity will always be the mainstream of the world and society.

Intention analysis

1, the door to success: that is, the key factors on the road to success should be clear, and the factors here should be "open".

(1) "Open", hopefully achieving the goal, which requires unremitting efforts, never giving up and moving towards the goal. The focus of conception should be "persistence, hard work, firmness, goal and self-confidence".

Seemingly closed, but actually "open", "door" has nothing to do with death. It can be considered that many tests in life include hardships, setbacks, setbacks and so on. On the surface, set obstacles on the road to success. Actually, it won't cost you much As long as you have the courage, confidence and courage to try and work hard, you will find that the door to success is open.

When reviewing questions, if you only think about exams and hardships and ignore the condition of "open-mindedness", it is easy to put hard work, unyielding, strong and determined into the questions, and emphasize the difficulty, which will lead to digression. The focus of conception should be "courage, attempt, dedication and self-confidence".

2. The door of political dialogue: Contradictions, differences and opinions between countries, regions or nations can be communicated and exchanged through dialogue to achieve harmony and mutual benefit.

3. The door of emotion: communication between people.

① Communication: In fact, there is not much distance between people. Only by keeping a tolerant and understanding heart can we achieve harmony between people.

Care: Love is like a door. Standing outside the door, I thought it was heartless. Walking in, I found it as gorgeous as a meteor across the sky and as beautiful as Datura. When you enter love, you must enter your heart and feel and experience the true feelings of this world with your heart. The door of love will never be closed. B there is true love in the world. Where there are people, there is love, and the door of love is always open.

Third, the composition is excellent.

The door is always open.

When one door of happiness closes, another opens. We often stare at the closed door, but turn a blind eye to the opened door.

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On the long road of life, we will inevitably encounter setbacks in our daily life. Some people regard setbacks as challenges and constantly strive to surpass themselves countless times to reach new heights in life; Some people, slightly unhappy, complain about others as if they were the most unfortunate people in the world. The former played down the pain caused by setbacks, summoned up courage and took the initiative to attack, opening a door of hope; The latter, sitting in front of the closed door, crying and crying, is undoubtedly just doing nothing. On the basis of the original text, according to different attitudes towards setbacks, it is divided into two types of people, and the content is more concise. If you shed tears when you miss the sun, you will also miss the stars all over the sky. Such a warning is not without benefit to our life. Quoting a poem clarifies the specific connotation of "learning from the past", and the transition is more natural.

Because setbacks will change our original life, those who are content with the status quo and enjoy mediocrity will feel great pain when setbacks come; On the contrary, people who pursue progress and want to constantly break through their own limits are happy in the face of setbacks. Just like the word "crisis": at the same time of danger, another opportunity has come. Instead of amplifying the pain, it is better to regard setbacks as the driving force of struggle. This paper briefly analyzes the causes of the two attitudes, points out that "frustration" and "opportunity" coexist, and clearly puts forward the view that "frustration should be regarded as the driving force of struggle rather than amplifying pain" )

Confucius said: when I was young, I was cold, and later I knew that pine and cypress were withered.

Confucius, one of the greatest men in the history of China. He lost his father when he was a child, and his family was poor and did not have the conditions for education. However, despite all the difficulties, he eventually became a great scholar by self-study, traveling around the world, inheriting culture, and going down in history. People admire him not only because he has profound knowledge, but also because he has the courage to face setbacks and overcome difficulties, knowing that he can't.

Li Yang said, "The pain of biting your teeth is happiness."

A few years ago, Crazy Li Yang swept the country with his own "Crazy English". However, behind the aura, Li Yang also has a little-known painful experience. Junior high school became the king of truancy, failing five subjects in the first semester of senior one, and making-up exams in four years 13 subjects in college, which set a record for the whole school. In the face of such setbacks and pressures, Li Yang did not sink or magnify the pain, but resolutely chose to face it. In front of everyone, he shouted out English, and even though he was regarded as crazy by them, he persisted. Later, he achieved excellent results in CET-4, which caused a sensation in the whole school. Later, "Crazy English" was born. Take the correct attitude and final achievements of Confucius and Li Yang in the face of setbacks as an example to demonstrate their views positively. )

If Confucius does not actively face setbacks, a generation of great scholars will be lost in the long river of history; If Li Yang thinks it is too difficult to overcome, then there is no famous "Crazy English". However, there are also many cases in history in which people do not actively face setbacks because they magnify the pain. This leads to a negative argument, but the language is a bit stiff.

Wang Guowei, a master of Chinese studies in the late Qing Dynasty, inspired generations of China people to make progress with "learning to be excellent and being an official". When the status of the ancient China people he loved all his life was impacted and shaken, he was confused and desperate, plunged into Kunming Lake sadly and died heroically. What a pity to choose to escape in the face of setbacks! Take Wang Guowei as a counterexample. Although it can prove the point of view from some aspects, it is not comprehensive, dialectical and limited. )

"The night gave me black eyes, but I used them to look for light."

Gu Cheng, a master of misty poetry, ended his life by suicide just because he magnified the pain. The high and exciting poetic spirit finally failed to help him break through all kinds of puzzles in life. Is this an invincible setback, or are you looking at the problem with a magnifying glass? (Take Gu Cheng as an example, which is typical. The last sentence is rhetorical and relevant to the topic. "Just because it magnifies the pain" is more general and can be explained a little)

We should face setbacks happily, instead of blindly amplifying the pain. (point at the end, take care of the previous point of view). The withering of a flower does not mean the desolation of the whole spring, and a setback cannot determine the success or failure of a lifetime. Learn to nirvana in setbacks, summon up courage and push open the door of hope that has been left unlocked. (Finally, the titles and inscriptions of rebates emerge one after another. )

The door is always open.

In this colorful world, except the prison door is locked, all other doors are open, and so are the doors of success. Walking through the door of success means that you have stood at the top of the pyramid of life.

Therefore, the pursuit of success is human instinct. People come for success and live for success. Most people can walk the long road of life with humiliation and burden, because the desire for success has always been like a bright light, shining their future.

However, in real life, there are many martyrs who have been searching hard all their lives and still can only look forward to the dawn of victory; There are many sad dreamers who go astray, but the harder they work, the more they deviate from their goals. They are eager for success and feel that success is out of reach. They are eager for self-confidence and often feel sorry for themselves. They are eager for happiness and will never taste the fruits of victory. Therefore, faced with the fate of life, they have no choice but to draw a conclusion that human life is doomed.

Many people fail to open the door to success, and their failure is due to their lack of qualifications? Insufficient strength? Still lack of opportunities for success?

The answer is no, losers fail because they lack the courage, wisdom and perseverance to push that door open.

1968, on the 100-meter runway of the Mexican Olympic Games, American Ji Haines turned to look at the scoreboard on the sports field after hitting the line. When the indicator light hit "9.98", Haines spread out his hands and said a word to himself. As there was no microphone around him at that time, no one knew what she said.

It was not until later that a reporter solved the mystery. What Hynes said at the time was, "God, that door was unlocked."

Yes, the door to success is so left unlocked, just like a rope that crosses the finish line at a touch.

The tilt of the balance is sometimes not due to the change of weights, but because the order of placing weights is different from that of weighing objects.

Success is an accident of "suddenly looking back", which seems to stem from an inadvertent action, but in fact it is the necessity of "people looking for him".

For each of us, the door to success is open. As long as we can clearly understand the right direction, persevere, persevere, not be intimidated by the strictness in front of us, bravely run to that door and push it open, a bright new world will appear in front of you, and you can't help sighing at the bottom of your heart:

God, that door is always open.

The door is always open.

"Everything will be settled in the end." That's right! Wherever you go, there will be a passage to the next step; "There is another village" is also true. Why? Because: the door is always open.

The door is always open, so please don't lament God's unfairness, but look for the door that is always open for yourself. The door is always open, so please don't hesitate to step in bravely; The door is always open, so please don't back down and go forward.

The door is always open, please don't turn a blind eye. Never mind when the door of opportunity opens for you. Go ahead and step into the door, and you will find that there is a vast sky in the door. Tao Yuanming lived in seclusion in the mountains. When Chrysanthemum proudly stood in the autumn wind and opened the door for him, he didn't escape. He drinks and enjoys chrysanthemums, uses the moon lotus as a hoe, grows beans in Nanshan, and lives a quiet and secluded life. The darkness of officialdom made Tao Yuanming retreat. However, he did not hesitate. He found the door that had been open to him.

The door is always open, please don't back down and go forward. Gou Jian, the King of Yue, was defeated in the Battle of Huiji. He is willing to be an assistant tea, and he works hard. Finally, one day, he recovered his old country and cleared his shame. Shi Tiesheng did not flinch after being declared a lifelong companion of the disease. How many people's hearts have been awakened by an article called Ditan; Although Tai Lihua is disabled, her beautiful hands are dancing miracles. Standing on the stage of life, she danced with the brilliance of her soul. They are all shut out by one door, however, they are looking for another door, a door that is always open for themselves. They went forward bravely and created an extraordinary life.

The door is always open, please stop sighing and look for that door. After the defeat, Xiang Yu sighed that "the sky will destroy me", so he did not continue to look for it. This is a different fate from Gou Jian, because one of them chose to sigh, but the other stopped sighing. Faced with difficulties, Hong Zhanhui was born in a poor family. He didn't sigh endlessly. His young shoulders shouldered the burden of his family, and his tenacious perseverance helped him find the door to open his life.

Today, China is getting stronger and stronger. In the face of all kinds of obstacles, China, please don't stop, China, please don't shrink back, China, please go forward and step into the door that will always be open to the people of China.

The door is always open. We should keep moving forward and step into the door that is always open. The sky is vast.

Please step into the door that has been open for us with firm steps!

The door is always open.

The door is actually open, and I finally understand the difference between Lin Daiyu and Jane Eyre: Jane Eyre is inside the door, but Daiyu is shut out.

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I am eighteen years old, an age with colorful dreams, but with lingering faint sadness. Looking at the lonely geese flying south, there is a kind of melancholy of "helpless flowers falling"; Seeing the maple leaves turn red, there is a kind of worry that "the cutting has not stopped, and the reason is still chaotic". The door of happiness in life always shuts me out, wandering alone, feeling sorry for myself.

Every time I read a dream of red mansions, I always cry for a poem by teacher Lin, Burying Flowers, and feel sick. "Today, the undertaker smiled, and tomorrow we will know who it is." What a tragic tone, which makes me feel dejected. Daiyu, Daiyu, are you so lonely? Haven't you opened the door to happiness in life? I always thought so.

Until one day, I met Jane Eyre and everything changed. Jane Eyre, she is ordinary, humble, short and ugly, but she lives happily and colorful. She was angry at the injustice of life since she was a child. She has ideals and pursuits, and she longs for beauty. She is loyal to love and never gives up ... I think she must have opened the door to happiness, so she has so many beliefs and so persistent pursuit. Then, I thought of Daiyu again. Compared with Jane Eyre, she is beautiful and talented, but she is always complaining. She doesn't have the courage to open the door to happiness. If she has the courage to open it, she will live a wonderful life.

I see, so I also tried to open the door. When I reached out to touch it, it creaked open. Ah, the door is actually open, but I have never had the courage to open it.

From then on, I began to live a happy life. When I see birds flying obliquely in the sky, I have a feeling of "bringing poetry to the blue sky" Seeing the withered vegetation reminds me that "wildfires will not completely devour them, but they will be tall again in the spring breeze". I got rid of my sister Lin and made good friends with Jane Eyre, which opened the door to happiness. I'm so happy.

Friend, are you also bound by the locked brows, sour tears, wandering footsteps and heartbroken bitter wine in life, afraid to open the door to happiness in life? Take courage, believe me, the door is actually open. At this moment, I am walking in a beautiful time, happy as a song, singing in my heart! I am willing to share with you!

Oh, the door is actually open!