Acacia Luoyang, who is with Chang 'an Half Pool Flower?
It's gorgeous rhetoric, but it's definitely not written by a real poet. From the instrument point of view:
Plain, plain, plain. Not in line with the rules.
Let's briefly introduce the knowledge of metrical rules:
Metrics of poetry
reason
Metric books come from music. After the music dispersed, the researchers summarized the laws of * * * in ancient poetry and formed the metrical book we see today.
A beat of poetry
Generally speaking, there are four elements: rhyme, parallelism, duality and number of words. Among them, rhythmic poetry is the most strict, and all elements must be satisfied. Quatrains, words and Sanqu in modern poetry generally do not need confrontation. Classical poetry is relatively loose, generally only the concept of loose rhyme. Metric poems, including metrical poems and quatrains, are called modern poems or modern poems. The ancients called it that, and we followed suit. Although it is actually very old, it originated from Qi Liang in the Southern and Northern Dynasties and matured in the early Tang Dynasty. Poems before the Tang Dynasty, except the so-called "Qi Liang Style" and Chu Ci, are all called ancient styles. Poetry that does not conform to the modern style after the Tang Dynasty is also called ancient style.
There are differences between ancient style and modern style in syntax, phonology and level tone.
Syntax: The number of words in each sentence in ancient style is uncertain, including four words, five words, six words, seven words and even miscellaneous words (uneven sentences), and the number of sentences in each song is also uncertain, ranging from two to dozens and hundreds. There are only five words and seven sentences in modern poetry, eight in metrical poetry, four in quatrains and more than eight in quatrains, which is also called long-style poetry.
Rhyme: each song in ancient style can use one rhyme, or two or more rhymes, and it is allowed to change rhymes; Each song can only use one rhyme, and even the arrangement of dozens of sentences cannot be changed. Antique can rhyme in even sentences, or even sentences can rhyme in odd sentences. The near aspect rhymes only in even sentences, except for the first sentence, which rhymes with a flat voice and does not rhyme. Five words don't gamble more, seven words gamble more), and the rest of the odd sentences don't rhyme; Antique can rhyme smoothly; Generally, only flat rhyme is used in the near body.
Smoothness: The biggest difference between ancient and modern styles is that ancient styles don't talk about flatness, while modern styles pay attention to flatness. After the Tang dynasty, the ancient style also pays attention to flatness, but it is irregular and can be ignored.
Classical poetry is basically metrical, so the following is only about modern poetry.