1. Straight to the point
* That is, directly point out the intention of the article at the beginning, show your own views, show your attitude, and highlight the theme of the article, so that readers can have a thorough understanding of their writing intentions, so as to determine whether the article is off topic.
* Narrative, usually directly into the narrative of events, indicating the main idea; For a general argumentative essay or essay, you should make your point clear at the beginning. Even if you use a short story or a set of parallelism sentences in the first paragraph, you must set out the center of your expression in the second paragraph. If the marking teacher has read the first two paragraphs (about 1 words) and still can't capture your point of view, he will have a certain reading impatience, so it is necessary to point out the topic here!
* Youth is a beautiful flower in March, a colorful sun rain in July and a scorching red leaf in October; It is the rising sun of spray, the hundred ge of competition, and the eagle that fights the sky; It is playing the strings of joy, and it is the poplar embracing the blue sky. _ _ _ "Youth Outlook"
* The bits and pieces of history are like sand shells scattered on the vast beach. We quietly pass by, greedily look at these glittering and precious treasures, and sometimes pick up one or two shells that touch our hearts, and collect them with a feeling of love and gratitude as a souvenir. (Guangdong college entrance examination masterpiece "Commemoration")
* Happy life, there will be pain. Some people can face setbacks directly and resolve their pains, while others often exaggerate setbacks and magnify their pains. Different choices, different life journey. And to make the Gobi desert of our hearts full of flowers, we must face setbacks directly, not amplify the pain. (National College Entrance Examination Volume II "Life is an Unbeaten Flower")
* Honesty and trustworthiness are the fine traditions of our Chinese nation. For thousands of years, people have emphasized and respected honesty. The wind of honesty is simple and mellow, the longer the history, the more the spirit of honesty fills China, and the more the light of honesty shines on China. Honesty has long been integrated into the blood of our national culture and has become an indispensable part of cultural genes. -"Honesty"
2. Parallelism enters the topic type
* Parallelism can take the lead, increase the momentum of the article, make it catchy, make the structure of the article neat and symmetrical, have a sense of rhythm and rhyme, and make the language fluent and gorgeous. Used for objects, it can be colorful; Used for narrative, can be hearty; Used for reasoning, it can be magnificent; Used for debate, can be overwhelming; Used for lyric, can Wang Yang wanton.
* Life is like wine, either fragrant or strong, because honesty makes it mellow; Life is like a song, either high or low, because it is trustworthy, it becomes pleasing to the ear; Life is picturesque, or bright and beautiful, or simple and elegant, because of honesty, it becomes beautiful. ("Brewing Life by Honesty") * Walking on the rugged road covered with layers of gravel, I am at a loss, holding an umbrella that has been scarred by rain and sun, and I lament; Looking up at the long journey I will embark on, I pray; I am glad to listen to the songs of countless great men above me. "(There is nothing difficult in the world, as long as you are willing to climb)
* Brother, with dark skin and brawny arms, looks like a strong cow; Brother, gruff and unkempt hair, like a hard-working horse; Brother, taciturn, getting up early and getting in the dark, like a donkey grinding. It is said that I picked it up, because I am the only labor force in my family who works as hard as livestock as long as I have food. (The national volume "Is brother here?" )
* Infinite nature is so magnificent because of the colorful flowers and the withered grass. The boundless sea is so magnificent because of its stormy waves and calm; The boundless sky is so beautiful because of the eagle soaring in it and the white clouds floating in it; Colorful life so proud, because of greatness, but also because of ordinary. (Liaoning college entrance examination volume "Proud of the Ordinary")
3. The combination of whole and scattered staggered
* whole and scattered sentences can make sentence patterns flexible, add a sense of melody and rhyme to the article, and give people an aesthetic feeling.
* If I can hold a handful of moonlight, I will choose the softest one; If I can pick the red leaves of Xiangshan, I choose the most gorgeous one; If I can take off the stars all over the sky, I will choose the brightest one. Maybe you will say that my choice is not the best, but my choice, I believe. (My choice, I like it)
* At the beginning, "moonlight"-"softness", "red leaves"-"gorgeous" and "stars"-"bright" are used to form the arrangement, which is bright in color, with the beauty of sound and rhyme.
4. Quote the famous sentence or epigram at the beginning of the famous saying
*, and point out the center; Or quote the characters' language to highlight the characters' character; Or quote poems to arouse readers' singing; Or quote proverbs, explain things, etc. This leads to the topic at the beginning of the composition, which often makes the article have a sense of confidence and can enhance the persuasiveness of the article, thus making the article shine with a rational light.
* "There are no traces of birds in the sky, but I have flown." Is that really the case? Looking at the misty rain and fog outside the window, I was lost in thought again.
* In the face of life's setbacks, Gou Jian endured humiliation and endured hardships, and finally "3, more armour can swallow Wu". In the face of his wife's exile, Dongpo sang "Go home, there will be no wind and rain, and there will be no sunshine", so the text will be passed down through the ages and will last forever. ..... The ancients told me that it is inevitable to encounter setbacks, and amplifying the pain will cause the next failure. Sometimes, if you adjust your mentality, the pain will vanish, and everything can be light. "Clouds are light and the wind is light" * There is a saying in Zhang Chao's Dream Shadow in the Qing Dynasty: "Ju takes Yuan Ming as her confidant, Mei takes He Jing as her confidant, and Zhu takes Zi Yu as her confidant." When facing the sea; Facing this blue; I can't help thinking: who is the sea's confidant? ("Facing the Sea")
* Ask what love is in the world, and teach people to live and die together. Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and he is also good at asking questions. His question can be said to have been asked for ages. Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But each family's words are as different as everyone's face. ? Xi Shi said, "Love is a tool. ..... "("What is love in the world ")
* Chang 'an, Tang Dou is surrounded by yes men, and Li Bai slowly sings" a cloud has arisen between the Light of Heaven and me, to hide his city from my melancholy heart "; * Xuanzong indulged in debauchery, and Du Fu was indignant and said, "The wine and meat in Zhumen stink, and the road has frozen bones"; * The society is dark, and the palace market is plundered by the people. Bai Juyi sang with deep affection that "the poor man is wearing a single coat, and his heart is worried about charcoal and he is willing to be cold." Facing the devastated motherland, Qu Yuan sang sadly: "I can't change my mind and follow the customs, so I will be miserable and end up poor." Du Fu angrily accused: "The frontier court is bleeding into sea water, and still the heart of Emperor Wu is beating for war". Wen Tianxiang gave up his life for righteousness and sang: "Who has never died since ancient times, leaving a heart to shine."
* Life is Gong Zizhen's dedication that "falling in love is not a heartless thing, but turning into spring mud will protect flowers more", life is Wen Tianxiang's lofty righteousness that "no one died in life since ancient times, keeping a heart to shine on the history", life is Su Dongpo's detachment and open-mindedness, and life is Du Fu's helplessness of "ill fortune has laid a bitter frost on my temples and heart-ache and weariness are a thick dust in my wine".
* "In Shushan, there is a road to diligence, and there is no limit to learning the sea." It is beautiful to be diligent on the road to knowledge in life and walk alone. It is also beautiful to listen to cicadas in the hot sun in the early summer afternoon and look at the stars in the blue sky in the dark among the green grass at night. (Zhejiang perfect composition "Take a breath and walk")
* The bright moon is in the sky and the trees are mottled. In front of my eyes, it seems that there is a poet dressed in white, and his hair is floating. He raises his glass and sighs: "oh, let a man of spirit venture where he pleases, and never tip his golden cup empty toward the moon!!" The loss of his official career did not take away his ambition and self-confidence. He remained arrogant and free and easy, raised his glass and gulped it down. He is Li Bai!
* The moonlight is bright, and the breeze is blowing. I seem to see an old man again, holding a long sword and holding his head high, shouting, "I want to go home by the wind, but I am afraid of a beautiful building, and the heights are too cold." The ups and downs of life did not take away his lofty aspirations, but he was still broad-minded and bold. Find the poetry of life in the frustrated life. He is Su Shi!
* More than a hundred years ago, Hugo of France once lamented: "The ocean is the widest in the world, the sky is wider than the ocean, and the human mind is wider than the sky." In the ancient East, people also passed on a simple saying from generation to generation: "The prime minister can punt in his stomach." The romance of French and the reality of China collide, so people find that tolerance transcends the boundaries of country, language, nation and civilization; Tolerance is a virtue shared and praised by the people of this beautiful planet. "tolerance")
5. The method of painting scenery
* Beautiful scenery can fully satisfy people's aesthetic enjoyment and enhance people's aesthetic pleasure. Scenery descriptions created with beautiful sentences can often set a beautiful tone at the beginning of the composition, make readers enter a perfect space and wander freely in the ocean of beauty, and then make the whole article shrouded in the atmosphere of beauty. Descriptive language tends to be rigid and dull, but if candidates can skillfully grasp the characteristics, pay attention to reference and innovate flexibly, they can break the rigid description and dull narration, and make the image description elegant and poetic. * When Yu Ji crosses the knife, a flower of life blooms into a sharp blue. I saw the bright red blood flowing through the white neck. A strong man hides his eyes, and Wu Zhui mourns. "Tiaojiang Pavilion"
* Ancient road wasteland, sunset melts gold. The bleak autumn wind blew wormwood into a low roar. A carriage galloped along the ancient road, and a dusty rode after it closely. The rider's cloak was pulled up by the wind, like a dark cloud on the horizon. The wheels are rolling, and the horseshoes are won, which is particularly ear-catching in the silent wilderness. *
In just a few sentences, a beautiful picture is outlined, which puts a veil of beauty on the opening of the composition, creating momentum for the following "Ancient Road Love", thus highlighting the theme of "tolerance".
* I used to look at life with watery eyes, and life was as gloomy and distant as autumn water. The sun shone through the maple forest, and I looked up along the beam, but it seemed that I saw endless calluses, white as fog and snow, and soft as grass. I saw my mother's eyes and the moment when my mother made a choice. ("Let eyelashes carry love and happiness")
6. Apology enlightens
* Life is accidental and death is inevitable. Life and death, in addition to those cheers and cries, there is nothing else. So, between life and death-life? ("What is Life") * The opening of the epigram is eye-catching. Life is accidental, death is inevitable, and life is between life and death. Concise, simple, profound and incisive.
7. Dialogue introduction
* Without any preparation, the dialogue of characters is displayed at the beginning, so that readers can immediately enter the language situation you set. Because it has no psychological preparation, it will cause great visual and psychological impact, thus arousing a strong desire to read. At the same time, it avoids the long and procrastination at the beginning.
* "Bed 57, it's time for infusion." "What? It's time for infusion again? " I looked at the nurse beside the bed doubtfully. "Yes, you see, the sun is almost setting." I couldn't help looking out of the window. The setting sun was like blood and dyed half the sky red. I just remembered that my father didn't come one day. * Master Hongyi, a generation of eminent monks, said to his disciples before nirvana, "Look at my teeth, what do you think?" "It's all gone." "What about the tongue? Is it still there?" "Still there." So, tough things are always stronger than hard things. (
8. Examples
* Choice is difficult, not to mention the choice of the soul. Gao Jianli chose to die for Jing Ke; Ma Benzhai's mother chose to sacrifice for the revolution; Zhu Yingtai chose become a butterfly for her sincere love. In this choice between friendship, affection and love, they do this-(Between Life and Death)
* The article begins with a brief account of celebrity deeds: Gao Jianli chose death for friendship, defended the wise saying that "a scholar knows himself and dies" with his own head, and became a legend through the ages; Ma Benzhai's mother chose to devote herself to her life, using her deepest feelings-broad maternal love to sacrifice the righteous cause of the world, and to build a personality monument for her son and future generations; Zhu Yingtai chose become a butterfly, sublimated Liang Shanbo's love with his own soul, and set an example for lovers' eternity.
9. Symmetry and neatness In the butterfly's eyes, the flower is an angel, because it gives her the nectar of life. In the flower's eyes, the bee is a close friend, because it gives her the continuation of life. (
* The article begins with a set of symmetrical sentences, which endow butterflies, bees and florists with temperament. Through vivid and appropriate anthropomorphic techniques, the form and content are perfectly unified. It reflects the examinee's superb language skills.
1. Poetry reveals the inner meaning
* "If you keep cutting, you will be confused. It is to leave your sorrow, especially a taste in your heart", which is Li Houzhu's sentiment; "Don't be ecstasy, the curtain rolls west wind, people are thinner than yellow flowers," this is Li Qingzhao's feeling; "I left gently, just as I came gently, I waved gently and bid farewell to the clouds in the western world", which is Xu Zhimo's disappointment; "People have joys and sorrows, and the moon is full of rain or shine, which is an ancient problem." This is Su Dongpo's magnanimity ... ("Beautiful Parting") The wind in the Tang Dynasty has blown many childe's fluttering white clothes; How many women's black temples were wet by the rain in Song Dynasty? That's Zhang Jiuling's "the moon, grown full now over the sea, Tianya * * * at this time", Su Dongpo's "I wish people a long time, and thousands of miles * * * are beautiful", or Li Qingzhao's "Search and find, and be deserted". They are infatuated with the vicissitudes of life, the faces that are looking forward to blessings and the faces that are eager to be eager. * The idea of this article is very ingenious. At the beginning, three ancient poems are quoted, which describe the vicissitudes of the poet, his longing for life and the essence of the national culture represented by the poet's face. The author skillfully combines the poems of the three people into his own language, which adds philosophical meaning, but also cleverly leads to the following and points out the theme.
* If you look at the poetry of Tang and Song Dynasties, there are countless parting poems. Wang Bozhuang sings loudly: why should you linger at the fork of the road, children * * * touch the towel. Liu Yong is plaintive: Where will you wake up after drinking tonight? Yang Liuan has a small wind and a waning moon. Jiang Yan, however, Qian Fan said it all in a nutshell: Those who are in ecstasy are just leaving. Some people beat their chests and feet: how can you be in a hurry when you whip! Today, there is Wang Guozhen's crooning: Life lasts for a hundred years, so how can you go and return it? No matter where the ear is, just pray like water, like a boat. Here comes Xi Murong's gentle warning: If parting can evoke the details of our negligence caused by getting together, is it really bad to leave? Such feelings are really beautiful. Chanting the feelings of different times and different lives will give you unexpected gains. ("Vientiane Life Stick to Yourself") * What is beauty? I know that beauty is the first light rising on the horizon. Beauty is a maple leaf hotter than fire in autumn, a red-crowned crane galloping on the beach at dusk, and a sika deer galloping on the prairie ... Baum Jiatong agreed with me and added: "Beauty is perceptual knowledge, and studying aesthetics is the science of studying perceptual knowledge." But Kant glared at me angrily and said, "