Can you help me write a modern poem? The title is "I see"

1, the first song

I saw the flow of the universe.

Between my still and irrelevant stones.

I saw the wind covering the granary,

Clouds cover the eyes of love with flying smoke,

The sea hides its secrets with the tide.

When they are away, things are static, which is called today.

It is hidden on the back of meaning, indicating that people are dust floating in space.

Then, in the evening of love, you see a pair of blind eyes.

They look up at the sky and fantasize about the sunset glow.

It's strange to watch a dragonfly fly through the window.

The rain curtain in the future is the thunder and bosom friend in your poems.

Her affection is a page of memories when you fly to the starry sky.

2. The second song

I saw the blue sky,

Like God's eyes, caressing the world.

I see the smooth road, the back like a god,

With a little me and my kind.

I see mountains, arms like gods,

Hold high to the clouds,

Hold up the wings of flying.

I see people like God,

My eyes are so worldly.

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Poetry writing skills:

1, the meaning of the poem

Implication is often associated with artistic conception, the content is too shallow and straightforward, and there is no artistic conception. Works often lack appeal and become poetic limericks. Therefore, a poet can't simply copy the original appearance of the objective world, but should find a more typical, refined and representative image to implicitly express the artistic conception you want to create.

2. Refinement of poetry

Poetry can't explain everything as clearly as prose and novels. It can only find some of the most representative words to convey meaning.

Therefore, we should strive for a word of gold, get twice the result with half the effort, make people want it, and have endless words and meanings. Just like we rarely see it

A poem can finish the sentence and spit out the meaning. A good poem is often a rich expression of inner feelings.