How to comment on poorly written poems

A large number of parallel jumping images are used in the poem, which forms the meaning of melancholy, sadness and strangeness in this poem, from which I feel the style of western Baudelaire's symbolic poetry. Just as edvard munch's masterpiece "Scream" can shock people's hearts, this poem's humanitarian compassion also has touching artistic charm. But the second paragraph of this poem has little to do with the theme, so it seems that it can be deleted.