1. Read the text with emotion and feel the deep meaning between the lines;
2. Understand the beauty of writing by borrowing things and conduct imitation training;
3. Praise maternal love and be grateful.
Teaching emphases and difficulties:
1. Feel the emotion of the text content by reading freely;
2. Use things to compare people and experience the beauty of the text.
Teaching methods: reading aloud and exploring.
Teaching process:
First, poetry introduction:
Please guess who are the authors of these two poems? What's the theme?
floret
I also want to look up.
Thanks for the love of spring-
Mom!
Were you that spring?
-"Stars"
Creator—
If in eternal life,
There is only one promise of happiness.
I want to sincerely beg:
"I'm in my mother's arms,
Mom's on the boat,
The ship is at sea in the moonlight. "
-"Spring Water"
What do you know about her? Bing Xin (1900 ~ 1999) was born in Fujian, formerly known as Xie Wanying, and his pen name was Bing Xin. Take the famous sentence "A piece of ice in the jade pot" in Wang Changling's poem "Lotus Inn and Xin Qiji Parting" in the Tang Dynasty as an example. Modern famous poets and children writers. Known as the "century old man"
Bing Xin advocates "the philosophy of love". "Motherly love, innocence and nature" is the main theme of his works.
Design intention: children are full of curiosity and thirst for knowledge. Guessing is to let students participate in the interaction, stimulate their interest, and satisfy their curiosity, expression and thirst for knowledge.
Today, we learned one of her poems, Mother Lotus Leaf. This poem is a prose poem, which combines the expressive force of poetry with some characteristics of prose description. This is a poem written in prose.
Let's check the preview first, and then give you a minute to sort out the new words by yourself. If you don't understand, you can ask your neighbors for help.
Displays words, sounds, shapes, meanings and picture annotations.
Students have a strong reading ability. Understanding and mastering words can help us understand the text better. Let's go into Mother Lotus and have a look at her.
Second, task one: look at beautiful women.
1. Read this poem quickly and tell me your initial feelings after reading it.
Let me give you an example. The second and third paragraphs of this article are interspersed as far as the conception of the full text is concerned. )
2. Sort out the author's emotional changes (find out the words that express the author's feelings)
Pay attention to the author's emotional changes;
Boredom → discomfort, wandering → uneasy mood → moving.
At the beginning of reading the text, students can express their feelings and opinions from many angles, which is very good.
Students have noticed that the author's feelings have changed several times in such a short prose poem, so what is the reason for the change of the author's feelings? It depends on what she sees and her surroundings. The most important thing is related to the situation of Honglian. So, what did the author see and what did she think? Let's simulate this role and find out the answer.
Design intention: perceive the meaning of the text as a whole and understand the current situation of students' knowledge. Students can't speak it.
Three. Task 2: Find out the answer
1. Please say in the author's tone: My reason-(boring ...) is because I (see and think) _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _,
2. Practice reading aloud in groups with emotion, and correctly handle light, heavy, slow and urgent reading according to the context.
Group demonstration
Default 2:
1. Why is the author bored?
I feel a little bored when I hear the complicated rain in the middle of the night and get up early on a cloudy day. ("complicated", the author is in a bad mood, so even the rain sounds complicated; "Cloudy day" gave people a depressing feeling. She saw the white lotus withered and white petals floating in the water like a boat. There is only a small lotus leaf and a few pale yellow flower whiskers left on the stem. (Bai Lianhua has withered, "scattered and falling" and "only" highlight a dilapidated and desolate situation, which touches the author's heart and adds more troubles. )
Compared with white lotus, the blooming of red lotus seems to be a joyful scene. Whether it relieves the author of boredom or not, the author is still not satisfied. Because of the thunder outside the window, heavy rain followed, and it rained harder and harder.
Dense raindrops hit the red-violet side. The author is worried that the fate of red lotus will be the same as that of white lotus.
3. The author's anxiety has been relieved, so his uneasy mood has dissipated. He saw a big lotus leaf next to the red lotus, which slowly tilted and covered it. Red-violet stopped trembling.
4. Can paragraph 8 be changed to "I am deeply gratified"? Why does happiness become touching?
When the author saw this scene, he thought that my mother was a lotus leaf and I was a red lotus hiding under my mother.
Raindrops kept beating, only on the brave and kind lotus leaf, some weak water droplets gathered.
Lotus leaf itself is fragile, but it shows courage when protecting red lotus, just like a mother is weak, but it shows great courage and strength when protecting her children.
The students speak very well. Yes, when the author saw the picture of lotus leaf protecting lotus, he thought of his mother. She protected the author like lotus leaf and red lotus. Then let's meet the author's mother.
Data introduction: Mother's condition is getting worse day by day, and she is in a coma day and night. However, once when she was a little sober, she said to Bing Xin, "Your clothes are too thin. You might as well put on my black camel hair robe to avoid freezing ... "Bing Xin was in tears. Bing Xin called her mother "the best mother in the world".
On her deathbed, a mother still cares about her daughter. Therefore, the author made a heartfelt appeal: (Show) read together.
Mom! You are a lotus leaf, I am a red lotus, and the rain in my heart is coming. Except you, who is the shade under my unobstructed sky?
Read by name, change to declarative sentences and negative sentences, analyze and compare, ask questions with stronger feelings, and express gratitude and praise to your mother. Motherly love is boundless and great. Mother is the one who shelters us from the wind and rain and protects us from the ups and downs of life. It is also in another poem of hers.
Mom!
The wind and rain in the sky are coming,
The bird hid in his nest;
The storm in my heart is coming,
I only hide in your arms.
? -"Stars"
Design intention: By tasting the vivid language of prose poems, try to figure out the author's emotional changes and feel great and selfless maternal love.
The language of Bing Xin's articles is fresh and elegant, gentle and kind. Reading her articles always feels that there is a warm love lingering around us, which also makes us feel the maternal love and natural beauty in her works. At this moment, I think students, like teachers, can't help but think of their mother, her hard work and selfless dedication. However, as a middle-aged teacher, when it comes to mother, it is more of a heartache and regret that "the tree wants to be quiet but the wind does not stop, and the son wants to be filial and not wait for his relatives". What can best express my heart is a poem by Shu Ting.
Mother (excerpt)
? Shu Ting
Ah, mom.
I often look up at your photos sadly.
Even if the call can penetrate the loess
How dare I disturb your sleep?
I dare not show the sacrifice of love like this.
Although I have written many songs.
For flowers, for the sea, for the dawn.
Ah, mom.
My sweet, soft and deep memory.
Not a torrent, not a waterfall.
It's a dry well, and it can't sing under the shade of flowers and trees.
Fourth, task three: get it off your chest.
Students, you are lucky, bathed in warm maternal love, let us also get a pen to express our heartfelt wishes. (Choose one of the two)
Tagore imagined that "I became a golden flower" and Bingxin was protected by lotus leaves, which was related to the mother's care for her children "
1. Please also learn how to express your feelings with concrete images and write a paragraph or a poem to express your love for your mother.
2. Imitation:
Motherly love is a landscape painting. Wash away the lead carving and leave it fresh and natural.
Motherly love is the warm wind that blows away the snow and brings infinite spring;
Motherly love is ......
Design intention: expand and extend, apply what you have learned.
V. Teacher's Summary
The teacher was deeply moved by the students' poems. Let's wish all mothers in the world peace and happiness.
Six, homework:
1. Perfect self-created poems.
2. Look at Bing Xin's other works after class.
Seven, blackboard design:
Bored-uncomfortable-uneasy-moved
Lotus leaf → mother (Lenovo)
Borrow scenery to write people, support the river to praise the wood.
Reflection after teaching: In view of the fact that Mother Lotus Leaf is a prose poem and a self-reading text, I also want to use it as the introduction of Bing Xin's masterpiece "Stars in Spring". Therefore, the teaching design is to create a poetic atmosphere, help students better understand the deep maternal love between the lines, and combine the active task-driven model of our school. Judging from the students' performance, the goal of this class has basically been achieved. Of course, there are also some unsatisfactory places in the East where students guide reading.