Goose Goose, facing the blue sky, a group of geese are singing with their bent necks. White feathers, floating on the green water. The red soles of the feet are stirring the clear water waves.
Original text:
Ode to Goose
Author Luo Binwang Dynasty Tang
Goose, Goose, Goose, Xiang Tiange. White feather, floating in the green water; Red on the soles of the feet, Toggle the clear water.
Extended information:
Ode to Goose is a five-character ancient poem written by Luo Binwang, a poet in the early Tang Dynasty, at the age of seven. The poem begins with a voice, "Goose! Goose! Goose! "
Write down the beauty of goose's sound, the beauty of lines and colors through the comparison between "Quxiang" and "Xiangtian", "White Hair" and "Green Water", "Anthurium" and "Qingbo". At the same time, the words "Song", "Floating" and "Dial" also write down the dynamic beauty, hearing and vision, and static beauty of goose.
Creative background:
As a child, Luo Binwang lived in a small village in the north of Yiwu county. There is a pond outside the village called Luojiatang. Every spring, the wicker flutters by the pond, the water is crystal clear, and the geese flock on the water, which makes the scenery particularly charming.
one day, a guest came to the house. The guest saw that he was handsome and intelligent, so he asked him a few questions. Luo Bin Wang always answered questions, which surprised the guests.
When Luo Binwang followed the guests to Luojiatang, a group of white geese were floating in the pond. The guests were interested in trying Luo Binwang, so they pointed to the goose and asked him to write a poem with geese. Luo Binwang thought about it a little and wrote this poem.
Appreciation:
At the beginning of the poem, three words of goose are used in succession, which vividly shows the cheerful mood of children when they see the big white goose, just like children nowadays will call things they like for fun again and again. It shows the poet's happy mood.
The second sentence, "Quxiang Xiang Tiange", describes the manner of geese when they are barking. The word "Quxiang" is very vivid, which accurately depicts the appearance of geese holding their heads high and screaming happily.
If you have a chance, you can observe that the goose is different from the chicken when it barks. The chicken's neck is shorter, and it stretches straight when it barks, while the goose's neck is longer, and it will stretch and contract when it barks. This is the curve. It shows that the poet's observation of geese is very careful.
In the first two sentences of the poem, the poet first wrote the goose he saw with his eyes, and then wrote the goose he heard with his ears. This method is worth learning by the students. When describing an animal, we should also learn to mobilize various sensory organs of people, just like the vision and hearing here, so as to describe the animal, it will be vivid.
the third and fourth sentence of the poem: white hair floats green water, and the red palm stirs clear waves. The poet used two verbs, a floating word and a dial word, which vividly showed the leisurely appearance of the goose in the water.
white hair, Anthurium andraeanum, green water and clear waves. White hair is opposite to green water, and red palm is opposite to clear waves. Using these colorful words gives people a distinct visual image. It constitutes a beautiful "big white goose playing in the water". Reading makes people feel like hearing its sound and seeing its scenery.