1. The order of the underlined sentences can be rearranged to make it more coherent: "The great romantic poet Li Bai once recited poetry here many times, leaving many unfortunate chapters."
2. The use of idioms is very appropriate, which shows the author’s daily accumulation.
3. Use poetry to fully express your excitement of climbing high and overlooking the distance. He spoke directly from his heart and expressed his unforgettable feelings about this trip to Caishiji.
4. The article systematically narrates the experience of a one-day trip to Caishiji, expressing the nostalgia and unforgettable feeling of the young author.
5. According to the order of the tour, the author describes the landscapes such as Taibai Tower in Qidu, Guangji Temple in Sanyuan Cave, etc., highlighting the characteristics of different landscapes, and revealing the novel feelings about the scenery along the way.
6. It is worth mentioning that it is really rare for a young author to use multiple lines of poetry to express his inner feelings.
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7. Can reflect a meaningful philosophy through reasonable imagination... The writing is smooth and concise, and it gives full play to your imagination. It is a good article... The article is elegant, graceful, smooth and coherent, especially The humorous language of the characters and the use of some exquisite words virtually add a lot of interest to the article
8. There are many remarkable sentences in the whole text, which add some literary interest to the article
9. This article may not be particularly attractive in terms of storyline, but it is still a successful article. Firstly, it portrays the image of the character well. Secondly, the language is vivid and enriches the flavor of life, which plays a good role. The effect of expressions to express ideas
10. The article ends with..., concise and concise but full of meaning