Practice example
Eternal moment, blood cast.
Four years of hard work in the dark and one month of singing in
Practice example
Eternal moment, blood cast.
Four years of hard work in the dark and one month of singing in the sun, this is the cicada's life.
-Fabers
Eternity is big waves scouring the sand, leaving real gold shining there. In an instant, it is the trickle of the river, and it is the blossoming waves aroused by rubble. Touching eternity is created by countless wonderful moments, which weave touching eternity.
Facing the brilliance of the sunset, the short life condenses into eternal beauty. Facing the slightly upturned corners of his mouth, Leonardo da Vinci painted an instant expression into an eternal smile. In the face of the cold and turbulent river water, Qu Yuan's moment of leap made him immortal.
Time flies like water, and the years are ruthless. Not all seedlings can grow into towering trees, not all encounters are worth waiting for, and not all moments can become permanent memories! So, what kind of moment can enter our permanent memory and turn it into eternity? The breeze blew the yellowed pages of history, and I searched hard and found the answer among the sages.
The moment of memory must be a kind of compassion for the world, a choice to abandon the small interests of personal grievances and seek the big interests of the whole world.
On the banks of Yishui River, the wind is rustling. The comfort of a close friend has been given to blowing in the wind. Get up and get on the horse, behind which is Yan, and at the foot is a long road of no return. Jing Ke embarked on a journey from the stormy state of Yan to the foggy state of Qin. Above Qin Ting, he was desperate. He stabbed the king of Qin with a dagger, but gave him a chance to escape.
At the moment of life and death choice, Jing Ke did not hesitate to choose the whole world, chose the unified dynasty that eliminated war and killing, and left personal life and death and the feud of the prince behind. So I saw that this moment turned into a hero's tears with compassion for the world, nourishing the people of China who have been looking forward to a peaceful and quiet life for thousands of years.
The moment of memory is still the responsibility of the people all over the world, serving as an official and benefiting one party. That is, "if you live high in the temple, you will worry about your people;" Far away in the rivers and lakes, I am worried about my husband.
Above the temple, it is cold and windy. The carved beams and painted buildings in Chang 'an Hall wait quietly under the hook of Xiao Yue, and the smoke and fog in the jungle of the South China Sea wander quietly in the bloody sunset. That morning, I saw Han Yu with a long beard and hunched back, holding a letter in his hand, stepping onto the hall; I saw him single and thin, and he was exiled to the ends of the earth alone; I saw that in the wild Chaozhou, he built water conservancy projects, eliminated crocodiles, released handmaiden, conducted education, cared for the people and benefited them.
"If you want to eliminate disasters for saints, you are willing to decline and cherish the old." I know that at the moment when the throne was presented, Han Yu had already put aside his personal gains and losses, because he was concerned about the rise and fall of the imperial court and filled his chest with the happiness of the people. Therefore, the mountains of Chaozhou stand forever because of his instant attention, and the water of Chaozhou flows forever because of his broad mind.
The moment in memory is even more "I die, millions of people are happy", which is the great love of the Chinese people in the world, and the lofty righteousness and fearless spirit of sacrificing life for righteousness.
The street corner of the food market is overcast. Chains tied around the neck, hair flying. The prison car carrying Tan Sitong slowly ran over the cold bluestone road and also ran over China's pain. "If you want to kill a thief, you can't save the world. Die quickly. " In the dark night, the cold light flashed. At that moment, history sighed and picked up the body of the heir; Changhong turned green, and Huaxia took away his soul in pain. What is the fear of death? A positive spirit goes straight into the sky; What do you want? A red heart permanently lit up the night sky in Kyushu.
Pale life falls on the water, and dim moments are left in the corner of memory by history. Sages and sages inspired me with their blood and the fall of life and truth. Only by thinking about the whole world and paying attention to the fate of the country and the nation can we turn the moment of life into eternity, become a photo that will never fade, and radiate elegant fragrance and dazzling light in the long river of time. ?
Eternal moments are always enviable. So, how to make an instant eternal? Let us remember Bing Xin's teaching: water it with tears of struggle and moisten it with blood rain of sacrifice.
Gou Jian, the King of Yue, kept a low profile for 20 years in order to restore the country and couldn't sleep at night. In the rustling of firewood, he endured the sharp pain in his heart and lungs when bile flowed through the tip of his tongue. In order to light up the night sky of new literature and new poetry with a crescent moon, the poet Xu Zhimo tried his best to write poetry, composition and education ... He was like a bird with a sharp thorn in his mouth and dripping blood, and kept singing for his ideal. Respectable Marie Curie is willing to let acid and alkali gnaw at her soft hands, and let the choking smoke wrinkle her beautiful forehead, just for the blue fluorescence that shines in the dark broken wooden shed at that moment.
The river flows through the valleys of Qian Shan and gathers into rolling waves; With blood perfusion, a small moment can cast the eternity of history.
Test analysis: This is a topic composition question. Firstly, analyze the topic: instantaneity and eternity are dual topics. In the process of writing, both moment and eternity should be taken into account, and both are indispensable. Candidates can interpret and explain the inextricable relationship between "instant" and "eternity" through their own narrative, lyric or argumentative writing style. They are both opposite and unified, creating eternity in an instant, and eternity comes from an instant. It can be said that "instant" refers to the original ecological scenes in life, and "eternity" refers to the spirit reflected by those original ecological life scenes. The scene has passed away, only for a moment in a short life, but the spirit will last forever, and it will last forever in the long river of history.
You can flexibly use some contents in Chinese textbooks and use them organically in your composition. For example, Du Fu, who is blessed with millions of luxury houses, makes all the poor people in the world laugh, Li Bai, who is "oh, how can I bow and scrape to the top officials", and Qu Yuan, who is "sad for people's livelihood" ... All those moments in their lives bear an eternal spirit and are crystal clear in the long river of history.
With the help of some historical facts and focus issues in history and politics textbooks, we can grasp the charm of the moment and interpret eternity. For example, German Chancellor Brandt's "Kneeling in Warsaw" is called an "epoch-making moment" in history textbooks. As soon as Brandt bowed his head, it immediately spread to all corners of the world, becoming a significant moment in the world after World War II, which aroused people's strong heart for peace.
You can feel affection, friendship and love. Seize those touching moments that permeate our lives, to interpret maternal love, friendship and eulogize the true feelings, because these feelings are eternal in our life journey.
Can describe nature. Describing water, the flow of water is an instant, and its persistent pursuit of rivers returning to the sea is an eternity; Describe the grass, it is an instant that the grass is tall again in the spring breeze, and its tenacious pioneering spirit is eternal; The withering of flowers is an instant, and it turns into spring mud. The selflessness of protecting flowers is an eternity. ...
In a word, the writing of this paper can adopt the writing method of seeing the big from the small, and can be written as an argumentative paper, and demonstrate the relationship between the moment and eternity on the basis of the selected arguments-the moment makes eternity; Destroy eternity in an instant; Moment is the carrier of eternity, and eternity is the extension of the moment ... You can write prose to express your taste in the present and dig out the eternity contained in the present; You can write a narrative, a piece of life in one's life, and feel the eternal memories left by one moment ... but no matter what style you write, you must have concrete and substantial content, and you must not talk about the relationship between the present and eternity in an empty way, which will only make your article flashy, dry and boring. Learn to write my heart with a pen and express my feelings with things.