Just ask for a seven-character poem, with the word kai, which is good. You don't have to rhyme. Women give them to men as a sign of friendship.

Hold your head high, Penglai Mountain.

Wang Yang dared to cross the sea,

I'm so charming, I'm leaving.

I want to be with you,

Cross the river to see Qian Fan.

Friendship blooms and never fades,

Fang Yi went to China for the Spring Festival.

What you wrote is friendship between men and women, not love, so you don't need the format of Tibetan poems.

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