1. To reach the summit of Mount Everest, the Olympic torch must overcome unfavorable special climatic conditions such as low temperature, low pressure and strong wind, and fully consider all kinds of difficulties that climbers may encounter when climbing to the summit.
1. What "difficulties" should be "overcome" instead of "special climatic conditions"?
2. The sun charcoal carving is exquisite in craftsmanship, colored with pure natural pigments, has elegant, fashionable and individual artistic enjoyment, and can also absorb toxic and harmful gases, so it is an environmentally-friendly work of art..
2. "Possession" and "enjoyment" cannot match, so "enjoyment" can be changed to "characteristics"
3. Buckwheat has the functions of reducing capillary fragility, improving microcirculation and enhancing immunity, and can be used for adjuvant treatment of hypertension, hyperlipidemia, coronary heart disease, stroke and other diseases.
3. Verb-object collocation with the function of ...
4. In recent years, the number of patent applications in China has increased year by year, and the sustained and rapid growth of patent applications shows that the domestic R&D level and the public's patent awareness are constantly improving.
4. "Public patent awareness" does not correspond to "continuous improvement", but can be changed to "the level of research and development continues to improve, and the public patent awareness continues to increase".
5. The person in charge of China National Intellectual Property Administration believes that the sustained and rapid growth of domestic patent applications shows that the public's patent awareness and R&D level in China are constantly improving.
5. "The public's patent awareness" and "continuous improvement" can't correspond, but can be changed to "the public's patent awareness has been significantly enhanced, and the research and development level has been continuously improved".
When I went out in the morning, I saw excavators, loaders and more than a dozen dump trucks digging under the command of the staff.
6. Excavators, loaders and dump trucks will not work under the command of people, so "command" should be changed to "manipulation".
7. On the basis of inheriting the tradition, Wang Wei made great efforts to create artistic conception with distinctive personality, enriched and improved the expression techniques of landscape poems, and made contributions to the development of poetry.
7. You can change "created" into "created" and change the subject into "Wang Wei".
8. At the turn of the century, the discrimination of China historians has been further improved, showing a high academic content, which has changed from a general introduction to foreign historiography to a level of research and judgment, thus providing the possibility and premise for the real dialogue between Chinese and foreign historians.
8. The subject of the second clause is omitted. If the subject is added, this clause is "China historians show academic content", and the subject-predicate collocation is improper.
9. The global relay of the "Harmonious Journey" of the Beijing Olympic Torch has aroused the patriotic enthusiasm of the people of all ethnic groups in China and attracted great attention from people all over the world.
9. "Attraction" cannot match "attention".
10. Under the new situation, it is necessary to establish a new concept of cultural development, promote and tap cultural system innovation and characteristic cultural connotation, and vigorously develop cultural products with the spirit of the times and Sichuan characteristics.
10. "Promoting the innovation of cultural system and excavating the connotation of characteristic culture" should be "Promoting the innovation of cultural system and excavating the connotation of characteristic culture".
1 1. Kindness is like a towering tree, shielding you from the heat and cold; Kindness is like a mother's arms, soothing your emotions.
1 1. "Yan Liang" generally only uses its metaphorical meaning, that is, personal intimacy, which is not appropriate here, nor can it be collocated with "asylum": "Happiness" does not need comfort, so there is also the problem of improper collocation.
12. The problem of children's education is a complicated process, far from being effective in one or two sentences.
12. Delete "De" after "Zi"
13. We firmly believe that one day, China's industry and agriculture will become developed countries.
13. The word "country" can be changed to "industry" and so on.
14. The last day of work is the most stressful, enjoyable and meaningful day for students.
14. "Labor" can't be "one day", so "labor" is deleted.
15. Education is in a fundamental position in the formation of comprehensive national strength, and the strength of national strength increasingly depends on the improvement of the quality of workers and the quality and quantity of all kinds of personnel training.
15. "The strength of national strength" and "depends on the improvement of workers' quality" are inconsistent and improperly matched.
16. The old man's clear thinking, cheerful personality, optimistic mood and firm confidence deeply infected us.
16. The subject is "clear thinking, cheerful personality, optimistic mood and firm confidence" and the predicate is "infection". The infection of "thinking" is not good, and the subject-predicate collocation is improper.
17. He works hard and treats people sincerely. In life and work, he really used his own actions to shape great personality strength, moving and guiding people around him.
17. "Shaping great personality strength". If the verb-object collocation is improper, the word "shaping" can be changed to "displaying".
18. The United States adjusted its visa policy in 2003, stipulating that the application time for applying for a study visa should be within 3 months to 2 weeks before the start of school.
18. You cannot say "time in progress", but you can delete "application time" or "in progress".
19. The investment environment, service quality and the quality of government officials are all important guarantees for the healthy development of regional economy.
19. One side and two sides do not correspond.
20. Manchester City Football Team should be alert to Manchester United's "terror left wing". Not Dunn, not Belmadi, not Wright-Phillips, only Sun Jihai.
20. "The important task of preventing ... is on the shoulder."
2 1. Now, I have seen the villagers who have been away for many years, the unique hut built of stones and thatch in the mountainous area where I grew up, the rugged streets and the familiar and lovely local accent.
2 1. If the composition is incomplete and the collocation is improper, add the preposition "Yong" or "Yi" before "Stone Cottage". "Look" and "local accent" don't match.
22. The language of literary and artistic works is good or bad, not because it uses many gorgeous words and terms of a certain industry, but because its words are used in the right place.
22. Two sides face one side of the mistake. "Good or bad" should refer to two aspects, but there is only a "good" side behind it.
23. As the monitoring of the ecological environment is strengthened in the production process, the pollution-free vegetables produced by the base every year are not only supplied to the main markets in this province, but also sold to Henan, Hebei and other provinces.
23. Improper collocation of subject and predicate should be changed to "pollution-free vegetables produced by our base every year ...".
24. Two important archaeological discoveries led by paleoanthropologist Jia Lanpo in the early days and National Cultural Heritage Administration recently respectively show that Yongding River, a natural corridor, is "the route of ancient human activities".
24. "The two major archaeological discoveries are made by ……", "trusteeship" and "discovery" do not match.
25. With the development of communication, mobile phones have almost become an indispensable necessity for everyone. However, with the increase of usage, there are more and more complaints about the quality of mobile phones.
"About" is an inappropriate word, which can be changed to "mobile phone quality complaint …" or "mobile phone quality complaint …".
26. Her singing is clear, sweet, simple and kind, full of the fragrance of earth, which brings people to the beautiful and rich Hexi Corridor.
26. "Luminous" and "fragrance of earth" are not properly matched with verbs and objects. It should be said that "(as if) it exudes the fragrance of earth."
Legal experts say that consumers smash goods in public just to humiliate or vent their dissatisfaction.
27. "Shame" and "self-dissatisfaction" cannot be compared. It should be changed to "humiliate manufacturers or vent their dissatisfaction".
28. Colorful waterfalls are located in the depths of a mountain in Niru Village, Shangri-La County. A plateau snowmelt river named Nilu River and steep peaks have created this unparalleled spectacle.
28. The verb "create" and the object "wonder" are not collocated properly, so "create" should be changed to "form".
29. If we only rely on the iodine content in supplements, lactating women may be short of iodine. If iodine-containing food is not added in time, it may lead to brain injury or mental retardation in infants.
29. The verb "take" and the object "iodine content" are not collocated properly. It can be changed to "take supplements containing iodine".
Scientists believe that there are not many unique ecological environments suitable for natural reproduction of South China tiger population in China.
30. "Belt … ecological environment" is a verb-object structure, so it can't be the subject of "used up", so "belt" can be removed.
3 1. During his tenure as battalion commander and colonel, Comrade Li Mingde was repeatedly rated as an advanced training unit and a model logistics support unit.
3 1. The subject "Li Mingde" and the object "Unit" are not collocated properly. Change the first "unit" to individual and delete the second "unit". Or the front should be changed to "the troops that Comrade Li Mingde took when he was a battalion commander or colonel".
32. Wuyi Road Table Tennis Hall is a group established with the approval of the Sports Bureau and the Civil Affairs Bureau to promote table tennis.
32. The subject "table tennis hall" and the object "group" are not properly matched, so the "group" is changed to "institution" or "unit".
33. Happiness is a person's feelings of pleasure and comfort in life in a certain social relationship, as well as his understanding and evaluation of the meaning of life.
33. The subject "happiness" and the object "evaluation" are not collocated properly. Delete "and evaluation".
34. Whether Scientific Outlook on Development can be implemented is undoubtedly of great significance for building a harmonious society and promoting sustainable economic development.
34. "Whether" and "significant" do not correspond before and after, so "whether" should be removed.
35. Whether the school can do a good job in the ideal education of young people is a major event related to the successors of the motherland's construction and must be highly valued.
35. "Grasping and not grasping" are two sides, and "successors" are one side, so "grasping and not grasping" should be removed.
36. In today's world, the proportion of independent intellectual property rights is a sign of measuring a country's scientific development, and scientific and technological progress is a sign of a country's prosperity.
36. "Scientific and technological progress or not" is two aspects, which does not quite match "national prosperity" on the one hand. Remove the "no".
37. At the press conference, the spokesman of China National Tourism Administration denied the question of whether seven red tourist attractions, including Tiananmen Square, charge tickets.
37. A man faces two sides. Whether to collect tickets cannot be "denied".
38. Strolling through Taoyuan, rows of peach trees and trees make people linger; When you arrive in China, you can pick them at your own expense. Soft and juicy peaches will feast your eyes.
38. Improper collocation, "row by row, row by row" is not suitable to modify "Taolin", a word representing the concept of set. "
39. Some businesses violate business ethics and take advantage of the curiosity of primary and secondary school students and the fact that cheating in exams is common, advertising for "invisible pens".
39. "Using" and "Cheating in exams is common" cannot be compared.
Over the past 40.6 years, China's space technology has made progress from single cabin to three cabins, from unmanned to manned, from "one person for one day" to "two people for five days".
40. "Completion" and "Progress" do not match, and "Completion" should be changed to "Realization".
4 1. After watching that TV series, I seem to feel that there is one person who has not appeared, and that is the author himself.
4 1. Improper collocation should be changed to "I still think there is a role that has not been played".
42. After the implementation of the production responsibility system in the factory, the efficiency has been obviously improved, and the monthly scrap rate has dropped from 1000 to 100, and the scrap rate has dropped by 9 times.
42. "Decline" cannot be followed by "multiple times".
43. The article has made detailed provisions and profound exposition on issues such as wage adjustment, bonus distribution and employee welfare treatment in theory and policy, which has strong guiding significance and operability.
43. It belongs to poor care before and after, and should be changed to "profound explanation and detailed provisions in theory and policy".
44. It is considered that the key factor of team effectiveness is not only the simple addition of individual contributions, but also the teamwork skills that can make the players act in unison and cooperate with each other.
44. The word "not just" cannot be collocated with "but", so "not just" should be changed to "not".
45. When the subway was under intense construction, the tunnel suddenly collapsed. Yu Xiuhua, the section chief, risked his life to cover the safety of workers with his body, but he was seriously injured.
45. "Cover" and "safety" are not properly matched.
46. It is an urgent task to speed up the development of manufacturing industry by adopting various methods to improve and train the modern technical level of workers.
46. "Training" and "level" do not match. The complex attributives before "major events" should be arranged in the following customary order: 1, indicating possession or time and place. 2. Table reference or quantity. 3. Verbs or verb phrases. 4. Adjectives or adjective phrases. 5. Nouns or noun phrases.
47. If an angelic smile can relieve a person's depression for many years, it should be priceless and one of the effective ways to solve the dilemma.
47. The "relief bureau" does not match, and it should be "solution spear" or "relief bureau".
48. It is important to improve the quality of breakfast. Breakfast nutrition should provide vitamins and minerals that account for two-thirds of the total daily demand of the human body, so we must not be careless about breakfast.
48. Improper collocation and unclear meaning are the main problems in the second clause. First, it is not "breakfast nutrition" and "should be provided", but "breakfast nutrition"; Secondly, "two-thirds of the total amount of vitamins and minerals needed every day" is ambiguous because of improper word order, and it should be "two-thirds of the total amount of vitamins and minerals needed every day". The whole clause is changed to "breakfast should provide two-thirds of the total amount of vitamins and minerals needed by the human body every day."
Is there any hope for China in the 49.2 1 century? We should not only firmly inherit and explore the fine traditions of the Chinese nation, but also extensively learn from foreign advanced science and culture.
49. Improper collocation, "whether there is" is two sides, and "the key lies in" is one side, so "whether" should be added after "lies in".
50. The ability to obtain information has become the premise and foundation of students' autonomous learning, and it is also an important symbol to determine and measure students' learning ability and level.
50. "Measurement" and "Symbol" do not match.
5 1. If the 600-year history of Tianjin Jianwei is compared to a magnificent epic, then the Sanchahekou is the main theme and the most wonderful chapter of this epic.
5 1. "The main theme and the most passionate chapter of epic" is not properly matched.
52. The completion of the new Paifang overpass will greatly ease the traffic jam during peak hours.
52. "Relief" and "problem" belong to verb-object mismatch, and "problem" is changed to "contradiction".
53. The financial departments at all levels should improve the scientific management level, especially in the management of funds for rural infrastructure construction, and should be aware of it, make overall considerations and make careful arrangements.
53 should be changed to "especially the management of rural infrastructure construction funds"