1. Write a composition about Huichong’s Spring River Evening Scene
One day, Su Shi, a great writer in the Northern Song Dynasty, visited the home of his old friend, monk Huichong.
As soon as he entered the door, he saw a painting titled "Evening Scene on the Spring River". He stepped forward to admire it carefully and couldn't help but be intoxicated by it, as if he was in the painting.
In early spring, the sky clears after the rain, and the bamboo forest becomes even greener. Bamboo shoots sprout out of the ground one after another, and soon they grow into large lengths, looking full of vitality. On the peach trees outside the bamboo forest, a few sparse peach blossoms bloomed.
On the petals, round raindrops sparkle like beautiful jewelry, making the flowers extraordinarily beautiful. The ice on the river has melted, and the clear water flows happily.
After not swimming for a long time, the ducklings couldn’t wait to jump into the water and swim happily. They called a few times from time to time. You called me and I responded, as if to say: "It’s so comfortable to have warm water." "Yes!" After a while, one dived into the water and took out a small fish; after a while, they flapped their wings together, trying to wash away the dust of the winter with splashes of water... ...Short buds sprouted from the reeds, which were green and very cute. Among the reeds, fishing boats came out one after another.
Beside the reeds, wormwood grows all over the waterlogged depressions. This is the best condiment for pufferfish. pufferfish will be on the market soon. I wonder if those small boats are going to catch them? Su Shi was immersed in the painting, and after a while, he came back to his senses.
He hurriedly took pen and ink and wrote the famous poem "Hui Chong's "Evening Scene on the Spring River"" which is well-known to all families: There are two or three peach blossoms outside the bamboo, and ducks are prophets of the warm water in the spring river. The ground is covered with wormwood and reed buds are short, which is when the puffer fish is about to come. 2. I am a child and don’t know how to write the ancient poem "Evening Scene on the Spring River in Huichong"
[Edit this paragraph] Original text of the work "Evening Scene on the Spring River in Huichong" by Su Shi of the Song Dynasty. Three or two peach blossoms outside the bamboo are a prophet of the warmth of the spring river.
The ground is covered with wormwood and reed buds, which is when the puffer fish is about to come. [1] [Edit this paragraph] Annotation Translation Annotation Hui Chong: A famous monk in the Northern Song Dynasty was good at poetry and painting. "Evening Scene on the Spring River" is his painting. There are two paintings, one is a picture of a duck playing and the other is a picture of flying geese.
Su Shi also has two poems about paintings. This one is about duck opera. Wormwood: A perennial herb that grows in depressions. It has light yellow flowers and a stem four or five feet high. It is tender and crispy when it is new and can be eaten.
Reed buds: young buds of reeds, edible. Pufferfish: A type of fish, scientific name is "Fugu". Its meat is delicious, but its ovaries and liver are highly toxic.
Produced in my country's coastal areas and some inland rivers. Every spring they swim up the river to lay eggs in fresh water.
Up: refers to going up the river. [2] Translation: Two or three peach blossoms were blooming outside the bamboo forest, and ducks were playing in the water. They were the first to notice the warming of the river in early spring.
The river beach is already covered with mugwort and asparagus has begun to sprout. This is the season when puffer fish return from the sea and will swim up the river to lay their eggs. Sentence explanation: Three or two peach blossoms outside the bamboo This is a warm scenery: looking across the sparse green bamboo, a few peach blossoms are swaying.
The contrast between peach and bamboo, red and green, makes the spring mood particularly attractive. Although this is just a simple sentence, it reveals a lot of information.
First of all, it shows the sparseness of the bamboo forest. If it were dense, you would not be able to see the peach blossoms. Secondly, it indicates the season and highlights the word "early".
The spring cold has just passed, and it is not yet the time for peach blossoms to bloom, but the infinite vitality and potential of spring have already been revealed. Ducks are prophets of spring river water warmth. Ducks are playing in the spring water of a river; they are the first to sense the message that the river water is getting warmer.
Ducks know that water is warm. Painting alone cannot express it, but poetry can express it. In fact, is the duck a prophet of plumbing? All aquatic creatures know warmth and cold.
The poet wrote this to suit the scenery. In fact, he also expressed his joy and praise for the arrival of spring. There is a poem in the Tang Dynasty called "A bird is a prophet looking for a path among flowers", which has the same meaning and meaning as this sentence.
This poem is very philosophical. Nowadays, when we refer to a new situation or news that is known in advance, we often quote this sentence. The ground is covered with wormwood and the reed buds are short. Everything is new in spring.
Along the river, lush wormwood covered the ground, and reeds also sprouted short buds. These seven characters are not a general description of the scenery, but the poet's detailed description of the mood of these two plants through careful observation. Not a single word is idle.
Wang Shizhen of the Qing Dynasty praised this poem in "Yuyang Poetry Talk" and said: "Po's poems... are not only wonderful in charm, but also like Mei Shengyu's 'Spring Island grows buds, and spring banks fly with poplars. There is no general word for "flower". "Mei Yaochen, a poet of the Song Dynasty, described this scene when the puffer fish was about to bloom: "The puffer fish is more expensive than the fish and shrimp."
The poem. The first three sentences describe the scenery in Hui Chong's paintings, while the last sentence is an association of emotions arising from the scene. The author's writing in this way outlines the whole picture more perfectly, giving people the joy that the harsh winter is over and spring has arrived in the world.
The author is not only inside the painting, but also outside the painting, presenting everything that is not in the painting but that is within reason. If all four lines of the poem are outline descriptions of scenery, the form would be a bit rigid.
The processing of the last sentence not only makes the whole poem lively and vivid, but also greatly enriches the artistic conception of the poem and the painting. [1] [Edit this paragraph] Appreciation of Works Hui Chong was a monk and a painter in the Song Dynasty.
This poem was inscribed by Su Shi on Hui Chong's painting "Dawn Scene on the Spring River". Hui Chong's original painting has been lost, and some versions of this poem were titled "Spring River Dawn Scene", which is now impossible to verify.
Painting uses a distinct image to give people a specific visual experience, but it can only express a specific picture and has certain limitations. Although a good poem has no visible images, it can use figurative language to attract readers into a beautiful artistic conception formed through the poet's unique conception, so as to make up for some things that cannot be expressed in pictures.
This poem on painting not only retains the image beauty of the picture, but also plays to the strengths of the poem. The poet used his flavorful, realistic and realistic pen and ink to show the spring scenery described in the original painting so fascinatingly.
While describing based on the picture, Su Shi also came up with new ideas, which made the beautiful images in the painting more poetic and fascinating. [1] Two or three peach blossoms are blooming outside the bamboo forest, and ducks are playing in the water. They are the first to notice the warming of the river in early spring.
The river beach is already full of mugwort and asparagus has begun to sprout. At this time, it is a good time for pufferfish to be sold in the market. A good poem on painting must not only fit the theme of the painting, but not be limited to the content of the painting. It must be able to reproduce the painting scene, and at the same time, it must be able to jump out of the painting, create a new perspective, and leave the painting without losing its independent artistic life.
Su Shi’s poem can be said to have achieved this. The first three lines of the poem chant about the scenery in the picture, and the last line is an association caused by the scenery in the picture.
The whole poem is like a poet expressing his feelings at the scene. The images obtained at the moment are wonderful and natural. The first three sentences represent the painting scene, but in fact the two are not completely equivalent.
In the second sentence, the words "water warmth" (temperature) and "duck prophet" (perception) cannot be drawn directly. Poems can describe picturesque things, but poems that praise the physical properties of things are too picturesque.
This is because painting is a visual art, while poetry is a language art, with absolute freedom of expression. The last sentence further develops association and makes a judgment about the season of the scenery in the painting based on the objective description of the scenery in the first three sentences, thus adding a rich feeling of the beauty of southern scenery, which is something that paintings cannot do.
Regarding the seasonal flavor of pufferfish, Mei Yaochen wrote a poem in "Fan Raozhou sits in Zhongguo and eats pufferfish fish": "Spring buds grow on the spring island, and poplar flowers bloom on the spring bank. When pufferfish is in season, Fish and shrimp are more expensive than fish."
Ouyang Xiu's "Six Day Poems" said: "Pufferfish often appear in the spring and evening, swimming in groups, eating catkins and getting fat. People in the south often make soup with Ogi buds, and the clouds are the most beautiful. "Zhang Lei, a student of Su Shi, also recorded in "Mingdao Magazine" that the natives in the Yangtze River area eat puffer fish, "but they cook it with three ingredients: artemisia, bamboo shoots (i.e., reed sprouts), and water spinach", thinking that these three items are similar to puffer fish. Best match.
It can be seen that Su Shi’s association is well-founded and natural. The beauty of poetry also depends on this.
The poet first wrote from his side: In early spring, the earth has revived, and the bamboo forest has been dyed green by new leaves. What is even more striking is that three or two early peach blossoms have bloomed on the peach trees. The bright colors convey the message of spring to people. Then, the poet's gaze shifted from the riverside to the middle of the river. The ducks that had been waiting for the whole winter on the shore could no longer hold back and rushed to play in the water. 3. How to write a composition describing spring
There are many famous works in ancient poems that describe the beautiful scenery of spring. Read them and memorize them.
Late Scene of the Spring River in Huichong
[Song Dynasty] Su Shi
Three or two branches of peach blossoms outside the bamboo are a prophet of the warmth of the spring river.
The reeds and mugwort are all over the ground and the reed buds are short, which is when the pufferfish is about to come.
Hui: huì Chong: chóng Artemisia: haō Dolphin: tún
Notes:
[1] Hui Chong: a famous monk in the Song Dynasty who was good at poetry and painting, especially He is good at painting ducks, geese, geese and other birds as well as rivers and lakes. He is a good friend of Su Shi.
[2] "Evening Scene on the Spring River": It is a painting by Hui Chong. There are two paintings, one is a picture of a duck playing and the other is a picture of flying geese. Su Shi composed two poems respectively. The paintings have been lost, but the poems have been passed down.
〔3〕Zhuwai: Outside the bamboo forest.
[4] Spring River Plumbing Duck Prophet: Spring is coming, the ice and snow melt, and the water temperature rises. The ducks seem to be the first to feel the message of spring, and they can’t wait to play in the water.
[5] Artemisia trichosanthes: A perennial herbaceous plant that grows in depressions. The flowers are light yellow and the stems are four or five feet high. When they are young, they are tender and crispy and can be eaten.
[6] Reed buds: The young buds of reeds can be eaten.
[7] Pufferfish: A type of fish, scientific name is "Fugu". The meat is delicious, but the ovaries and liver are highly toxic. Produced in my country's coastal areas and some inland rivers.
[8] Desire: Almost coming up from the downstream. Desire, will. Go up, go upstream.
Translation:
Two or three peach blossoms are blooming outside the bamboo forest. Ducks are playing in the water. They are the first to notice the warming of the river in early spring.
The river beach is already full of wormwood and asparagus has begun to sprout. These are good condiments for cooking pufferfish, which is about to swim upstream from the sea to the river.
Appreciation:
This is a famous painting poem, which deliberately depicts a scene of early spring.
The poet first wrote from his side: In early spring, the earth has revived. The bamboo forest has been dyed green by new leaves. What is even more eye-catching is that three or two early peach blossoms have bloomed on the peach trees. The bright colors convey the message of spring to people. Then, the poet's sight shifted from the riverside to the middle of the river. The ducks that had been waiting for the whole winter on the shore could no longer hold back and rushed to play in the water.
Then, the poet wrote from the middle of the river to the river bank, observing and describing the scene of early spring in more detail: Due to the moisture of the spring river water, the wormwood on the ground grew new branches, and the reed buds sprouted; this Everything shows the vitality of spring and is endearing. The poet further thinks that this is the time when pufferfish swim upstream from the sea to the river, which leads people to a wider imagination... The whole poem is filled with a strong and fresh breath of life.
Reading tips:
After reciting this poem and reading this passage, do you understand the order in which the poet describes it? By the way, it is described in this order: the green bamboos and peach blossoms on the riverside - the river and the ducks playing in the water - the fresh sprouts of wormwood sprouting all over the riverbank. Furthermore, it reminds me of the season when plump puffer fish is on the market.
This poem describes the scenery in the painting and also expresses the poet's feelings. The first three sentences of the poem describe scenery such as green bamboo, peach blossoms, rivers, swimming ducks, wormwood and reeds. These are all actually painted on the screen, but the poet relied on the artist's sensitivity to imagine from the duck's joyful splashing in the water that it knows the warmth of the water; from the mugwort and reed buds used as ingredients for puffer fish soup, the poet imagined The delicious puffer fish "wanted to top" was amazing. The coldness and warmth of water and the underwater world are difficult to paint with a brush, but the poet vividly described it, describing the vitality of nature in spring, and extending it to a new realm that was not found in the original painting.
If Hui Chong’s paintings can be said to be “poetry within paintings”, then Su Shi’s paintings can be said to be “paintings within poems”. No wonder it has survived to this day as a famous poem that everyone loves.
Just expand it like this! You have to use your brain too! ! ! ! ! ! 4. How to write your thoughts after reading the ancient poem "Evening Scene on the Spring River in Huichong"
"Evening Scene on the Spring River in Huichong" Era: Song Author: Su Shi A few peach blossoms outside the bamboo are a prophet of the warmth of the spring river. The ground is full of artemisia and the reed buds are short, which is when the puffer fish is about to come.
Three or two branches of peach blossoms outside the bamboo, ducks are prophets of the warm water in the spring river." The poem faithfully reproduces the sceneries on the picture, including the bamboos and peach blossoms blooming outside the bamboo forest, the ducks floating on the river and water, and the wormwood everywhere. and newly sprouted reeds. He also wrote the tactile feeling "Spring River Water Warmth" that cannot be expressed on the picture, and the psychological feeling "Duck Prophet"; the spatial order was to write the ground scene first, then the scene on the river, and then the scene on the shore. Finally, it is the scenery of the soul.
This is a vivid picture, with a green bamboo forest, a few pink peach blossoms, a green river, white or brown ducks floating in it, and a spring river. The ducks in the water will naturally feel the warmth of the river and enjoy the warmth of spring. Obviously, this feeling is obtained by the poet through association. It is these associations that make the scenery in the painting full of vitality and interest. The feeling of spring is not the "duck prophet" but the human prophet. Ducks, peaches, bamboos, and spring rivers are all material manifestations of the poet's spring mood.
"The short reed buds on the ground are exactly what the puffer fish wants." "When it comes time". These two sentences are also further associations triggered by the specific scenery in the painting. Since the ground is already covered with mugwort and the reed buds are short and long, the pufferfish can just eat the mugwort and become fat. And the newly born mugwort can be eaten. It’s so beautiful. You see, Mr. Su is really salivating!
The poem on the painting should be in perfect harmony with the original work. At the same time, as a literary work, it should have its own character and be independent from the original painting. Artistic life. Because of this character, Su Shi's poem has become a famous poem that is still recited today.
The peach blossoms blooming outside the bamboo in the spring, the ducks roam freely, and the wormwood is everywhere. The buds and the lustful puffer fish perfectly combine to form a vivid and interesting picture of duck drama on the Spring River. 5. The author and writing background of the poem "Huichong Spring River Evening Scene"
"Evening Scene on the Spring River by Hui Chong" is a poem inscribed by Su Shi for monk Hui Chong's paintings.
Hui Chong: A famous monk in the Northern Song Dynasty was good at poetry and painting. "Evening Scene on the Spring River" is one of his two paintings. , one is a picture of ducks playing, and the other is a picture of flying geese. Su Shi also has two poems on paintings. This one is about ducks playing.
This is a poem on paintings, Hui. Chong's "Spring River Evening Scene" has not been handed down, but from Su Shi's poem, we can get a rough idea: a bamboo forest, two or two peach blossoms, a river, a few ducks, the river bank is full of mugwort, and the reed buds have just broken through the ground , there are still two taels of pufferfish in the sky. You can't see the pufferfish, but Su Shi, who is greedy, is thinking: It's time for the pufferfish to be stewed with mugwort and reed sprouts, which is much fresher than Dongpo meat.
6. I am a child and don’t know how to write the ancient poem "Evening Scene on the Spring River in Huichong"
[Edit this paragraph] Original text of the work "Evening Scene on the Spring River in Huichong" by Su Shi of the Song Dynasty. Three or two branches of peach blossoms outside the bamboo are a prophet of the warmth of the spring river.
The ground is covered with wormwood and reed buds, which is when the puffer fish is about to come. [1] [Edit this paragraph] Annotation Translation Annotation Hui Chong: A famous monk in the Northern Song Dynasty was good at poetry and painting. "Evening Scene on the Spring River" is his painting. There are two paintings, one is a picture of a duck playing and the other is a picture of flying geese.
Su Shi also has two poems about paintings. This one is about duck opera. Wormwood: A perennial herb that grows in depressions. It has light yellow flowers and a stem four or five feet high. It is tender and crispy when it is new and can be eaten.
Reed buds: The young buds of reeds are edible. Pufferfish: A type of fish, scientific name is "Fugu". Its meat is delicious, but its ovaries and liver are highly toxic.
Produced in my country's coastal areas and some inland rivers. Every spring they swim up the river to lay eggs in fresh water.
Up: refers to going up the river. [2] Translation: Two or three peach blossoms were blooming outside the bamboo forest, and ducks were playing in the water. They were the first to notice the warming of the river in early spring.
The river beach is already covered with mugwort and asparagus has begun to sprout. This is the season when puffer fish return from the sea and will swim up the river to lay their eggs. Sentence explanation: Three or two peach blossoms outside the bamboo This is a warm scenery: looking across the sparse green bamboo, a few peach blossoms are swaying.
The contrast between peach and bamboo, red and green, makes the spring mood particularly attractive. Although this is just a simple sentence, it reveals a lot of information.
First of all, it shows the sparseness of the bamboo forest. If it were dense, you would not be able to see the peach blossoms. Secondly, it indicates the season and highlights the word "early".
The spring cold has just passed, and it is not yet the time for the peach blossoms to bloom, but the infinite vitality and potential of spring have already been revealed. Ducks are prophets of spring river water warmth. Ducks are playing in the spring water of a river; they are the first to sense the message that the river water is getting warmer.
Ducks know that water is warm. Painting alone cannot express it, but poetry can express it. In fact, is the duck a prophet of plumbing? All aquatic creatures know warmth and cold.
The poet wrote this to suit the scenery. In fact, he also expressed his joy and praise for the arrival of spring. There is a poem in the Tang Dynasty called "A bird is a prophet looking for a path among flowers", which has the same meaning and meaning as this sentence.
This poem is very philosophical. Nowadays, when we refer to a new situation or news that is known in advance, we often quote this sentence. The ground is covered with wormwood and the reed buds are short. Everything is new in spring.
Along the river, lush wormwood covered the ground, and reeds also sprouted short buds. These seven characters are not a general description of the scenery, but the poet's detailed description of the mood of these two plants through careful observation. Not a single word is idle.
Wang Shizhen of the Qing Dynasty praised this poem in "Yuyang Poetry Talk" and said: "Po's poems... are not only wonderful in charm, but also like Mei Shengyu's 'Spring Island grows buds, and spring banks fly with poplars. There is no general word for "flower". "Mei Yaochen, a poet of the Song Dynasty, described this scene when the puffer fish was about to bloom: "The puffer fish is more expensive than the fish and shrimp."
The poem. The first three sentences describe the scenery in Hui Chong's paintings, while the last sentence is an association of emotions arising from the scene. The author's writing in this way outlines the whole picture more perfectly, giving people the joy that the harsh winter is over and spring has arrived in the world.
The author is not only inside the painting, but also outside the painting, presenting everything that is not in the painting but that is within reason. If all four lines of the poem are outline descriptions of scenery, the form would be a bit rigid.
The processing of the last sentence not only makes the whole poem lively and vivid, but also greatly enriches the artistic conception of the poem and the painting. [1] [Edit this paragraph] Appreciation of Works Hui Chong was a monk and a painter in the Song Dynasty.
This poem was inscribed by Su Shi on Hui Chong's painting "Dawn Scene on the Spring River". Hui Chong's original painting has been lost, and some versions of this poem were titled "Spring River Dawn Scene", which is now impossible to verify.
Painting uses a distinct image to give people a specific visual experience, but it can only express a specific picture and has certain limitations. Although a good poem has no visible images, it can use figurative language to attract readers into a beautiful artistic conception formed through the poet's unique conception, so as to make up for some things that cannot be expressed in pictures.
This poem on painting not only retains the image beauty of the picture, but also plays to the strengths of the poem. The poet used his flavorful, realistic and realistic pen and ink to show the spring scenery described in the original painting so fascinatingly.
While describing based on the picture, Su Shi also came up with new ideas, which made the beautiful images in the painting more poetic and fascinating. [1] Two or three peach blossoms are blooming outside the bamboo forest, and ducks are playing in the water. They are the first to notice the warming of the river in early spring.
The river beach is already full of mugwort and asparagus has begun to sprout. At this time, it is a good time for pufferfish to be sold in the market. A good poem on painting must not only fit the theme of the painting, but not be limited to the content of the painting. It must be able to reproduce the painting scene, and at the same time, it must be able to jump out of the painting, create a new perspective, and leave the painting without losing its independent artistic life.
Su Shi’s poem can be said to have achieved this. The first three lines of the poem chant about the scenery in the picture, and the last line is an association caused by the scenery in the picture.
The whole poem is like a poet expressing his feelings at the scene. The images obtained at the moment are wonderful and natural. The first three sentences represent the painting scene, but in fact the two are not completely equivalent.
In the second sentence, the words "water warmth" (temperature) and "duck prophet" (perception) cannot be drawn directly. Poems can describe picturesque things, but poems that praise the physical properties of things are too picturesque.
This is because painting is a visual art, while poetry is a language art, with absolute freedom of expression. The last sentence further develops association and makes a judgment about the season of the scenery in the painting based on the objective description of the scenery in the first three sentences, thus adding a rich feeling of the beauty of southern scenery, which is something that paintings cannot do.
Regarding the seasonal flavor of pufferfish, Mei Yaochen wrote a poem in "Fan Raozhou sits in Zhongguo and eats pufferfish fish": "Spring buds grow on the spring island, and poplar flowers bloom on the spring bank. When pufferfish is in season, Fish and shrimp are more expensive than fish."
Ouyang Xiu's "Six Day Poems" said: "Pufferfish often appear in the spring and evening, swimming in groups, eating catkins and getting fat. People in the south often make soup with Ogi buds, and the clouds are the most beautiful. "Zhang Lei, a student of Su Shi, also recorded in "Mingdao Magazine" that the natives in the Yangtze River area eat puffer fish, "but they cook it with three ingredients: artemisia, bamboo shoots (i.e., reed sprouts), and water spinach", thinking that these three items are similar to puffer fish. Best match.
It can be seen that Su Shi’s association is well-founded and natural. The beauty of poetry also depends on this.
The poet first wrote from his side: In early spring, the earth has revived, and the bamboo forest has been dyed green by new leaves. What is even more striking is that three or two early peach blossoms have bloomed on the peach trees. The bright colors convey the message of spring to people. Then, the poet's sight shifted from the riverside to the middle of the river. The ducks that had been waiting for the whole winter on the bank could no longer hold back and rushed to play in the water.