(Tang) Dai Shulun
Yuan Xiang keeps flowing,
Why did Qu Zi complain?
Smoke rises in late autumn,
Feng Xiaoxiao forest
2. [Note] (1) San Lv Temple: Quyuan Temple. Qu Yuan used to be a doctor in San Lv. The temple is located in the north of Huyin County (now Miluo County, Hunan Province). (2) Small Shenyang: How deep. (3) Rustle: the sound made by the wind blowing trees.
3. [Translation] Yuanshui and Xiangjiang River rolled forward, and Qu Yuan was beaten by traitors and could not achieve the great cause. At dusk, the autumn wind blows gently, and the maple trees near San Lv Temple rustle.
4. San Lv Temple is a temple dedicated to San Lv, a doctor of Chu in the Spring and Autumn Period. According to the records of the unified Qing Dynasty, the temple is located in the north of Xiangyin County (now Miluo County) in Changsha. This poem was written in memory of Qu Yuan.
5. About Qu Yuan, Sima Qian said: "Qu Ping was poor when he took the right path, exhausted his loyalty and wisdom, and respected the world as a monarch. Believe and see doubt, be loyal and slander, can you have no complaints? " (Biography of Qu Yuan in Historical Records) The poet revolves around the word "resentment".
Express your feelings for Qu Yuan with clear and implicit poems. Yuanxiang is two rivers often lamented in Qu Yuan's poems. "Huai Sha" said: "Yuan Lane is vast, and the streams are flowing. The road is long and Xiu Yuan is awkward. "
"Xiang Jun" also said: "Make Yuan Lane have no waves and make the river flow safely." This poem begins with "Yuanxiang", which is not only an impromptu scene, but also a metaphor: What is the Xiangjiang River in Shui Yuan? Like a thousand-year resentment against Qu Zi. How to describe the poet's bitterness?
It's like deep water in a faraway country. The "endless" in the previous sentence indicates the length of resentment, and the "deep" in the latter sentence indicates the depth of resentment. Both sentences are written by the word "resentment", and the image is clear and profound, intricate and graceful. Li Ying's Notes on the Changes of Poetic Methods
It is believed that: "If you recite the ancients, you can write the gods of the ancients, which is not a problem. The first two sentences of this poem hang in the air and put pen to paper, directly writing that Qu Zi has been loyal and angry all his life, and the wonderful beginning has been called absolutely. " Quite insightful. However, why should Qu Zi complain? Complain about what?
What about the poet's own feelings and attitudes? The poem does not tell the whole story, but depicts a specific image to guide readers to think. Autumn wind rises on the river, maple trees fall, and the scenery next to San Lv Temple remains the same, but
After Qu Zi sank into the river, where did he call his ghost back now? "The autumn wind is curling, and Dongting waves are under the leaves." "There are maple trees on the water in Zhanjiang, which are thousands of miles away and hurt the spring. The soul returns to the south of the Yangtze River! " This is Qu Yuan's Nine Songs and Evocation.
In the famous sentence, the poet looks back on the past, touches the scene and makes use of the topic to turn it into a poem: "The autumn wind starts at dusk and the trees are rustling." The season is late autumn, the time is sunset, the scenery is maple forest, and the word "rustling" is used.
I feel more disgusted and hurt. This kind of writing is called "knot feelings with scenery" or "cut feelings with scenery" The picture is clear and thought-provoking, poetic and meaningful, but not obscure. Deep feelings are contained in the prescribed scenery description, which makes people feel that the scenery is as good as it is now.
Imagine that "resentment" has been pointed out earlier. If we express it directly here, instead of combining clarity and implication, it will be vivid in the air and understandable outside the text. How boring it will be! The conclusion of this poem has always been praised by poetry critics. A brief account of the changes of poetic methods
He also praised: "three or four sentences, but write the scene in front of you and stop commenting." Gree is particularly high. Anyone who sings about the past and writes about the situation must be similar to others, so that he can get inspiration from God, otherwise he will be broad. " Zhong Xing's "The Return of Tang Poetry" said: "This poem is San Lv, so it is unpredictable."
Shi Buhua commented on the poem "On Servants": "Without heart, there is sadness outside, which is the best of the five." They are all convinced that its meaning is beyond the image, implicit and eternal.
6. Poetry is the art of imagery, and it is also the most suggestive and inspiring art ... it is clear but not hidden, and it has become a bottomless shoal; Implicit and unclear, implicit has become a puzzling gobbledygook.
Dai Shulun's San Lv Temple has both advantages. The clear scene meets people, implicitly arouses the reader's imagination and flies away.
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