Spring written by Mr Lin Jinlan is not what people think. The "standard spring" in people's minds is either the spring of "apricot blossom and spring rain in the south of the Yangtze River" or the spring of "the wind is light and the grass is soft" written by Mr. Zhu Ziqing. After reading Mr. Lin's Spring Breeze, everyone will say: Really, who stipulates that the spring breeze must be Liu Qingfeng's cold face? Who said that spring must be like spring flowers, with warm sunshine and itchy people?
Different spring breeze, different spring, different customs.
The structure of the article is exquisite. It is a general view of northern spring to write people's views on northern spring first with restrained brushwork. The author did not directly refute it, but said, "Is the spring breeze in Beijing really scraping the soil?" Turning the pen gently, he wrote down his personal experience and feelings, telling people the benefits of spring breeze in the north. At the end, I don't forget to belittle the spring in the south of the Yangtze River, saying that it is a "dead mouse", and there is no other meaning, just to highlight the unforgettable spring breeze in the north. That deep affection makes people think that the author must be accompanying the spring breeze in the north. After an unusual day, he can understand the spring breeze and know its temperament and character, so he applauds it.
The benefits of writing about the northern spring breeze were secretly compared with the southern spring breeze. The spring breeze in the south of the Yangtze River is "touching the ground, like a willow breeze; Thoughtful of everything, like a drizzle ",the spring breeze in the north" rolled in from the gray grassland and the vast desert outside the Great Wall ","leaped over the mountains, crossed the ridge, inserted into the ravine, filled the mountain pass and roared "; The spring breeze in the south of the Yangtze River is bound to blow cold, but the spring breeze in the north is "flapping on the face like countless needles"; The spring breeze in the south of the Yangtze River should be silent, but the spring breeze in the north can "breathe to help those who breathe". The author grasps the characteristics of the northern spring breeze and writes its uniqueness and convincingness. This is what the spring breeze in the north should look like. If it is not such a spring breeze, "how can we cross the grassland, walk the desert and jump the mountain ridge?" How can you kick the frozen ice thousands of miles away and the frost and snow that can't walk everywhere? "
The words used in this article are very distinctive. Onomatopoeia and reduplication are only used in a few places, but they are brilliant. If there is no wind in the spring breeze in the north, it will lose its personality. The author wrote that the spring breeze "whined and screamed" and slapped the window, that is, "Sarah Sarah", suddenly gave birth to a sense of pride. The most wonderful thing is this sentence, "The spring breeze breathlessly helps people who are panting and scatters feces evenly, which makes people very happy." The "wheezing" spring breeze turned into an amiable and respectable hero. Write that the river ice crack is a "bang" and the diseased branches are a "ga", all of which seem to be in your ear. The shaking sound of wooden shelves in stone houses is compared to the sound of waking up from hibernation and loosening joints. The sound of "Gralla and Gralla" makes people seem to rush out of the house to escape.
Is this the spring breeze that invites you to approach it?