The characteristics of mobilizing multiple senses and perceiving scenery from multiple angles. If we can describe the scenery from many angles and sides, our article will be much more vivid. Yu Guangzhong, a famous writer, said: The prose we expect should be vivid, colorful, interesting and bright.
Mobilize a variety of senses to appreciate, so that the scenery presents a rich and magnificent shape, sound, color, taste and state; Pay attention to the harmony of dynamic and static, and the complementarity between real scene (the scene in front of us) and virtual scene (the scene imagined by association); Pay attention to all kinds of techniques, take into account the front and side, and describe the scenery from multiple angles.
Example 1:
Blowing your face without cold willows, yes, like a mother's hand stroking you. The wind brought the smell of new ploughing, mixed with the smell of grass, and the fragrance of various flowers, all brewing in the slightly humid air.
Birds nest in flowers and leaves. They are very happy. Calling friends proudly showed off her crisp voice and sang melodious songs, which set each other off in harmony with the light wind and flowing water. The piccolo of the shepherd boy on the cow's back rang all day at this time. -Zhu Ziqing's Spring
Appreciate:
The author writes about the softness of the spring breeze, and first touches you with his mother's hand with the poems of Zhi Nan and Shang Feng in the Southern Song Dynasty. Write the warmth and softness of spring breeze from the perspective of touch. The wind brought the smell of new soil, mixed with the smell of grass and various flowers, all brewing in the slightly humid air.
The author describes the characteristics of smell propagation in spring breeze from the perspective of smell. Put the song of spring birds and the flute of shepherd boy into people's eardrums, and write the sound transmission characteristics of spring breeze from the perspective of hearing. The author describes the spring breeze in many ways, which makes this unspeakable thing vivid.
Example 2:
He looked out through the screen window. The stars in the sky are dense and busy. They are silent, but it seems that they only feel the excitement in the sky. A comb like the moon describes a young girl, but people are not shy, and the light and outline are fresh and carved, which can gradually set off the night scene. Insects on the grass in the small garden talk in trivial ways at night. I don't know where the frog, Qi Xin and Qi Xin worked together to blow the bugle, like the sound of a boiling fire.
Several fireflies swam around, not like flying, but like floating in thick air. In the dark place where the moonlight goes out, a little firefly flashes, like a little green eye on a summer night. —Fortress Besieged by Qian Zhongshu
Appreciate:
When the author writes about the tranquility of summer night, he first writes about the busy stars and waning moon from the visual angle, such as a comb of the moon describing a young girl, but people are no longer shy, and the light and outline are fresh and unforgettable. Then, from the perspective of hearing, I wrote the sound of insects and frogs singing together. In order to set off the silence, I wrote the tranquility of summer nights.
Extended data:
The role of scenery description:
First, explain the time and place of the story and reveal the background of the work.
Second, the atmosphere is rendered, and the emotions of the characters are set off. The description of scenery can sometimes render a specific atmosphere, contrast the interest and mood of the characters and show the psychology of the characters.
Third, show your character. The environment around a character, including indoor and outdoor decorations, can show a person's identity, temperament, personality and so on. Therefore, writers pay attention to using scenery to express characters.
Fourth, promote the development of the plot. Sometimes scenery description can push the plot forward.
Fifth, borrow scenery to express emotion and blend scenes. When the author describes the scenery in his works, he often expresses his feelings, so as to achieve the purpose of expressing emotion and blending scenes.