Keywords: 350 words in the fourth grade of Luzhu Primary School
Words: 350 words composition
This article applies to: the fourth grade of primary school.
Composition source:
This composition is about 350 words in the fourth grade of primary school. The title is dew. Welcome to contribute. Early in the morning, small dewdrops are concentrated on fresh leaves, crystal clear, like small pearls scattered on emerald leaves. With a slight shake of the leaves, these naughty little dolls jumped into the soil and disappeared. Soon, Grandfather Sun climbed the misty Dongshan Mountain, making the earth full of vitality and the sky "burning". I can't stand those naughty, lively and lovely dewdrops on the green leaves in the sun! "The red and bright sun turned the small dew into steam. Then I thought: Xiao Lu, fly! Teacher's comment: The sentences in the article are very beautiful, the words are accurate, the reading is very smooth, and the readers have a very comfortable feeling. This is a successful masterpiece. " Those naughty, lively and lovely dewdrops on the green leaves raised their round heads and smiled at the sun, as if to say, "It's so hot! I can't stand it! " "These statements are wonderful and can stimulate the interest of young readers. But I don't know why, "it's so hot!
"and" I can't stand it! " "How to separate the two paragraphs? Is it a small mistake when uploading the article? Generally speaking, the context of the full text is coherent. As a fourth-grade child, the article has been written quite well. Keep trying. (Xue Le China famous teacher: Teacher Lin Yaoji) 2009-9-8 22:5 1:00