[Introduction]
06? Yu xuanai
Seven methods of bitter summer (new rhyme)
Sunset Cangshan is far away, and the gurgling stream is clear.
The building is green and red, and the wild temple is full of makeup.
Whispering grass insects and delicate leaves, dancing house swallows, laughing gazebo.
Only how short the bitter night is, sitting in front of the door to collect the evening breeze.
Zhang Chengyu commented:
Is a small "board".
23? Jiang Ziya
Seven laws/self-suffering, bitter summer rain, continuous bosom
Endure the biting rain in summer and months of domestic violence.
The river bank burst in the middle of the night, and the mountain city became a river several times and a half.
Before the disaster, a strong man put on armor. After the disaster, Julian Waghann fought bravely.
Don't forget that you actively keep your promise, love the people and bind the flood demon.
Comments on this issue of Flower Detective Zhong Tianci:
The whole poem is relatively smooth, depicting the suffering of summer through the hot fire dragon, birds and animals, mosquitoes and other details, expecting cool rain. Personal understanding of "grooming" and "rainstorm" can be reconsidered. Animals stick out their tongues to dissipate heat when they are hot, and are prone to disasters when there are many showers in summer, instead of being intoxicated with novelty. Personal understanding, please forgive me.
[advanced]
1? Mumaoshan
Seven laws. A cold summer
The purple palace in the south pivot of Beidou is in the hot sun.
Outside the vast vegetation, a few thunders.
If there is no boiling bitterness in three summers, how can there be an autumn harvest?
When the moon is cool, the boat is far away and the rain is faint.
07? High point and scattered people
Seven laws. Bitter summer (new rhyme)
He gave full play to Xi's arrogance and let his father increase his fat for no reason.
Ji Ziyang's shirt urged the fire and played tears and mourned the tide of the earth.
Scattered people watch the stars and the moon in strange places, while the village above Tian Han scolds the wind and rain.
This is the cicada singing the sun, and the fallen leaves are defeated, said Qiu Sheng.
Comment on this little day? ：
1. The first sentence is clear, and the noise is really repetitive.
The sun is high and the trees are high, and dinner is late at night. The physical environment from day to night is too fast.
3. The abrupt neckline has little to do with the first two couplets, or the first two couplets are paved too much.
4. Many words are inaccurate. It can be seen that the author's level is far more than this, and the trace of "Chong" in this work is very heavy. Keep moving!
1 1? candle light
Seven laws, bitter summer (new rhyme)
Every summer is hot and bitter, and the shade under the eaves is as high as the moon.
Every time I get tired of eating, I have no taste, and my mouth is always thirsty.
The breeze is weak and difficult to get up, and the sweat is deep.
Lend me an inch banana fan, it's raining on a hot day.
14? Xia Chaohui
Seven laws. A cold summer
The scorching sun is bitter at noon and bitter in summer.
The sea is dry and the mountains are scorched, and the clouds split the banana into fingertips.
There are thousands of cicadas in front of the street.
Frogs in the pond are singing on the lotus, and the moonlight is cool on their backs.
16? Nanfengchuang
Seven laws? high summer
In the hot sun, huts live in kilns.
The tender willows are green and the flowers and plants are scorched.
Although I don't have a good dream, I am always excited. Even if there is a shade, I will fan it.
Envy pavilion lake living by water, cold spring ready to cross the East Bridge.
17? Gui xiangzuo
Seven laws. A cold summer
Snakes drown in water, and valleys are as deep as fire.
Breathing is clouds driving tigers, eyes are electricity.
Thousands of flowers are fragrant, and thousands of Tin Shing Yip plants are sharp.
Free and easy morning breeze and cool brocade shoes make the grass in front of the mountain wet.
19? every day
Seven laws? Bitter summer songs
The scorching wind and the scorching sun are fading, and you are sleepy and tired.
Scutellaria baicalensis Georgi, a bitter tea, is refreshing, and fasting and light drinking compete with immortals.
The quiet training of three students really cultivates happiness, and seclusion in five seasons can last forever.
Always be accompanied by melons and fruits when taking a bath, and be sure to be happy.
2 1? Chisel ice and fish.
Seven laws? No more heat.
Looking back on the east of Yiling in those days, every summer, I was very worried.
The waves greet the smoke, and the dry soil and floating dust force the moon palace.
The sun scorched the fields and ponds, and the rain nourished wormwood and mosquitoes.
Now look at the changes and the wind and the load rolling.
Comments on the second prize of this issue:
This poem is very well written, about the heat in summer! Through the description of scenery, animals and characters, the heat is set off and the writing is in place. I like couplets best. In such a hot season, drink tea with friends to cool off the heat and have fun in the bitter! Very good! I like it! Studied it!
[On the court]
02? There is sunny snow in Xishan
Seven laws? high summer
Burning Levin like fire, dry lips and tongue, burning lung and liver.
Tranquilizing mind, clearing stomach and nourishing spirit, benefiting qi, astragalus root, bitter tea.
The spring breeze began to calm down, and most of the bamboo trails in the mountain spring disappeared.
Sit and watch the dark clouds, and you will know the new autumn dusk.
03? Chengyu Zhang
Seven laws? high summer
The cold situation is still on the side, the bluebird is red and the cherry is white.
The idle moon is frivolous and swallows prey, and the lonely clouds lie high and the willows sleep low.
Lotus flowers are tasteless and boring, and cicadas even sound harmonious.
I was ashamed when I fell asleep, and it was another year when I woke up.
05? Spring lantern childe
Seven Laws and Bitter Summer (New Rhyme)
Cicada thieves are noisy in front of the court, and the burning waves are burning.
Chuanyuan, full of purple gas, is a furnace of metallurgical heaven and earth Dan.
High-rise buildings are heavily screened, and boards are blown up with sand to disperse smoke.
Ann holds the water of the Galaxy thousands of feet, the sun shines high, and sleeps on the wind.
08? a surname
Seven Temperaments and the Feeling of Bitter Summer (New Rhyme)
Frogs drum cicadas in the summer, but the evening breeze is powerless.
The clear light reflects the horizon and the moon, and the green shadow floats.
The heat is hard to get rid of, but the pursuit of coolness and tranquility is fascinating.
Life is the most troublesome, and it is true when you experience it.
09? No one knows.
Bitter summer (seven laws)
The sun is not full of sweat, and the trees are not refreshing, which is called morning.
Cicadas sing a hundred times, but leaves wither a thousand times.
Lazy couch with bare chest and ice top, looking for shade and shaking fans, the rain is thin.
I thought about the heat for a long time, but I saw the street supervisor.
12? Wells Pan
Cool in Lv Qi and cool in summer (Yun Xin)
The grass is flat and the smoke is long, and the dark fire hits Wanmuguan Mountain.
Cicada is long and dry, and it hisses. Liu Jiao's fall can't create wind.
In the twilight, I feel bitter and melancholy, I feel sad and hate the sun.
Just sigh that hibiscus is covered with jade, and dragonfly water.
13? China Piaoxiang
Seven laws? Bitter summer songs
The south window room is scorching in the sun and unbearable in midsummer.
Birds chirping cicadas are confused and heartbroken, and wine and food are fragrant and the stomach does not melt.
Outside, the domestic cat is tired and the electric fan on the pillow is crazy.
In front of melons and fruits, I don't care to look at them, but also look at the tea and the wind.
Huiruo review
At first glance, this article was written by a woman. The whole article depicts the bitterness and joy of midsummer in a playful way. The antithesis of the two couplets is also neat and clever, especially the couplet at the end is clever and awesome!
Julia commented:
The cat on the steps is the same as me. This sentence is amazing. The whole capital is idle and lazy. I also like to sum up sentences.
22? Diandian cocoa
Seven laws. Bitter summer (new rhyme)
It is also worth the cicada singing in midsummer, and the stove is cooked day and night.
Like a fire, when the sun gets cold and the sweat disappears.
How to condense hot air into flying snow is also called dry land near Bi Tao.
Who will promise me to have a good life?
[Exhibition of works]
0 1/ day knows
high summer
It rains in the east of the city, and I live in the north. I hate being cool there.
The hot sun burns the pool like fire, and the hot air blows like shrimp.
Books will rot, but tea will burn your teeth over time.
It's no use closing the window with cicadas. You have to cut watermelons with a knife.
Note: emphasize the text, lack of work, and end with a limerick!
02/ exchange
Seven laws: bitter summer
The fire clouds are yellow, and the night is crazy.
Advance eight winds and steam a heat, and then heal the five internal organs and thousands of injuries.
The cold dew in the pavilion is covered with a quilt, which makes it difficult and cold to walk in the room.
? How clear the clear spring is, there is no new tears in Xiaoxiang.
03/ Quiet and far-reaching
Seven laws and bitter summer
The north ridge has been broken and mud has been planted in the south area.
When is it lucky to cover the red sun, where is the leisure away from the blue sky?
It bears a lot of sweat from ancient times to the present, and also thinks of thousands of scenery between heaven and earth.
Who welcomes the hardship of farmland in June, a group of egrets go west to east.
04/ Zhong Hailing
Seven laws and bitter summer
Birds with withered flowers and leaves are quiet, and the rivers and lakes are boiling with smoke.
Poets have long admired the scenery of Taoyuan, while the lower class lamented the leek fields.
Travel all over Qian Shan looking for crossbows, and the horizon looking for bowstrings.
Hou Yi doesn't have to praise his magic, it's cold all over the building through the rain.