Fan Zhongyan's The Fisherman's Pride Qiu Si
The scenery in Qiu Lai is different, and Hengyang Goose is unknown. Around, the sound of the horn sounded, thousands of miles away, and the long smoke closed.
A glass of turbid wine is Wan Li's home, but Ran Yan hasn't come home yet. Qiang tube covered with frost, people do not sleep. The general was white-haired and in tears.
Su Shi's "Jiangchengzi Mizhou Hunting"
I've been talking about juvenile madness, pulling yellow on the left, holding pale on the right, wearing a gold hat and mink fur, riding a thousand troops to roll flat hills. In order to repay the people of the whole city for following my generous hunting proposal, I will shoot this tiger myself like Sun Quan.
The wine is full and the box is still open. Why not put some cream on your temples? When will the emperor send someone down, like Emperor Han sent Feng Tang to the cloud to pardon Shang Wei? I will make my strength as full as the full moon, full as the full moon, heading northwest and shooting at the team in West Xia Jun.
Xin Qiji's Broken Array
Drunk in the dream of watching the sword under the oil lamp, dreaming back to the old days of the military camp, a horn sounded. Give the roast beef to the men and the band will play northern songs. This is a military parade on the battlefield in autumn.
Horses run like Ma Delu, bows and arrows fly like thunder. It is a good idea for the emperor to complete the great cause of recovering the lost land of the country and gain a good reputation from generation to generation. It's in vain.
Qiu Jin's Manjiang Hong Xiao Zhu Jinghua
Living in Beijing is already the Mid-Autumn Festival. Yellow flowers are full of hedges, and autumn colors are like wiping. Song Sifang finally broke Chu and tasted like Zhejiang for eight years. They desperately want me to be a lady, but how dismissive I am!
In this life, although I can't be a man, join them. But my heart is stronger than a man's. When I think of ordinary days, my heart is often hot for others. Those laity, narrow-minded, how can you understand me? When a hero has no way out, it is inevitable to encounter setbacks. Where can I find a bosom friend in this world of mortals? Tears wet the corners of my eyes.
First,? Interpreting "Braveheart" from Images
Teacher: Song Ci can be divided into bold and graceful. Which category do you think these four words belong to?
Show: (definition of bold and graceful)
"Biography of Poetry" said: "The style of ci is slightly different, graceful and unconstrained. Elegant people want their words to be meaningful, while uninhibited people want their weather to be magnificent. However, there are also people. For example, Qin Shaoyou's works are mostly graceful, and Su Zizhan's works are mostly bold. "
Chorus "uninhibited".
Teacher: You may have said it by intuition. Let's understand the meaning of two words.
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Moral: hide in it, hide it without revealing it.
Magnificent: broad and generous.
Teacher: According to your understanding, which sentences are bold and unconstrained? (hint: but in terms of image and artistic conception. )
Health: The first song "Voices from All Sides" and "All Sides" is about the loud noise of the frontier fortress battlefield, which indicates that the war is starting, and he is full of ambition.
Teacher: Let's not look at the hierarchy first, but think about why we use "around" instead of "around".
Health: "four sides" have a wider scope and more space.
Teacher: You can see this boldness in space and war scenes.
Health: The first song "A glass of turbid wine belongs to Wan Li's family, but Ran Yan doesn't know" he wants to make contributions and has ambition.
Teacher: "Unhappy Ran Yan", with a wide brushwork, expresses its feelings in allusion.
Health: Qiu Lai, surrounded by sound, with thousands of miles of smoke and sunset, is magnificent and unrestrained.
Teacher: You read the last film. What kind of mood will you take to read it?
Health: unruly.
Teacher: Bold tone can be read by speech speed, intonation and word stress. Read it.
Read raw.
Teacher: What else? Do you think the first one is "bold"?
Health: "The tube is full of frost, people don't sleep, and the general has white hair and tears." I feel bored and uninhibited, especially the words "white hair" and "tears".
Teacher: OK, do you think this word is not too bold? Because there are old and negative words.
Health: I think Xin Qiji's "Luma Bow ..." expresses his desire and ambition to serve the country and achieve the great cause of the king.
Teacher: In the Southern Song Dynasty, the imperial court stole security. The poet combined his personal destiny with the national destiny and sang a generous voice of recovering lost land and serving the court.
Health: The second song, "Draw yellow from the left, hold blue from the right, ride a thousand horses and roll the mountain", this sentence writes heroic spirit.
Health: I also think that "Dream Back and Blow the Horn, Fight with Blood" in the third song writes the heroic voice and heroism of war.
Health: I think the fourth song "Heart is stronger than man" shows the heroic spirit of women.
Teacher: This sentence is not vivid, but direct lyric.
Health: I think Su Shi's ci is different from others. He has no negative image, it's all positive.
Teacher: This student is very insightful. Su Shi's ci swept away the vulgar images of relegated poems.
Teacher: Image is a sentence that reflects the author's feelings in poetry. Finding out the image, exploring the soul of ci and observing the truth of the author's mind are the basis of distinguishing the style of ci. Su Shi Xin Qiji was also called "Su Xin" in history. Let's appreciate their differences.
Students read separately.
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White hair, tears, wind and frost, rain and snow, sunset, partridge, parting rules, falling flowers, solitary lamps and so on.
On the contrary,
Yellow dog, goshawk, brocade hat, mink, thousand riding, Sirius, etc.
Teacher: Su Dongpo's words are not bold, and we probably have no dispute. Then let's read it together in a bold tone.
Read all the students together
Teacher: Xin Qiji, a military commander, led troops to fight the battlefield before returning to the south, but was left at home after returning to the south, and his ambition to recover the Central Plains for life was defeated. He can only care about his sword and sadness when he is drunk. This word was written under such circumstances. Talk to each other about what image you see in his ambition.
There are many students.
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Lights, swords, company battalions, troops, strings, battlefields, bows and arrows.
Teacher: We saw the images in it, many of which were things on the battlefield, expressing the determination to kill the enemy in an epic way, but one image broke all hopes and expressed infinite frustration.
Health: white hair.
Teacher: Yes. Just now, some students said that "white hair" means negative modality. In fact, "white hair" is a common image in ancient poetry. Please have a look.
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In the past, Qingyun was brilliant and white hair was wasted. -Zhang Jiuling
Have you noticed that the lovely hair in the bright mirror in the high room, although it is silky black in the morning, has turned into snow at night. -Li Bai
Twisting with melancholy, scratching my head and thinking, the more I scratch my white hair, I can hardly insert a hairpin. -Du Fu
White hair increases, lamenting the withering of spring flowers, looking up at the sky and admiring the flying birds. Cen Can
White hair was combed down one by one, and Zhu Yan left the mirror. -Bai Juyi
White hair hanging down three thousands of feet, laughing at all things in the world. -Xin Qiji
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Read raw.
Teacher: What emotions did you read respectively?
Health: Sadness.
Health: lamenting the passage of time.
Health: Time is wasted.
……
Teacher: The "white hair" in ancient poetry really represents a kind of "worry".
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Worried about hard-won ambitions
Worried about not meeting talents.
be concerned about one's country and one's people
Things are people's troubles
Nostalgia and homesickness
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Teacher: Although Xin Qiji's ci has galloped three thousand miles in the battlefield, what he really wrote is only this sentence. Other sentences are written in drunken dreams. This method is called-
Hallows: the combination of reality and reality.
Teacher: The so-called poetic expression of ambition is nothing more than expressing feelings through people, events and scenes. That is to say, by expressing feelings through scenery, we can integrate feelings into scenery and express our will through things. Next, let's compare Qiu Jin's poems and see the image of the last song. In fact, strictly speaking, this word should be narrative and lyrical. However, even if the narrative, there are images, look for it.
Health: yellow flowers under the hedge
Health: Autumn seems to be wiping.
Health: blue, tears
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Shortly after Eight-Nation Alliance's invasion, Qiu Jin decided to devote herself to saving the country, while her husband was not interested in state affairs. 1903 Mid-Autumn Festival, she ran away from home and lived in Taishun Inn outside Fucheng, Beijing. Although Wu Zhiying intervened later, Qiu Jin made up his mind to take part in the revolution and decided to study in Japan. This word was written by her in this Mid-Autumn Festival.
Teacher: A woman, in this context, we have 10,000 reasons to imagine that she should be "miserable", but do we think these landscapes are gloomy?
Health: We see beautiful scenery.
Teacher: Especially the yellow flowers under the hedge represent-
Life: Living in seclusion.
Teacher: Who can recite the explanation that "autumn is like wiping away"?
Raw back.
Teacher: The bright and beautiful scenery sets off the hero's personality and gets rid of the modality of his little daughter. But the boldness of men and women is different. We compare the sentences in Su Shi's and Qiu Jin's ci.
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When will the emperor send someone down, like Emperor Han sent Feng Tang to the cloud to pardon Shang Wei? I will make my strength as full as the full moon, full as the full moon, heading northwest and shooting at the team in West Xia Jun.
Where can I find a bosom friend in this world of mortals? Tears wet the corners of my eyes.
Teacher: Is there any difference in image?
Health: "Carving a bow, full moon, Sirius", it can be seen that Su Shi's all-rounder is masculine.
Health: Qiu Jin wrote a lot of tears in Blue Wet, which may be infinite disappointment.
Teacher: Yes, Qiu Jin still occasionally reveals a feminine beauty between the lines. Of course, we distinguish between heroic words and graceful words mainly according to the characteristics of the subject image. Let's interpret the image characteristics of bold and unconstrained words together.
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Full of vigor and vitality, cheerful and unrestrained.
Passionate and magnificent,
Optimistic and enterprising, heroic and heroic
Masculine beauty, grandeur and heaviness
Read all the students.
Second,? Emotionally, think about "rhetoric"
Teacher: Making contributions has always been the main theme of the symphony of bold and unconstrained words. But the reality is cruel, life is three-dimensional, and time flies when people are old, which often makes poets sigh unconsciously. Please have a look.
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People don't sleep, and the general has white hair and tears.
It's in vain.
Where can I find a bosom friend in this world of mortals? Tears wet the corners of my eyes.
Teacher: These plaints expressed in bold words, such as "tears for my husband", "temples like frost", "pitifully white" and "blue and wet" ... do these sad poems weaken the boldness of bold words?
Keep quiet.
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Song Renzong Dynasty and Xixia were powerful enemies who invaded the Central Plains from the northwest. In A.D. 1040, Fan Zhongyan was appointed as Shaanxi's deputy envoy and knowledge of Yanzhou (Yan 'an, Shaanxi), and stationed in the border town, which played a great defensive role. However, the court is corrupt and can only adhere to the principle of stabilizing the overall situation. This word was written at this time.
Teacher: Life is the source of creation. Let's look at the author's experience. What kind of mood should Fan Zhongyan feel when he is creating?
Health: depressed, after all, "the general has white hair", and he said "poor".
Teacher: "poor", self-mutilation, lamenting how difficult times are, in fact, "heroes have suffered a lot since ancient times",
They are really depressed, so some people have questioned it and think it is not an "uninhibited word". For example:
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Wei Tai's Dong Xuanlu (Volume 11) said: "Gong (Zhong You) kept the frontier fortress day and wrote several songs in Fisherman's Passion, all of which began with" Blockage "and described the hardships of the frontier fortress town. Ouyang Gong tried to call it "the words of the poor". What do you think?
Simply translate it
Health: Although the first one is magnificent, the next one is still very melancholy.
Teacher: What does Ouyang Xiu mean when he says he is a poor man? It is probably to write about the grievances of hard work and the feeling of being at the end of the road, complaining about the suffering of the town. But this word is still not the same as complaining. Don't you think that you should speak one song at a time and don't repeat others. )
Health: I think The Weather is also Magnificent and the voices from all directions rise from the corner highlight the poet's boldness.
Health: I think "a glass of turbid wine was brought home to Wan Li, but Ran Yan didn't stop drinking." The words "Ran Yan didn't give up drinking" indicate that he wants to return the stone, make a career like a general in the Han Dynasty, and he is bold and unrestrained.
Teacher: Poets often use allusions to express their ambition to serve the country with the great achievements of the ancients. So I don't feel depressed Trying to figure out the allusions of the other three words, what emotions are expressed?
Health: "When will Fengtang be delivered in the clouds?" , "Eight hundred miles under my command?" And "Lu Feifei made of horses?" We should also express the poet's enthusiasm.
Health: This word was written by Su Shi when he was relegated, without a trace of complaint.
Health: I think the last sentence is "the heart is stronger than the man!" " "More powerful and unconstrained style than the first three capital letters. She is a daughter, but she is so chivalrous and courageous. Known as "Woman Xia", she lives up to her reputation.
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Teacher: We use one of the words to describe the feelings of these words respectively.
Health: I want to use the word "pride" in the epigraph for the first song.
Health: madness
Health: strong
Health: fierce
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Teacher: Boldness is the essence of rhetoric. How do you read them when you read them?
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The tone of my reading this sentence is _ _ _ _. Look at him _ _ _ _ _.
Health: I read Su Shi's sentence "Look northwest, shoot Cang Lang" with contempt, and you put your heart in achieving something in the war on paper.
Teacher: You read in a bold tone.
Teacher: Did he read bold and unconstrained? Let's play how to read boldly.
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Wei Liangfu's "Tune" said: "The long cavity should be round and flowing, not too long; The short cavity should be simple, not too short. It is a locked place, and the speed and delay are different. Be steady and serious, just like seeing a big guest. "
Teacher: Let's remember three tips. Long cavity-round flow, not stagnation; Short cavity-simple path to find the best, don't delay; Too cavity-steady and serious, not vain.
Teacher: You try.
Original reading
Teacher: How does he study?
Health: "Pat" is killing people, so it should be serious.
Read raw.
Teacher: Su Shi's writing is really chilling, which makes people feel "stormy" and is a spiritual expression suppressed by the imperial court. We recited Su Shi's representative works of bold and unconstrained ci. Try to recite it again.
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"Niannujiao Chibi Nostalgia": "The river of no return is a romantic figure through the ages. Old camp west, people say it's the war of the Three Kingdoms, Battle of Red Cliffs. The steep rock wall, like thunder waves lapping against the river bank, waves like rolling up thousands of snow. The majestic rivers and mountains are picturesque, and many heroes emerge at once. Looking back on Zhou Yu's spring breeze era, young and beautiful Joe just married him, and he was full of heroic spirit. A white figure with a feather fan came face to face, and while talking and laughing, the enemy warships burned to ashes. I am wandering in the battlefield today. I feel a feeling heart and give birth to white hair prematurely. Life is like a dream, and statues are still on the moon. "
Saint chibe
Teacher: Which sentence of this word do you think best reflects the author's feelings?
Health: I think it's the sentence "Rock pierces the air, stormy waves beat the shore and roll up thousands of piles of snow". He described the ambition of the characters.
Health: I think "feather fan black silk scarf, laughing and turning to ashes" is the most emotional. I use allusions to compare my ambition.
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Teacher: We have a saying about the emotional fusion of scenery called "Everything-"
Health: All scenery words are love words.
Health: All landscape words are emotional thoughts.
Teacher: "premature hair growth" and "slight frosting on the temples" are both _ _ _ _
Health: I feel that life is short.
Teacher: So the poet's emotions include positive, generous and Ren Xia, as well as.
Health: sigh, regret and sadness.
Teacher: Can you see the bold side and the elegant side? The teacher reminded.
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According to creative psychology, the author's personality has a great influence on style. Comrade Tian said, "When you write lyrics, you can see your temperament: an uninhibited person will try to be graceful and restrained, after all, heroism has not been removed;" Those who are graceful and restrained are not embarrassed to force them to speak boldly. "
Teacher: Seeing the bold side is actually very helpless, but these words have obvious similarities:
Not write _ _ _ _ _ _, but write _ _ _ _ _. (filled with antonyms)
Health: I don't feel sad, but generous.
Health: I am not writing about leisure, but my ambition to serve the country.
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Teacher: The difference between bold and graceful depends on textual research: the temperament of a poet. In fact, Fan Zhongyan wrote this poem long before Su Shi. Why did Su Shi become the pioneer of bold and unconstrained ci? Let's explore the poet's temperament.
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After writing "Hunting in Jiangchengzi Mizhou", Su Shi wrote a letter to his friend "A Book with Fairy": It's quite small recently, although it doesn't smell like Liuqilang, it's still a family, hehe! I hunted in the suburbs a few days ago and gained a lot. Made a shovel, so that the strong men of the Eastern Zhou Dynasty could reach their palms, stamp their feet, sing, play flute and drum as a festival, which was quite spectacular.
The teacher translated.
Teacher: What kind of Su Shi have you read?
Health: High self-confidence.
Health: Naturally, the family is happy.
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Teacher: What makes him a man, children-
Health: temperament.
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Gong and Wang (Wang Anshi)' s attitude towards Ci: A true hero is responsible for leveling the world. Poetry is the last skill.
Teacher: Fan Zhongyan only left five bold characters, but Su Shi left more than 300. Kids, what makes a man-
Health: The purpose of creation is to do everything as a career.
Teacher: What makes him a man is-
Health: mind.
Teacher: The other three capitals have desolate poems, but Su Shi doesn't. In fact, when Su Shi wrote this song, he was facing great misfortune.
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Song Shenzong Xining eight years, the second year was demoted to Mizhou. At this time, the locust and drought in Mizhou are connected, and the aliens in the northwest border constantly harass the border. Although he is over 30 years old, he is still "ambitious" and tries his best to alleviate the suffering of the people. This word was used by him and his colleagues when they came back from hunting in Changshan.
Teacher: We have studied many ancient poems, which are often found in the case of being demoted.
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Anger at the lack of talent
The sadness of the protagonist's ending
An ambitious sigh
An untimely anger
Life is short.
Worried about traveling in another country
Nostalgia and nostalgia
Passively avoiding the sorrow of the world
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Teacher: These words we see-
Health: I am not sad when I have no talent.
Health: Heroes never give up.
Health: It is still welcome to sigh that ambition is hard to pay.
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Teacher: This is the word "Zhuang", which is the emotional code of bold and unconstrained words.
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A desolate field
Bold and rude
Tragedy in the wild
Bold and enthusiastic
Read all the students.
Teacher: We can appreciate ancient poems in the following ways.
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Check the knowledge background
Remember the appreciation clause.
Imagery artistic conception and skills
Emotional sustenance, careful scrutiny
There are implied meanings in allusions.
Don't worry about your country when you are talented.
Boldness and elegance with Jing Shu.
The ups and downs of officialdom sing Li Sao.
Third, spiritually, sublimate "rhetoric"
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Teacher: At the beginning of winter vacation, an epidemic broke out in COVID-19. Angels in white was ordered to come to Wuhan at the critical moment, and the whole country joined forces with Qi Xin to launch a life-and-death struggle against the disease. In fact, this is the inheritance of Su Shi's bold and unrestrained style, daring to take risks, difficult to fight hard and full of enthusiasm. Today, you can go back to the classroom. How many people are behind? Let's read the most bold and lyrical sentences in bold words, despise disasters and pay tribute to heroes.
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A glass of turbid wine is Wan Li's home, but Ran Yan hasn't come home yet.
Why not put some cream on your temples? When will the emperor send someone down, like Emperor Han sent Feng Tang to the cloud to pardon Shang Wei?
It is a good idea for the emperor to complete the great cause of recovering the lost land of the country and gain a good reputation from generation to generation.
In this life, although I can't be a man, join them. But my heart is stronger than a man's. When I think of ordinary days, my heart is often hot for others.
Teacher: When we read "Zhuang Ci", we will have a clear spirit of "dispelling evil fog, drying up Kun mirror and getting clear Wan Li". Have been washed away by passion, let's read the strongest voice of the times!
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Even if life is full of holes, learn from Fan Zhongyan.
Even if you miss the best years, you should learn from Su Shi.
Even if it happens in vain, we should learn from Xin Qiji.
Even if your daughter is still alive, you should learn from Xia Xia.
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Use the sentences and conjunctions in the text. )
Teacher: Even if life is full of holes for you, learn from Fan Zhongyan. )。
Health: Hengyang Goose didn't pay attention, didn't pay attention.
Teacher: let's read the strongest voice of the times, even if we miss the best years.
Also learn from Su Shi (? )。
Health: What's wrong with the slight frost on the temples? Become a pillar of the country.
Teacher: Let's read the strongest voice of the times, even for nothing.
I also want to learn from Xin Qiji (? )。
Health: I look at the sword when I am drunk, and I dream of going back to the battlefield.
Teacher: Let's read the strongest voice of the times. Even if our daughter is alive,
Also learn to learn Jianhu female (? )。
Health: It is because people are often hot that they calm down.
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Be a strong man of the times and hone your strength in the desert sand.
To be a strong man of the times, you are unstoppable in setbacks and difficulties.
Be a strong man of the times and dream in the center of humiliation and burden.
Be the strongest voice of the times and break the blockade that men are superior to women.
Facing the reverse driving,
Steady state of mind
Suffer injustice
Withstand the wind and rain
Win the future
Read together
Sentences with allusions, class dismissed.