Some peaches in the garden bloom in spring.
In April, the warm wind blows gently and English is colorful.
2. Evening
Nobody came out at night, so I went to see the moon alone.
Or fish swimming, the moon reflected in the water.
3. Stars
Lying at night watching the moon and playing beside the children.
Look at the starry night sky, the stars will never be counted.
4. Look at the green of spring from a distance, and look at the strong of spring from a close distance.
Birds report the joy of spring, and pipa plays lightly.
5. Children
We are the rising sun, and our hearts will be higher than the sky tomorrow.
We are a trickle, and tomorrow we will become a big river.
Poetry self-editing skills
First, try various themes, techniques and styles to broaden the road of poetry as much as possible.
Second, treat personal works differently, some of which are written for fun and can be arbitrary; Some of them are written by heart, and they need to be scrutinized and pondered repeatedly, from paragraph structure to individual words, and even after being put down for a few months, they are turned out to continue to be revised. This is the most effective way to improve.
Third, it is not recommended to find someone to help correct the poem. Writing poetry, in the final analysis, still needs to form a personal style, and others can't fake the process inside, so they can only work hard by themselves.
Fourth, when you find that your poem is not satisfactory, the first thing you need to modify is the overall structure, then the syntax, and finally the individual words.
Fifth, in the later stage, after learning some theories of intensive reading, we should practice in a targeted way.