20 13 can Jiangsu college entrance examination Chinese composition be conceived from the perspective of "small actions will bring great influence"

20 13 Jiangsu college entrance examination composition topic read the following materials and write as required:

Several friends talked about such an adventure: I came to a remote cave by chance, and because I didn't know the environment in the cave, I lit some candles and leaned against the stone wall. Shortly after entering the cave, many colorful butterflies were found quietly attached to the cave wall to inhabit. They held their breath and walked lightly for fear of disturbing these beautiful elves. But when I went back a few days later, I found that these big butterflies were no longer in place, but retreated to the depths of the cave. If you realize, the environment there may be more suitable. A small candle can have such a big impact.

Angle selection; Self-determination; The topic is self-drawn; In addition to poetry, the style is optional; Not less than 800 words.

This is the first time that material composition has appeared in Jiangsu college entrance examination papers for many years. I think we should relax the requirements of the exam, otherwise it will harm a large number of children.

It is both "angle selection"; This material can be demonstrated at least from the following angles-

1, human activities affect the living environment of organisms. This is an easy-to-think angle and a big topic. Students may feel that there is nothing to write about, and that caring for the environment and life are empty words.

2. The last sentence of the material, "A small candle can have such a big impact", is easy to guide candidates to think about the relationship between "small and big". Small things will have a big impact, and details will determine success or failure. We shouldn't ignore the little things around us and so on.

3. Lighting candles is for your own convenience, but it does harm to others. Although it is unintentional, it reminds us that we should be cautious in everything and consider problems comprehensively, especially not only from our own point of view, because this is a universally connected world.

The case analysis "Small actions will have great influence" almost directly comes from the last sentence of the material (this sentence is the orientation and destination of the proposer), so it will definitely not deviate from the topic, and it can almost be said that it is the most reasonable way to examine the topic, because the viewpoint itself has been abstracted from the story and has profound thoughts. Secondly, compared with "details determine success or failure" (of course, the latter is also possible), your opinion is still the wisest choice after reading it for so long.