When I was a child, I lived with my grandfather who loved Tang poetry and listened to him recite all kinds of Tang poetry all day. Over time, under the influence of my grandfather, I became poetic and often took the initiative to read various Tang poems.
Once, my grandfather taught me a Song of Eternal Sorrow, and one of them made me appreciate the most: "If you don't work hard, you will be sad." This sentence is concise and clear, which hit the nail on the head and expressed that we should cherish the good times now and don't waste them, otherwise it will be too late to study when we are old, leaving only a lot of sadness. In this poem, "Sunflowers in the green garden, the morning dew waits for the sunrise." This puzzles me, because I don't understand why the poet wrote this sentence. I think this sentence is redundant. Later, I went to ask my well-informed grandfather, and he answered my question with a smile. It turns out that the poet's description of this scene is to better contrast the following artistic conception and pave the way for the next * * *. In this way, I learned another trick from ancient poetry, which also played a decisive role in my usual practice and added a lot to my composition. Therefore, I love ancient poetry more and more, because reading ancient poetry not only benefited me a lot, but also made me more proficient in the use of writing skills in practice. For example, I know from ancient poems that the full text should be written at the end to make the finishing point. I know that some places should be highly concise, and some places should be written in detail. I also know that when writing, you must have clear paragraphs and clear organization, so that people can read comfortably and get high marks.
In short, a thousand words can be summed up in one sentence, I love you! I have benefited a lot from you. I not only gained knowledge, but also purified my soul!
2. In the early morning, I was awakened by a burst of firecrackers and looked out. My eyes fell on a group of children who were setting off firecrackers. "Scratching" firecrackers sounded, and a high flame broke out, which was as high as human life.
I walked to the door and smelled a fragrance. Ah! It turns out that in the East, people drink Tu Su wine to pray for peace!
The rising sun illuminates thousands of families. How warm it is!
At this time, people have torn off the old Spring Festival couplets on the doorframe and replaced them with new ones, which are particularly bright in the sun. This aroused me for a while.
The feelings of reforming people's hearts and benefiting the people, I
I believe that replacing the old system and implementing the New Deal will definitely make people's lives go up a storey still higher in the near future!
3. Changing the poem "Yuanri" into a 200-minute composition "Yuanri" is a seven-character quatrain created by Wang Anshi, a politician in the Northern Song Dynasty. This poem describes the moving scene of excitement, joy and Vientiane renewal on New Year's Day, expresses the author's thoughts and feelings about political innovation, and is full of cheerful and positive spirit.
In the sound of firecrackers, the old year passed; The warm spring breeze ushered in the New Year, and people happily drank the newly brewed Tu Su wine. The rising sun shines on thousands of families, who are busy taking off the old peach charms and replacing them with new ones.
This poem describes the scene of bidding farewell to the old and welcoming the new in the Spring Festival. A piece of firecrackers sent away the old year, drinking mellow Tu Su wine and feeling the breath of spring. The rising sun shines on thousands of families, and every family's peaches are replaced with new ones.
This is an impromptu work about welcoming the New Year in ancient times. Based on folk customs, it sensitively absorbs the typical materials of ordinary people during the Spring Festival and captures the representative details of life: setting off firecrackers, drinking Tu Su wine and changing peach symbols, which fully shows the joyful atmosphere of the New Year Festival and is full of rich life breath.
"Firecrackers are one year old, and the spring breeze warms Tu Su." Setting off fireworks on New Year's Day is an ancient custom that has continued to this day. In ancient customs, every year on the first day of the first month, the whole family drank Tu Su wine, and then wrapped the dregs in red cloth and hung them on the doorframe to "exorcise evil spirits" and avoid the plague.
The third sentence, "Every family lives", inherits the previous poems, which means that every family is bathed in the light of the early spring sunrise. The last sentence describes the forwarding discussion. Hanging peach symbols is also the custom of the ancients. "Always replace new peaches with old symbols" is a sentence pattern of compression and ellipsis. The new peach omits the word "character" and the old character omits the word "peach", which are used alternately because of the limitation of words per sentence.
Poetry is a human voice. Many critics have noticed that the artistic conception and reality expressed in this poem also have their own metaphor and symbolic significance. Wang Anshi's poems are full of cheerful and positive fighting spirit, because he was the prime minister at that time and promoted the new law. Wang Anshi was a famous reformer in the Northern Song Dynasty. During his tenure, just as people replaced the old with the new, he abolished the old politics and implemented the New Deal. Wang Anshi is full of confidence in the New Deal, so it is particularly cheerful in his poems. This poem praises the birth of new things, which is as full of vitality as "the spring breeze picks up"; "Tomorrow" shines on "thousands of families". This is not an ordinary sun, but the beginning of a new life. Political reform has brought a bright future to the people. At the end of the sentence, "new peaches are often exchanged for old peaches" shows the poet's satisfaction and joy at the victory of political reform and the improvement of people's lives. It contains profound philosophy, pointing out that new things always replace declining things.
Although this poem uses line drawing technique, it tries its best to exaggerate the festive atmosphere, and at the same time, it expresses its thoughts through the custom of updating on January 1 ST, which is implicit but not revealing.
4. Help "January 1st" rewrite the 300-word narrative. The Spring Festival of the New Year is coming, and Wang Anshi sees that the Spring Festival of the New Year is so beautiful.
Wang Anshi looked for the place where firecrackers came from. He saw a group of naughty children lighting firecrackers with a happy face. Wang Anshi thought, what a lovely child! How much the Spring Festival is loved by children!
Wang Anshi has also seen busy adults who leave early and return late. At this time, he is also welcoming the Spring Festival with the children and drinking Tu Su wine. Wang Anshi stared at such happy children. He thought, I am a child, and I am happy to welcome the Spring Festival. During the Spring Festival, I can eat fish and meat at home, get some lucky money, put on beautiful new clothes and see my dear friends setting off firecrackers happily in the morning. At the same time, make snowmen and have snowball fights with them. Mom and dad also watched them have such a good time. Is to see in the eye, happy in the heart! In the afternoon, you can also play with your friends or go to your neighbor's house. You are extremely happy! However, although our children are one year older and the adults are one year older, they are still happy.
It took Wang Anshi a long time to recover. By this time, the sun had risen high, and he saw that the adults had posted new Spring Festival couplets. Every household is more beautiful under the sunshine.
The Spring Festival on January 1st is a traditional festival of our Chinese nation. At this time, every family will get together for a reunion dinner. Migrant workers are busy packing their bags, ready to go home, holding a year's salary, and their hearts are warm; We children who have achieved good results are in high spirits, waiting for their parents' praise ... Streets and alleys, community supermarkets, everywhere is a scene of jubilation and excitement.
Today is New Year's Eve. In the early morning, the golden sun shines all over the earth. My mother and I went shopping happily, and the street seemed to change overnight. The streets are full of lanterns and colorful decorations, which are very lively. Every household posted "Daofu", couplets and red lanterns. People dressed in festive costumes, with smiles on their faces, went to various markets, some shopping, some watching, and there was a happy and detailed scene.
At 8 pm, the Spring Festival Gala begins. Our family sat in front of the TV to watch the Spring Festival Gala. The program of the party is wonderful: beautiful and moving songs, humorous sketches and funny cross talk. All kinds of programs dazzle me.
"Dangdang Dangdang ..." As the New Year bell rings, fireworks will ring together. My father and I took out the fireworks we had already prepared and lit the fireworks tube. We only heard a loud noise. A fireworks bomb rose into the air and exploded in an instant. The exploding fireworks look like a beautiful lotus with petals flying in the air. At this time, fireworks are ejected from the fireworks tube, flashing in the sky like countless bright and dazzling meteors ... There are other fireworks in the sky, some of them. Loud firecrackers, brilliant fireworks, flying in the sky, all kinds of colors, embellishing the sky into a flower, the night sky suddenly became dazzling. At this time, the scene was surrounded by the melody of laughter, firecrackers, shouts and music. It's really lively.
On the first day, it's time to visit the park. After washing in the morning, I have jiaozi for breakfast, and jiaozi is cooked with white wine, eggs and brown sugar, because my hometown has the custom of "no killing" and "no eating meat" on the morning of New Year's Day. After breakfast, we set off happily. As soon as I arrived at the gate of the park, I was attracted by the rich snacks. It was really dazzling at that time. Into the park, I took my little cousin boating, riding a small plane, riding a pony and riding a monkey sedan chair. My father took many photos of us.
This year's Spring Festival is really meaningful to me. I'm really happy. This reminds me of Wang Anshi's "January Day": firecrackers are one year old, and the spring breeze enters Tu Su from send warm.
Thousands of families always trade new peaches for old ones.
The new year has come again. Everything will change in the new year. I am one year older. I hope that good luck will always accompany me this year, and I will work harder and achieve excellent results this year. When I grow up, I will make great contributions to the construction of my hometown.
2 Spring Festival notes
The Spring Festival in 2008 is coming, and the streets are crowded with people. People who have worked hard for a year have gone out to enjoy the leisure of the festival, and the faces of men, women and children are filled with cheerful smiles.
The colors in the street are much brighter than usual. I saw colorful flags flying and various commercial slogans and banners flying in the wind. There are red lanterns hanging at the entrance of the shopping mall, which makes people feel warm at first sight. In the blue sky, colorful balloons are dazzling in the sun. The breeze blew and the balloon danced with the wind, as if nodding to passers-by.
The cheerful and frolicking scenes in the shopping mall penetrate into the eyes of passers-by through bright glass doors and windows, which makes people involuntarily flow into it with colorful people. The Spring Festival is a festival for adults, especially for children. Children's toys, books and stationery counters are very lively. The children came one after another, taking away their beloved toys and leaving behind laughter.
During the Spring Festival, the family is also different from usual. Put the word "Fu" on the door, set off firecrackers at dinner, set off fireworks at night and watch the Spring Festival party. There are more people eating than usual. Mom and dad, uncles and aunts, grandparents all get together. The food on the dining table is much richer than before, including chicken, duck, fish and delicacies. After dinner, everyone chats, chats, drinks tea and chats.
The Spring Festival is too noisy. I really want to celebrate every day.
6. About the rewriting of the poem "January Day": The Spring Festival of the New Year is coming, and Wang Anshi sees that the Spring Festival of the New Year is so beautiful.
Wang Anshi looked for the place where firecrackers came from. He saw a group of naughty children lighting firecrackers with a happy face. Wang Anshi thought, what a lovely child! How much the Spring Festival is loved by children! Wang Anshi has also seen busy adults who leave early and return late. At this time, he is also welcoming the Spring Festival with the children and drinking Tu Su wine. Looking at such happy children, Wang Anshi remembered himself as a child and welcomed the joy of the Spring Festival. During the Spring Festival, he could eat fish and meat at home, get some lucky money, put on beautiful new clothes, and see his dear friends setting off firecrackers happily in the morning.
At the same time, make snowmen and have snowball fights with them. Mom and dad also watched them have such a good time.
Is to see in the eye, happy in the heart! In the afternoon, you can also play with your friends or go to your neighbor's house. You are extremely happy! However, although our children are one year older and the adults are one year older, they are still happy. It took Wang Anshi a long time to recover.
By this time, the sun had risen high, and he saw that the adults had posted new Spring Festival couplets. Every household is more beautiful under the sunshine.
Extended writing: Early in the Song Dynasty, it was just dawn. Outside the window, a sound of firecrackers woke me up from my sleep. Oh, today is the long-awaited first day of the first month.
I quickly got up and went outside. Several partners are gathering in the yard to set off firecrackers. They are my fifth-grade classmates in a nearby private school. Setting off firecrackers is everyone's favorite activity.
After a while, we held "colorful sticks" and shook out colorful patterns; After a while, we took out the "colorful ball tube", and the colorful bullets from the sky turned into beautiful colorful flowers, which won everyone's cheers; After a while, we lit several "thunder cannons" and exploded violently, scaring the sparrows parked on several old camphor trees in the courtyard and flying far away with our laughter ... Just as we were having fun, our parents cried behind us. It's time for dinner.
Push the door open, wow! It's really lively. Relatives of the whole family get together. Everyone raised their glasses and blessed each other with their own Tu Su wine. Everyone's face is full of smiles and immersed in a happy atmosphere.
At this time, my father took out a brand-new peach symbol that had already been prepared and started to replace the old peach symbol, which attracted everyone's cheers. What a delicate symbol of the new peach, it shines in the morning sun. It indicates that people's lives will be richer and the country will be richer! The scene in front of us is just as described by Premier Wang Anshi: firecrackers are one year old, and the spring breeze enters Tu Su from send warm.
Every family exchanges new peaches for old ones every day. Your approval is the motivation for my answer, please adopt it.
7. Yuan Tian rewrote Wang Anshi's ancient poem 100 Character Day Author: Wang Anshi firecrackers at the age of one, and the spring breeze entered Tu Su in send warm.
The rising sun sheds light on doors of each household, New peachwood charm is put up to replace the old. In the sound of firecrackers, the old year passed; A piece of firecrackers sent away the old year, drinking mellow Tu Su wine and feeling the breath of spring.
The rising sun shines on thousands of families, and every family's peaches are replaced with new ones. The whole family drank Tu Su wine, and then wrapped the dregs in red cloth and hung them on the doorframe to "exorcise evil spirits" and avoid the plague.
The warm spring breeze ushered in the New Year, and people happily drank the newly brewed Tu Su wine. The rising sun shines on thousands of families, who are busy taking off the old peach charms and replacing them with new ones.
Every household is bathed in the morning sun in early spring.
8. Yuanri is an ancient poem, Yuanri.
Author: Wang Anshi
Besides firecrackers, the spring breeze also brings warmth to Tu Su. Every day, new peaches are exchanged for old ones.
Tianjiayuan Day
Author: Meng Haoran
Last night, I called back to the North, and now I'm going to the East. I am a strong official, but I am still worried about agriculture because I have no money. Sang Tian plowed my father, and the hoe followed the shepherd boy. Home accounts for the climate, and * * * says it is a bumper harvest year.
The first day of the lunar month
Author: Li Shimin
Gao Xuan in spring is as warm as spring, and the Accord in the morning is charming. The courtyard is full of colorful lights, and the shade is bright. You are ready to face the four poles, and your clothes hang down to control the eight shortages. Frost halberd column Dan, silk and bamboo gallery full of smoke. You are healthy and prosperous. Follow the article, you can learn from the past and learn from the kings of past dynasties. The grass shows the scenery of spring, while Mei Yan makes up for the past.
The first day of the lunar month
Author: Si Kongtu
Jiazi's life is only self-pity. Diligence is eternal, and noon is next year.
The first day of the lunar month
Author: Cheng
Dai Hang held Zhu Yao's palm first, and his temple was surprised in the mirror. Fortunately, Tu Su should not taste it first.
The second rhyme is Lu Yuanri.
Author: Wang Shouren
The sunset in the city and the snow outside the city will make ten miles of different sunny days. We also know what creation means, but people's hearts are not flat. Baifu Tower holds a reflection, while Maozisong bamboo flows cold. Cloth is so sleepy that there are so many elements as dawn.
The first day of the lunar month
Author: Wen
The glory of the gods broke the atmosphere and a new sun entered Yan Wen. The mood is changeable and the jade is broken, and the sky should eventually be muddy. Phoenix rocks, and Longteng guards the door. Spring rain is warm, and autumn sleep is respectful.
Jeffery Ji reported twice in January.
Author: Fang gan
The morning chicken reported twice, but Diao Dou was silent and missed it. The warm sun reflects the righteousness of the mountains, and the east wind dances into the trees to keep the cold. If you want to know human feelings, you must come to the palace to watch the New Year. Only when you think of Tu Su's dating teeth, you will only laugh and be found.
9. 1 Month 500 Rewriting Narrative Composition The Spring Festival is here. Wang Anshi saw how beautiful the Spring Festival was.
Wang Anshi looked for the place where firecrackers came from. He saw a group of naughty children lighting firecrackers with a happy face. Wang Anshi thought, what a lovely child! How much the Spring Festival is loved by children!
Wang Anshi has also seen busy adults who leave early and return late. At this time, he is also welcoming the Spring Festival with the children and drinking Tu Su wine. Wang Anshi stared at such happy children. He thought, I am a child, and I am happy to welcome the Spring Festival. During the Spring Festival, I can eat fish and meat at home, get some lucky money, put on beautiful new clothes and see my dear friends setting off firecrackers happily in the morning. At the same time, make snowmen and have snowball fights with them. Mom and dad also watched them have such a good time. Is to see in the eye, happy in the heart! In the afternoon, you can also play with your friends or go to your neighbor's house. You are extremely happy! However, although our children are one year older and the adults are one year older, they are still happy.
It took Wang Anshi a long time to recover. By this time, the sun had risen high, and he saw that the adults had posted new Spring Festival couplets. Every household is more beautiful under the sunshine.