How many points can you get if you don't choose a topic to rewrite the composition for the senior high school entrance examination as required?

Zero-point composition link-One of the dialysis of zero-point composition He Qihu 23833 1 Anhui Wuwei Dajiang Middle School is undoubtedly a negative textbook for villains. It is meaningful for newcomers to learn from it. Because most of these articles are "unhealthy", and because of the consideration of respecting the author and reducing disputes, books and periodicals are rarely published. It's just that the website is active or rooted or posting to each other, which is very hype. In 2005, there will be 8 million candidates nationwide, and it is absolutely possible that there will be several "zero-mark compositions". He Zuonian Wei Minglun wrote an essay on the topic of the college entrance examination, which was rated as failing by the special-grade teachers, and the candidates got zero. This is natural and expected! In this way, the material information of "zero composition" on the website is credible. Even if it is not credible, it was invented by someone who is good at it, then this kind of "composition" and "zero score" are possible in the past, present and future. To put it bluntly, I just said that my follow-up is not a "rumor." Let's scan the small tribe of zero-point composition first. Wen Yi: The Choice of Heart (the topic of the national volume in 2000-The Choice of Heart) is said to have been written by a classmate of Xi 'an Hu Jia Temple. The author changed the word "he" to "I" in the material, thus making the story more true. I don't want to save the frozen man, but I'm worried that if I end the article like this, I will definitely fail. Finally, I "brewed the feelings of the working people" and saved the man who was about to freeze. Text 2: Melancholy thief (2003 national volume topic-feelings and cognition of things) I am a thief with a little conscience. After entering the child's room, "help the child pull the quilt corner", and then, "walk away gently, just like I came gently; I took a lot of things with a wave of my sleeve. " The original text has a tendency of stream of consciousness. Have a certain literary talent, many quotations, parody. Wen San: Naoko suspects his neighbor (same as above). The son warned that his father's inaction led to theft. Then the author compares Zhang to "dad" in combination with reality. Mom was on a business trip that day. Later, he was caught by "captors" and accused of prostitution. And if you want to get rid of the charges, you must try to prove that you are a virgin, or pay 5000 yuan ... Later, the "institution came out to sponsor" and "catch the fast" and sent the mother to the shelter on the grounds that there was no temporary residence permit. The author intends to satirize the judicial darkness. "Dad" is a wealthy businessman, and his classmates' fathers are all section chiefs and directors. These dads have a bad reputation outside: they are either corrupt or greedy. Finally, the "son" and the two students "unanimously decided": his father is a good man, and the bad guys are all other people's fathers. We just want to be wise to doubt our neighbors. The full text is completely beside the point. The meaning of the sentence is incoherent, and many words fail to convey the meaning. Article 4: Stories in the video room (in 2004, Fujian Volume required candidates to write a composition from any one of five characters and five literary images as a topic, which is still the "three-self" principle). The people in the material-Confucius and others are watching and enjoying striptease, and suddenly "system broadcast": the video chat room is still against the wind and discipline, so the video function of the chat room is specially selected for seven days. Confucius, Song Jiang, Su Shi, Cao Cao, Lu Xun, etc. , all cursed "depend". Wu Wen: "I don't zoom in. Who knows? One day after my sixth birthday, I walked into my chicken farm and the chicken suddenly jumped on me. My mother hurriedly threw away the dish bowl and held me in her arms. " The hen cocked her ass slightly, and in that asshole covered with chicken excrement, a big red egg came down from Ran Ran, just like a red sun, rolling down the dust, so I resolutely stopped eating eggs and set foot on my feet. But "my mother" said, "Red skins can resolutely separate grain from grain", "If people in the city think like you, my mother's chicken farm will flow to the east". So I said, "My reverence for my mother will overflow. "I took the college entrance examination today. My mother got me five poached eggs in the morning. " I "magnified the pain of nausea when I was 6 years old" and "magnified my mother with the tips of composition, and I was very happy". The full text is too far from the point. Article 6: "Unexpected, reasonable" (the first volume of the national volume in 2005 was entitled "Unexpected, reasonable") This article criticized thirteen professions such as police. The second paragraph is like this: "It is really unexpected that doctors can't treat diseases, but it is also reasonable to think that doctors should accept red envelopes, consider which drugs have high profits, distinguish whether patients have money or not, and flirt with MM, so doctors can't treat diseases. "The seventh article: An (the title of the composition in Beijing Volume in 2005 is" Say' An' ") This article is scattered-after Tianan, it is the land security, and after the land security, it is people's turn to be safe; Obey the leader in the unit, obey in the school …… "God" falls on "put a lid on your mind, put a lid on your mouth". Article 8: "Wang Guowei, who gets out of the hall and into the kitchen, can rest" (Hubei volume in 2005 requires candidates to write a short article about Wang Guowei's "life in the universe must have its inside and outside"). The girl's argument is that "flexibility is necessary in order to succeed in society". The article wrote: "And my husband", "Even if sudden short-lived or disaster comes", "As long as I have a BMW Mercedes-Benz, a beautiful car and a villa, I will be satisfied"; And all this depends on our efforts to dress up and care for the skin "and" practice etiquette, and then elegant and affectionate. " The author asks: Can all these be learned from school books? Motivation and Causes of Zero-score Composition —— Analysis of Zero-score Composition Part II: The author of He 23833 1 zero-score composition in Wujiang Middle School, Wuwei, Anhui Province has certain talents, for example, the author of three compositions and eight compositions. Some of them cherish the college entrance examination and value scores. Only under the guidance of "innovation", "literary talent" and "profundity", modernism and critical realism were transplanted improperly, and the result went astray. Other authors may attach too much importance to the college entrance examination, not too much importance to scores, have a frank personality and love literature. They dare to be the first people to eat crabs. They want to become famous in one fell swoop. They want to follow the path of Han Han and Jing M., another kind of writers who get zero marks in their compositions regard the national examination, composition and scores as trivial matters, which are hippies and even hooligans. Of course, they don't rule out the motive of their sudden fame. For example, the author of Si Wen. Although we shouldn't deny his personality with an article, it is necessary to give him a zero. Let them know that some things can't be done; Let it get a lifelong lesson and warn others! As mentioned above, the reason why the composition is zero is either because of failure in the exam, unhealthy thinking or foul language; Have a plenty of three press two; What's more, they ignore the requirements of exams, thoughts and languages and act spontaneously. Here, let's ignore the loss of test questions and language pollution. There are obviously three kinds of unhealthy thoughts: one-sided recognition of social darkness (such as Wen VI), total denial of recognized values (such as Wen VIII), exaggeration of decadent emotions and even pornography (such as Wen IV). The above situation has both subjective and objective factors. Let's take a subjective look first. High school students are still in a period of dramatic changes in their physical and mental development. On the one hand, their cognition tends to be mature, on the other hand, they are prone to make mistakes such as generalizing, seemingly seeing the essence but not the core of the essence. If we add the cultural influence of the genetic extreme character "Han Wei style", it is easy to unilaterally identify the social darkness. Due to the enhancement of critical consciousness, more rebellious complexes appeared in their thoughts. In this highly innovative era, they have more anti-traditional courage. It is the sacred word in their hearts to bounce back the pipa, pull out the weeping willow and draw a gourd with the wind. So the idea of being a duck neck naturally came out. As an adult, I can understand why they are so absorbed in reading Young Werther! Falling in love with spring and sprouting love is the inevitable law of physical and mental development, and it is also the internal driving force to render decadent emotions and even pornography for literary time. According to this analysis, we should have more sympathy and understanding for the unhealthy thoughts of candidates, and pay more attention to humanity instead of punching a warning. Let's look at it objectively. Needless to say, our society has its own dark side. Life is the source of innovation. As far as Liu Wen is concerned, you can't say that his accusation is groundless! Yes, we should see the mainstream and create typical characters in typical environments. However, whether it is a documentary novel or a special report, it is often a group of corruption cases! Moreover, some comments are dagger shots! I also want to shape this! I'm not above life! This is an open and multicultural society. Books and periodicals screens, especially the Internet, have brought many negative effects to teenagers due to complex social reasons such as inadequate management. Si Wen is a novel, but isn't it a record of life? Look at the naked women on the covers of formal and informal books and periodicals in the bookstore, and then look at the title of the book-big breasts and fat buttocks, and shout when you feel happy ... Look at this collection of essays, Monthly Essays, many articles are much more sharp and vulgar than Liu Wen. I read an article in a literary journal with a quasi-Article 8: During the Qingming Festival, people burn some paper-wrapped beauties and condoms, and their filial piety can be known from the sun and the moon. Some articles are sometimes extremely obscene for the sake of vividness and individuality in Chinese. Textbooks of senior high school and junior high school have catalogued many critical realism works, which have had a far-reaching impact on students. Students are prone to negative transfer, which leads to the emergence of exercises such as Liu Wen. Is it reasonable for us to completely ignore the negative influence of society on children who have just entered adulthood and judge candidates' articles with an overly politicized eye and the standard of talking to saints? Warning of zero-mark composition-Analysis of zero-mark composition Part III: Anhui Wuwei Dajiang Middle School He 23833 1 The composition of college entrance examination is strictly controlled in terms of examination questions, ideas and language. The reason why it is zero is because the exam questions are lost, or because the thoughts are unhealthy, or because the language is filthy; Some are based on the third grade, and even more, they ignore the requirements of exams, thoughts and languages and act spontaneously! Let's look at Wen Yi first. Its outstanding performance is unhealthy thinking and filthy language. I don't want to save him. If I find a rescue team, I will inform him to save him. However, if you end the article like this, you are bound to fail. In that case, one day you will have a decent job and go to an upscale nightclub. So, "I brewed the feelings of the working people" and began to save "him". Finally, the article said, "Through this activity, I deeply realized that only by learning Marxism-Leninism Mao Zedong Thought well and arming myself with Theory of Three Represents can I become the successor of the new era". Ideologically speaking, saving people is a joke, making fun of Marxism-Leninism and Theory of Three Represents Theory! Maybe the candidates are just dissatisfied with the red tape, but doesn't this reflect the blasphemy against justice and conscience and the ridicule of politics? Tell the truth. A candidate with a certain ability to distinguish should know what to improve! It should be noted that the green-tailed monkey does whatever it wants, regardless of time and place, and howls whenever it wants! Let's look at language again. Teacher's Eyes, Cold and Terrible, Bandits of the City Police, What grandson wrote this about me, and I have to listen to my grandson to point out the writer ... This is what a civilized and discerning college entrance examination student should say! They're from bitches who curse the streets! Let's look at Wen Er. Its outstanding performance is failure in the exam and unhealthy thinking. The topic is obvious, emotional intimacy and cognition of things; The author wrote about a thief with some gentlemanly demeanor! How lyrical it is to write about thieves! The night gave me black eyes, and I used them to find what I wanted. "I've never looked through everything ... that's a sign of no plan. If you want to do something good, you must sharpen your tools first "; I left quietly, just like I came gently and waved my sleeves. I took away a lot of things. What a clever thief! What an enviable career! I want to ask the author: Are you advertising the thief school? Let's look at Wu Wen. Its outstanding performance is the loss of test questions. It seems that "frustration" has been deducted-the chicken came at me, taking into account the "enlarged pain"-disgusting, unwilling to eat eggs, but really fell on maternal love. In this way, it is difficult to get involved in the topic anyway. The common features of Liu Wen, Wen Qi and Wen Ba are filthy language and unhealthy thoughts. Let's talk about Article 6: The doctor wants to flirt with mm, the teacher wants to be more beautiful than any female student, the China men's soccer team wants to pick up girls MM, the director wants to choose beautiful actors, the screenwriter wants to have sex to attract the opposite sex, the official wants to find beautiful women, and I want to rent a house to have sex with men and women ... Look at this tone, like an old man. We don't deny that society has a feudal side, but it is by no means the mainstream. We should see the macro, not just the trees but the forest. Look at Article 7: "Especially when I know about condoms ... if I don't use condoms ... I will only have an abortion ... which will kill me", "Being pregnant with mm, safety first" ... I arbitrarily infer from the ideological content that society and even families are not free to speak everywhere. Finally, I sarcastically said, "Put a condom on your mind and a condom on your mouth." Freedom of speech is relative and should not be "liberalized" at first; Social units do have places where speech is not free, so you need to pick up a pen to enlighten people with feudal autocratic ideas in detail, and you need to pay attention to the time and place of speech. By the way, the article is scattered. Finally, let's look at article 8: "Zhang Zhiliu", "Everything is wet with anger" and "poetry appreciation hobby" are all rich people who play with "a bottle of exquisite night urinal" ... As for the ideological content, it has already been mentioned above. It should be said that this statement is neutral. Although not active, digging well will not be negative and decadent. However, this article talks about the way to catch a rich husband, which is a bit shameless. See how brave the author is: "My mother taught me how to make duck neck in Wuhan, and urged me to taste it again and again. The external color is also high, which makes others think that it is some kind of shit." Three and four, not only lose points in the exam, but also the language is filthy and the mind is unhealthy. Look at Wen San. The topic clearly requires writing about the relationship between emotion and cognition. As for him, he first alluded to Zhang by discussing the inaction of Naoko's father; Then he pointed to the darkness of justice through the "prostitution" of Naoko's mother; Finally, Chen expressed his feelings-the father is a good man, and the fathers who do bad things are all others. By combing the context of the original text, we can draw a conclusion that has nothing to do with the topic. If the last section has something to do with the topic, it is also a-how can we divide the good from the bad only by family? Speaking of language filth, it is enough for me to quote a few words. "Because they accused my mother of prostitution, if you want to get rid of this accusation, unless: 1, she is a virgin Malik Dandan; 2, she is a military wife, with troops involved; 3. Pay a fine of 5,000 yuan, or deduct a fine of 1 1,000 yuan from every frank customer "... Si Wen is the most ridiculous. Obviously, he asked to choose one of the characters or literary images as the topic, and as a result, he just got together ten people and got seriously lost in the exam. Even if ten people get together, he will invent saints and literary giants with relish to compete for women's love and go to striptease. There is an artistic image of the "Beat Generation" in the history of Russian and American literature. At least, I am worried about this candidate! Speaking of language filth, it is really unsightly to read. Lu Xun said "continue to take off"; Hawking said: "This girl is still strong enough." "Dew point! Dew point Cool "; One minute Xue Baochai is "shit" (this is another version of the national curse "Mom X") and the other is "Thank you Song gg for carrying me on my back". When Xue Baochai declared, "Does everyone miss me? When everyone thinks of playing 2 ",Confucius plays 4" 2 ",Hawking plays 7 and Lu Xun plays 8; When everyone watched striptease, it was unfortunate that the video was picked, and Confucius, Su Shi, Lu Xun and others shouted "shit" in unison ... At this time, I suddenly remembered a sentence from Uncle Kang in Medicine-is this a human word? I can't help repeating grandma Xia's words over and over again-what's the matter? Now let's sum up this part. First: unhealthy thinking is the most unacceptable. Outstanding performance in two aspects: first, a leaf covers the eyes, sees some dark sides, and regards society as darkness, leading to inappropriate cynicism and gnashing of teeth; The second is to promote decadent and obscene emotional appeal. Second: language pollution is also unacceptable. Criticize the dark side, dialectical, convince people with reason, and abuse is by no means a battle. The opposite sex and emotion are not forbidden areas, but the language should be civilized and the mind should be healthy. Third: failure in the exam. This is a pity. Some candidates' comprehensive quality of composition is quite good, but they got a zero just because they went astray in the exam. From this perspective, it is necessary to think and train when reviewing questions at ordinary times. The requirements of thought, language and examination of questions are three red lines, any of which will be brought to justice or even "death penalty". Some suggestions and appeals-the fourth dialysis of zero-mark composition. He, Anhui Wuwei Dajiang Middle School, 23833 1 Give advice to candidates first. Strengthen the training of test questions. The wrong direction is like pointing a gun at your heart. To establish the concept of dialectical view of problems, we must see the mainstream. Parents may scold you or even hit you more than once, but they should not be regarded as enemies. You know, although they are in the wrong way, they love you at heart. In addition, accepted values and morals are inviolable. Also, the theme of love is not prohibited, but it must not be pornographic. As for language, we should criticize bad phenomena, be calm, put facts and reason, don't overdo it and don't abuse it. The downstream of "export pollution" is obscene, but also because of the taboo of literati. Several complaints: 1, treated differently. As far as the above eight articles are concerned, one, two and four are resolutely zero warning. Wen Yi regards politics as a child's play. Wen Er's writing is too flashy, and stealing poetry is unhealthy. Si Wen plays up pornography. If other articles appear next year, we should give points as appropriate. The first part of the article satirizes the reality by discussing Naoko's father's inaction. Although it is far from the point, it is also an appropriate analogy and has certain practical significance. See logic and thinking in divergent thinking. Wu Wen is far from the point, but he has a certain foundation, does not think negatively, and has a correct writing attitude. Except that the language is not elegant enough, it is pointed out that Chen's social ills are a bit excessive, but they are not unreasonable and closely related to the theme. The seven forms of writing distract the spirit and do not "speak' an'"; Although the language is vulgar, there is an effective point of view in the unhealthy ideological flow. Wen Ba's thought is contrary to the accepted values, but it is not reactionary. In addition, the author's writing skills are good. 2, the establishment of "zero composition" research group, formulate "zero composition" evaluation rules, and widely publicized. If the ground slips, the merchant has the obligation to inform. Legal provisions always lag behind reality. This is not difficult to understand, because there is always a law that matter precedes consciousness and phenomenon precedes phenomenon and summarizes phenomenon and then goes north. The problem is that there was a zero-point composition in 2002, so far no corresponding detailed rules have been issued, and the action is really lagging behind. 3. Be careful and get zero. The sunshine of education should shine on every angle, and education should care for everyone (! ) the individual of life. Judging a zero-mark composition, not to mention that it may bring him (her) a lifelong shadow, and more seriously, it will bring extreme consequences. We should take into account the negative impact of society, students' psychological characteristics, cognitive attributes of this age group, etc., and pay more attention to human nature! Otherwise, education will become a sinner in a sense! Look at the message on the Internet: "Damn, the marking teacher is not from China!" ..... and for this kind of news, "top" a lot! Although a bit extreme, it reflects a certain public opinion! Waving a zero-point stick will play a lot of exercises and hurt a lot of exercises-1 0 composition, 9 composition ...1composition. Therefore, education is notorious, and college entrance examination marking teachers are enemies with candidates. As long as the usual political education is in place, the cultural environment is rectified, and zero points are obtained until there is no zero point, there will not be many writing freaks! In that case, the society will be more harmonious!