Wednesday April 20, 2022? very good
? The 30th issue of Classroom Weekly comments on the teaching plan.
Teaching objectives:
1, let the students observe carefully and write down the details of the action.
2. Let the students understand that the color change after the mixture of red, yellow and blue is not random graffiti.
3. Let students learn to modify exercises and use five symbols to modify them.
Teaching focus:
? Action description in discoloration experiment
Teaching difficulties:
? Training: "It's interesting to imagine like this."
Teaching process:
First, issuing cards
Lei Yuehuan? Xie haozhe? Shi Jianing? Zong Xinyi? Qu longxiang
Lu Jinyu? Yang Zhenyu? What about Zhang? Zhang Bowen? Tang Zhibin
Where's Gu? Han Zikai? Jin Guanru? Li Junlin? the Chen Dynasty
Chai Yiyang? Is he real? Yan Yifan? Xing Tianyu? Zhang Yiran
Du chenyan
Second, appreciate
1, praise my deskmate
? The excitation of internal driving force is not achieved overnight, and it needs persistence and persistence. The composition "Praise my deskmate" aims to cultivate children's observation, discover the advantages of deskmate, discover different him/her, improve self-confidence, stimulate internal drive, study hard and enjoy it.
? This issue of the newspaper, * * * has 16 "Boasting My deskmate", which makes full use of the entertainment and propaganda functions and supervision and guidance functions of the class weekly, so that the children can be in an atmosphere of mutual encouragement, competition and supervision, and the workload of the class teacher can be reduced.
? Students' appreciation of deskmate comes from appearance, attitude, discipline, personality, specialty, dream, handwriting, achievement, ability, personality, thoughts and hobbies, which is eye-opening. Some children have little advantage, but they are captured by the original deskmate and written vividly. Please enjoy Yang's works:
Praise my deskmate
? Yang
? He has black hair and a small black spot on his eyebrows. When he smiles gently, a small dimple will appear on his face. He is Chen.
? He is very gentle at ordinary times, but occasionally he will be naughty, showing a sweet smile from time to time, which looks very healing. He likes running best. I heard that he even challenged to run 7 kilometers in 30 minutes.
? He likes to make people laugh. This English homework is to draw vegetables. He didn't take the marker. After I lent it to him, he deliberately painted it as small as the fingernail of his little finger and whispered, "Oh, it's too small." I drew another tomato as big as a finger. One moment it was big, the other moment it was small, which made me laugh. Seeing me smile, he smiled happily.
? This is my deskmate. Although we only met a day ago, he is very nice.
? French sculptor Rodin said: "There is no lack of beauty in life, but there is a lack of eyes to find beauty." When a teacher teaches a child how to discover beauty, he is endowed with "eyes to discover beauty".
2. Discoloration experiment
? * * * There are five "discoloration experiments" in this issue of the newspaper, and the advantages of * * * are:
Each child can write a complete experimental process in the order of doing the experiment.
Most of them started with cheers, and they set off a small climax at the beginning, which attracted attention.
(3) The internal description is always embellished, and the pause button is pressed during the experiment to increase the sense of movement.
(4) The description of language, action and expression is displayed, and the picture is three-dimensional.
The rhetoric of parallelism, metaphor and personification adds a lot of color to the article.
6. There are doubts, gains and summaries at the end, each with its own characteristics.
Insufficient:
(1) Too much inner description, usurps the host's role.
(2) color confusion, even distortion. Yellow+red = orange, blue+red = purple, yellow+blue = green, red+yellow+blue = black. Some children don't observe carefully, and the color is biased.
(3) The incorrect use of verbs, such as "Nong" and "hen", has vague meanings and cannot accurately describe the action details in the experiment; "Pick a little paint and put it in the water" instead of "adding it to the water"; "Pour cinnabar pigment into water" does not mean "open cinnabar and melt it in water".
(4) Word order error: there are too many "ba" sentences, onomatopoeic words are written after verbs, and the order before and after actions is inconsistent with reality, and sentences are inverted.
⑤ The material description is inaccurate: it is a viscous pigment, not a dry powder; Seven mineral water bottles were used, not eight.
⑥ Improper punctuation: use comma when listing pigments, comma when listing materials, and pause.
The ending is not novel enough: "I am really happy today." "I'm so happy." "So happy." This simple sentence describing mood is not brilliant.
⑧ The process is not detailed and vague, and the color change of the pigment is not written.
Pet-name ruby details are not appropriate, the force is even, and too much ink is mixed in every place, which is repeated.
There is no subject at the beginning of the sentence.
? The exercises in the third grade gradually spiral from writing clearly to writing concretely, and gradually require to write details and close-ups, and gradually become delicate and meticulous. In this process, the teacher's explanation only accounts for 1/3, and the real ability comes from the children's practice.
? Gao Ziyang, a special-grade teacher in Shandong, has written exercises for six times, and every time he revises and re-creates, he will put forward new goals, so that the children can step by step on the original basis, from shallow to deep, and be solid and effective. Slow, fast, fast, maybe even slower. Teacher Guan Jiangang's students only wrote about 300 words in the fourth grade, because the teacher insisted on small steps. By the sixth grade, some children have been able to write novels with more than 10000 words, which is amazing.
Third, training:
It's interesting to imagine this.
? A flying hen (for example)
Outline:
1, starting with scenery or ancient poems or four words, introduces time, place and people. If the hero is surrounded by two or three friends with different personalities and outstanding personalities, and pets or wild animals gag, the plot will be more three-dimensional.
2. reasons
? Why are you flying? What about the shape after flying? What is the attitude, action and heart after the flight? You'd better write the door through.
3. After that
Encountered three difficulties and solved three times:
When there was a storm, the sky fell on the nobles.
(2) When you meet a raptor, you will be wise to resolve it.
③ Meet a spaceship/plane/human and live in peace.
……
? To be meticulous and decent, the language, actions, demeanor and heart run through, the story is bizarre and the imagination is reasonable.
4. Results
End with mood, scenery, inspiration, etc. (choose one), or complete happiness, or unfinished, or thought-provoking.