Xiangling is a very spiritual girl, but she doesn't have a chance to wander around the Xue family at ordinary times. Later, I moved into the Grand View Garden to live with Xue Baochai. I admire my sisters in the garden even more when they start poetry clubs. I really want to learn to write poems by myself. Although Xue Baochai is good at this, she only wants to talk about needlework with her sisters at ordinary times, thinking that a woman without talent is virtue. Xiangling can only consult Lin Daiyu, who is also very talented. Daiyu was happy to teach her, so she lent her books and taught her to write poems. The first song written by Xiangling is not quite right with the two. Lin Daiyu advised her to write boldly. The third song is really good, and everyone appreciates it. Later, poetry will also bring Xiangling.
2. Original text:
Xiangling said to Baochai, "I was just about to tell my wife. When my uncle leaves, I will go with that girl. I'm afraid my wife is too worried and says I'm greedy and play in the garden, but that's what you are. " Baochai said with a smile, "I know you envy this garden for two days, but you have no time." Come once a day, in a hurry, it's not fun at all. So I took the opportunity to stay for a year, which is also a companion, and you won your heart. Xiangling smiled and said, "Good girl!" ! Take this opportunity to teach me to write poetry! Baochai said with a smile, "I told you you were looking forward to it." . "I advise you to wait a little longer. First day in today, first out of the east corner of the garden. From the old lady, you can look around and say hello to everyone, and you don't have to ask them to move into the garden. If there is a reason, just say that I brought you in as a companion. Come back into the garden, and then go for a walk in the girl's room. "... let's talk about Xiangling's meeting with you. After dinner, Baochai and others went to grandma's house, and she went to Xiaoxiang Pavilion by herself. By this time, Daiyu had recovered more than half. Seeing Xiangling come to live in the garden, I naturally like it. Xiangling smiled and said, "I'll be free when I come. At least it's my luck to teach me to write poetry. Daiyu said with a smile, "If you want to learn to write poetry, you should worship me as a teacher." . Although I don't understand, I can probably teach you. Xiangling said with a smile, "In that case, I will worship you as a teacher." . You can't be bored. Daiyu said, "What's so difficult that it's worth learning?" ? But starting, bearing, turning, combining, bearing and turning are two pairs, with a flat voice, virtual versus real, and real versus virtual. If there is a strange sentence, even the truth is wrong. Xiangling said with a smile, "Strangely, I often get an old poem, so I take time to read one or two." . Some are right and highly technical, while others are wrong. I heard again that'135 doesn't matter, 246 is clear. Look at the poems of the ancients, 246 are both smooth and wrong. So I think about it every day. Now, after listening to your words, it turns out that these rules are all right, as long as the words are novel. "
Daiyu said, "That's true. Whether language is the last thing or not, intention is very important first. If the meaning is true, just don't modify the text. This is called' don't hurt your meaning with words'. "
-"Forty-eighth back to fornication, misunderstanding, entertainment, poetry"