1, the original poem is as follows:
Shu Ting: In the past 23 years.
An overturned small handleless wine cup
The stone road floated in the moonlight.
The grass there is unstoppable.
Leave a azalea
The eucalyptus forest is spinning.
The stars make up a kaleidoscope.
On the rusty iron anchor
The eyes reflected the dizzy sky.
Block the candlelight with a book erected.
Gently put your finger in your mouth.
In the crisp silence
Have a half-bright and half-dark dream
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2. The chapter of this poem explains:
The first paragraph is realistic, because the phrase "the stone road floats in the moonlight" looks unreal. The second paragraph is an illusion, but it is a very calm narrative, which makes the poet, the subject of the illusion, look real.
In the third season, the poet's self gradually emerged, as if from far to near, back to the eyes: books, candlelight, fingers in his mouth. The above hallucinations only occur in short, absent-minded memories. Silence is fragile. I only dream half bright and half dark, which is easy to wake up and short, so it is better, reflecting my helplessness and loneliness in reality.
3. Overall evaluation of this poem:
You can close your eyes and imagine the scene of this poem in your mind like a movie. In the past, these details were only left in the poet's memory. Stories and plots are hidden behind these details, which are intermittent. For the poet, there may be many things that can't be said, and there may be more important things than these details, but what the poet wants to show is these: overturned wine glasses, overwhelming grass and lost azaleas. It should be said that there are stories behind it. But "the stone road floats on the moon", "the eucalyptus forest rotates" and "the eyes are dizzy" are too much like witnesses. These visions put all these things into dreams more powerfully, but they are too far away or hard to remember. There are many beautiful, gentle and beautiful people and things in kindness, which just proves that the experience of "the past is like a dream" has now become a saying.
This poem is very light, light and bright, with good transparency, and it has a general sense of jumping when the movie screen is quickly switched. The whole poem is simple in texture, the girl is lonely and bored, and the lovely image immersed in memories is vividly on the paper.
Second, the supplementary explanation:
Shu Ting, a famous contemporary poetess, 1952, was born in Jinjiang, Fujian. He is the author of poetry anthology "Two Masts Ship" (1982), "Selected Lyrics of Shucheng" (1982), "Aria" (1986) and so on.