Close? Keys? Words: 600 words to commemorate the sixth grade of primary school
Words: 600 words composition
This article applies to: the sixth grade of primary school.
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This composition is about 600 words in grade six of primary school. The title is "In Memory of Revolutionary Martyrs". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Mourning day, drizzle like tears; Pedestrians on the road want to die. ",another Tomb-Sweeping Day is coming. Today, with a heavy and sad heart, I came to the revolutionary martyrs monument with my father to remember the revolutionary martyrs. Today, the monument to the revolutionary martyrs is particularly solemn under the sunshine and the shade of pine and cypress, just like a white sail sailing forward. Many wreaths were placed in front of the monument. It seems that many people come here to commemorate the revolutionary martyrs. Standing in front of the monument, I seemed to see the scene of the Eighth Route Army fighting the Japanese devils. Yes!
Countless revolutionary martyrs went through fire and water for the independence of the nation, the birth of new China and the prosperity of the country, risking their lives to forget their death, wave upon wave, and buried in this land of Cixi. Thinking of this, I can't help but bow my head in silence to the revolutionary martyrs, with infinite grief and high respect. Their noble character of seeking happiness for others should not be forgotten, and their meaninglessness and dedication will last forever ... Now think about it, these things are all exchanged for blood by revolutionary martyrs. We must cherish this golden childhood, cherish this hard-won beautiful life, learn knowledge, grow up and make more contributions to the motherland!
Teacher's comment: It is natural for the article to begin with a poem. Then the little author told the story of how he and his father went to the revolutionary martyrs monument to remember the revolutionary martyrs. The article is well organized and the theme is clear. However, the greatest success of this article is the description of the details. The sentence "I can't help but bow my head to mourn the revolutionary martyrs, with infinite grief and high respect" makes readers feel the inner sadness of the little author and admire the martyrs. As a second-grade pupil, this article is generally well written, and it would be better if it could be divided into paragraphs!
Remove the double quotes and commas after the first sentence of the article. "Their meaninglessness and dedication will last forever ..." The suggestion is changed to "Their dauntless spirit and dedication will last forever ...". (Master China: Teacher Wang) 2010-5-2213: 00: 00