Jane: The ancients used the phoenix head to describe the beginning of the article, which shows the importance of simplicity and the shortage of college entrance examination time. So we should see the importance of short opening. Beauty: Everyone has a love of beauty. If the beginning of the article gives people a sense of beauty, or brilliant literary talent, or profound artistic conception, or full of interest, then it will definitely touch the broken heart of the marking teacher. Odd: Everyone is curious. If we can grasp this point and design according to it, there will be suspense, doubt and contradiction, and the effect is self-evident. Rb: Philosophy is a kind of depth and a kind of height.
1. Quote famous sayings and get to the point skillfully.
Start or quote famous aphorisms to point out the center; Or quote the language of the character to highlight the character; Or quote poems to arouse readers' singing; Or quote proverbs, explain things, and so on.
(1) Ask what the world is and teach people life and death. Yuan Haowen is really good at asking questions, and so is he. His question can be said to have been asked for a long time Over the years, how many people have lingered on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But every family's words are as different as everyone's face.
Shi said, "Love is a tool. ..... "("What is love in the world ")
In a medieval church, a saint began his speech: "I became a saint because I saw through money. What belongs to me belongs to everyone." Long years, a snap of your fingers. In a cross-century prison, a thief began his monologue: "I became a thief because I saw through the money, and everyone's is mine." (Saints and Thieves)
Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. " Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. " Many times, we are confused by problems or wandering at the crossroads of multiple solutions. How to go has become a mystery in our hearts, and we are often indecisive. At this time, it is necessary to consider it from another angle, which will bring you more chances of success. ("Spin this kaleidoscope")
Archimedes said, "Give me a fulcrum and I can pry the earth up!" "
I said, "Give me a fulcrum, and I can support my soul!" " ("Give the soul a fulcrum")
2. Clever use of poetry, highlighting poetry.
(1) Looking at the colorful poems of the Tang and Song Dynasties, countless poems can be regarded as parting poems. Wang Bozhuang sang loudly: Why linger at the fork in the road, the children are stained with towels. Liu Yong is sad: Where will you wake up tonight? There is a breeze and a waning moon on the bank of Yangliu. Jiang Yan, however, Qian Fan put it in a nutshell: those who are ecstatic just leave. Some people beat their chests and feet: how can a whip be urgent! Today, there is Wang Guozhen's croon: how can you go back after a hundred years of life? No matter where your ears are, just pray like water, like a boat. Xi Murong's gentle warning came: If parting can remind us of the details we neglected when we got together, is it really bad to leave? This kind of feeling is really beautiful. Reciting the feelings of different times and different lives will have unexpected gains. ("Vientiane Life Insists on Yourself")
2 What is beauty? I know that beauty is the first light that rises on the horizon. Beauty is a maple leaf hotter than fire in autumn, a red-crowned crane flying on the beach at dusk, and a sika deer flying on the grassland ... Baum Tong Jia agreed with me and added: "Beauty is perceptual knowledge, and studying aesthetics is the science of studying perceptual knowledge." But Kant glared at me angrily and said, "One-sided, beauty is a purely subjective feeling of human beings and has nothing to do with the thing itself." I suggest you look at my judgment and criticism. "I humbly and carefully studied his aesthetic works on emotion. When I was complacent about my mystery, Hegel poured cold water on me: "No, beauty should be the externalization of human nature". Then, he proudly talked about his own aesthetic theory. Just when my second monk was at a loss, Marx whispered beside me, "Don't listen to him. He has turned right from wrong. Don't fall into the mud of idealism. "Beauty should actually be the unity of human nature and free form." What is beauty? I decided to leave Europe and go to the ancient oriental civilization to find a beautiful answer. ("What is Beauty")
(3) When the vast sky is dyed into a dark background and the boundless sky is full of stars when the new moon rises, I can't help thinking. I asked the moon in the sky from a distance: what is loneliness? Once upon a time, there was Li Bai's "Until, holding up my cup, I asked the bright moon to bring me my shadow and make us three". Perhaps, loneliness is the feeling that there is a bright moon in the sky, the wind is like water, everything is silent, and we are inseparable! Once upon a time, Li Houzhu felt that "the bright moon is like a hook, and the solitary phoenix tree locks the deep courtyard in the clear autumn". Perhaps, loneliness is a deep palace courtyard, and the country is worried about the family and the people. Once upon a time, Chen Ziang lamented, "Before me, where have all those lost times gone?"? Behind me, where are the future generations? I think of heaven and earth, there is no limit, there is no end, I am alone, and my tears fall. " Perhaps, loneliness is an empty state of mind with the same grass and the same horizon. So, I, asking for the moon, the Chang 'e of Guanghan Palace, told me that loneliness is the "clear sky and clear night heart" of "the shadow of the mica screen is deep, and the long river is gradually falling into the morning star". What is loneliness? I can't answer this question. (Lonely rhyme)
What comes quietly, leaving no trace, but arouses the dance of light in all colors?
What is it, leaving no trace, coming quietly, leaving a season of singing?
What comes gently and goes quietly, leaving golden color in the harvest season?
What is it, leaving quietly and coming gently, spinning a white dream for the silent earth?
The philosopher smiled at the blue sky: "It's time."
Children clap their hands with kites: "It's the wind."
The tramp said, "This is just a dream." (Happiness with an answer)
3. Use rhetoric to enhance charm
You can flexibly use common rhetorical devices such as metaphor, exaggeration, contrast, call, question, rhetorical question and confrontation. The topic is specific and metaphorical, novel and unique enough to make the marking teacher "love at first sight". For example, in 2002, the college entrance examination masterpiece "Choosing a Cage",
If you choose wings, you will embrace the whole blue sky.
If you choose fins, you will kiss the vast blue sea.
If you choose a quadruped, you will appreciate the vast green forest.
And my choice is-cage.
4. I want to promote it first and attract suspense.
Mom is a tiger. She is fierce, not only to her five sons, but also to my father. We are all afraid of her. (Prose "I already know you today")
Mother's fierceness is manifested in cooking only one meal every day and forbidding "us" to sleep late. Because of the hardships of life, we lost our temper with our father during the New Year, and "we" got married only for 200 yuan. All this changed after my mother got Alzheimer's Harmo's disease, and she stopped being fierce. She took out her 20,000 yuan savings and gave it to my wife to be flexible. None of us spent the money and deposited it in the bank until it was due. Many years later, it was 20 thousand, and before you know it, it reached 30 thousand. At this time, the author finally understands that the mother's fierceness is forced by life, and the mother's fierceness comes from her love for her children. I finally won the love of my sons.
5. Sudden narration enhances seriousness.
The director brought another boy. Youth Digest 1998 2 P42 The Tenth Wandering Child
As usual, tell the story from the beginning, but this one goes straight to the middle, then introduces the background, omits the first nine, doesn't mention it at all, and starts with the tenth one. After reading this, I suddenly became interested. I didn't know until I finished reading it that it was very difficult to make street children cry because they didn't have the habit of crying.
6. Material comparison leads to thinking.
Xiu is a girl in the mountains, but she always likes to see the cities outside the mountains. Prose199911p13 Xiuer
In the hearts of mountain girls, the city is beautiful. After entering the city, I heard that she was from the mountains, but the city people were very envious. She couldn't help wondering, "Is it the beauty of the mountain or the beauty of the city?" Maybe it's not just her confusion.
The cow is bought, but the father's soul is lost. College entrance examination composition
7. Clever use of inscriptions to reveal the theme
(1) there is no tree, but there can be grass green; Without the beauty of peony, you can have the freedom of small wild chrysanthemum ... life is not necessarily brilliant, but it must be great!
Notes before the text of a book or after the title of an article.
Butterfly was once a beautiful and excellent dancer. Her long shawl and gentle dance brought her thunderous applause and countless flowers. She was hailed by others as China's future Duncan ... but it's all over, and fate will keep her in a wheelchair forever. Life is bleak and silent, and the "white swan" has become an ugly duckling that nobody cares about. How many times, she dreamed that she put on glass shoes and continued her pursuit, but when she woke up, she only heard the cold autumn wind. ("Star Night Talk")
If you lose money, you only lose a small part;
If you lose your health, you only lose a small part;
If you lose your integrity, you are almost bankrupt.
Notes before the text of a book or after the title of an article.
What is "honesty"? So is honesty and trustworthiness. Throughout history, the word "sincerity" has soaked many people's blood and tears. Who is praising the emperor's new clothes? )
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In Yuan Dynasty, Qiao Mengfu put forward the composition "six-character formula": rockhopper, streaky pork and leopard tail. Clever use of metaphor shows that the beginning of the article should be as beautiful as a phoenix head, the middle should be as full as a pig's belly, and the end should be as powerful as a leopard's tail. Indeed, the beginning of the composition is bland, unattractive and poorly written; The ending is sloppy, which does not give a strong impression and is not desirable. Of course, how to start and end depends on the careful arrangement of the screenwriter.
Firecrackers rang the bell.
Xie Zhen in Ming Dynasty used two other metaphors to describe the beginning and end of an article: at the beginning of a sentence, it sounded like firecrackers; When the end is like a clock, there is more than one clear sound. It means that the beginning of the article should be like setting off firecrackers, crisp and loud, running through the whole article; The ending should be like hitting a bronze bell, with a clear voice and endless leisure. In fact, it is required that the beginning is extraordinary and shocking; The ending is not finished, which is intriguing. Comparatively speaking, this requirement seems to be more specific than the "phoenix head" and "leopard tail" above.
Watch the mountain and cut the horse.
Others think that the beginning of the article should be "straight to the point" without beating around the bush. This is the summary of Ouyang Xiu's composing method. Ouyang Xiu wrote "The Drunken Pavilion" and changed it again and again. At the beginning, there are dozens of words, and at the end, it only begins with the words "the Chuhe River is also a mountain", which is concise and clear. Later generations used "straight to the point" to describe this way of starting.
Some people ask the end of the article to be "like running a horse", which means that the article is vast and unstoppable, and the end suddenly stops, which enhances the momentum of the article and is more expressive.
Attachment: the representative work of the 2002 college entrance examination "Choose a cage",
If you choose wings, you will embrace the whole blue sky.
If you choose fins, you will kiss the vast blue sea.
If you choose a quadruped, you will appreciate the vast green forest.
And my choice is-cage.
People say, "stunning women are the great art of nature." Why does this artist not cherish his hard work so much?
I wash my feet by the Huanxi River. The water is light and free. I have bathed in the morning breeze in the pavilion, which is elegant and fresh.
I am the daughter of nature. In our beautiful home, I can enjoy the gift of nature and the nourishment of life. However, in that picturesque country, there was a war.
When I see the birds scattered in shock, when I hear the Ding Dong of the river turn to sob, I don't want to sigh, and the wind won't cry. I clearly understand the present situation, my situation, my fate, that is, the fate of crossing the country.
I am not only the daughter of nature, but also the daughter of Yue people. Seeing the devastated homeland and listening to the heavy sighs of the soldiers, I made a choice.
What I gave up was green mountains and green waters, pavilions, singing and laughing, brothers and parents. What I choose is a fake smile in front of people, a wet towel in the middle of the night, a kiss on my heart, and an unforgettable pain. However, I know that my choice is correct. Although I am alone in the cage, my people can survive. I, Dont Ask For Help, sang a hymn for me. This is my daughter's small reward for my great mother.
I packed my things, and my tears were blown into a winding river by the wind, flowing on the land of my motherland. I brushed the strings again, and the rhyme echoed in the valley and became an eternal overtone.
I bid farewell to my motherland in a calm voice: "I am a stone, and I choose a cage."
I left with heavy steps. But I have a belief in my heart-"the more you go, the more you destroy Wu"!