Four Topics in Prose Poems: "It was once difficult for the sea to touch water"
Text/Hao Zhenchang
The more times time passes.
For people who walk, they only see the appearance and don't remember it.
The more times you lie across the river.
For sailors who can swim, there is no need to care about how high their skills are.
No matter how many flowers are fragrant, they just smell, but they can't be taken away.
No matter how beautiful the scenery is, you can only appreciate it, and your memory is palpitation.
No matter how crowded and turbulent people are, they can't go with the flow, so they have to find another shortcut and make a detour.
No matter how wide the square is, it can't be occupied. Similar items can be merged. This is the world of idle people.
No matter how busy the city is, it can only take a break temporarily. It is a passer-by. After I survive, I will leave the complicated and changeable city life, which can't make any ripples for me.
Like a hotel bed, it can accommodate countless street sleepers who don't know who they are.
I visited the famous mountains in Sichuan, climbed Mount Everest, and learned that other mountains are dwarfed under the sky. ..
I have read the classics of famous artists, and my knowledge is rich enough to describe the highest point of the soul.
Contact with the master, the vision is so broad, and the interest in writing is progressing rapidly.
Appreciate the clouds on the machine at the top of the mountain and know how to cry like rain, which is the real cloud.
I have seen the magnificent sea, boundless, and the water in other places is a piece of cake. I can't call it water anymore.
Pursuing a poetic life, even if the left hand is lonely and the right hand is lonely, the front is desire.
The top of the head is despair, courage can't stand it, and it is constantly squeezed by secular ideas.
My mood has been depressed again and again, and my thinking has gone outside the cloud nine.
No regrets, just because the sea is difficult for water.
Missing is always in rainy season.
Time is changing, the season is changing, the temperature is changing, and the mentality is unchanged.
The same fate, the same opportunities and challenges, different feelings, different experiences.
Same life, different feelings, different trajectories.
A bunch of friends, around the stove, eating delicious dog meat hotpot.
There are no scholars, only Ding Bai.
Vulgar, lovers talk more than half a sentence.
In silence, I remembered the distance.
Humorous and gentle, he's not here.
For a moment, it was so heartbreaking.
The fiery passion disappeared.
The news that he has left.
Sometimes, sometimes not.
Wait until the flowers are all gone.
Get up in the morning and open the window.
It began to rain lightly.
The windowsill was wet by the rain.
It happened that I was walking in the street.
The vegetable farmer curled up, his hands red with cold and his feet stiff with cold.
But still face the customer with a happy face.
The muddy mountain road must be slippery.
The plan to inspect the tour fell through.
Give up the idea of expecting him to go home
Walking. walking.
Not just for a moment.
Miss, always in the rainy season.
Brew the last sweetness into strong liquor
The wine of life has been brewing in our hearts.
Bao Gu Shao gives off a faint fragrance.
Dear, at that time, as soon as we graduated from junior high school, it was far away.
I haven't seen each other for so many years. It's a pity and a shame.
There is no communication and I don't know who I am.
I liked you at that time, but I didn't dare to show it, unrequited love.
He looks silly, a little dull, and only works hard.
It's none of your business. Hang high, someone takes the lead.
It's as simple as filling your stomach with three meals a day.
For the greatest luck
In this way, I let the years pass in vain for twenty years.
Over time, there will be good signs.
Our friendship has been deadlocked for nearly a century.
It is the strict compulsory education restrictions.
Our association
How many sweet words were wasted at that time
Youth, beauty, fashion and good times
But selflessly dedicated to
Education in mountainous areas can never go far by accompanying parents.
Associate with loneliness.
Suffer pain
Fortunately, I presented a heavy gift to my hometown, a thread-bound book.
Brew the last sweetness into strong liquor
China, my morality has no bottom line.
China, my morality knows no boundaries.
Life is like a walking corpse, an iron wall.
Quick success and instant benefit, empty mind, bored to death
China, my morality knows no boundaries.
Materialism, money first, no learning and no skill.
Encourage boasting, right and wrong are reversed, and Taoism and death are not related.
China, my morality knows no boundaries.
All the efforts were in vain, and no matter how good the words were, it was useless.
Get less help, get more help, and be lonely.
China, my morality knows no boundaries.
You cannot make a silk purse out of a sow's ear.
Start from scratch, be careful and take care of everything.
China, my morality knows no boundaries.
I don't know how to honor my parents when I know how to repay them.
Perfection is enshrined in incense.
China, my morality knows no boundaries.
Life is worse than death, he who sees through the world of mortals faces it calmly.
Strike hard at tigers and flies. They are fierce and afraid of death.
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Hao Zhenchang, female, pen name: Qing Buchen, born in Sinan, Guizhou, in the late 1970s, is a senior primary school Chinese teacher. He wrote poems in his spare time and began to publish poetry collections in 2009. Some poems were selected in Selected Poems of a Thousand People.
Essence volume, Guan Ju's love poems, Qu Yuan's style, contemporary founder of classic short poems, classic love declaration, poems published in China Poet, Guizhou Poet, Guizhou Metropolis Daily, Fan Jingshan and Foding Mountain, essays published in Tongren Daily and other publications, have hometown. Some poetry reviews were selected in Poetry Weekly No.2014 126, and many poems were published in China Literature Network, Western Writers Network and Guizhou Literature Network. One essay won the 600-year Excellence Award of My Story with Guizhou. He is currently the editor-in-chief of Jianghuai Poet and Tommy Tam Shen Tao. Poetic point of view: describe the true face of life in the depth of time, support and appreciate those humble things. Blog:
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Poetry and Prose Graduation Part II: Appreciation of China's Modern Poetry and Prose.
Appreciation of China's Modern Poetry and Prose (Poetry Part) Unit 1
Unit description:
This unit is a poem that shows the rhythm of life. The life forms expressed in these poems are either as heroic as "Tiangou", as quiet and clear as "well" or as vigorous as "spring". Or the courage of soldiers to face death, or the tenacity of boatmen against rapids. In teaching, we should guide students to understand and taste the life connotation contained in these poems, and further understand the relationship between modern poetry creation and the poet's personality, as well as the strange way of thinking of modern poetry.
Learning objectives:
1. Understand the connotation of "life rhythm" in modern poetry.
2. Understand the personality charm contained in each paragraph.
3. Understand the unique way of thinking of modern poetry in combination with the text.
4. Experience the rhythm and rhythm of poetry and learn the recitation of modern poetry.
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Teaching process:
1, preview questions and feelings:
My question is:
My feeling:
My harvest:
2. Comments on drunken remarks (excerpts and comments on my favorite poems):
Excerpts from my favorite poems: my comments;
3. Question query:
1, the central image of this poem and its characteristics?
Clarity: Central image: Tengu
Features: unrestrained, fierce, self-publicizing, unrestrained and magnificent.
Please explore the deep meaning of the central image of this poem.
Obviously, the image of "Tiangou" has a double meaning (symbolic meaning), which is not only the pursuit of spiritual freedom and individuality in the May 4th era.
The symbol "I" (a newcomer to the nation and the times) shows the spirit of the times of personality liberation.
It is also a passionate, open and rebellious "self" and a true portrayal of "the self-soul of poets in the great era"
3. Briefly analyze the expressive features of this poem.
Clear: ① Complete free verse form (the length of verse varies, the number of lines in each verse is not fixed, and there is no unified rhyme.
Feet) and the "Tiangou" image displayed in the poem and the ideological theme expressed complement each other.
(2) Rhetoric: personification: The image of "Tiangou" can vividly express the hero's self-spirit, and also facilitate the poet's imaginative exaggeration.
Romantic exaggeration: better show the self-publicity, wild and unruly personality of Tengu.
4. Language taste:
? Four types of words:
? Verbs: "Swallow", "Gallop", "Bark" and "Gallop" are a series of dynamic and energetic verbs, which vividly show the characteristics of "Tiangou", fearless, wild and unrestrained. A brand-new image that goes forward bravely, exudes vitality and writes a brand-new chapter in life.
? ② The word "big": grand momentum and broad vision.
? 3 repetitive words: emphasize momentum.
? ④ The first-person pronouns "I" and "Tiangou" are driven by "I" with strong self-awareness, and all the words in the poem follow the call and push of "I" and rush forward, which fully embodies the dynamic spirit of the May 4th Movement and the poet's unrestrained personality.
Wen Yiduo compared writing poetry to dancing in chains. Lu Xun said, "Poetry must be in form, easy to remember, easy to understand, easy to sing and beautiful". Guo Moruo doesn't think so. He said: "The spirit of poetry is in its internal rhythm", that is, "the emotion naturally rises and falls". As for the external forms of poetry, such as language, it is just like clothes. "No matter whether poetry is old or new, as long as it is a real beauty, it is better to wear clothes than not to wear clothes!" "Tiangou" is the ultimate creation of Guo Moruo's poetic concept. It does not talk about the "form" of poetry at all, and does not consider the "brave singing" of poetry at all. It's an expression of feelings. I'm in a hurry to say anything, and it's nonsense. There are twenty-nine lines in the poem, and each line begins with "I", which is monotonous and scattered, ignoring the aesthetic expectation of China readers to sing in a low voice and sing three sighs. The whole poem is a loud cry, which suddenly rises with the rise and stops! This monotonous sentence pattern from beginning to end strengthens the whole chain of the whole poem in one go, while the rough language of unprinted nonsense strengthens and highlights the strength of the poem, refuses to pack, tells the truth directly, and is easier to communicate with readers. In this way, the whole poem is integrated, breaking through the earth's crust like fiery magma and erupting like a volcano; Another example is the mudslide that broke out at the top of Tianshan Mountain, surging, roaring and rushing down like a note? , with great impact and shock!
5, reading skills:
Approaching the author
Guo Moruo (1892- 1978), formerly known as Kaizhen and Wu Shang, later took posthumous title's "Ink" and "Ruoshui" as his pen names in his hometown of Dadu River and Yahe River. People from Leshan, Sichuan. In his early years, he entered the family school, and 1906 entered Jiading College, and began to accept democratic ideas. 19 14 In the spring, he went to Japan to study, during which he came into contact with the works of foreign writers such as Tagore, Goethe, Shakespeare and Whitman. Sheep Hill, written in the spring of 19 18, is his first novel, and The Temptation of Death, written in the early summer of 1965438, is his earliest new poem. 19 19 When the May 4th Movement broke out, he launched a national salvation group "Summer Society" in Fukuoka, Japan, and devoted himself to the New Culture Movement, and wrote poems such as Phoenix Nirvana, The Earth, My Mother and Coal in the Furnace. 192 1 In June, he organized a creative society with Cheng, Yu Dafu and others and edited the quarterly of creative society. /kloc-graduated from Imperial University of Japan in 0/923, and continued to edit Creation Weekly and Creation Day after returning to China. From 1924 to 1927, he created historical dramas such as Wang Zhaojun and Zhuo Wenjun. 1928 Exiled in Japan. 1930 joined the Chinese Left-wing Writers' League and participated in the activities of the Tokyo branch of the "Left-wing League". 1938, director of Ren Zhonghua National Anti-Enemy Association of Literary and Art Circles. During this period, he created Qu Yuan.
Represented by six historical dramas. He also wrote ten critical books, The Bronze Age, and a large number of essays, essays and poems. After the founding of New China, he served as a member of the Central People's Government, Vice Premier the State Council and director of the Culture and Education Committee, president of the China Academy of Sciences, the first, second and third presidents of the All-China Federation of Literary and Art Circles, the ninth, tenth and eleventh central committee members of the Chinese Production Party, the first to fifth vice-chairmen of the National People's Congress Standing Committee (NPCSC), and the member, standing committee member and vice-chairman of the China People's Political Consultative Conference. His works include Ode to Xinhua, Dongfeng Ji, Cai Wenji, Wu Zetian, Li Bai and Du Fu. There are Collected Works of Guo Moruo (volume 17) and Complete Works of Guo Moruo (including 20 volumes of literature).
Guo Moruo is a poet who pioneered the atmosphere. His collection of poems Goddess echoed the spirit of sturm und drang during the May 4th Movement, and wrote the youth of the times and the rebirth of the nation with full passion. In the concept of poetry, he advocates that poetry is the poet's self-expression, and that "poetry is dedicated to lyric"; He believed in the inspiration and intuition of poetry and put forward that "poetry is not made, but written"; He also emphasized the non-utility of poetry, but he acknowledged the objective social effect of poetry. Guo Moruo initiated the free verse of modern new poetry, and his eclectic poetic style had a great influence on later generations.
Background explanation
The May 4th Movement brought new breath and vitality to China society. Old morality, old ethics, autocratic politics and all feudal idols have been violently attacked and criticized, while new things, new ideas, new cultures and all the requirements of progress have been enthusiastically advocated and praised. Advocating scientific democracy, striving for independence and freedom, publicizing individual consciousness, pursuing individual liberation, and demanding to transform the old society and build a new society have become the strong voice of the times.
6. Recommend poetry exchange:
Pick up shells from the sea of poems (excerpt from my favorite poems or verses);
Recommended reason:
7. Poetry and a recommendation recommended by the teacher.
Coal in the Furnace —— Feelings of Missing the Motherland
Guo Moruo
Ah, my lady!
I will live up to your hospitality,
Don't let me down.
I'm doing this for the people I love.
Burn like this!
Ah, my lady!
You should know my predecessor.
Don't you think I am a reckless slave?
In the chest of my black slave,
As long as there is a heart like fire.
Ah, my lady!
I think my predecessor
Originally a useful pillar,
I've been buried alive for years,
Until now, I want to see the light again.
Ah, my lady!
Ever since I saw the light again,
I often miss my hometown,
I'm doing this for the people I love.
Burn like this!
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(This article was originally published in Shanghai News on February 3 1920? Learn to light up ")
A word of advice:
This is a lyric poem full of nostalgia for the motherland. In the poet's own words: "China after the May Fourth Movement is like a smart and enterprising girl in my mind, and she is like my lover." This poem uses personification technique, with the style of "coal in the furnace" to pour out the thoughts of loving the motherland, express the strong love for the motherland and express the desire to die for the motherland.
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1, preview the questions and feelings (read the poem carefully and write down your doubts and feelings below):
2. A comment with English drunkenness (please extract your favorite poem from this poem and explain the reasons):
3. Question query:
(1) Please talk about your understanding that "only loneliness can keep you awake and full".
Reference answer: the well is abandoned outside the warmth, but loneliness is satisfied with desolate loneliness. The class from darkness is connected with the boundless universe, but it is abandoned but silently endured. It insists on itself, keeping its silent, clear, simple and pious nature. The fullness of the well is because it adheres to its own life state.
(2) What symbolic meaning does the poet give to the well?
Reference answer: "Well" symbolizes a spirit of self-sacrifice. The well was abandoned by warmth, but it was "always clear and full". It also symbolizes the spirit of advocating individuality, a tenacious and noble character. It silently "bears everything" and washes them, "I will always be myself". It is a portrayal of some honest and kind intellectuals in the old society.
4. Language taste:
Please find out the rhyme of this poem and think about its rhyme characteristics.
Reference answer: This is a poem with relatively free form but strict rhyme. For example, the first rhyme of "Ye" and "Jie", the second rhyme of "Hou" and "Worry", the third rhyme of "Warm", the fourth rhyme of "Mian" and the fifth rhyme of "Mian". The first to fourth verses have different rhymes. The sixth section rhymes with "abandon", "purity" and "self", and the seventh section rhymes with "sincerity", "enthusiasm" and "sound" for rhyming changes. The third paragraph "Du" rhymes with the fourth paragraph "Chu", which forms a rhyming relationship with each paragraph.
5, reading skills:
Kuya School of Poetry: It is a school of poetry with modernism tendency in War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression's later period and the War of Liberation. The main members are Cao Xinzhi (Hang Youhe), Xin Di (Wang Xindi), Chen, Tang Qi, Tang Shu, Du, Mu Dan and Yuan Kejia. The main publications are Poetry Creation and China New Poetry. They emphasize the unity of reflecting reality and excavating the heart, and their poems have a broad vision and a strong sense of the times, history and realistic spirit. In art, they consciously pursue the combination of realism and modernism, and pay attention to creating novel images and realms in poetry. They inherited the modernism tradition of China's new poetry and contributed to its development.
6. Recommend poetry exchange:
Picking up shells from the ocean of poetry (excerpts from extracurricular poems);
Recommended reason:
7. Poetry and a recommendation recommended by the teacher.
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High cutting forest
I'm angular
I have no diamonds or emeralds.
Not as elegant as white marble or jade
I have never carved a seal, and I was desperately contested by the princes.
And don't wear the slender fingers of modern girls.
Or hung around their smooth necks.
I can't compare with the drifting glacier rubble.
Poetry and Prose Graduation 3: Graduation
Review on TV Prose of Graduation
From the moment we enter the school, it means that we will leave and graduate. We are looking forward to graduation, but at the same time we are sad for graduation. "Graduation is a heavy verb. Graduation is an unforgettable term. Graduation is an adjective that moves us to tears. Graduation is an adverb. When we are lonely, we laugh and recall and regret. " Graduation is the end of our school and a starting point for us to step into society. The director of TV poetry prose "Graduation" used his strong feelings and unforgettable memories to freeze the beautiful memories on the university campus.
The director explained the memories and experiences of boys and girls in college with the voice-over of a man and a woman. Let us see more clearly the experiences of boys and girls in the university, what they think and feel from freshman to senior. The director set up four clips in the film to tell the story of four years of college life. The last romance, where dreams begin, friends don't cry and bid farewell to the fourth year of college. These four clips are added to the film, which makes us more clearly and methodically realize the rich and strong feelings in college. From entering the campus for the first time to looking forward to college life, to discussing topics with teachers, and then to walking out of the four-year youth campus with heavy luggage, this structural setting makes the audience feel the freedom of college life, the pressure of college life, the sadness when they graduate from college, and enriches the emotional color of the audience.
This film review interprets the beauty and youthful charm of the university with slow rhythm and elegant and affectionate music. In the film, the director used a lot of lyrical and beautiful music to express his feelings. At the beginning, a beautiful and pure "Gardenia Blossom" brought us into the long-awaited university campus. During the period, I used The Price of Love and My Future Is Not a Dream to express the pursuit and struggle of college students, and Friends to express the friendship between teachers and students in college life and with the school. Finally, I wish you a pleasant journey, express the blessings among students and the expectations of teachers for students, and let the audience feel the throbbing mood when they leave the music. "Really, really graduated", a dignified narration and heavy inspirational music made the audience feel a huge emotional impact. It is this kind of music that makes us remember movies deeply.
Many close-ups are used in this film. The close-ups of flowers, fans, windmills, basketball and bicycles on the campus of the university show the high morale and passion of college students. The close-ups of many shoes show the hardships of college students for several years. The close-up of the train shows the sad departure at graduation. In addition, the inverted camera shows students' nostalgia for the past time, hoping that time can go back. In his works, slow motion combined with light shows the beautiful memories of his school days. Finally, turn a shot in the crowd into a panorama, suggesting that graduates will cross the crowd in the future. This changed lens left a deep memory in the audience's heart, leaving a high-quality sense of flowers in the audience's heart.
The affectionate and beautiful voice-over is also a powerful way to express emotions in this TV poetry prose film. In this film, affectionate narration and beautiful music make the audience deeply feel the sadness of college students when they face graduation. The use of actual sound in the film makes us feel the sadness that college students really face when they graduate.
Flowers bloom and fall silently.
-Analysis of TV Poetry Prose "Graduation"
Graduation, a TV poetry prose, successfully combines prose with TV art, realizing the perfect combination of the artistic conception of poetry and the aesthetic characteristics of TV works, giving people a soothing, elegant and beautiful feeling, making people naturally integrate into the literary artistic conception reflected in TV pictures, and making people feel the intention of making works from the picture to the heart.
TV prose is a symphony of subtle expression of TV and literature, which makes people interested, and the blending of sound and picture strengthens emotional charm. Literary artistic conception always dominates the flow of emotion, which is released through pictures and gives voice and painting a soul. "Graduation" is really an aesthetic enjoyment for everyone.
First, multi-angle stereoscopic display
The director's lens gives a detailed description of things that can remind the audience from different angles. For example, the football outside the window is described as completely as possible from the angles of pitching, pitching and shooting. Every change of angle is like a drop of dew, which breeds a brilliant flower like youth little by little in the weakest part of the audience's heart. The petals open one by one, and it opens as the lens advances and opens. From a subjective point of view, the scene in the study room first makes the audience feel that they are immersed in those memories, as if they are back to the days when they were sitting there studying hard. The camera zooms out, giving people a panoramic feeling. For example, when they are about to leave, they look back and zoom out again, which is a nostalgic glimpse after going out, symbolizing that they really bid farewell to that life and then move towards the unknown future. A series of shaking shots pushed the panorama to close-up step by step, and some local close-ups were given in some character descriptions. The description of each shot is very detailed, but it doesn't give people a boring feeling. I can't forget college life from some dribs and drabs around me. The former campus, canteen, and even the path we once walked were photographed. Although there is no story in it, it can make people have a pleasing artistic conception. The picture always revolves around the grass and trees of college life, and constantly changes the scene through montage, so that we can enjoy more beauty when watching. Between shots, we can
In retrospect, it may be the parked bicycles, the shoes on the windowsill, the public telephone on campus, and the beautiful scenes left by everyone with a happy smile when filming graduation photo. You can see how delicate the photographer's mind is.
Second, the writing is vivid and beautiful.
The reason why this work "Graduation" will impress the audience is largely because of the strong appeal of its prose content. The simple picture combined with touching words can best inspire people from the plain. In chronological order, this paper uses a lot of rhetorical methods to show the university life clearly and completely to the audience. Every word is like a painting. Digging out the ordinary and indispensable details of life that were originally deposited in the depths of memory makes people feel boring, fresh in memory and evokes memories. Therefore, the success of Graduation first stems from the beauty of prose, which provides a very high platform for shooting and makes the creation more comfortable.
Third, the use of music is just right.
Television is a combination of sound and pictures, so TV prose, as a TV program, also needs music as the explanation and collocation of pictures. The music part of the work Graduation mainly improves the picture through voice-over and music. Light music with emotional recitation allows the artistic conception of prose to penetrate into TV works and make the audience feel the same. After each paragraph, there is a song that reflects the feelings of words, so that each short paragraph can completely present the life of each stage in the university, and this time has left an indelible mark on the hearts of graduates. Gardenia blossoms, the price of love, those flowers, the melody and lyrics of songs and paintings.
Prose with face and voice-over is a perfect match. Flowers bloom and fall in the picture, which really makes the audience feel that those flowers, those memories and those who have walked through our lives are quietly blooming for us in a corner of the world. I don't know where they are or whether they are good or not. Familiar and representative things are recorded in the picture, as if everything was painted in that unforgettable youth. "Is that my childhood dream?" Perhaps, time slips away quietly in your palm. I once complained that it was too slow. When the destination suddenly appeared in front of me, I found that four years was so fast that people thought it was a dream when they were young. Slight sadness, deep sadness. The powerful appeal of music is vividly reflected here, but anyone who has graduated will have tears in his eyes, as if hearing the footsteps of youth. An excellent TV essay is to make use of the combination of sound and picture of TV to make the audience intoxicated and moved. The combination of sound and picture in Graduation really achieved this.