Structural mode of wanting to rise first and restraining first

It is not only a writing skill, but also a means of expression when analyzing articles. What is the desire to be promoted first? In fact, it is very simple, which means that if you want to carry forward and let go of something, you must first restrain and control it. In other words, criticize or belittle something before praising or praising it. When describing, it is not plain and straightforward, but playing hard to get and beating around the bush. Through the attempt to promote first and then suppress, we can express the author's feelings more comprehensively and concretely, highlight the character or characteristics of things, and make readers realize and impress.

For example, Lu Xun's Fan Ainong adopted this technique. The writer and Fan Ainong are in Japan. After the revolutionary Xu Xilin was arrested and executed for assassinating the Anhui Governor, the news spread to Japan, and the international students were greatly indignant. At that time, they gathered to scold the government. Some people advocate sending a telegram to Beijing in protest. However, Fan Ainong said, "If the murderer is killed, the deceased is dead. Why did you send a fart telegram? " Xu Xilin, a teacher in Fan Ainong, said such heartless things, so the author said, "I am very angry. I don't think he is human at all. My husband was killed, and I didn't even dare to send a telegram ... From then on, I always thought this Fan Ainong was weird and hateful. The hateful people in the world thought they were Manchu at first, but later they realized that they were still the second; The first one is Fan Ainong. China is not revolutionary, and if it wants to be revolutionary, it must first remove Fan Ainong. " At the beginning of the article, Fan Ainong left a very hateful impression on readers, which was an effort to "suppress". However, when describing their future contacts, Fan Ainong was originally an upright and ambitious person who hated evil. The "suppression" in the last article contrasts with the "yang" in the next article. But remember to use this writing technique naturally and reasonably, and never force it to be blunt.

? In addition to the structural arrangement of the article, there are many such ways of writing poetry. For example:

Spring snow

Han Yu

There is no youth in the New Year.

The grass bud was surprised at the beginning of February.

Snow is too late for spring,

Therefore, the tree is a flying flower.

This seven-character quatrain was written by Han Yu, a poet in the Tang Dynasty. There are one or two sentences describing people looking forward to the arrival of spring in the cold winter, which can be seen from the word "Du"; Then people's joy after seeing the spring buds can be expressed by the word "scenery". It used to be "suppression" and later it was "promotion". One suppression and one promotion will make people anxiously wait for spring, and then express their joy when they see spring. Three or four sentences are full of romance, which shows that Snow White thinks that spring comes late and becomes a flying flower in the courtyard. This poem makes full use of the expressive technique of wanting to promote and restraining first, and expresses the author's expectation and love for spring.

In addition, Yang Shuo's> article also adopts the method of "wanting to rise first and restraining first". In his article, he said that when he was a child, he always had a bumpy feeling of disgust because he was stung by a bee. But later, he visited a beekeeping farm in Conghua, Guangdong, tasted litchi honey, listened to the introduction of the old beekeeper, and suddenly admired the little bee. Its industrious and selfless quality reflects the virtues of the working people in China. This is a typical writing technique, which should be greatly praised, but it was belittled and criticized at the beginning of writing.

Finally, it is necessary to distinguish between wanting to promote and restraining first: wanting to promote and restraining first has a strong purpose, that is, praising something; It can be objectively suppressed first and then promoted, that is to say, when describing a thing, the author only criticizes but does not praise it, that is, the bad places are said first, and then the good places are said, without special praise and criticism.

(The above only represents personal views)

? Now it is submitted to Li Lao for approval.

Yujiao class 1

Meng Xin

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