Fujian 2010 College Entrance Examination Full Score Essay: I live with truth, goodness and beauty in poetry (800-word essay)
Source: College Entrance Examination Network 2010-07-19 17:13:40
Introduction: Appreciation of the full score essays in Fujian's 2010 College Entrance Examination
When a thick stack of "Grimm's Fairy Tales" is printed and becomes a treasure in the hands of children, when loving parents recite that poem-like poem to their babies When the kind-hearted princess in the fairy tale adds color to the colorful dreams of children...the true meaning of these legends, the connection with the history of human development that the Brothers Grimm were searching for, is revealed in the silent words. That is the bloodline of human beings that has remained unchanged since ancient times—truth, goodness, and beauty.
These are three simple words, but they are always easily ignored by us. The Brothers Grimm studied the words in the legend, hoping to find the truth and laws hidden in them, but they ignored the ultimate truth, goodness and beauty that even the children next door could summarize.
We have always been like this. The value standard of practicality has become the nose ring of modern people. Little do we know that science, technology, and rhetoric must be stitched together with beauty, kindness, and sincerity. There is no pragmatism as a belief in truth, goodness and beauty, just the quiet old court clothes, with buttons ticking off and scattered all over the floor. Yes, we must be guided by pragmatism full of achievements, but as a human being, we cannot lack the guidance of faith.
Holderlin once said that, full of achievements, people still have to live poetically on this land. If we only blindly pursue practical gains, even if there are abundant ears of grain and sweet meals, we will still be just creatures crawling on the ground. If this is really the case, I would also like to praise mankind's humility and abundant achievements, but I would be saddened by the helplessness of the soul. Have you ever heard that the soul is a stranger on the earth? It is beauty that makes people walk upright on their knees and challenge the scorching sun proudly! It is sincerity that creates a strong bond called love between people and makes humanity overflowing with fragrance! It is good that these strangers on the earth can set their roots deep into the earth, but always grow upward without any side branches! Heidegger said that the spirit is a mad rush to the sky, chasing God. It is truth, goodness and beauty that creates infinite possibilities for human beings! People have been reborn and recreated their inner lives countless times, always with beauty as the bright fireworks, goodness as the boat body for ferrying, and truth as the stick in the hand.
When we read "Grimm's Fairy Tales", or "Tonghai Jing" or "Aesop's Fables", the guiding lights we see for the advancement of human history are all the light of human nature. Undying love, the mother-child bond that shocks stars and men, or the friendship that promises a thousand dollars, are all based on incomparable human nature, on truth, goodness and beauty, without the cumbersome formulas or the teachings of laws. They really exist and serve mankind. Pave the way to help people walk.
The development of pragmatism has confused our vision. More and more people advocate cold words and deeds like machines. We have ignored beauty, lost truth, and abandoned kindness. It seems that only children are still ignorant. Forget that Xia Xia-like original intention.
No, I will still dig my roots deep into the ground and pull up toward the sun. I want to be as strong as the trunk of a tree. Goodness is the nectar in my branches. I cut the real blame into pieces of green leaves and stick them on my neck and forehead. It is really abundant rain. Beauty is the clear blue sky above my head.
Comments:
This is an argumentative prose with novel ideas and profound thoughts. Its standout demonstrates a writing principle: the text puts the meaning first. Thoughts achieve human dignity and value and profoundly determine the taste and meaning of discussion. At the beginning of the article, the central argument is derived from quotations from the material, and touches on a contemporary confusion: the value of practicality often replaces the value of aestheticism as the mainstream, which is really worrying. The article quotes the poetry and philosophy of Holderlin and Heidegger to effectively analyze the aesthetic value of human nature. The symbolic ending sublimates the theme, has a rigorous structure and a long lasting charm. The fly in the ointment is that there are slightly fewer examples of discussion in the middle, and some sentences are a bit jerky.