Handwriting
a. The book is delicate and neat, just like the streets of a small seaside town. There is no trace of dirt... The regular handwriting makes people feel really comfortable reading... Your handwriting is as beautiful as the printed one... I'm ashamed that my handwriting is not as beautiful as your handwriting...
b. It's casual, the handwriting doesn't look like it was drawn by a cat... The words are not in the grid Of course, it doesn’t look pleasing to the eye in the middle... Your handwriting is swaying here and there. Is it because the wind is too strong today that it looks like this... I don’t believe that your handwriting is not good and it will always be so sloppy... Write carefully and patiently, you You can write better than me...
Content
a. Such rich content is almost the same as what a writer writes... Your exercises are full of flesh and blood, and it is easy to read. What a great enjoyment... Your composition is very specific in content, and I enjoyed reading it... You must like to read it as a document, so you wrote so many words...
b. The dry content is like Plain water has no taste at all. Just add more beautiful words and sentences to make it taste better... It doesn't have as many words as Liu Weiwei (or to name other poor students), don't you feel a little embarrassed... Your composition is like the mouth of a 90-year-old lady, withered Empty, your speech leaks...
Sentences
a. Smooth and vivid sentences are like the Lushan waterfall, flowing down, very smooth... The metaphor is very appropriate, indicating that you have always been Observe carefully... How did you come up with such a clever personification... How appropriate is the use of rhetorical questions here... This exclamation expresses your true feelings at that time... The quotation of ancient poems is just right. I will also use the poems I have learned in the future. Use it in the composition... The postscript is so wonderful that it makes my stomach hurt from laughing...
b. The composition is lumpy and uncomfortable to read, like walking on a bumpy road in the countryside. , it’s easy to fall if you’re not careful... The sentence seems to have been cut off by someone, and it is incomplete... After you have written it, read it carefully, and you will find the inconsistencies... Don’t be afraid of trouble, good articles are all revised... You can’t always rely on others to revise it for you, you must learn to revise every sentence yourself...
Hierarchy
a. The subsections are clearly divided...the subsections are divided appropriately...speak one subsection at a time One level of meaning, clear paragraphs...
b. The levels are confusing, one section contains so much content, and you feel out of breath when reading... There are too few subsections, are you reluctant to divide more... The middle section can be divided into several subsections... The first and second sections should not be divided and must be merged... This section is not connected with the content of the above subsections...
Details
< p> a. Highlight the key points... The key parts are written in detail, not bad... Everything is described clearly... Each scenic spot is described in the order of the tour, and the key points are described... < p> b. The writing in section > a. The title is fresh, like bamboo shoots in spring, tender and crisp...The title is very interesting, and people can't help but want to read on...Tell me, where did you come up with such a wonderful title...Add punctuation marks to the title ( Ellipses, question marks, exclamation marks, dashes), different... I like your interesting topic very much...b. If the title is the same, people will not be interested in reading your composition... Like this Everyone knows the title, it’s too general... The content doesn’t seem to match the title... Use your brain to find a more suitable title... I think the title would be more appropriate to be called "..."...
Punctuation
a. The punctuation is regular and it shows that you are a serious person... The punctuation is used very accurately...
b. The content is more It's wonderful, but the punctuation is so careless, and no one wants to read your composition... You have lost a lot of punctuation, and you want me to read it non-stop, suffocating me to death... The punctuation is not good... The punctuation is too punctuated. There are so many, it jumps and jumps when reading, like a lame walking... I hope you carefully mark every punctuation... After the meaning of a sentence is finished, you should put a period... The ellipsis occupies two spaces and cannot be typed in one...