Keywords: I love 350 words in the fourth grade of Red Primary School.
Words: 350 words composition
This article applies to: the fourth grade of primary school.
Composition source:
This composition is about 350 words in the fourth grade of primary school. The title is "I love red". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. I love scarlet, because-the red scarf is red, which represents a corner of the red flag and is dyed red with the blood of revolutionary martyrs. I like flaming red, because-the torch is red, which represents the arrival of the Olympic Games and the opening of the Paralympic Games. I love crimson because-the sun is red, which brings warmth and hope. I like light red, because-the flowers in the ward are red, which wishes the elderly a long and healthy life and the patients a speedy recovery. Red is full of vitality, which means health and hope. Teacher's comment: The author enthusiastically eulogizes his favorite red. In the author's pen, red has become extremely vital and symbolic, which is the wonder of poetry. The author divides red into several kinds, bright red, fiery red, crimson and dark red, and explains their symbolic meanings respectively, which not only explains why he likes this kind of red, but also sublimates its meaning and writes it well. The disadvantage is that the language is not concise enough and the colloquial traces are too heavy, such as "it wishes the elderly health and longevity, and also wishes the patients a speedy recovery." It can be changed to "it symbolizes health and also means blessing." The last three sentences can be omitted. (China Distinguished Teacher: Teacher Wang) May 27, 2009 10: 16: 00.