Li Daoyuan's "Three Gorges" (selected from "Shui Jing Zhu") is a famous landscape work. It only takes less than 200 words. The author describes the intricate nature of the Three Gorges. style. The full text description follows the shape of the object, the movement and stillness are intertwined, the scenes blend, and the emotions change with the scenery. It is concise, concise, vivid and expressive.
The author starts with "from the middle of the Three Gorges Seven Hundred Miles", which not only explains the description object, but also introduces its overall length.
Then, the author first writes about the mountains, using the words "mountains on both sides of the bank are connected, with a slight gap" to describe the "connection" of the mountains, "heavy rocks and overlapping peaks, hiding the sky and blocking out the sun" to describe the "high" of the mountains, and then The use of "Zi Fei Pavilion at midnight, no light and moon" is used as a side contrast to make people further feel the narrowness of the Three Gorges. A few strokes vividly outline the majestic, majestic and steep overall style of the Three Gorges, making readers quickly be attracted by the majesty and danger of the Three Gorges. Attracted by momentum.
Water is the eye of the mountain. The author writes about water according to natural seasons, first writing about summer when the water is the largest and most urgent. Use "Xia Shui Xiangling, blocked along the way" to describe the danger of the water, the high water level, and the urgency of the current. "The White Emperor went to Jiangling in the morning and arrived at Jiangling in the evening. He traveled a thousand and two hundred miles. Although he rode the wind, he did not suffer from speed." Through comparison and exaggeration, the speed of the water flow after the river surges in summer is highlighted. Let's write about spring and winter when the water potential decreases. The Three Gorges at this time can be summarized by the word "show". "Plain Turbulence" and "Green Pool" are two colors and two modalities, intertwined with movement and stillness, with sharp contrast; "Strange Cypress", "Xuanquan" and "Waterfall" are also composed of stillness, movement, sound and color, and the mountains, rivers and trees intersect in it, creating a beautiful scene. spectacle. "Qing Rong Jun Mao" means four things in one sentence: "Qing" means water, "Jun" means mountain, "Rong" means cypress, and "Mao" means grass. "A lot of fun" is mixed with the author's aesthetic taste, making the poetry and painting blend into one. When writing about autumn water, the author uses the word "frost" to imply the coldness of the autumn scenery of the Three Gorges, and uses the cry of apes to contrast the bleak autumn heights, which makes people feel desolate.
As a work describing landscapes, it does not simply describe the scenery, but uses emotions to express the scenery (such as "Lots of Fun" to express the beauty of spring and winter scenery, "Apes Roaring" and "Sadness" to express the beauty of autumn scenery). (cold), the emotions come into the scenery (for example, the first few sentences reflect the overall feeling of admiring the Three Gorges for the first time, giving people a sense of majesty and danger. The following is divided into sections to describe the feelings of the four seasons, which are sometimes frightening, sometimes joyful, and sometimes sad. ), the author lays out the story based on emotion rather than the order of the four seasons.
Every scene language is a language of love. Beginner writers should describe the characteristics of scenery and be consistent with their own thoughts and feelings.
"Three Gorges" uses concise and vivid pen and ink to describe the majestic, dangerous, quiet and beautiful scenery of the Three Gorges. The author grasps the characteristics of the scenery to describe it. When writing about mountains, they highlight the characteristics of being continuous and blocking out the sky and the sun. Writing about water depicts different scenes in different seasons. In summer, the river overflows the hills and ships are blocked. “In spring and winter, the pool is green with turbulent scenery, reflecting the clear reflection. There are many grotesque cypress trees, with suspended springs and waterfalls flying in the midst of them.” Snow-white rapids, turquoise lake water, swirling clear waves, and beautiful reflections, The author couldn't help but admire "a lot of fun". But in autumn, "the forest is cold and the streams are solemn, and the high apes often howl", and the sad and strange screams continue, "sorrowing and disappearing for a long time" in the empty valley. The strange scene of the Three Gorges is vividly described. The author uses a large-stroke technique to describe the scenery. In just over 150 words, he has captured all the myriad aspects of the Three Gorges over seven hundred miles. When writing about spring and winter scenery, use the numbers "plain", "green", "clear" and "shadow"; when writing about autumn scenery, use the numbers "cold", "solemn", "sad" and "sad" to vividly express the charm of the scenery. come out. The article writes about the mountains first and then the water. The layout is natural and the ideas are clear. When writing about water, the ink is divided into different seasons. The rhythm of the article is also a mixture of movement and stillness, swaying in various ways. High mountain peaks, turbulent rivers, clear blue water, hanging waterfalls, mournful ape calls, and sad fishermen's songs form pictures with different styles but natural harmony, which leave a deep impression on readers. The quoted verses highlight the characteristics of high mountains and long waters, while at the same time rendering the sad and desolate atmosphere of the Three Gorges autumn colors.
Summary of "Three Gorges"
Mountain: high cypress: strange water: urgent (dynamic) clear (static)
Summer: strong water, rapid water flow in spring and winter : Qingyouqiu: Desolate
Emotion: It shows the author's admiration and love for the scenery of the Three Gorges in the four seasons.
Related poems: Early Departure from Baidi City by Li Bai
The White Emperor's farewell speech is among the colorful clouds, and the thousand miles to Jiangling are returned in one day.
The apes on both sides of the strait can't stop crying, and the boat has passed the Ten Thousand Mountains.