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People say, "Guilin's landscape is the best in the world." We took a wooden boat, rowed on the Lijiang River and enjoyed the scenery of Guilin.
I have seen the magnificent sea and the mirror-like West Lake, but I have never seen such water as Lijiang River. The water in Lijiang River is so quiet that you can't feel it flowing. The water in Lijiang River is very clear, and you can see the sand and stones at the bottom of the river. The water in Lijiang River is really green, as green as a flawless jade. A series of waterlines are displayed by the microwave excited by the paddle, which makes you feel that the ship is moving forward and the shore is retreating.
I have climbed the majestic Mount Tai and visited the Red Leaves Fragrant Hills, but I have never seen the mountains around Guilin. The mountains in Guilin are really strange. They rise everywhere, disconnected from each other, like old people, elephants, camels and strange peaks. The mountains in Guilin are really beautiful, like green barriers, like new bamboo shoots, brightly colored and reflected in the water; The mountains in Guilin are really dangerous. The dangerous peaks stand tall and the rocks are rugged. It seems that if you are not careful, you will fall.
This mountain is surrounded by this water, which reflects this mountain. Coupled with the clouds and snows in the sky, the green trees and red flowers in the mountains and the bamboo rafts on the river, you seem to have entered a continuous picture. It's really "the boat is above the blue waves, and people are swimming in the picture world".
Analysis of Guilin landscape texts.
The author of the article "Guilin Landscape" described the beauty of Guilin landscape in poetic and beautiful language. Displaying the wonders of the world vividly in front of people, people who have never been to Guilin have an immersive feeling, which is covered by beauty, mainly because the author uses a lot of rhetorical devices in his articles.
First, parallelism and beauty
The second paragraph and the third paragraph of the article use the same writing. "The water in Lijiang River is so calm ... so clear ... so green." "The mountains in Guilin are so strange ... so beautiful ... so dangerous ... this layout vividly describes the characteristics of Guilin's landscape. A word "true" expresses the author's admiration for the beautiful scenery. The rigor of sentence patterns enhances the language posture when reading aloud, and also strengthens the power of expressing feelings, which gives readers a strong shock.
Second, figurative beauty.
"Like an old man, like a giant elephant, like a camel", "like a green barrier, like a nascent bamboo shoot" vividly reproduces the various forms and bright colors of Guilin Mountain, shows the static beauty of Guilin Mountain, and enables readers to appreciate the magnificent landscape of Guilin.
Third, it is more beautiful.
Compared with the sea and the West Lake, the author is familiar with these scenery when writing about the Lijiang River, and some even have been to the West Lake and the sea. With the phrase "I have never seen water like Lijiang River", the author fully expressed his surprise and admiration when he saw the beautiful scenery of Lijiang River, which also aroused readers' interest and made people have an impulse to see it quickly.
Fourth, quote beauty.
"Guilin's landscape is the best in the world", an "A" word, describes the position of Guilin's beautiful scenery in the hearts of the world, immediately attracts readers and makes people feel anxious to read on. It's really "a word doesn't agree, suddenly enlightened"! At the end of the article, the phrase "above the blue waves, people roam in the illustrated world" not only takes care of the beginning, but also makes the content of the article more holistic, as if bringing readers into the beautiful scenery, making people linger and have endless aftertaste.
After reading this article, you can feel the beauty of Guilin's landscape and love the great rivers and mountains of the motherland. Taste the words carefully, read the language repeatedly, and learn from the author's expression methods.
First, I quote the famous saying "Guilin's landscape is the best in the world" at the beginning, and point out that Guilin is a famous and fascinating tourist attraction.
So naturally, there is a desire to paddle on the Lijiang River and enjoy the landscape of Guilin. The word "one" highly summarizes the wonders of Guilin's landscape, ranking first in the world. Let's describe this famous saying from two aspects: mountains and water.
Second, the second paragraph describes the water of Lijiang River.
The author doesn't write about the water of Lijiang River directly, but starts with the magnificent sea and the mirror-like West Lake, and then uses the word "que" to show that although these beautiful scenery are beautiful, they can't compare with Lijiang River, which shows how charming the water of Lijiang River is!
Then, by using rhetorical methods such as parallelism and metaphor, the three characteristics of Lijiang River are accurately and vividly rendered: quiet and clear,
Green. Use "I can't feel the flow" to highlight "quiet"; Use "you can see the sand and stones at the bottom of the river" to reflect "Qing"; Use "a flawless emerald" to describe green, and then use the feeling of sitting on a wooden boat to reproduce the charm of Lijiang River.
The third and third paragraphs also describe the mountains in Guilin.
First of all, it is so unique to set off the mountains in Guilin with the majestic Mount Tai and the fragrant hills with red leaves. Then write its characteristics of strangeness, beauty and danger. It uses a very appropriate metaphor and description, giving people an immersive feeling.
4. At the end of the article, the mountains and the water set each other off. It interweaves with clouds in the air, green trees and red flowers in the mountains and bamboo rafts on the river to form a wonderful landscape painting.
Finally, it ends with the poem "Sail above the blue waves, and people roam in the picture world", which not only summarizes the full text, but also echoes the first sentence "No.1 in the world". The context of the full text is clear, natural and smooth, giving people a beautiful enjoyment.
Extracurricular development
This is an intensive reading text, which describes the beautiful scenery of Guilin and expresses the author's love and praise for the natural scenery of Guilin.
The text is written in the way of "summarizing first and then dividing", grasping the characteristics of Guilin's landscape, and vividly describing the beautiful scenery of Guilin's landscape with beautiful language.
The text always begins with "Guilin's landscape is the best in the world". It not only summarizes the position of Guilin landscape in China scenic spots, but also explains the reasons why the author likes Guilin landscape. "Guilin's landscape is the best in the world" means that the beauty of Guilin's landscape ranks first in the world. "A" means first.
Then describe the water of Lijiang River and the mountains of Guilin respectively.
To write about the water of Lijiang River, I first use a sentence: "I have seen the magnificent sea and admired the mirror-like West Lake, but I have never seen such water as Lijiang River". Comparing the sea and the West Lake with the water of the Lijiang River means that the water of the Lijiang River is different from the "magnificent" of the sea and the "mirror-like" of the West Lake. The water of Lijiang River has a unique beauty. The word "que" shows that although the sea and the West Lake are beautiful, they are not as beautiful as the water phase of the Lijiang River, which shows how charming the water of the Lijiang River is! Then, using rhetorical devices such as parallelism and metaphor, the three characteristics of Lijiang River are accurately and vividly described: quiet, clear and green. Use "I can't feel it flowing" to highlight "static"; Use "the sand and stones at the bottom of the river can be seen" to express "clearness" and "a flawless jade" to describe "green", and then reproduce the tranquility of the Lijiang River by writing about the feeling of sitting on a wooden boat.
Then write about the mountains in Guilin. Write the mountains of Guilin with the characteristics of "strangeness, beauty and danger" First of all, it is so unique to set off the mountains in Guilin with the majestic Mount Tai and the fragrant hills with red leaves. Then, using the method of parallelism, through vivid metaphor and personification, the "strangeness, beauty and danger" of the mountain is written in detail. The "wonder" of mountains is manifested in the fact that the general mountains are gradually rising and continuous, while the mountains in Guilin are "one after another, not connected with each other", and various strange peaks are arranged on both sides of the Lijiang River. The "beauty" of mountains is that they are beautiful, which is manifested in bright colors. "Like a green barrier, like a newborn bamboo shoot" not only vividly describes the shape of the mountain like a "barrier" and a "bamboo shoot", but also vividly depicts the bright and bright colors of the mountain. The "danger" of the mountain is manifested in grotesque and overlapping high rocks. "It seems that he will fall down if he is not careful." It is the author's feeling at that time, giving people the feeling of being there. "Fingers falling, here refers to the towering rocks, so how dangerous the mountain is!
Finally, Guilin's mountains and waters are connected together and depicted as a perfect whole picture. The mountains are surrounded by water, and the water reflects the mountains. In addition, "clouds in the air, green trees and red flowers in the mountains, and bamboo rafts on the river" constitute a continuous and beautiful picture, which makes people linger. At the end of the article, the poem "Above the blue waves, people roam in the picture world" not only summarizes the whole text, but also expresses the author's admiration for Guilin's landscape. The meaning of this poem is: the cruise ship sails on the green river, and the tourists on board are like playing and watching in a beautiful picture.