Text analysis of the third lesson "Yantai's sea" in the sixth grade Chinese volume.

A Brief Analysis of Textbooks This article is a beautiful essay. In the first section, it describes the marine landscape of Yantai, a coastal city in China, in the form of "total-sub-total". The uniqueness of this city is mainly manifested in the different characteristics of winter, spring, summer and autumn. In particular, it is closely related to the theme of "Yantai's Sea", which makes people immersive. From the second season to the fourth season, the article describes the dignified in winter, the lightness in spring, the romance in summer, and the fullness and busyness in autumn. The last part summarizes the full text & Yantai's sea is a painting, a broad background and a magnificent stage. Generation after generation of Yantai people staged a magnificent drama here. This sentence not only summarizes the characteristics of Yantai, but also leaves readers with infinite reverie. The author's description of the key passage "Four Seasons" is mainly based on two clues. The first clue first introduces the different characteristics of the four seasons in Yantai; The latter clue is closely related to the joy and wealth brought by Yantai sea, which shows people's love for it. Learning objective 1 Understand the meaning of words such as "quiet, dignified and persistent" in the language environment. Appreciate the different characteristics of Yantai sea all year round, feel its beauty and temptation, and stimulate the love for the mountains and rivers of the motherland. Read the text with emotion and recite your favorite chapters. Teaching suggestion 1 Yantai, located in the north of Shandong Peninsula, is close to the Yellow Sea. As a famous fishing port in China, it has become an outstanding place because of its special geographical location. For the introduction of the city's scenery and history, teachers can ask students to collect some relevant information before class to deepen their impression and let students know something about the city. This paper describes the different characteristics of Yantai Sea in spring, summer, autumn and winter, which not only reflects the uniqueness of Yantai Sea, but also reflects the endless joy that the sea brings to people. Yantai people laugh here, work here, enjoy the gift of nature, express history and look forward to tomorrow. The scenery description and lyricism in this lesson are skillfully combined. What teachers should pay attention to in classroom teaching is to let students appreciate the scenery and feel their feelings by reading aloud in time while enjoying the beautiful scenery. (1) You can closely follow the central sentence in the last section of the text, "Yantai's sea is a painting with a broad background and a magnificent stage", so that students can find out the sentences first and feel the full text by listening to tapes or reading freely. (2) With regard to the characteristics of the four seasons of "winter, spring, summer and autumn" in Yantai, we can combine the four different words of "dignified, light, romantic, full and busy" to taste and read. Through two clues, that is, how does the text specifically describe the difference between the four seasons in Yantai and the sea? How do people behave? On the basis of students' repeated reading, deepen their understanding of the content of the text, taste the beauty of the text and feel its charm. The sentences in this article are very beautiful, especially the use of rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification. In the process of learning, we should make full use of different reading methods and give students enough time to appreciate and taste. Hill-like swells, like thousands of furious lions, bravely rushed to the embankment from the northern sky, splashing waves dozens of feet high and making thunderous noises. Sometimes, stone benches weighing hundreds of pounds on the shore are carried to the middle of the road dozens of meters away. The microwave rises, and white waves rush to the shore from the distant horizon in the north, laughing and chasing. As soon as they touch the rocks and beaches on the shore, they retreat shyly and then jump up like naughty children. In summer, the sea in Yantai is often like a mirror, just like a quiet and gentle girl. Similar to the above three sentences, teachers can make students fully understand and appreciate Yantai's sea by filling in the blanks, reading aloud in competitions and retelling their feelings. After students fully understand the characteristics of Yantai Sea, they should also pay attention to guiding students to collect information and cultivate their language application ability. According to the first question after class, let the students talk about "what else does Yantai look like in your eyes" to exert their imagination; According to the phrase "generations of Yantai people have staged magnificent dramas here", combined with the collected data, this paper talks about what glorious history Yantai once had and what efforts people are making for Yantai's current prosperity. Refer to Penglai, located in Penglai County, Yantai District, Shandong Province. It faces away from the Bohai Sea and looks at Long Island. It is an ancient city with mountains and seas. The city is not big, but the scenery is beautiful, especially Penglai Pavilion on Ya Dan in the north of the city. Since ancient times, it has been famous for its wonders such as "the flying fairy pavilion" and "a mirage". The beautiful natural scenery and the wonders of the sea and the city have left many myths: for example, the king of Qin visited the sun; The man of god threw the stone into the sea; Xu Fu went to the sea for medical treatment; The Eight Immortals crossed the sea and showed their magical powers ... and so on, all of which added a mysterious color to Penglai Wonderland. Practice activities According to the characteristics of the four seasons in Yantai described in the text, choose one of the seasons and draw "Yantai Sea". At the same time, this painting has a brief explanation. First, the main content of the text and the train of thought of the full text. Students, have you ever seen the sea? Magnificent, magnificent. Yantai, China is a city facing the sea in the north. The sea here has different customs all year round. In spring, microwaves rise on the sea, and the waves chase and play like naughty children; In summer, the level is like a mirror, just like a quiet and gentle girl; In autumn, the sea is exceptionally blue and the sky is exceptionally clear; In winter, the sea is choppy and unstoppable. What a wonderful sight it is! Let's walk into the sea of Yantai and feel the unique scenery. The article "The Sea of Yantai" vividly describes the different characteristics of Yantai's sea all year round and people's lives. The full text is full of love for beautiful nature and praise for life. The article * * * has six natural paragraphs and can be understood in three parts. The first part is the 1 natural section, which explains the geographical characteristics of Yantai until it is written that Yantai has unique maritime wonders. The second part is the second to fifth natural paragraphs, which specifically describe the different characteristics of Yantai's sea all year round and the life scenes of Yantai people. This part is divided into four levels to write the winter, spring, summer and autumn of Yantai Sea. The third part is the sixth natural paragraph, praising Yantai's sea and people. The second part of the text mainly shows us the beauty and magnificence of Yantai Sea and the diligence and wisdom of Yantai people. Focus on this part when reading. Second, the boutique house text wonderful paragraph appreciation. In winter, the dark brown sea looks dignified. The cold current from Siberia often sweeps across this sea area angrily. Hill-like swells, like thousands of furious lions, bravely rushed to the embankment from the northern sky, splashing waves several feet high and making a thunderous noise. Sometimes, stone benches weighing hundreds of pounds on the shore are carried to the middle of the road more than ten meters away. Every day, when huge waves hit the shore, many Yantai people and foreign tourists rushed to the shore to watch this spectacular scene against the cold wind. Others stood on the shore, taking pictures with tens of feet of waves as the background, regardless of their clothes being wet by the waves, forming a magnificent scenery. Appreciation In the author's pen, the four seasons in Yantai have different personalities. What impression has the sea left on us this winter? The first is modesty. Starting with dark brown, the author brings us into a magnificent atmosphere through visual effects. Then describe what you see further, and describe the sea of Yantai in detail from the dynamic aspect. First of all, explain the reason for the surge, which is caused by the cold current from Siberia. It is the frequent and aggressive cold current that has caused great changes in the sea surface. From far to near, the author shows the readers the changes of the sea surface. The surge "like a hill" describes the size of the waves. "Like thousands of angry lions, the surge is real. The words "wave after wave, perseverance" make us seem to see the tireless waves coming. The moment it hit the bank, it was even more thrilling. The waves are tens of feet high and sound like thunder. Even stone benches weighing hundreds of pounds will be carried out more than ten meters away. How powerful this wave should be! No wonder many people came to watch this moment despite the cold, obviously attracted by this spectacular sight and impressed by the majesty of nature! Here, people and scenery are integrated into one, forming a magnificent landscape. Doesn't this mean that Yantai's sea charm is endless? Comments on spring, the sea turns green. The microwave rises, and the white waves chase the shore from the distant horizon in the north with a smile. As soon as they touch the rocks and beaches on the shore, they retreat shyly and then jump up like naughty children. Spring is the season of sowing, and the sea is no exception. Fishermen who took off their winter clothes sailed across the calm sea, went to the breeding area to sow hope seedlings and looked forward to the harvest season. Appreciating this natural landscape, we can see the sea view of Yantai in spring. It is bright, full of vitality and hope. The author still starts with color, and a "green" meal makes people feel fresh and fresh. The sea is no longer a hill-like swell in winter, but there are microwaves, "chasing and running to the shore with a smile." How lively! The author described the scene of microwave blowing on the shore in detail and vividly with the words of "moving, shy, jumping up", which made people feel as if they were there, and they were very happy for the innocent romance of the waves. It is appropriate that the author calls for the waves like a naughty child. In spring, everything comes back to life. As the saying goes, "a year's plan lies in spring", and natural spring is the season of spreading hope. After writing the scenery, the article turns to the people who live in it. They seized the opportunity of spring and went to the breeding area to sow the seeds of hope. The hard work of Yantai people is reflected here. The author showed the beauty of Yantai to our readers. This part has a clear hierarchy. Write the color of spring sea water first, then write the waves in the order from far to near, and finally write the activities of people, which is clear and clear, so that readers can see at a glance. Third, the golden finger expression suggests using personification and figurative sentences to make the article vivid. When we read the article "The Sea of Yantai", when we appreciate that the four seasons in Yantai have their own characteristics and colorful colors, we will certainly feel more cordial to these sentences-(1) surging like a hill, like thousands of furious lions, rushing to the bank from the northern sky, splashing dozens of feet high. There was a thunderous rumble ... (2) When the microwave came up, white waves rushed to the shore from the distant horizon in the north, laughing and chasing. As soon as they touch the rocks and beaches on the shore, they retreat shyly, and then jump up like naughty children. (3) In summer, the sea in Yantai is often like a mirror, just like a quiet and gentle girl. In the early morning, the sun surfaced like a washed Le Ballon Rouge, dragging a long reflection on the sea. Every sunrise is fascinating. How well these sentences are written! Vividly describe the waves of Yantai sea and the newborn sun, as if in front of us, full of life. Let's see that the sea in different seasons has different metaphors in the author's works. In winter, the waves are like hills and thousands of furious lions. This metaphor makes the momentum of the waves real and hearty. What a creepy sight for thousands of furious lions! Looking at the waves in spring, like a naughty child, the child is naive and romantic. This metaphor gives people a lively feeling. The image of the waves suddenly became cordial. What is the sea like in Yantai in summer? Level as a mirror, let us see the calm sea, as calm as a mirror. The author compares Xia Hai to "a quiet and gentle girl", which is very apt and shows the quiet and calm characteristics of Xia Hai. From the above example, we can feel the effect of metaphor, which compares one thing with another by using the similarity between things, so that readers can have a more vivid understanding of the compared things and the articles are more vivid. In addition to metaphor, the author also gives the waves a personality color, as if they were alive. This is the application of personification. When writing about the sea in winter, the waves "advance wave after wave from the northern sky and pounce on the embankment persistently". Here, how persistent and tenacious the waves are, it reminds people of those who are struggling and brave. When describing the sea in spring, micro waves rushed to the shore from the distant horizon in the north, laughing and chasing. As soon as they touch the rocks and beaches on the shore, they retreat shyly and then jump up again. Do you feel the innocence of the waves from it? So cute and lively. With such a description, how can the article not be vivid and wonderful? Students, when we encounter descriptions in our homework, can we also learn from the author of Yantai Sea and use personification and metaphor to make our articles vivid? Fourth, the innovation and practice of Yizhiyuan 1, Yantai's sea has different colors, spring is light, summer is romantic, autumn is full, and winter is dignified. Can you draw the sentences in the text with your imagination? Try it, and then you can hold a small exhibition with the theme of "Song of the Sea" at home or in the middle of the night. Baidu found it, you can have a look.