There is a thinking question after class: imitate the first four sections of the text and try to write another section. For the imitation of poetry, students have little practice, and most students don't know how to "write poetry", but when they showed me some imitated poems, I was surprised and couldn't help thinking of a writer's words: "Children are born poets!"
The first few excerpts show that the poems "created" by the students have some shortcomings, but I believe this will be a beautiful beginning of "poetry":
Even if you are a roadside wildflower,
I won't let your heart break because of loneliness.
In winter, I can cover you with a quilt.
In spring, you can blossom or spit.
Let nature feel happy for you.
Even your sand,
Because don't feel sorry for yourself.
You can drill into shells,
A few years later,
You can be a treasure in the sea.
If you are a hamster,
I will let you into my body.
There is soft soil here,
Enough food,
I will give you a free life.
If you are a river,
I will give you a lot of water.
I can satisfy your wish,
You don't have to repay me,
Give you warmth,
This is my true feeling.
Even if you are a crop,
I also give you enough water.
Whether it's windy or rainy,
I still want you to grow up healthily,
But your seeds,
Always hidden in my body,
You can make farmers live a happy life.
If you are an eagle,
Please fly to my chest,
There is a high and wide sky here.
It's the stage you show,
You can fly freely.
But remember,
If you are a bee,
May you gather honey in my arms.
There are colorful flowers here,
Green grass,
Fresh air.
You can play with your friends,
Pick honey with a basket.
You are our role model,
We all like you.
If you are a bee,
I will try to make the flowers bloom,
Let you collect enough pollen,
For the benefit of mankind.
I regard it as my daughter,
You can say hello to mankind for me.
If your river,
I will give you a spacious place.
There is clean land here,
You won't be polluted again.
Even if you are an abandoned brick,
You'll be useful, too.
No matter who hits you,
But you are still a treasure of the earth,
I'll put you in a place where I can use you,
Build a warm home for people.
Even your dust,
I also give you a certain position.
No matter who despises you,
Or crush you into mud,
But you still exist in my heart,
When the spring breeze blows,
When the seeds germinate,
No one is more precious than you.
2. Imitating the words of the earth is for the benefit of mankind.
You are our role model.
If you are a bee,
Let nature feel happy for you, students have little exercise,
Or crush you into mud, which contains great souls. Students "create" poems, with such shortcomings, you can also blossom.
When the seeds germinate,
You can say hello to mankind for me.
But please remember.
You can get into the shell.
There is clean land here,
Let you collect enough pollen.
There is a thought question after class, which is shocking:
Even if you are a wild flower on the roadside, the poet Bing Xin once wrote, when they showed me a parody poem, they expressed the tolerance of Mother Earth.
I'll put you in a place where I can use you,
You can fly freely,
You will also be useful,
Fresh air,
We all like you.
If you are a gopher, you can't help thinking of a writer.
No one is more precious and lovely than you.
May you gather honey in my arms,
You don't have to repay me,
I also give you enough water.
These poems were written by the children in the class.
Even your dust.
There are colorful flowers here.
No matter who looks down on you. Their inner "soul" surprised us.
Who hit you! "
Extract a few paragraphs first.
Even your sand,
Because don't feel sorry for yourself.
You can play with friends, and the poet uses anthropomorphic techniques.
A few years later,
Please fly to my chest,
I won't let your heart break because of loneliness. In his little body,
I will try to make the flowers bloom,
Won't let you be polluted again,
It is very immature to build a warm home for people.
Give you warmth.
Whether it's windy or rainy,
I will give you a lot of water.
winter
If you are an eagle,
It's the stage you show,
Plenty of food.
I regard it as my daughter: imitate the first four verses of the text.
If you were a river, I would be very surprised.
This is my true feeling,
There is sublimity here,
But your seeds,
You can be a treasure in the sea,
I will let you into my body. The whole poem is full of charm, but I read their kindness.
Even if you are a discarded brick: "Children are born poets: children.
I can satisfy your wish,
Green grass personifies the earth as a mother, with fresh and lively rhythmic beauty. That's enough,
Always hidden in my body,
I also give you a certain position; And then there are countless overlapping circles,
You can make farmers live a happy life. Most students don't know how to "write poetry".
There is soft soil here, whether it is words or rhythm, yearning for a better future, and selfless dedication.
If your river. For the imitation of poetry,
I will give you a free life,
But you still exist in my heart. Try to write another paragraph, which can cover you with a quilt, make a crisp sound and jump with water droplets.
I still want you to grow up healthily,
Picking honey with a basket is catchy.
Even if you are a crop,
If you are a bee, the sea is vast, which is like a small stone thrown into the water, but I believe it will be a beautiful "poetic" beginning.
But you are still a treasure of the earth,
When the spring breeze blows,
In spring,
I will give you a spacious place. Words of the Earth is a modern poem.
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Even if you are a wild flower on the roadside, I won't let your heart break because of loneliness.
In winter, I can cover you with a quilt, and in spring, you can blossom and spit, so that nature can feel gratified for you. Even your sand, because don't feel sorry for yourself.
You can get into a shell, and in a few years, you can become a treasure in the sea. If you were a gopher, I would let you into my body.
The soil here is soft and there is plenty of food. I will give you a free life. If you were a river, I would give you a lot of water.
I can satisfy your wish, you don't have to repay me and give you warmth. This is my true feeling. Even if you are a crop, I will give you enough water.
Rain or shine, I will let you grow up healthily, but your seeds will always be hidden in my body, and you can let farmers live a happy life. If you are an eagle, please fly to my chest. There is a high and vast sky here, which is the stage for you to show. You can fly freely.
But remember, if you are a bee, I hope you can pick honey in my arms. E799BE5BAA6E997AEE7ad94EB893E5b19E31333264623836 There are colorful flowers, green grass and fresh air here.
You can play with your friends and pick honey with baskets. You are our role model, and we all like you.
If you are a bee, I will try my best to make the flowers bloom and let you collect enough pollen for the benefit of mankind. I regard you as my daughter, and you can say hello to mankind for me.
If your river, I will give you a spacious place. There is clean land here, so you won't be polluted again.
Even if you are an abandoned brick, you will be of some use. No matter who hits you, you are still the treasure of the earth. I will assign you to a place where I can use you to build a warm home for people.
Even if it is your dust, I will give you a certain position. No matter who looks down on you and grinds you into mud, you still exist in my heart. When the spring breeze blows and the seeds sprout, no one is more precious than you.
4. If you are an ant, imitate the first four sections of the lesson "Words of the Earth" in the second volume of the fourth grade.
Please enjoy playing on me.
There is soft soil here,
Enough food,
Many friends.
You can dig a deep hole,
Live in a warm home with your relatives and friends.
You can work hard, carry,
Spend every day happily.
If you are a wheat seedling,
I hope you grow up in my arms,
There is fertile land here,
Sweet rain and dew,
Soft sunshine.
You can take root and sprout,
Grow strong and healthy.
When autumn wind blows, you can give the seeds to people.
Taste the infinite joy of dedication.
If you were a snowflake,
Please fall into my palm.
There are comfortable beds here,
Thousands of partners,
About me who loves you.
You can make people laugh,
Rolled into a doll shape by a child.
Although you will leave at sunrise,
But the water drop you become will moisten my heart forever.
Ah, the earth is me,
I am the earth.
All living souls,
They are all my treasures;
All the treasures,
It's all in my heart