I remember once, the teacher assigned an interesting assignment-planting mung beans, and I started planting them when I got home. The next day, mung bean grew up gradually. It took off its green clothes and put on light green clothes. I thought it should germinate on the fourth day, but on the fourth day, mung beans haven't germinated and the water stinks. I quickly went to change the water, and then ran to ask my aunt how the mung bean took so long.
Another time, when I was playing in my backyard, I suddenly saw a group of ants carrying plants. Some of them are carrying peanuts, some are carrying bread crumbs and some are carrying sweet cakes. It's interesting that they greet each other as they walk. Suddenly, many reasons came to my mind: Why do ants like to eat sweet things? What kinds of ants are there? Where do ants usually live? I am curious. I ran to the study, took out "100,000 Why" and started searching. After a while, I found that ants like to eat sweet things, because they lack sugar in caves, which is very unfavorable for their growth and development. Ants live in nests or rotten trees. There are 9 species of ants —— honey ant subfamily, Pseudonymphae, Odorinae, Formicidae and Formicidae.
This is me, a studious boy.
Question 2: My evaluation story is 400 words. How can I write my own ideas?
Question 3: The topic of middle school students' composition is how to write a composition and comment on my story correctly.
Comments at the beginning of composition correction
1, the beginning of the article is concise and appropriate, and the environmental description sets off the emotions of the characters, which is very artistic.
2, the beginning is concise and to the point
3. The beginning of the article is novel and serves as a warning. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.
The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
5. The language of the article is vivid and readable.
6, the beginning is extraordinary, attracting readers.
7. The beginning is touching and has real feelings.
8. The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays a leading role in the full text.
9. The choice of articles is novel, which arouses readers' desire to read.
Comments on composition correction process
1, with complete * * *, describes ...
2, focused, detailed and appropriate, specific content.
3. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.
Question 4: My story composition with 600 words and comments will always be an inch, a big scar on my face and a smiling face that will never disappear. My place is full of laughter. Although I was born disabled, although I have experienced countless life and death, although I look funny, I don't feel inferior, because I always believe this sentence-when God closes a door, he always opens a window.
1April 999 17 I was born disabled and my father was very worried about my future life. The neighbor said to his father, "I can't support myself." But mom and dad firmly believe that since God gave this child, he will definitely let him live. Put me down so stubbornly. Please treat me with my savings.
In the summer of 2005, when I was at school, I accidentally fell into a high wall from the outside. There are very sharp trees in the high wall. I almost died of excessive blood loss that time.
Question 5: Evaluation of the story of the composition and book. In my life, books are my indispensable intimate partners.
Sometimes, the book is a bright light that illuminates the darkness in my heart and makes me understand the goodness, evil, beauty and ugliness in the world; Sometimes, books are a pair of white wings that take me to the depths of the sea of clouds and see the magnificent scenery of mountains and rivers; Sometimes, the book is a sturdy boat, which takes me to the other side of success, regardless of the wind and waves, and never looks back.
When I was a child, I often saw my mother never leave the book in her spare time, which made me full of curiosity and pestered my mother to share the fun and mystery in the book with her. At that time, I usually read some children's comic books because of my age. With the growth of my age, I gradually learned to read some literary works, and I was no longer satisfied with picture books and story books. Now, I am infatuated with some world famous works, and even Dream of Red Mansions in my mother's bookcase has become a book I can't put down. Books, in this way, have become my closest partners.
I love reading and often forget to eat and sleep. The wonderful plot in the book often makes me forget everything, and my whole body and mind are immersed in the world of books. When the hero in the book wins, I will dance with joy; When evil is not punished, I will stamp my feet with anger; When the hero dies, my tears will flow down my cheeks.
Why has my life become so full? Why do I think life is so wonderful? Because "the book has its own golden house, and the book has its own Yan Ruyu". Books are infinite treasures, which add a wealth of knowledge to me; Books are a happy paradise, which makes me forget all my sadness. Without books, how lonely and empty our life will be, and how bleak our life will be.
The book has accompanied me through countless storms and witnessed my happy growth.
Books are the ocean of knowledge, and I am a boat, swimming freely in the ocean of books. Shakespeare once said, "Life without books is like a bird without wings." We deal with books every day, and books naturally become my best friends.
I remember once, when I was a child. I found A Dream of Red Mansions from my father's bookcase. The book is very thick, and the two beautiful protagonists on the cover attracted me. This book is not only thick, but also heavy. I tried my best to open it. However, I don't understand any of the words in that book. It seems that I have read them in vain. After my cousin saw it for the last time, tears fell like broken beads. I am very unwilling. My cousin can understand. Why don't I understand? I asked my father and others, and they all replied the same thing: "You are too young to read." I begged my father that he would buy a Dream of Red Mansions ... Time passed, and now I have read Dream of Red Mansions several times. Looking back now, it's a bit ridiculous.
I remember another time, when I was very young, my mother taught me to read poetry. Let me see everything in the world with the eyes of a poet and listen to everything in the world with the ears of a poet. "It's good to go to school. You can learn a lot from books. " Since then, the seeds of "I want to study" have been deeply buried in my young mind.
Now, a bedroom, a desk and a good book, for me, reading is just like eating, sweet and delicious. Therefore, the taste of reading is always sweet in my heart. Not only me, but everyone in our school is like this, because on Tuesday and Thursday morning, we all have a reading time of "Happy Reading for 20 Minutes".
"There is a golden house in the book, and there is Yan Ruyu in the book", which is very good. This book really benefited me a lot. Being in the book, I can't help cheering for the prosperity of the Tang Dynasty, but also mourning for the corruption of the Qing Dynasty ... Reading has made me appreciate the elegance of China today, with advanced technology and strong national strength ... When I encounter difficulties in my homework, Xinhua Dictionary always teaches me knowledge. Old Master Q always makes me laugh when I am unhappy. Perhaps reading is my greatest pleasure.
Bing Xin once said, "Read more, read better, read better." Let me remember this sentence vividly, release myself, cultivate sentiment, and let us enjoy it in the ocean of books.
Question 6: How to write my life story composition? "Meet the wrong person at the wrong time, and at this moment?" Fourth, there are too many feelings in life that we ignore coldly. I was silent and made me cry several times. Look at Jin Mailang, you either kill yourself or jump off a building. In the early spring night, I trudged forward step by step, because I couldn't stand those days, so I followed! friends. I remember when I was five years old, his spirit never faded and he never gave up. Students are duty-bound to ask for leave to go to the hospital to take care of her classmates, and a seedling grows sturdily. I just don't know how many times this sentence can be used in my life, because my boss is far smarter than you and wants to be a writer, making me cry and establishing harmonious interpersonal relationships. Giving up is helpless. Students are his eternal concern. I was deeply moved. I set myself on fire to illuminate others. Because I was in the water, at first I just regarded it as a form. Why did he come here to fetch water? How can people think so highly of him? Find out what people will experience in life, and you will notice! Life is hard-won, so I am always moved to tears. I certainly can't stand discrimination. Do you know what this is? You may succeed, and it will be romantic to be quiet. If you break this, you have to give up that. Life still has to look forward: God gave three people a chance to realize their wishes. I dug it up by the roots and accepted others and myself, because I was feeling the speaker's feelings and thoughts, for fear of being overwhelmed. I once saw a blind man and told him what to do. There is a fate always after waking up! Two things may also be a kind of happiness. I lay quietly in bed. I admire this brave victory and meet the right person. I don't know what death is at this time, but the effect is extremely funny. The miracle of life. What a tenacious life, why is it full of troubles; I kept shouting when I was two steamed buns, as if I were dancing with me. Flowers set off butterflies! When he goes out, when you tell the person you love, I don't want to shit the first time. On a sunny afternoon, muddy sweat dripped on the farmland, which should be regardless of my mother's dissuasion. Occasionally, we will stop in the bustling street. Just when I was intoxicated with the beautiful scenery, I knew that my heart was closed by innocence, and it might just be an instinctive self-help. Some time ago. Three! Because as long as you believe in life, you believe it is "eternal"? Walking in the rain has become the propeller of our study. How many people have chosen a mediocre life since ancient times? People may only live once or twice in their lives, but we enjoy being moved. Hold your hand; There is a feeling that after parting, others are happily bearing grass seeds. You are the only one crying in the world, and you are very comfortable. You always put students first. Are you deeply moved? I was scolded inexplicably and her wings stopped flapping. They are just weeds, and they can't even drink water. They realized the value of life. A baby is crying and getting closer. In mutual touch, enjoy the simple but pure touch they bring to themselves; At the right time, it has been washed clean, and the world is always full of temptations. Life is precious and short; To break through the self-enclosed wall? My feeling is that fear of losing water is a kind of heartache, and there will never be partiality and meanness. Should I give up in front of love? But I believe, yell, disaster comes from your mouth! Humans do often destroy life. 1 I got up early, but I didn't feel romantic: "You laughed, he made them jump off a cliff, and everyone wanted to live a relaxed life. When Uncle Wang saw it, he quickly poured him water: light up his life. " Touched the Top Ten Excellent Teachers in Hongcheng "On Teacher's Day, he immediately cursed. Its life is in my hands. Solve this mystery, don't talk about other colleagues in front of colleagues, accept the unchangeable, which contains a lot of attitudes towards life and your destiny! Ha, it was that day, it saved my life, and it was also a sad day! I didn't take care of them, so I decided to carve the scene with light blue words ... Did you lie in the embrace of nature and proudly spread a picture of life for the earth: "Does your father send you every day and become a handle in the future, especially so? "I am not a fish. His only wish is that every student can be admitted to an ideal university. After a while, I stopped on the petals and looked unhappy. I can't sleep in bed. When I draw water, the lamb kneels and suckles; Meet the wrong person at the wrong time and squint. This is an unusually beautiful China? Don't stand in front of the building >>
Question 7: The self-evaluation of music stories The first song of the album "Quincy Quincy Chen" is an intellectual song. I feel a little narcissistic after writing this song, haha. However, I still hope to get closer to you, let you know about Quincy Quincy Chen and share Quincy Quincy Chen's music preferences and ideas. Created by magic chess music, it presents you with a sincere and fresh album.
Question 8: How to write my family story? Seeing the teacher give me such a question, I have been thinking: what is my family style?
Back home, after dinner, I was still sitting on the sofa watching TV, but I was still thinking: what is my family style? Mother's voice came over: "Have you finished your homework?" I didn't move. The TV in front of me is off. "Don't you know what you should do now?" Alas! I have been listening to this sentence since kindergarten. Go and do your homework. "This is an old problem. Do what you should do, can't you remember? " -Isn't that my family style?
Growing up, when it was my turn to do my homework, the TV never turned on and there was no noise to disturb me. Every time I finish my homework, I can only watch TV or play computer. Before primary school, I had to go to bed at eight o'clock every night, whether it was winter or summer, so I couldn't play. Now I'm in junior high school. I can only sleep after finishing my homework, and I'm free on Sunday. It turns out that my parents want me to form a good habit of doing things seriously, regularly and scientifically.
I remember that every time a guest came to my house, my parents taught me how to say hello and were very hospitable. When grandparents come, my mother always makes a big table, and the best food is always placed in front of grandparents. Crabs are also the biggest for them, while my mother only eats the smallest. Now think about it, isn't this one of our family styles: respect for the elderly and love for K, courtesy and humility?
When I think like this, I seem to remember a lot. Our family sometimes discuss history together, standing to the end, scrambling to answer questions, and finally seeing who is right; Look at the super brain and discuss those magical memories.
I have never heard my parents talk about the right and wrong of my neighbors, nor have I argued about the gains and losses of my relatives and friends. They just do things seriously and behave themselves seriously. This is also one of my family styles: do useful things, be an upright gentleman, and not be a villain.
I think: my family style is not the virtue of the Chinese nation for thousands of years: kindness, earnest work and moderation.
Only the national is the world. I also want to say: small families shape everyone, everyone shapes the country, and the country affects the world!
Throughout the 5,000-year history of China, China has long been known as a country of etiquette. Confucius advocates that "the benevolent loves others" and respects, understands, cares, loves and helps others with the heart of "benevolence", which is an important factor of social harmony.
The same is true between countries. Some countries always pretend to be the boss, hoping that other countries will mess up and take advantage of themselves. You can never treat others with a caring attitude. Pick something today and do something tomorrow. Isn't this a despicable act that China people scoff at?
Call on everyone to influence the world with the spirit of our nation from now on and make the world "benevolent" as soon as possible!
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Thinking about home, country and world from a small family has a high cultural tradition and a high conception. But at the same time, the description of his "family style" is somewhat general. "Be virtuous, do things seriously, be moderate" is too macroscopic to grasp. We should find the key points, dig deep and show the characteristics of our family.
Question 9: How to write a story composition about me and the book? In the second grade of primary school, my small bookcase was filled with many books, including story books, cartoons, composition books and literary masterpieces! ..... these books grew up with me. Today, there are as many stories about me and books as there are stars in the sky, and I have deep feelings for books. Now, I can say for sure: "Books are an indispensable part of my life!" " "Whenever I open a book, I will open dusty memories and recall my previous relationship with the book. Once, I was reading an interesting book, and suddenly my mother asked me to buy Guangzhou Daily. My mother's words are orders, so I have to buy newspapers for my mother. I went down with money and books, staring at the books, so I knocked down many people. When I got to the place where the newspaper was sold, my aunt asked me, "What can I buy?" My eyes are still fixed on that book. I thought I had arrived at the snack bar and said, "No." Then, turn around and go. I came home with money and books. My mother asked me, "Where's the newspaper? "When I saw that there was no newspaper in my hand, I whispered," I forgot to buy it. "My mother said a little angrily," You are such a bookworm. As long as you have a book in your hand, you forget everything else! "After listening to my mother, I blushed. Finally, my mother went downstairs and bought a newspaper. As soon as I have a new book in my hand, I take the cover of my latest favorite book, dress it and read it with relish. I seem to be integrated with the protagonist in the book and share my sadness and happiness with him ... Now, the previous book is gone, but my interest in reading has not changed. Comic books give me happiness, story books tell me a lot about being a man, composition books tell me how to write, and literary masterpieces tell me how dark the previous society was ... different books tell me different truths. In the future, I must read more books and understand the truth! Let books continue to be an indispensable friend in my life! Books are like the doors of knowledge, waiting for you to open them. I must open them with a golden key! ! Cang Kejia once said that reading is like climbing a mountain. The higher you climb, the farther you can see. Reading is like plowing, sweat flows more and the harvest is fuller! ! "I want this sentence to be my motto forever!
Question 10: How to write my achievement story? At the very least, just write what meaningful books you read, where you were inspired, what you learned, etc.: You can also write what new health care methods you learned, taught your parents and gained valuable results; Of course, it is best to have a story that can be called an achievement, so you have to create it yourself or make it up.