First, why do you want to write a composition about labor?
Second, writing labor composition writing strategies
Second, the three theories of labor.
First, why do you want to write a composition about labor?
In April this year, the Ministry of Education officially issued the compulsory education curriculum plan and curriculum standards, which completely separated labor from the original comprehensive practical activity curriculum. Among them, according to different classes, the goal of "classified storage, family cleaning, cooking, home beautification and daily life labor" was formulated and implemented in the fall semester of 2022.
Second, writing labor composition writing strategies
Provide you with writing strategies from three daily aspects: "cleaning", "cooking food" and "planting observation"
Subject 1: cleanliness and hygiene
Pay attention to your key movements and write down the twists and turns of things with some metaphors or exaggerations. It will be more interesting to have twists and turns in the delivery process, which can be expressed by the rhetorical devices I have learned before. Take "mopping" as an example. If you don't delay or delay less, there will be twists and turns. What is the state at first, what is the state after a period of time, and what is the state at last. This kind of twists and turns may be exaggerated.
The twists and turns can be the things themselves, and sometimes they can also be psychological. Due to twists and turns, the article is lively and easy to arouse readers' interest in reading.
Topic 2: Cooking food
Students should write "cooking food" from the following angles: "new idea" and "connotation".
1) Pay attention to ingredients and cooking methods.
The forms of cooking are frying, boiling, frying, frying and steaming. The key to cooking is to master the heat, the timing of cooking and the use of seasonings. Every dish has its own way, and every dish has its own flavor. Take the example of "cooking" that students often write. You can't just say that the food is cooked, you should make it clear how to fry the food, and whether there are any tips to make the food oily or green.
2) Pay attention to parent-child communication
I believe that many friends' introductory tutors in the process of cooking learning are their own family members. In the process of writing and cooking, they can pay attention to parent-child communication and make the dialogue between parents and children gentle and lovely. "Hurry up, hurry up, the oil pan is smoking!" "Have you spilled oil on your face?" "The first time I ate my daughter's cooking, I was so happy ..."
3) Experience self-reliance and confidence
In fact, most children are not schoolmasters. But cooking is different. The cooking of ingredients depends on your own control, and the color, fragrance and shape depend on your own creativity. In the process of cooking, especially exercise a person's overall planning ability. Whether you are in a hurry or in an orderly way depends entirely on your thinking ability and practical ability. From stupid to smart, from slow to fast, from poor to good, are all manifestations of our ability to improve. You might as well write down these feelings and think about the meaning of labor.
Topic 3: diary of planting observation
Keeping an observation diary is to record what you encounter and do every day. Often from the perspective of the first person-"I". Write down what you saw, heard, did and thought in your life that day.
1) Observe carefully.
When observing, you should look with your eyes and find its appearance characteristics and changes; You can also smell it with your nose to see how it tastes; You can also listen with your ears and feel its sound; Even taste with your tongue, touch with your hands, and pay attention to feeling things from multiple angles, especially the changes of things. ?
2) The image should be accurate.
Accuracy means writing down what you observe. The characteristics and changes of written things should be accurate, and they should not be made up and whimsical. Image is the use of metaphor, personification, parallelism and other rhetorical devices to write the changes and characteristics of animals and plants in vivid language. For example, you often write "planting bean sprouts". You can write "After two or three days, bean sprouts spread out around your waist and drill out of the ground, three or four centimeters long, wearing a beautiful green skirt." Vivid image, so that readers can see and hear.
Second, the three theories of labor.
On model worker Wen Yi;
Today is May Day, I want to be here? A normal day? Take part in a very meaningful labor. In the morning, I heard grandpa say that he would give vegetable fields? Fertilize vegetables. I think: this should also be counted as a labor. So I went to grandpa to try? Handcuffs.
I didn't expect grandpa to readily agree? Probably because grandpa wants to exercise himself. Arrive? In the afternoon, we were in high spirits. I ran fastest and rushed to the vegetable field? , see? Green vegetable seedlings, including lettuce, cowpea, green beans, peppers, tomatoes, cucumbers and eggplant ... they are thriving, but what about our food? Pesticide man! Pick farmyard manure first.
Before grandpa came to the septic tank with a bucket in his hand, I began to exert myself on the first bucket. Exclusive news? A lot of farm manure, and you spilled it? Half, this is equivalent to drawing water from a bamboo basket-with a sieve, I think? One way is to scoop only a little more than half a cent per spoon (because of me? Gas? Big), so it's ok? , but? I think it's plump and realistic, and it takes a lot of spoons to be ok. May I? I am willing to waste my time like that. I frowned and thought about it. I just use a few leaves as a prodigal son. To prevent it from spilling out, I didn't expect it to really work, so the second bucket accelerated? Speed. But come out with your head? Beads of sweat, are your clothes wet? . Then, grandpa picks farmyard manure? Vegetable field? I saw a lot of sweat on my grandpa's head, and I was very tired? . I took the initiative to say to my grandfather, "Grandpa, you have a rest first, and I'll water the vegetables."
Grandpa told me? I practiced the essentials of fertilization according to grandpa's instructions. After all, Grandpa, practice makes perfect. Are they all? Hands? But I'm still a rookie. Pour a spoonful of farm manure as soon as you come up? Grandpa said to me again, "When did you drop it? How much can you pour? Otherwise, food will drown. " I tried to pour it carefully again, but I didn't expect it to be much better in the future? Grandpa also praised it? Me.
Labor is a kind of effort and also a kind of hardship. For example, today, I shed? A lot of sweat, after all, "weeding at noon, sweat dripping down the soil"! Hard work is glorious, and the working people are great. Labor is also equal to serving the people. I will serve the people today? Service.
Article 2 on model workers:
On May Day, I went back to my hometown with my parents. On both sides of the road, trees are shaded and scattered with small wild flowers, which are so dazzling and bright. We couldn't help singing, and the birds sang along.
When I got home, my parents were watching TV, so I asked my friends to play. After playing for a while, I felt bored, so I went to play in the fields with my grandmother. When I came to the field and saw some vegetable seedlings cooked by the sun, I decided to save them-water them and let them enjoy themselves!
I found a bucket full of water and asked my mother to help me lift it to the ground and use a small bowl as a ladle. My mother looked at me so seriously and said, "Son, I'll water with you." I said, "All right." We began to work. I first scoop water from the bucket with a small bowl, and then gently pour it into the roots of the seedlings. The water soon ran out, and I asked my mother inexplicably, "Mom, why is the water I just poured gone?" My mother told me, "Because it hasn't rained for a long time, the seedlings are thirsty. They're just like you. When they are thirsty, they want to drink enough at once. " After listening to my mother's words, I poured a bowl of water for Xiaomiao. The seedlings are full and the leaves are fresh and shiny in the sun.
The sun is scorching the earth, and my mother and I are so tired that we are all sweaty and out of breath. Mother said, "Let's have a rest, son. We are so tired. " I said, "no, today is labor day, so we should take good exercise." And you often teach me not to give up halfway and stick to it. " Mother had no choice but to accompany me to water the seedlings.
After a while, I was too tired to complain, so I said, "Mom, you have a rest." Unexpectedly, my mother raised her hand and said loudly, "I agree!" " "We sat in the shade and enjoyed the cool, and a breeze blew, which was really comfortable! Vivi is also dancing softly, as if to say to me, "Thank you, little friend. "
It was dusk before I knew it. When I got home, I said, "Although I was very tired today, it was very interesting, because I realized the hard work of the farmer's uncle in farming and the joy of labor!"
Model worker essay 3:
May 1 day is the international labor day, and people will not miss this wonderful time to play, and our family is no exception. Want to know where we went? Then keep watching!
At six o'clock in the morning, I was woken up by my mother and asked me if I wanted to climb the Phoenix Mountain. I said happily, "Yes! Of course I want to go! " When the things were ready, we set off.
As soon as I set foot on Phoenix Mountain, I smelled a faint earthy smell. Looking around, grass, safflower and green trees grow lush and full of vitality. Birds are chirping in the sky, as if to say, "Ah! How beautiful! How beautiful! "
In a short time, we came to the "Erlongtan" halfway up the mountain, only to see two lifelike "faucets" spraying water into the pool, splashing water half a meter high in the pool, which was really beautiful. I asked my father inexplicably, "How many years has this faucet been running?" Where does its water come from? "Dad smiled and said to me," Son, this water belongs to the mountain reservoir, and it is connected to the Longkou with a pipe. Due to the great drop of water level, the spectacle of "dragon spitting water" has been formed. Do you know? "
After dad solved the mystery, we continued to climb. 10 minutes later, our family took a walk in the shopping mall of the Agricultural Bank of China cadre school. Wow! It is really beautiful here. Tall eucalyptus trees stand neatly on the sidewalk, like soldiers being reviewed. Flowers are everywhere, and the grass is dazzling green. It really makes people forget themselves and enjoy this intoxicating beauty.
Needless to say, everyone went out to travel on May Day, but many people still came to visit Fenghuang Mountain. Ah! How cool it is to be close to nature!