I was shocked to hear that your school beat the opponent in the first middle school students' debate competition in our province and won the championship, which showed the good spirit of middle school students in our city and won the honor for our city! Sincere congratulations. At the same time, we should take this competition as a new starting point and fully implement quality education. In the new journey, you in Do not forget your initiative mind will make persistent efforts to contribute to the development of education in our city.
The answer 1 "surprised" was changed to "happy"; ② "Your school" was changed to "Your school"; (3) "Beat the opponent" was changed to "Beat the opponent"; ④ Change "must" into "hope"; ⑤ Replace "adding bricks and tiles" with "writing a new chapter"
Explain this problem in detail and examine the appropriateness of students' language expression. To answer such questions, we must first make clear the requirements of the questions. For example, this question, "The following is a fragment of a congratulatory letter sent by the Education Bureau of a school after the debate team won the provincial middle school students' debate competition, and there are five inadequacies. Please find and correct it. "Candidates should pay attention to the occasion of language use, the objects used and the relationship between objects." "Shocking news" generally refers to bad things, mostly refers to "bad news" and "bad news", which is not applicable to the occasion of "congratulatory letter"; Improper use of "your school" refers to "expensive" when referring to things related to the other party; Defeat the opponent "is used improperly and the tone is too heavy, so it can be changed to" defeat the opponent "; "Convinced" means certain and necessary, and the tone is too heavy, so it can be changed to "hope"; It is not appropriate to add bricks and tiles. Adding bricks and tiles "means constantly adding bricks and tiles when building a house." Later, it means doing some work and doing your best to use it for yourself. Here is a congratulatory letter from the Education Bureau to the school. If it is not used properly, it should be changed to "write a new chapter".
There are many irregular or inappropriate usages in the following letter. Please find five and correct them.
Dear Mr. XXX,
I received beautiful jade and cigarettes. I watched them over and over again and deeply admired them. Your profound knowledge of ancient poetry and unique interpretation method have helped my poetry creation a little, and I feel ashamed. Here, according to your request, I took the liberty to make some corrections. I am sending it back with the letter for your reference.
Shunzhu
Dongan!
Mr Xx
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Answer ① The title "Dear Mr. XX" must be capitalized ② The greeting "Dongan" must be capitalized ③ The word "send" should be changed to "read" ⑤ The word "a little" should be changed to "great" ⑤ The word "elegant" should be changed to "correct".
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Explain this question in detail to examine students' ability to express themselves properly. There are two problems in language appropriateness: appropriateness and stylistic appropriateness, which mainly meet the special requirements of special problems. Proper style should pay attention to the speaker's identity, environment, respect, subject and object, and the use of "modesty" and "honorific words". This theme mainly examines the appropriateness of style. In this topic, the stem has pointed out that this paragraph is a "letter" and that "there are many irregularities or inappropriateness in the use of this letter". After reading this letter carefully, we can find that: ① In the letter format requirements, the title should be capitalized, so the title "Dear Mr. XX" must be capitalized; In the letter format requirements, the congratulatory message should be written in the top case, so the congratulatory message "Winter Insurance" should be written in the top case; "Send" is a modest word, and the word "present" means that you respectfully show the letter to the other party. Send, to put it bluntly, is "send". Here is a letter from someone else, which is inappropriate and should be changed to "send"; (4) "Take a look", read it again (mostly used to express approval), which is generally used for subordinates to ask their superiors to read things or articles sent by them, and belongs to honorifics. What I mean here is that after reading the articles posted by others, the expression is improper and should be changed to "reading"; 5 "a little", a little; A little bit. It is not modest enough to be used here, and the expression is inappropriate. It should be changed to "great"; ⑥ "elegant and upright", honorific, when giving your poems and paintings to others, please ask them for advice. What I mean here is that I have revised someone else's article, which is inappropriate and should be changed to "correction".
20. The following is part of a short message sent by a middle school to Professor Zhang, who is coming to give a lecture on teaching reform. There are five mistakes in expression, please find out and correct them. (5 points)
I heard that Mr. Wang will come to our school to give a lecture on teaching reform in a few days. On behalf of all the teachers and students, I would like to express my warm congratulations! Listening to Mr. Wang's report will make our middle school teachers have higher teaching goals, more advanced teaching concepts and more diverse teaching methods. I sincerely hope Mr. Wang will spare no effort to make this lecture a complete success!
I heard it changed to good news; Congratulation was changed to welcome; Listen to change; Change lofty to lofty; Turn weakness into strength
20. The following is a fragment of a report given by a college student who was invited back to his alma mater in high school. There are five inappropriate words in it. Please find out and correct it. (5 points)
I am honored to report my study and life to my alma mater this time. In the school history museum, I was envious and ashamed to see many successful alumni listed in the who's who of school history. The students were not good, so some of my poor works were sent to my alma mater. Please keep them. There are so many teachers present today that I don't have time to thank them one by one. I must find another time to visit and give advice in person. There may be something wrong with my speech, so please let me know.
20. Reference example ① Change "long column" into "honor column"; ② Change "bad" into "incompetent", "unworthy" or "corrupt"; (3) changing "teaching" into "listening"; ④ Change "possibility" into "necessity"; ⑤ Change "informing" to "criticizing and correcting".
20. The following is a fragment of the first draft of a notice from a school, five of which do not meet the requirements of writing style. Please find and correct it. (5 points)
The sewers in our student dormitory are often blocked. The logistics department carefully investigated the cause and found that the pipe was old and needed to be replaced. The school plans to start construction on July 15. During the construction period, the summer vacation is coming. For the sake of safety, all students are required not to stay at school during the summer vacation. I hope everyone will cooperate.
Change "blocking" into "blocking"; Change "pipeline" to "pipeline"; Change "replacement" to "replacement"; Change "plan" to "scheme"; Replace "will" with "positive".
The following is the main content of an invitation letter, five of which are inappropriate. Please find out and correct it.
The 4th "Challenge Cup" Model United Nations Conference for Middle School Students is scheduled to be held in Wangfujing Hotel, Beijing from May 5 to 7, 2018/kloc-0. During the meeting, the organizing committee will take time to hold a forum, invite famous experts to attend the meeting, and discuss with parents the cultivation of international talents under the background of globalization.
We sincerely invite you to read this letter and sign up for the meeting with your children. We will try our best to provide services and expect your children to win the favor of the judges with their wonderful performance.
Answer (1) Change "busy" to "grand" (2) Change "busy" to "personally" (3) Change "reading" to "reading" (4) Change "hard work" to "go all out" or "vigorously" (5) Change "vigorously"
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The detailed explanation of this question examines the appropriate language expression ability. There are generally two kinds of language appropriateness. One is that the style is appropriate, that is, the article or discourse should meet the requirements of the style, which is mainly manifested in the special format and language requirements of the style. For example, classical Chinese words are generally not used in spoken English. First, the appropriate style pays attention to the identity and occasion of the speaker, which is mainly manifested in the praise and criticism of terms and the appropriate use of words. This question mainly examines humility, identity and the appropriateness of subject and object. For example, "asking for leave" means asking others to take time out to participate in activities, which is not suitable for the subject and object of language. Modesty and respect are not appropriate. "Dedicated" others to help themselves, here with the wrong object. "Love" refers to top-down appreciation and love, and also refers to others' appreciation and love for themselves.
20. The following is a broadcast of a campus radio station, which contains five inappropriate expressions. Please find and modify. (5 points)
Biography of luliang heroes (a novel) was written by a famous writer and Rong in China. Book ***80 times, is a true portrayal of Lvliang grass life history. In order to improve students' reading appreciation ability, the school radio station will broadcast special programs to explain novels for everyone, and a hotline will be set up at that time, and teacher wang hong will ask students related questions. Stay tuned!
20. (1) "Lvliang pod male novel biography" to "luliang heroes novel biography"; ② Change "department" to "yes"; (3) "Book * * 80 times" is changed to "Book ***80 times"; (4) Delete "all" or change to "all"; ⑤ Change "ask" to "answer". (1 one quota)
Analysis: The paragraph given in this question is a broadcast draft, and the contents in brackets cannot be read. The brackets should be removed and the biography of luliang heroes (novel) should be changed to the biography of luliang heroes; Broadcast manuscripts should be colloquial and easy to understand. The word "Xi" is a written language with the characteristics of classical Chinese and should be changed to "Yes". In the same way, "Book ***80 times" should be changed to "Book ***80 times"; "All" is easily misunderstood as "none", which leads to ambiguity. It can be changed to "Du" or deleted. "Inquiry", honorific, refers to others' inquiries about themselves. It is not appropriate to answer questions for students, but it can be changed to "answer".
2 1. In the following sentences, the appropriate expression is ().
A.he is a poor orphan. He was taken care of by my parents when he was a child, so he often comes to see us now.
B. Mr. Yang is still working hard in his seventies. As his high feet, we are both proud and ashamed.
C. this article has just been written, and neither the point of view nor the text is mature enough. Please give me your advice.
D. Because of the serious traffic jam on the road, when I arrived at the appointed place, the other party had been waiting for a long time.
Answer c
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This question examines students' ability to distinguish whether oral expression is reasonable or not. Oral expression is a common problem in Chinese, so the language used when communicating with people should be euphemistic, while polite language reflects a person's quality and identity and is conducive to mutual communication, so you should be polite and decent when communicating. Item a "thank you" is a commendatory term, which is used to show that others have helped you, not for themselves; Item B, "Gao Zu", means a good horse and a good horse, but talent is still respected. Later, it is often used to address other students as honorifics, but not for yourself; Item c is correct; Item D "Wait" means to wait respectfully for others, but not for others. So choose C.
1, thank you for your sincere invitation many times, and you will definitely go to dinner on time tomorrow. ("insensitive" means refusing because of lack of ability, which should be changed to "respect is better than obedience")
Li Hua made an oath at the class meeting, studying hard in the cold window for ten years, galloping in the examination room, and winning prizes every month! Horse's teeth have increased in vain, a self-deprecating word, which means that he has increased in age, but he has made no achievements in his studies or career. )
The editor said to the author, "I have read your novel, and I have corrected my shortcomings." (Correction)
Today is my uncle's seventieth birthday. I prepared a gift for him in advance to express my heart. I hope he will like it. (There are big and small families, changed to family uncles)
I will accept the special products you gave me. ("smile" means asking others to accept their own gifts, and here it is used to accept others' gifts by themselves. )
You asked me to find a specific medicine for your mother's heart disease in the local area. I will definitely help you. Please rest assured. ("Go all out to help" is a compliment, which refers to the great help of others, not to help others by yourself, but to "do my best". )
7. I will send you a present from my client. I believe you will like it. ("gift" is a kind of honorific, which refers to the gift from the other party, etc. It is not appropriate to give gifts to others by yourself, so it can be changed to "gifts". )
We specially invited experts to give a lecture entitled "Healthy campus, nip in the bud", and students are welcome to visit at that time. ("patronage" is an honorific word, "lightness" means "adding luster" and "concern" means "visit". "Visit" means: "Your coming will add luster to (me)." At first, it was a courtesy for the host to visit guests, and later it was a courtesy for the store or service industry to welcome customers to their homes. Change "patronage" to "participation" in this question. )
9. We will invite famous writers to carefully select and publish your poor works. (representative work)
10, many students came to the scene and participated in the "I made an appointment with a poem" activity organized by the school poetry club. (coming)
1 1. We invite you to be our consultant, and we will be honored if you can be accepted. (Right? )
12. A student returned to his alma mater after graduation. When he saw the head teacher of that year, he said excitedly, "Teacher, I have heard a lot about you. Are you all right? " (Long time no see)
13. When the host said goodbye to the guest, the guest said, "Please stay and come back another day." (below)
14, as a professor's student, you don't consider academic progress, which is really a barrier! A: "Paimen Wall" means that you are ashamed of your heritage. "Yi" means to humiliate others and feel guilty. Say more modest words. The sentence says that the other party is not suitable. )
Wang Xin is ambitious and down to earth. He is enthusiastic about helping others, regardless of gains and losses. I like him and became good friends with him. In ancient times, black eyes were called blue eyes, indicating admiration and respect for people, and "value" means being valued, indicating being valued and preferential treatment. Generally speaking, the other person values himself, such as "how much." It is inappropriate to say that you value others here. )
16, after graduating from senior three, he gave me his carefully summarized notes. I was very moved and determined to save them. ("Huicun", please save it. Giving away photos, books, etc. is often used in the previous paragraph. In the sentence, self-help is improper. )
17, many years after graduation, the students have been grateful for your education. On this holiday season, I wish the teacher a happy holiday! (right)
18. We sincerely invite you to attend the meeting and give serious guidance to our activities. "Serious guidance" is not appropriate, nor is it appropriate to make such a request to the invited object. )
19. There is something wrong with the following invitation: The Youth League Committee of our school decided to hold a lecture on "I love my motherland" on/0/8 this month. You are a famous speaker and have a wealth of knowledge about speeches. ? We sincerely invite you to attend the meeting and give serious guidance to our activities. Please come then. (Lack of specific time and place)
20. Mr. Wang's representative work "Autumn is not far away" has been published, and this issue will be aimed at readers. ("Yes" means to ask for correction and use the wrong object. )
2 1, Teacher Yu just retired and received a letter from student Xiao Wang, which wrote: "Now that you have left me, your voice and smile are in my heart. I will definitely remember your teaching, study hard and strive to be admitted to a key university. " ("voice, face and smile are everywhere" is often used to describe the death of a loved one. )
22. When Teacher's Day arrived, Xiao Wang called the teacher and said that he would go and have a look. The teacher said, "Welcome to ask questions." Q: Courtesy, excuse me, especially thank you. )
23. Xiao Wang stood up and said, "What Professor Chen said just now was a brick and a jade. What I want to talk about next can only be regarded as dog tail and mink. " (It is modest to throw a brick to attract jade)
24. Seeing that you are still so tough at the age of 95, we are sincerely happy and wish you a long life. ("Long life" means living for another five years, which is not suitable for a 95-year-old man. )
25. An invitation: "I'm moving to a new house tomorrow. In order to thank you for your congratulations, I have prepared a thin wine at your house ..." ("Your house" is changed to "home" or "my humble abode")
26. Yang Guang News Network: Recently, many rainstorms have blocked the roads in Lugu Lake Scenic Area ... The stranded passengers are expected to return to Lijiang tomorrow. (The word "hope" is changed to "hope" (the broadcast cannot be homophonic)
I am glad to receive the invitation from the conference. I'm sorry that I can't attend the meeting in person because I'm not feeling well recently. (Change "tall feet" to "students". )
28. Although I have graduated for many years, I still miss my teacher very much. (Change "mourning" to "feeling")
I just stopped by my aunt's house. She had something to do. I have to look through idle books and watch TV. ("Excuse me" is changed to "Leave". )
30. The following is a letter of recommendation from a college student to a university professor, five of which are inappropriate. Please find and correct:
My name is Liu, and my silly brother Liu Fengting is your former student. His appreciation of your character and knowledge has made me admire you for a long time. I hope you will be lucky enough to accept me as an apprentice. I have bought all your works, and I will send you a paper today. Please read it. Thank you very much
Answer 1 silly brother → my brother? 2 appreciate → appreciate very much? 3 Delete "Lucky"? 4 Huicun → Assemble? ⑤ Reading → Teaching
Detailed test analysis: This test examines language expression ability. When answering such questions, we should focus on the context, find the right object, pay attention to the occasion, grasp the style and judge carefully. (1) "Silly Brother" is a courtesy name to compare with his younger peers. It is incorrect to call brothers and sisters in the materials, and it should be changed to "family brothers". (2) "Appreciation" refers to recognizing the talent or value of other people's works and giving them high attention or praise. Mostly used for predecessors to descendants, leaders to subordinates, and masters to students. It is not appropriate to use it on yourself and teachers in the materials, and it can be changed to "admire". (3) "Lucky" means lucky and lucky. It is inappropriate to say that the professor is "lucky" to accept himself as a disciple and should be deleted. "Huicun" is a tribute, which means please keep it. It is often used in the first paragraph when giving away photos, books, etc. Material refers to the collection of professors' works, which can be changed to "collection" if it is inappropriate. ⑤ Reading is a compliment to reading other people's works or letters. It is inappropriate to mention in the material that the professor reads his own articles, and it should be changed to "teaching".
20. The following is the first draft of a broadcast from the school radio station, five of which are unsatisfactory. Please find and correct it. (5 points)
Student: Hello, everyone! Welcome to campus broadcasting. Today's theme is "Courtesy on earth". For more than 5,000 years of Chinese civilization, China enjoys the reputation of "the state of etiquette". As a new generation of young people, we should learn, understand and abide by etiquette, and don't do anything that violates etiquette.
20.① Change "listening" to "listening"? ② change "today" to "today"? ③ Change "transcendence" into "transcendence" ④ Change "enjoyment" into "possession"? ⑤ Change "reputation" into "title"
20. The following is a fragment of the first draft notice from a student union in a school. There are five inappropriate parts in it. Please find and correct it. (5 points)
According to the work plan of the Student Union, a meeting on the work of the Student Union is scheduled to be held in the multifunctional hall on the fourth floor of the school complex after the third class this Thursday afternoon. I hope everyone will tell each other after seeing the notice and have to come; Please ask the class teacher for leave in advance and visit us on time. Students will be strict in attendance and will not attend the meeting without reason.
20.(5) ① Change "plan" to "plan" or "arrangement"; (2) Change "tell" to "tell"; ③ Change "no" to "no"; ④ Change "sponsorship" to "participation" (or "participation" and "participation"); ⑤ Change "at that time" to "at that time". (65438+ 0 point for each place)
20. The following is a part of the letter of recommendation written by a normal university graduate to a middle school, in which there are five linguistic inadequacies. Please find out and correct them. (5 points)
I have a correct learning attitude, study hard and get excellent grades. During my college years, I got eight comprehensive evaluations, including six firsts. I have a wide range of hobbies. I have made great achievements in literature, sports and art. I have good language skills and interpersonal skills. I play well with my classmates and am deeply loved by teachers and classmates. If I can teach in your school, I will work hard, love my job and contribute to the development of the school.
20.(5 points)
1 including awards; (2) Great achievements and outstanding achievements; 3 get along well; 4 love and love;
⑤ Just teaching? Teaching (give one question correctly 1 point)
There are many irregular or inappropriate usages in the following letter. Please find five and correct them. (5 points)
Dear Mr. XXX,
I received beautiful jade and cigarettes. I watched them over and over again and deeply admired them. Your profound knowledge of ancient poetry and unique interpretation method have helped my poetry creation a little, and I feel ashamed. Here, according to your request, I took the liberty to make some corrections. I am sending it back with the letter for your reference.
Shunzhu
Dongan!
Mr Xx
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The title "Dear Mr. XXX" must be checked; Greeting "Dongan" must be checked; The word "send" should be changed to "send"; The word "read" should be changed to "read"; The word "a little" should be changed to "great"; The word "elegant" should be changed to "correct" (the other party can get 1 point for correcting mistakes.
20. The following is a fragment of a short message sent by someone to a friend, in which five words are improperly used. Please find out and correct it. (5 points)
Last night, I learned that my mother was seriously ill in hospital and needed surgery urgently, and the funds were insufficient. I am very concerned about this. Thank you for sending me 5000 yuan. Please accept it. I will definitely go to the hospital sometime. I wish the old man a speedy recovery!
? 20. change "my mother" to "your mother" (or "hello"); Replace "funds" with "expenses"; Replace "thank you" with "please"
(or "excuse me"); Replace "receive" with "accept"; Change "come" to "go".
Gaozu and Aitu (other students and their classmates)? Come, come, come (others and yourself)? Attention equals love and attention? Asking is tantamount to disturbing the work of mending the wall (modesty, pasting the wall)? Driving condescendingly for nothing? (honorific)? Snacks and food? (diligent)?