Teaching plan design of "picking hibiscus on the river" [teaching goal]
1, learn about the literary knowledge of nineteen ancient poems;
2. Feel the ideological connotation of poetry;
3. Describe the artistic picture of poetry with imagination.
[Teaching Emphasis and Difficulties]
1, using imagination and association to describe the poetic picture;
2. Grasp the image of poetry to interpret the theme of poetry and cultivate the ability of poetry appreciation.
[Curriculum] One class hour
[Teaching process]
First, import
(blackboard writing? Zhong Rong's poem:? Soul-stirring, it can be said to be almost a word. ? )
Do you know what this evaluation is about? It means that the language of Nineteen Ancient Poems has reached perfection. Today, we are going to learn one of them? How about wading for hibiscus? A good word? Language charm.
Second, the introduction of literary common sense
Nineteen Ancient Poems is an anthology of Xiao Tong in Liang Dynasty? Miscellaneous poems? The topic of a class includes 19 five-character poem written by Anonymous in Han Dynasty. Shen Deqian in Qing Dynasty said:? Nineteen ancient poems don't need a person's words, all of which are temporary works. I abandoned my wife at a high rate, my friends were rich, I wandered abroad, and I felt a sense of death and new things. Or fable, or express, or repeat. At first, there were no fantastic ideas and thrilling sentences, and the ancient poems of Xijing were all below. ? The evaluation is so high that there are many imitators in later generations. Lu Ji in the Western Han Dynasty imitated 12 sentence by sentence, and Tao Yuanming in the Eastern Jin Dynasty and Bao Zhao in the Southern Song Dynasty also learned it? Ancient poetry? Techniques and styles of "quasi-ancient poetry"
Third, the taste of poetry appreciation.
1. What is the way for the lyric hero to express his feelings in his poems? What is its purpose?
(hint: the way is to try to pick hibiscus. what is the purpose? Is the legacy far away? Concentric
Clear: China people's love for nature has a long history, and their love for nature and people are often closely linked. The gifts given by ancient people to their dearest people are often not gold, silver and jewels, but a flower or a fragrant grass. When they see them off, they always break a wicker and give it to those who travel far away. In order to show his yearning for his good friend, people from afar entrust him with a plum blossom at every post station. The mood of this life is simple and beautiful. As Wang Wei's Acacia wrote:? Red bean shrubs grow in the south. In spring, they sprout many branches. People who miss them hope to collect more. Mix red bean has attracted people's attention. ? Picking flowers and folding willows is exactly the lyric way of the ancients. On the one hand, they convey their concern and yearning for their relatives and friends, on the other hand, they place their best wishes on them.
2. Poetry description? How fragrant the grass is? what's up Lanze? What are the artistic functions?
Clarity: This is an environmental description, which aims to set off the elegance of the protagonist's image and the purity and beauty of the feelings expressed.
3, 3, 4 Q&A, what is the expressive function in poetry?
Clear: Pay attention to poetry? Start, direction, turn, merge? These two sentences are a subtle transition in structure, paving the way for the following hero's mood to change from ecstasy to ecstasy.
4. Did the poet really think of hibiscus? Thinking in the distance? Really? If not, why did the poet write like this?
Tip:? Thinking? Always in his mind? Pick hibiscus flowers in the river? And for her. This poem will be dull if it comes straight to the point. This sentence is the culmination and turning point of the development of the whole poem. On the one hand, it temporarily ended the above development, on the other hand, it also laid the groundwork for the following development, so it should be placed in the middle as usual.
Five, five or six sentences? Still care? 、? Man Hao Hao? What is the expressive function?
Clear:? Still care? The word "action" has a strong sense of picture, which can clearly show the image and mood of the protagonist's loneliness, sadness and disappointment. ? Man Hao Hao? Is this word about the hero and what you see around you? Hometown? Distance gives people the feeling that the road is long and Xiu Yuan is awkward. These two sentences implicitly convey the protagonist's extremely painful mood, but they do not directly point out the protagonist's pain, thus leaving readers with a lot of imagination and endless artistic effects.
6. From the last two sentences, what can you learn besides expressing the sad mood of the protagonist?
Qingming: It can also make people deeply feel the sincere feelings of two people who love each other. Think deeply because you love deeply, just because you love for a long time? Old and dead? What? Sad? .
7. Try to summarize the artistic features of this poem.
Clear: First, the artistic conception is noble and quiet; Second, it is implicit and has a long aftertaste.
Fourth, question inquiry.
Some people think that the lyric hero is male. Shejiang? And then what? Look around? The audience is all male, and some people think that the lyric hero is female. Shejiang? Who is the woman? Still care? who is it? Thinking? That man. what do you think? (As long as it makes sense, it does not seek unity)
The original text of "She River Picking Hibiscus" is "She River Picking Hibiscus"
Dynasty: Han dynasty
Author: anonymous
Picking hibiscus by the river, Lanzeduo fragrant grass.
Who wants to leave, Philip Burkart.
Looking back at my hometown, it's a long way.
I am bent on leaving home and worried to death.
Translation and Annotation of She Jiang Picking Hibiscus
Walking across the river to pick hibiscus, bluegrass is all over Shui Ze.
Who should I give the lotus to? I want to give it to my lover far away.
Looking back at the hometown where we lived together, the road is long and Xiu Yuan is Xi.
Two hearts love each other, but they are on the same side, so sad that they eventually become a foreign land.
To annotate ...
Selected Works of Xiao Tong in Southern Dynasties (Shanghai Ancient Books Publishing House, 1986).
1. Lotus: another name for lotus.
2. Lanze: a swamp with blue grass.
3. Legacy (w? I): gifts.
4. Far away: Jude? Is it far? .
5. Looking back: Looking back, looking back.
6. hometown: hometown.
7. Man Hao Hao: Jude? Long and vast? Describing the road as long as it is Xiu Yuan. Describe boundless.
8. Concentricity: an idiom used in ancient times, mostly used for love between men and women or harmonious feelings between husband and wife, refers to deep feelings.
9. End old age: spend old age until death.
There are many touching lyrics in the appreciation of "Picking Hibiscus on the River", which always feels extremely simple at first reading. I repeated it before I found this? Simple? Actually, it lies in the subtle expression of graceful songs.
Picking hibiscus flowers by the river falls into this category. At first glance, it seems that you don't need to explain more, but you can understand its will, in order to show the homesickness of distant wanderers. From the poem? Or is it a long way to look at your hometown? Is the wanderer right? Hometown? I hope I can't go back. I wrote very sadly. So, what is the beginning? Pick hibiscus flowers in the river? And became a tramp. But the wanderers are all in Luoyang area and can't go. Participate? South? Jiang? Picking hibiscus, according to the homophonic pun technique commonly used in Jiangnan folk songs, hibiscus? (Lotus) often closes in the dark? Fu Rong? Ming is the tone of a woman's husband, but can't you refer to it? Wandering? . Even the identity of the protagonist is ambiguous, which shows that this poem is not simple. Start with a woman's tone and appreciate its beauty.
At the turn of summer and autumn, it is a beautiful season for lotus flowers to bloom. In sunny weather, swing a boat and walk through it? Lotus leaf he Tian Tian? 、? Shower head? On the lake, the annual lotus picking activity began, but for the peasant women in Jiangnan, it was a pleasure. On the occasion of picking lotus, I picked some lovely red lotus flowers and gave them to my sweethearts. It is hard to say that it is not the sincere affection of his wife and girl. What's more, there are countless orchids and herbs on the shore of the lake, which are sandwiched in sleeves and inserted in the hair. The fragrance is fragrant and fascinating. ? so this is it？ She River picking hibiscus, Lanzeduo fragrant grass? Two sighs show picturesque scenery. If you listen carefully, readers will certainly hear the sound of the lake. Lanze? Jokes and laughter came from time to time.
But this beautiful and happy scene was suddenly changed by the sigh between the lines. The camera zoomed in quickly, only to find that the sigh came from a woman standing upright at the bow. Unlike many girls' jokes, she silently stared at the lotus in her hand. Right now? Furong? There was a kind smile in her eyes? He is the husband that this woman misses very much. ? Who is eager to leave? Thinking far away! ? The long sigh tells the source of all the troubles of this woman: when the girls are competing to pick lotus flowers, they swear to pick the best one for them? Sweetheart. At that time, the husband that the heroine missed was still far away! She picked the beautiful one for nothing? Furong? At present, it is difficult to leave it to people far away. People always think that if you want to show the loneliness and desolation of a character, it is best to put him or her alone in the clear autumn, because that can best set off the sad mood of the character. But do you think it is sometimes more useful to put the characters on the beautiful and happy background of picking lotus flowers and express the sadness that the heroine misses her husband alone? Le? Lizi? Sad? Strong effect.
Then these two sentences suddenly changed in space. It seems that what appears on the screen is not the heroine who is meditating, but the one there? Is it far? Husband:? I'm still looking forward to returning to China. It's a long way. ? It seems to be a spiritual feeling. While the heroine misses her husband alone, the distant husband is looking back at his wife's hometown with infinite sadness. Of course, he can't see the scenery of his hometown, nor can he see his wife who is picking lotus flowers in the lake on the other side of the river. What is unfolding in his eyes at the moment is nothing more than a long time? A long way? And the vast clouds that prevent mountains from separating from water. Many readers think these two sentences are still hope. Hometown? Reality, which produces the illusion that the hero of this poem is a wanderer. Actually, what about these two sentences? Opinion? Still in Jiangnan, the performance is still the painful thinking of the lotus picking woman. But in writing, adoption? From the opposite side of the song, I will sigh for the distance. (Appreciation of Zhang Yugu's ancient poems)? Hold on. Tao, made from the surface? Poetry flies from the opposite side? Wonderful virtual environment.
This kind? From the opposite side? Expression, and The Book of Songs? Curly ears? 、? Hey? The protagonist shows her husband riding a mountain to find his hometown, and his parents call his son a dreamland in the clouds, which has the same effect? Therefore, the realm in the poem should not be the transformation of space and the disappearance of the heroine, but the separation and simultaneous appearance of the picture: on one side, a miserable wife, holding a lotus leaf in her hand, looks up at the distant sky, and the dense lotus leaf and kurei lotus flower behind her line her fluttering dress, which looks lonely and sad; On the one hand, it is the misty sky in the distance, shaking vaguely to look back at her husband's figure, and that hidden face is very sad. Between them are cascading mountains and majestic rivers. Both sides looked at each other blankly, of course, no one could see each other. In this silence, a sad Hao Han faintly sounded between heaven and earth. I am so sad to leave home! ? This sigh is undoubtedly from the heroine's heart, but because it is in? Opposite? What readers feel from the realm of suspense is not sound: it seems to come from Wan Li, thousands of miles away, and it is the intersection of a couple who are far apart from each other. This is the rhyme conveyed by the ending sentence of this poem. When reading this sentence, you may think that this poem expresses the feeling of thinking without feeling, although that? Simple? However, due to this beautiful expression, it flows like a winding mountain spring, and finally merges into a waterfall of rock craftsmen in Ling Fei Mountain, which shocked people's hearts.