1, you chase after me: describe the fierce competition, and everyone is unwilling to lag behind.
2. Vibrant: describes the vitality of nature or active social life.
3, full of vitality: full of vitality and vitality.
Spring is everywhere: the garden in spring is full of beautiful scenery. Metaphor is a thriving scene.
5, crowded with people: describe the crowd as noisy, just like opening a pot.
Appreciation of excerpts from good sentences;
1. Nothing in the world is more indifferent than a clock: at the moment you are born, at the moment you pick the flowers of your youth dreams, it ticks every minute. Gorky's clock
Appreciation: this sentence uses metaphor, symbol and personification to write the ruthlessness of the clock, reminding us to cherish time.
In autumn, people step on it and put it on their hair, and it seems to float on their shoulders intentionally or unintentionally. Is it bright gold and gold? -Yu Guangzhong's "Left Hand Palmprint"
Appreciation: This sentence uses figurative rhetoric, comparing fallen leaves to gold, which is vivid.
3. Snow white is illusory and cold is sober. Endless momentum makes people feel difficult to breathe, and their hearts are cold and sour. -Yu Guangzhong's "Listening to Cold Rain"
Appreciation: This sentence uses overlapping to express the phonological beauty of words and the Leng Yan and sadness of snow.
When the petals fall to the ground, they are still bright and dazzling, just like the feathers of a big bird being sacrificed to the altar and leaving with a heroic sad song. -Zhang Kangkang's "Peony Rejected"
Appreciation: This sentence uses a figurative rhetorical device, comparing fallen flowers to feathers, which shows the outstanding charm of peony.
5. The orange-red house is like an old monk dressed in colorful cassock, with his head down and his eyes closed, being baptized by the rain. -Zhang Ailing's Autumn Rain
Appreciation: this sentence compares the house to an old monk by metaphor and rhetoric, and writes about the calm and desolate house in the rain.
6. Time is like a sharp knife. If it is not used properly, it will carve deep lines on the beautiful face, so that the vigorous youth will be worn away month after month and year after year. -Zhang ailing's "Wish"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor and symbolism to write his own view of time. Time is a knife, and life depends on how well you grasp it.
7, like a slap, bright red, bright red; Like a fan, flat; Like a blooming flower, it will never fade! -"Autumn Leaves"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor and parallelism to write the color, shape and posture of autumn leaves, showing the beauty of autumn leaves and autumn colors.
8, a few friends, drawing bamboo shadows by moonlight, you draw, I draw, the references are uneven, obviously furtive, a little bit of Chinese painting. -Feng Zikai's Bamboo Shadow
Appreciation: A few strokes, writing scenes of several friends painting, humorous, concise and unique, full of the unique charm of Feng Zikai's works.
9. The sky is clear, the mountains stretch, and clusters of white flowers are like a flowing river.
Appreciate: Use figurative rhetoric to compare flowers to rivers. The language is exquisite and appealing, and the words are full of love for tung flowers, which makes readers seem to see the beautiful scenery of tung flowers all over the mountains.
10, he looked up sadly. Stars float on the quiet lake like emerald lilies.
Appreciation: This sentence vividly describes the stars by metaphor, compares the stars to lilies, describes their cleanliness and purity, and compares the night sky to lakes, describing their calmness and beauty. However, under such beautiful scenery, I am dying, reflecting my regret.